Neon Poison and the Killer Colt

by DatCloudShy

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Adventure, Sad, Dark
Length: 954

There is no short way to put it ok Cloud Shy gets shot ok

Everyone loves Cloud Shy, Fluttershy's innocent sister…. or do they??

Cloud Shy was 'accidentally' shot by somepony who obviously has held a grudge for something Cloud did in her childhood.

It's coming back to haunt her in this sad, romance tale of Neon Poison and Cloud Shy!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-03 21:45:11 UTC

Chapter 3

   The fillies remained quiet and jumped into some small bushes. The large colt, the exact same large colt as before, was limping at a rather fast pace through the leaves, but carrying a gun now. He was very tall and round with a short, thick horn on his head. His eyes were a pretty shade of golden-brown, and they looked exhausted from well, the tree that just fell on him. Fluttershy was getting very close now, but she didn't hear the fillies anymore. This just caused more panic for the troubled Shy sister.

"CLOUD SHHYYYYY!!" she called out, alarming the Colt. He turned his head and began to trot over to where he heard Flutter's voice.

"CLOUD!"

Cloud Shy was panicking too. There were a few more gunshots, and another tree fell to the ground. Sadly enough, the tree had fallen onto the colt again, and following the loud crash the tree had made, there was another mysterious colt calling,

"JACK! JAAACKKK! ANSWER MEH, JACK!"

Cloud Shy's body filled with heat. She was afraid of what was probably true. The tree had....killed him. Cloud and Neon, ignoring the colt that was charging up the hill, went to examine the poor colt's body. Yep, he was dead all right. he other unicorn colt finally made it up the hill and panicked.

"JAAACKKK! NO! JACK! AH, WHADDA I DO?!" He picked up the gun just as Flutter approached them.

"Cloud! What happened? I heard-"

"Don't.....MOVE."

Everypony forze. The colt stood there, with his dead brother's gun, and his corpse at his feet. Flutter spoke, calmly, and quietly.

"Calm down, please...I'm not here to hurt you, and neithe-"

"This your sister?"

"Umm...yes...."

"She keeled ma brother."

"The tree fell on him, sir,she did no su-"

"SHE KEELED JACK!" he rose the gun and aimed for Cloud Shy's head.

"NO!" Neon called out. She was very serious, with a seriously serious look on her face. She looked scared though, like seriously scared. Flutter stepped forward a few steps until the colt stared coldly into her eyes. There was a loud crack, and a horrified scream heard in the distance.

Chapter 1

It was a dark, chilly winter night, and a little filly was wandering down the crowded, snowy city of Fillydelphia. The filly, Cloud Shy, being only about four years old, didn't know any better than to wander in such a city so late at night. As she trotted down the dark, scary streets, she never had even the slightest thought about where she was going or why she was going there in the first place.

Back at Cloud Shy's, her older sister, Fluttershy, realized she was gone and panicked. She decided to go off and look for Cloud herself without alarming anyone else in the household. Flutter knew she'd be travelling the streets of the most crowded city in Equestria, but she didn't care. She was determined to find her little sister. She packed a couple apples, some carrots, and a small canteen of water into a satchel on her back, then headed out.

On Cloud Shy's journey, she met another wandering filly named Neon Poison. She was about five, and too was adventuring around the city. They managed to make it halfway across town before they stopped. When they did, they both finally realized how far away from their homes they were, and how dark and eerie the city's abandoned streets were. They looked at each other, with a panicky look on both the fillies' faces. Cloud Shy was about to tell Neon to just follow her home, when she felt a sudden gust of wind from behind her, and a trotting noise stop right behind her; She turned around to see......

[To be continued :P ]

Chapter 2

..they turned around to see a large colt standing behind them with a knife. The young fillies jumped and ran for there lives with the colt following, not far behind. The fillies ran into a forest, covered with tall, pointy trees. The colt still kept following them, but was running out of breath. As Neon and Cloud kept on, the colt slammed into a tree, causing it to fall over on him. The fillies were extremely confused, but Cloud Shy trotted over to the tree and said,

"..and that's why I'd like to be a tree. I could be a superhero!"

FlutterShy was trotting down the same snow street Cloud and Neon were recently travelling down, until she heard a few gunshots in the distance and the squeals of the fillies. She was very alarmed by the loud noises, but she didn't mnd them as much as she could've. She started galloping down the pavement, following the sounds of the gunshots and the screams and squeals.

"CLOUD SHY!" she began to call as she started panicking. She was starting to tear up, but the cold refused to let her cry at all.

"CLOUD SHY! CLOUUUD SHY! WHERE ARE YOU?!?"

Cloud Shy and Neon Poison began to tremble where they were standing. They knew the gunshots were after them, but they didn't know where to run. Cloud started to cry, and Neon followed, but then the fillies were quiet for a minute or two. Cloud heard a faint, "..Cloud Shyyy....!" She was alarmed a bit by this, because she didn't know Flutter came to look for her. The dark forest and the gunshots didn't seem to seem very.....safe, so she shouted back as the voice got closer.

"HELP US! HEEELLLLPPPPPP!!" Neon caught on quickly and started to scream with her until there was a slight rustling of the leaves nearby. They panicked, but quietly.

"What's going on, Shy?"

"I don't know, Neon..."