Chapter-1 making a comeback
Chapter 1- Making a Comeback
It had been 8000 years, eight fucking thousand years as the lonely king of hell. Banished from the upper world by his granddaughters, his OWN family. He was pissed of course; do you what 8000 years of isolation does to a man? And he wasn’t able to prevent it even though his power are only matched by his wife Urale, eternal goddess of light while he is Lord Moran, forever the lord of hell… well
FORMER ruler of hell. He cursed that demon Lucifer, he shall pay for this, but for now he is stuck in this fucking forest on the upper world with no clue where he is. He climbed out of the hole he had left when he had landed and picked up his scythe and trudged into the forest to seek his granddaughters.
-Ponyvile-
Rainbow Dash was practicing for the Young Fliers Competition when it hit. It came from the sky with out warning, flew over Ponyville and crashed in the Everfree Forest. That was last week and nopony gave it a second thought. That was until Rainbow Dash came flying into town at full speed and screaming at the top of her lungs. Twilight tried to calm her friend down, it took awhile but finally she managed.
“It was huge!” said Rainbow “it must have been as tall as Celestia, no taller!”
Twilight was taking notes as fast as she could as her friend described what see saw.
“And it walked on two hooves, TWO!”
“So let me get this strait,” said Twilight looking over her notes
“You saw a creature in the Everfree Forest that walks on two hooves, the front hooves are like spiders and it carries a big “stick thing” on it’s back.”
“Yes!”
“OMC*, this could be an entirely new species! I’ve go to tell the princes!” Twi squealed and then ran off to find spike.
“What kind of creature walks on two hooves?” wondered Rainbow as Twilight called for Spike.
-Canterlot-
-Princess Celestia-
“I haven’t felt a being that strong in forever.” said Celestia while talking with Luna as they walked down the halls of the royal castle.
“We’ve sent guards for the past seven days into the forest and all we’ve gotten is the crash site and three of them killed. Ether it’s him or its dead.” said Luna. Her Equestrian had improved in the coming years after her mind had been released from Nightmare Moon’s clutches.
“If it’s him we are going to have to through our full military power to stop him from killing every one of us.”
“I know sister but was it really right to imprison him in the first place and then make a new dominate species to replace his so he couldn’t feed off of the evil of the current one and thus not escape?” asked Luna
“No, it wasn’t,” Celestia admitted, “and by doing that we created a threat greater than him.”
Luna knew what she was talking about for while he was the embodiment of evil, he was concerned with punishing the wicked and protecting the innocent, while Discord didn’t give a buck about who he hurt as long as chaos spread far and wide. Yet, he was evil in it’s purest form and he would not hesitate to kill in cold blood. Then all of a sudden one of Twilight’s friendship reports appeared. Celestia picked it up and read it, her face darkening with each line.
“Sister we’re in trouble”
-3 hours later-
-Outskirts of the Everfree Forest-
-Near Ponyvile, in some bushes-
Α: I will not be stopped. I will not roll over and die. I have seen many things but this is an abomination to my memory. Where are my creations?! When I left they were my legacy! Yet, they killed every one of them. They must have, for humans they could feel all the same emotions these… things, these ponies could yet more balanced. The ponies are far too happy all the time, and there is no misery and pain.
Ω: we should kill them all….
Δ: shut up omega let him think…
Α: although that last thing explains a lot but it makes me wonder, what happened here 100 years ago*? What event would cause one of these ponies feel such hatred and jealousy that would banish their soul to the darkest depths of my kingdom for punishment if they acted upon it? Wait, my granddaughters are still here, probably the only living thing left on this layer that has balanced emotion spectrum. But which?
Ω: probably it was Celestia.
Δ: no, it was Luna.
Ω: can’t be, Luna is to calm and logical, only Celestia would let her anger burn out of control.
Δ: well fuck you Omega, it was Luna.
Ω: up yours Delta, it was…
Α: WILL BOTH OF YOU FUCKING SHUT UP!!!! Will for six freak’n seconds will you two not argue!
Δ…
Ω: you know you just yelled that…
Α: fuck. Well time to do what I do best.
-Ponyvile-
“Twilight! You have a letter from Princess Celestia!” called Spike
“Dear Twilight, my most faithful student,
DON’T go near that thing, don’t touch it, and don’t watch it. This creature is very dangerous and must be treated with extreme caution. Tell every pony to get inside and lock their doors. We will handle this personally.
Sincerely, Princess Celestia”
“What…..” Twilight thought and then she heard it, screaming at the top of it’s lungs in perfect equestrian, “WILL BOTH OF YOU FUCKING SHUT UP!!!!” and then the sound of Equestrian whole army rolling into town.
-Canterlot-
-3 hours earlier
Canterlot was in a state of chaos. Martial law had been declared and the country was preparing for war. The parliament was disbanded and the Luna and Celestia appointed them self’s temporary dictators. They issued a draft making all able body ponies to serve in the guard. Celestia and Luna addressed the troops before they left to guard Equestria from this new threat.
“An old foe has returned!” said Luna “We are sending you to Ponyvile, for we have reason to believe that he is headed there!”
“Now it may seem like we are with holding information on this enemy, but in truth we don’t remember much about him and all the records of him have been lost to time.” explained Celestia, “but this threat must be put down as quick as possible. You will put this down by any means necessary. Do you understand?!”
“YES MA’AM!”
-to be continued-
Now it may seem clumsy and poorly written but this is my first fic so don’t burry me with negative comments
Points and tips welcomed
