Broken Angels

by Amega
Sometimes we're not born to fly, we have to find a way to do it ourselves. Follow Volanti, a blank flank mare excluded from society for wanting to be different, and Nick, a human who was unlucky enough to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.

15 year old Nick Levitie, who people call Soar, has always wanted to fly, high in the air with the clouds. He always felt like there was a sense of adventure and freedom. After all, people tell him he has his head in the clouds.
15 year old Volanti Shadows has always wanted to be a Pegasus, but was born an Earth Pony. She's never really felt right with her life, and never been able to find her talent on the ground, always feeling she didn't belong, and never being able to get her cutie mark.
What happens when a headstrong human gets dropped into a world of magic, talking ponies, mythical creatures, and even humans.

(please leave some constructive criticism to help me improve my story writing)

Switches between first person of Volanti and Nick.

Edited by Blaze5565

Teen
On Hiatus
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Romance
Adventure
 
PTMPO

2413 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. 1 The Prologue 2016-02-28 05:47:33 UTC
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  2. New place, New Beginnings part 1 2015-12-31 11:47:32 UTC
  3. New place, New Beginnings part 2 2016-02-28 05:48:03 UTC
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