Redemption

by skypaint

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Dark, Sad, Romance
Length: 1672

as the Devil is now in another world and out of everything all the power he had. Is now gone. replaced with something new. It is still the same thing. but something about it is weird.

as the Devil is now in another world and out of everything all the power he had. Is now gone. replaced with something new. It is still the same thing. but something about it is weird. And as he is on his journey. he will meet many ponies that will help. are hope for his downfall. and all the while having annoying Pegasus stuck by his side. And How long will it be before I get back home a thought that is constant in his mind?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-12-12 23:42:02 UTC

Prologue & Chapter 1 what are you?

As two powerful mythical beings stand before each other. within the last fight. two that were Myth. and now are real. something that was Thought not to exist is now before everyone's eyes. and the land is scorched and torn asunder. and has the fight continues of blue and red. but then it seems like red is losing this one. but before the last strike with delivered to confirm the victory. something happen. And that creature that would have lost is now in another world. gone from this one for the war to continue. or will it?

Again out of anything falling. really thought in the creature's head so high up but what well I hit this time. a rock or. Boulder or tree or. who knows what it will be it this time. But I hope it is a bush. and not Water like last time. as the memory of last time being dropped from extremely high height. But this time feel like if his body is being morphed at the same time. Horrified he's been pushed off miles above the ground is before and either one. it is still annoying to him as he. thinks at this really. as a monologue continues in his head. Oh my god again I thought this time it was over but now you're throwing me into another world. and what is up with all the Falling. so that therefore they're always throwing. if this world has ability to soothe I'm going to see you to the point of bankruptcy for all the Broken bones I have broken. okay I'm not really but still you get the Point. and this like that he hits the ground with a painful thump.

looking around on the ground seeing I'm in the woods? And then he hears a voice from behind him.

hello. Says cheerfully. from an unknown creature.

he he turns his head towards the noise to see A...What is that he thinks in his head?

the creature approaches reaches out a thing called a hoof to him. and asks are you okay.

He rolls his eyes and thinks to himself they are you serious I just fell from over five stories. and you're wondering if I'm OK. did someone take this creature and smashed out its brains?

and from his expression the creature confused She apologizes. umm I did not mean it that way sorry.

he stared at the creature and States. why aren't you afraid of me?

And the pony oblivious to his question replies back? Oh yeah my name is sky paint.

really it is named after painting. and the sky weird name? but why isn't it scared the creature thinks to himself? and asks what are you?

I am a Pegasus.

where am I?

You're in the woods a little ways off from Ponyville.

okay so you're a Pegasus. enjoying the first question and more concentrated on the fact that he's speaking to a Pegasus.

Oh yeah I forgot sorry so what is your name? Says Sky paint with A Pep in her voice.

he replies by saying. I am the... then he stops and says instead. I don't remember.

ok so let's go to Ponyville she replies.

And Thinks to Himself this Thing is not Going to know my name. No Not at all And what is ponyville it could be a Trap I'm not going. and All the While He Is getting slowly and slowly more annoyed. And then says with narcissism in his voice. No.

why? She Says With confusion.

it could be a trap.

a... trap?

I don't have wings. so there is others with no wings? he said with confusion.

Yes. She replies.

He stares at her with skepticism and says so there is humans.

what's a human?

I am a human. All the while thinking Inside his head. yes it is confirmed this thing has no brains or common sense.

No you’re not you're a pony. well I think you're a pony. never seen a pony with A Goat’s flank before though.

then he stops to look at himself and see what She says. And he was a pony. the only thing he can see. is that he had a red coat and a goats behind. Then he reaches up to his head with one hoof with relief to know he's still has his Horns. and his hair was still black. and from his realization is now a totally different creature. he is cutting his head off in his mind. how did I became a bleeping Pony. thinks to himself one moment I was a stunning demon in disguise of a human and now this. This time God is really in the mood to make jokes. why is it always bleeding me. it’s next year is going to be dragons. or am I going to become a butterfly. eeek I am NOT going to be a butterfly!

