The Prison has been breeched.

Rhapsody pressed her hoof against the hatch button and watched it close between her and who she truly cared for. She felt it coming, approaching and then it struck. A massive tidal wave that collided with her very being. In her heart she knew she was going to die, but she didn’t' expect what was going to happen. She felt herself falling, deeper and deeper into the ocean. She had not gone this deep before... It seemed deeper that the ocean she knew and there was no light.

“Finally a vessel”

The words echoed in her head.

“Hello little ponies. I hope you don't mind if I use you.”

Rhapsody looked up, she wasn't in the ocean any more... there was no sun and no light and there was something huge over her, dark and monstrous.

“A shame the breach is not big enough.”

Wait? Ponies? She suddenly realized she wasn't the only one who had fallen down here. HER FRIENDS WERE HERE!

“No... Don't please..”

She begged though the sound of her voice didn't seem to penetrate the lifeless place.

There was only one place she had heard of that was this dark and this foul, the tidal wave had breached Tartarus.

Author's Note

This is my first story and as such I know it isn't perfect. I would love to hear what I did right and what I could improve upon. I would prefer constructive over toxic however!