chapter 16 ( unedited)

Disclaimer: All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony

Story is told from narrator's POV.

Chapter 16

As Twilight , Sunset , Nightmare Moon and myself walk to the throne room I can not help that Twilight is in this from the start. I look at Twilight and said “ I think you are in on this.”

She had a shock look and she reply “ what no will not hurt my friends or the princess.”

I look at her for any sign of her lying to my surprise she is telling we walk in the throne room I see princess Celestia , princess Cadence , Rainbow Dash , Scootaloo , Peter , Joey , Spitfire and miss Cheerilee there three more how did they get one is princess Luna , Fluttershy , Applejack and Crystal Empire

“ Luna , Fluttershy and Applejack why are here.” I ask

“ winter fly was watch over then next thing we know we are here.” Applejack

“ well look what we got here the chosen one look like everypony is here now before we got started sister why won’t you come and stand by my side.” Shining Armor said

“ no brother I will not I go stay where I am by the chosen one side and help him take you out.” Twilight said

“ if that's your choice then so be it.” Shining Armor said

After Shining Armor done speaking he lit up his horn and aim it at my mother before the blast hit our mother I step in front of the blast standing next to me is Twilight , Nightmare Moon princess cadence with her daughter on her back for some reason I do not know and princess Luna and Rainbow Dash and Applejack in front of princess Celestia (Spitfire Cheerilee and my mom) Sunset , Scootaloo , Peter Joey and Cheerilee.

I turn to Sunset and said “ please fight on without me.” then before their eyes Twilight, Nightmare Moon, two Princesses Luna and Cadence and her daughter, Applejack , Rainbow Dash and myself disappear

( end of Kelly P.O.V. start of princess Celestia P.O.V.)

I watch as my Sister my son and my subject disappear before my eyes I fell to my knees I scream “ nooooooooooo.”

“ do you give up now Celestia there is no pony in Equestria can defeat me and don’t try it or you will be with them I want to see your pain for the rest of your life ha ha ha ha ha.” Shining Armor said with a laugh

“ your monster you will not get away with this if the chosen one is here he will take you Sunset help me take this guy out.” Joey said Sunset nodded in agreement

Sunset and Joey started to run up to Shining Armor but stop by me

“ stop I do want any of you get hurt.” I said

“ So Celestia do give up.” Shining Armor said with a smirk on his face

I bow my head and said “yes.”

“ you made right choice as Equestria new ruler I hereby banish you to Everfree forest for the rest of your life begone from me.” Shining Armor said

We bow and exit the palace to the everfree forest

Few hours later

I just fall down and started to cry next thing I know I got pull into a hug by everyone who got banish with me

“ you not alone you got everyone here I know that Kelly will take care of everypony that is with him.” Sunset said

“ thank you my faithful student.” I said

“ please princess I am married to Kelly your son that make you my mother in law.” Sunset said

“ oh yea.” I said

So we walk in the forest to find away to sleep after few minutes of us walk we found a hut in forest

“ hey mom do you see what I see?” Cheerilee

“ I do my daughter.” I said

“ why don't we go up there and knock on the door and ask them if we can stay with them.” Joey said we all nodded

So we went up to door and Joey knock on the door there was no answer Joey kock on the door one more time still no answer so Joey reach for the door the knob to see if it open once she turn the knob to our surprise the door open so we went in so we can sleep

( end Celestia P.O.V. back to Kelly P.O.V. )

When the light die down I look at Applejack she is stand on two legs she is wearing a blue jeans a white t shirt and her cowboy hat on her head next I look at Luna and Rainbow ( if you want to know what they are wearing go read chapter 8) I look at Twilight she is wearing a library uniform she have horn on her head next I look at Cadence and her daughter her daughter is wearing a baby she have a wings and horn on her head clothes Cadence is was pink dress she still have her wings and horn next I look at Nightmare Moon she is wearing a black shirt and black jacket with blue jeans she still have her wings and horn.