So then she interrupted his thoughts To say. what species of pony are you? your part goat and pony?

To Interrupt for Fun and Annoyance from her Question He says. so you are part bird and…. horse.

umm I am a Pegasus?

so.

I was just curious about your species?

still so.

you're weird.

yes I am so what are you.

you are a rude pony.

no I am NOT you are.

Sky paint huffs in annoyance at the stubborn pony. so if you're not going to tell me your species. let's go to Ponyville.

umm No.

yes.

No.

after saying yes and no for 2 hours.

When will you stop saying no?

and when will you stop saying yes?

when you stop saying no.

and when you stop saying yes. so I When.

no.

yes.

No.

yes.

stop it or we will be here for two more hours.

I was hoping for a 5.

you're insane.

I know and before he can finish she interrupts.

and don't say I know but what are you. or something like that.

Fine.

So can we go to Ponyville now? Said with annoyance.

No and goodbye. as he begins to get on all fours to walk away. he falls over on his face.

She begins to chuckle. and asks losing all Annoyance in her voice. have you ever walked before? And before he could say anything. he is being dragged by his tail.

As He's being dragged he turns to see that She's pulling his Tail with her mouth. And in his head I have a poofy Goat tail So does This mean I am poofy. from that he is Yelling In his head Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I am a poofy Loser Why world why. Oh yeah I need to Xcape I can yell At the universe later for this. So With one swift motion he buck’s Her in the face Was his hind leg. running afterwards she is down on the ground. All the While moving like a alcoholic if he drunk 20 Glasses Of wine.

Finding Himself deeper in the woods And finally getting a grasp on This new walking thing. From exhaustion he Decides to Sit in front of a tree. He looks Upwards towards the sky and Wonders where Am I? As He wonder what has happened To him. he hears Footsteps coming from the other direction. he jumps up and yells on all fours go away. I am NOT going to Ponyville! But then he hears growling.

Who Is there?

grrrrrrr.

umm Sky paint is it you?

But then approaching from the underbrush. is a big terrifying gressive Wolf made out of wood.

He thinks to himself. oh wait it's made out of wood. He smirks and says what about a little fire. He tries to burn the wolf but it fails. But the only reason it fails is he no longer has Hands. So he Starts to run. but again he falls on his face. for the longest time since forever he feels true fear as a wolf approaches closer and closer. But Then Like some sort of Miracle the light of the Sun Blinds the creature giving him the opportunity to get up and run. But again it was Shortly lived Only because in front of him Was Another creature. It was Also of wood wolf. And then it bends down and swiftly picks him up in its muzzle. As he's yelling in pain the creature does not let up but bite’s deeper into his flesh.

as he wanders. Is this it. the end of my life? As his eyes Began to close. To become food for this creature. But Then like a Flash something Blue hits the creature. causing him to Fall and again It seems It's not Over as a blue creature carries him all the way from the wolf’s

When He wakes up. After 5 minutes to start laughing i am still here ha ha. For some reason to Laugh hurts. And why is my eyes so heavy as I am NOT going to sleep. eyes you will obey me we need No sleep. He thinks to himself. When he hears a voice to the left

Why did you Go running off like that you Dumbass?

What. he turns In confusion The stare at the pony again. has he Thinking. was it Sky paint Yes it is. and my eyes why do You hate me. Then to realize he gave her A black eye.

She interrupts his Thoughts to say. do You have a Death wish?

No? he Says sleepily.

I am going to go with you have brain damage For the reason why you run deeper into the ever free.

what's the ever free? as he asks in curiosity.

You don't know what the ever free is? Sky paint asks in shock. All the while ignoring His question.

Yes. And What is it and That wolf. He Asks In annoyance.

The Timberwolf? She asks losing all the annoyance in her voice for instead complete confusion.