Equestria's greatest warior

by ssjvegito

Chapter two(revised)

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Chapter two
-story start-

"OHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT" I yelled as I ran through the forest, I had three... you know what I'm just gonna call them woodwolfs, they were gaining ground and there was nothing I could do to stop it. I then remembered something 'if I can use an aura then I can fly!' I thought as I tried to activate my aura. but I must slowed down because of my thought process. 'YES I knew I could think of'- I was tackled to the ground by one of the wolfs due to that thought slowing me down, as it bit down on my left shoulder. "GAH" I gasped as a little blood flew from my the wound. 'Nonononono this can't be happening I was so close to escaping!'

Just when I thought I was a goner someone appeared nocking the wolfs away with a light blue aura that formed a pink barrier, I could feel its strength it was... overwhelming... yet protective as if whatever attacked them was more inclined to defend than attack. Another one who had a white color grabbed me and took off to the sky as I fell unconscious.

It was sometime later when I woke up, I was in a... hospital? but it was different everything was off the smell was weirder then other hospitals I had been in and it felt like I was being healed quicker. Then I noticed the bright golden aura healing my shoulder. I looked to my side to see a smiling anthropomorphic pegacorn thing? I just stared in shock with my mouth agape.

"hello" It spoke with a motherly voice, "are you okay?" it asked when I just stared. I quickly shook myself out of the stare

"you... talk?" I asked,

"why yes, I do" the... woman? responded,

"what are you?" she looked shocked at the question but answered it anyway.

"i am a alicorn, the leader of Equestria" she responded. 'Hmmm'

"what's Equestria?" she was completely shocked at the but still answered again "The country were in right now, and I am the leader of it" ahuh... right... WHAT!?!?!?

"A COUNTRY?" I yelled, as I had never recalled hearing of an equest- wait equestria, a female leader that's an alicorn, is this... mlp?!?! no that can't be! it doesn't exist. after my outburst and train of thought stopped I promptly passed out. It was gonna be awhile before I woke up


Author's Note

still looking for someone to draw my character plz
and I forgot that my story needs 1000 words to publish so don't might the other authors note
also im not good at showing lots of emotion through words so it might be a little wordy

I revised the chapter because just couldn't let it be under 400 words, also the grammar was bugging me ;)

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