“ hey Kelly what are we going to do.” Rainbow ask me

“ well first I need to change your names and what is your daughter name? ” I said

“ why do you want to change our name? Her name is Crystal Hope” Cadence ask me

“ to be safe just in we run into yourself. Luna you new name for now is Lucy next Applejack your new name is Amy next Rainbow Dash your new name is Ruth next Nightmare moon your name is Nancy next Cadence your daughter name is Cathy and you Cadence your new name is christa and Twilight your new name for now is tina.” I said

“ what are we going to do now?” Cadence ask

“ let’s find someone that can help us.” I said they nodded in agreement

We started walking through the forest few minute later we came across apple trees far was we can see we then we came across a house.

“ hey do you all see what I see maybe there might be somepony living there.” Rainbow

“ we do Rainbow let’s go over there and if there someone living there they might help us.” I said

So we walk over to the house I knock on the door few minute later the door open up a yellow mare with a red mane with a pink bow on her head.

“ may I help you?” the mare ask

“ hum yes me and wives and our friend need a place to stay for the night.” I said

“ my I ask what is yours names.” the mare ask

My is Kelly Goodwin next on my right her name is Lucy next to her is Amy next her Nancy next to her Ruth next to her crystal in her arms is her daughter not my her first husband her name is Cathy. what is your name?” I ask

“ my name is Apple Bloom.” the mare said

“ well Apple Bloom can you tell us where are we.” I said

“ you are in Equestria on sweet apple Acres you guys need come in before the guards come.” Apple Bloom said

So we went inside the door lock behind us

“Princess Luna , Princess Cadence , Rainbow and Applejack how is the war going?” Apple Bloom ask

“ what a minute how did you know that Amy , Lucy , Ruth and crystal there real names?” I ask

Before Apple Bloom could speak there was a knock at the door Apple Bloom went to answer it there was two night guard night guard walking in.

I thought to myself “ damn this not good sign if you love ones in military or any kind that deal with the government.”

“ miss Bloom we are sorry for your lose.” the night guard said

“ what do you mean?” Apple Bloom said a tear started to come out of her eyes

“ well at 4 this afternoon your brother and sister was killed in the line of duty.” the Night guard said

At this point I walk up to Apple Bloom pull her into a hug and said : there there you will see your love ones one day life keep going you need be strong for them and for this farm.”

She look at me tears coming out of her eyes “ thank you Kelly.”

“ your welcome.” I reply

The two guard look at me “ sir may we have your name?” the night guard said

“ sure my name is Kelly Goodwin this are my wives on my right her name is Lucy next to her is Amy next her Nancy next to her Ruth next to her crystal in her arms is her daughter not my her first husband her name is Cathy.” I said

The guards nodded and night guard nodded and left

“ what going here we are new to this area.” I said

“ well we are at war with the griffons.” Apple Bloom said

“ when did the war started?” I ask

“ 4 days ago.” Apple Bloom said

“ ok just remember the good times you had time with your sister and brother.” I said

“ thanks mr. Goodwin.” Apple Bloom said

“ let’s head to bed in the morning we are going to see the ruler of this land to see if they can sent us back to our own universe.” I said they all nodded in agreement

( Celestia P.O.V.)

We walk around in the hut we find that we can make it our home for a while until the chosen one who is my son and everypony that is with him.

“ hey Celestia what going to happen to us we can not stay here for a long time.” Joey said

“ I know but where can we go we can not be in ponyville by order of Shining Armor we are banish to everfree forest for the rest of our days.” I said

Few second later there was a knock at the so I went to the door to answer it

“ hello.” I said

“ hum princess why are you here.” a mare said

“ well I got banish here I am not a ruler anymore you can call me Celestia so who are you and why you are here.” I ask

Before the mare can answer me out of no where there was a bright light around her and Sunset Shimmer with in minute they disappear

( back to Kelly P.O.V)

While I was getting ready for bed there a loud noise “ why are two are here?” luna ask

I walk out of the bathroom into where Luna is and said “ what up.”

“ Kelly.” Sunset said to me and hug me

“ hey Kelly.” a mare said

I know the voice I look at the mare she a white unicorn pale purple eyes with matching eye shadow. Her mane and tail were two shades of pink that was barely distinguishable, and was well kempt despite the rough treatment earlier, with some of the ends of her locks split and curled up. She wore an aqua blue, silk dress that reached to her hooves.

“ how are you fleur.” I said

“ I am doing good beside of me being banished to the everfree forest for the rest of my life that where I meet princess Celestia this mare one of your friends from your world and a school teacher I did not get a name with this mare name before a bright light went around and make this mare and I disappear.” fleur said

“ that Sunset Shimmer you know everyone else for now you and Sunset need chance your name for now Sunset your new name is Sue and you fleur your new name for now is Flo.” I said

“ ok Kelly but what going to happen to us.” Sunset said

“ well we need to sleep in the morning we will see the ruler of this land and see if they can send us back to our world. Fleur you will sleep with Twilight I will show where is.” I said

“ no.” Fleur said

“ what do you mean no?” I ask

“ well in my marriage agreement I will married Dreamchaser until the chosen one show.” Sue said

“ how long you and Dreamchaser was marred?” I ask

“ 3 years.” sue ( Fleur ) said

“ ok do you have paperwork with you?” I ask

“ yes I do.” Fleur said

“ may I see it?” Luna said

“ sure.” Sue ( Fleur) said

So she pull out the paper and hand it to Luna and began to while she is reading the paper Luna look up at me then back at the paper once she done read the paper she clear her throat we all look at Luna

“ Kelly I remember this it have my signer on this she will tell her story when she is ready.” Luna said

“ well I can not married her because I do not have her cutie mark.” I said

“ I understand that but before we meet Kelly my sister your mother meet with her parent the did agree that when the chosen one come to Equestria that Fleur here will be married to the chosen one if he have her cutie mare or not.” Luna said

“Fine you can stay with me. In the morning we are leaving to see the ruler of this land to see if they can help us so get some sleep.” I said

They all nodded and went to sleep

( Celestia P.O.V.)

As those are with me we lay down for the night I look around and see that everypony is a sleep so I got up walk outside look up and say to myself “ I hope you all alright .” tears come out of my eyes

Just then I hear some kind noise I lit up my horn pull out Kelly phone I look at the screen I read the name Billy so I answer it

“ Hello.” I said

“ what the fuck who are you and where is Kelly?” the voice saId in angry way

“ my name is Celestia what happened to Kelly is that he try to help me and he my sister those who are around him was sent to another universe. May I ask who are you.” I said

“ I am Billy Goodwin I am Kelly Big brother so is Kelly ok.” the voice said

“ I do not know.” I said

“ ok but there is something that troubling you is there?” Bily ask me

“ yes I did a dna test on him and two other and it came back that Kelly is my son how I do not know.” I said

“ what about the other two?” Billy ask

“ well one of them is a school teacher it came back as her being my daughter Kelly Sister and other is a captain of wonderbolt Spitfire again I do not know how or why.” I said

“ I hope that you find the answer that you are looking for please if you see Kelly tell him Hi for us and have him call me when he have a chance.” Billy said

“ I will have a good night sir bye.” I said

“ I will bye for now.” Billy said

“After that I hang up the phone and sigh hoping one that I find that answer why is Kelly is my son and some goes for Spitfire and Cheerilee as my daughter.” I thought to myself I walk back in and fall asleep.

Author's Note

what will happen to Kelly and those are with him and will ex princess of Equestria Celestia find out why is Kelly Spitfire and Cheerilee are related to her fix out on all new my adventure in Equestria

I would like to say few things I will work on chapter 17 tomorrow I do not know when I will have it done because I am moving to Oregon I will work on my phone for a little each day but no promise I hope you all have a nice day