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Sundays were the days of despair and sadness. Was it because it was the end of the weekend? Maybe it was because everyone dreads the Monday that was just around the corner?

For a certain pink pony it was none of the above, that made Sundays so dreadful! It was because her favorite place in the whole wide world was closed on Sundays, and for Ponyville's number one party pony, not having Sugar Cube Corner open made her whole day boring. It also didn’t help that most of her friends were always busy on this day, which normally would leave her pacing around her room with nothing to do but listen to her thoughts.

This pony’s name as if you haven’t guessed,Was none other than Pinkie Pie, and today was going to change her entire life because at this very moment she was about to stumble on a fact that was so great, not even the writer knew its secrets! It would not only affect herself, but it would change all of her friend’s lives forever.

“I just don’t get it, Gummy, why would Jimmy crack corn if nobody cares? Doesn’t it seem kind of pointless?” The alligator in question just stared as he licked his eye. Pinkie then let out a gasp. “Wait, if Jimmy cracks corn and nobody cares? Then you add together the fact that Luna is a major gamer pony, minus the fact that Big Mac is still hiding Twilight’s doll. Also when you times the Doctor being an over played meme... oh my god that’s it!” exclaimed Pinkie, before jumping out of her thinking chair. She rushed and grabbed her pet, bringing it towards her face. “Gummy, that’s it! I figured it out! It all makes sense now, and all the pieces are starting to fall into place. I have to go talk to the princess as soon as possible!”

Without warning she zoomed around her room, gathering all the things she could possibly need, while a certain gator just stared. With all of her stuff jammed into her tiny saddle bag she smiled, before rushing to kiss Gummy on the head. “Whelp, Gummy, it’s time for me to go convince a certain dragon to send a letter,” with that she bounced off towards the only castle in Ponyville.

Meanwhile at the Hall of Friendship, (Sorry couldn’t help myself) in Twilight’s castle a certain dragon was enjoying some peace and quiet. Twilight had gone on some type of friendship mission with Rainbow Dash and he had the whole castle to himself, with absolutely nothing to do but relax.”SPIKEEEEEEEEE!!” Spike nearly jumped out of his scales as Pinkie appeared out of nowhere, screaming at the top of her lungs. Pinkie didn’t have time to feel bad for the hyperventilating dragon as she had an important mission to complete. “Listen, sorry for scaring you, but I need an audience with Celestia. It’s of utmost importance!” She exclaimed.

Spike was still trying to stop his heart from leaving his chest while he caught his breath. “Pin..Pinkie… Don’t do that!” the young dragon breathed out while trying to stop himself from fainting. He loved Pinkie but sometimes that pony could be a handful.

Pinkie Pie just bounced around in a rush, evidently too excited to settle down, she had to figure out if what she was discovered was true or not, and she wanted to know instantly. “Listen Spike, I am super sorry for scaring you, I am just super excited right now! I Pinkie Promise I will make you a sapphire cake as an apology, but please send a letter to the princess, like ASAP because it's super important that I talk to her! Pretty please? “She begged.

Spike just huffed. “Yeah yeah, I’ll do it, but you better add extra frosting this time”, he muttered. Pinkie bounced with joy, shouting thank you over and over again. As the dragon went to start writing to the princess, he couldn't help but smile to himself. Yes Pinkie could be a handful, but she always made him smile. Spike grabbed the scroll he was writing on and blew his fire, making it disappear. “Now Pinkie, I put that it was important, but I wouldn’t give your hopes up she can be very bus-” He was cut short as he belched out a new scroll.

Pinkie didn’t waste any time grabbing the scroll and ripping it open. “Dear Pinkie, it would be a honor to have an audience with you. As soon as you get here, the guards will escort you to my chambers, so that we may discuss whatever issue is bothering you. It is always a pleasure to have you or any of your friends visit me.” signed Celestia. Pinkie squealed with joy as she grabbed Spike into a back breaking hug screaming thankyous into his ear, before she rushed out the door she stopped to ask a quick question “Spike, don’t you want to know what’s so important?”

Spike just shook his head. “Pinkie I have learned a long time ago not to question you, about anything you think. It just makes my head hurt.”

Pinkie just smiled at the comment. “It’s not my fault, I know what the writers are thinking before reality hits and causes our fate.” Spike was going to make a comment, but was too late as Pinkie was long gone. “Also, I am borrowing the balloon! I’ll bring it back, I Pinkie promise.” Spike just shrugged his shoulders and headed back to his quiet time hoping no more fourth wall breaking interruptions would happen again.

Pinkie could barely contain her excitement as she saw the great Canterlot castle come into view from her place in the sky. Feeling bad for the balloon, she knew it didn’t get to fly anymore, seeing that its owner had some new features that made it sort of pointless. The thought dissipated as she saw the docking station near.

As the hot air balloon slowly made it’s descent to the main gate she bounced in joy. Getting out, she quickly bounced her way up to the front guard announcing her presence. “Miss Pinkie Diana Pie is here for an audience with the princess.”

The guards just bowed their heads as they always did, and replied. “She is waiting for you in the throne room, Miss Pinkie, would you like us to escort you?”

Pinkie just shook her head and smiled. “Nah its cool I know where it is, but thanks anyways,” The guards just nodded and retook up their post. Before she bounced away, she stopped and shifted through her bag pulling out two completely unarmed cupcakes. She placed them in front of the two guards. ”Have a great Sunday guys!” The guards just smiled before thanking her for the treats.

As she neared the doors that lead to her destination her nerves started to manifest themselves. She started to get worried about what would happen if the princess started to get mad about her new discovery, or what if she even forced her to forget it, or maybe she would banish her to the moon. It was pretty groundbreaking, and just maybe Celestia would want to kept it hidden, no matter what she had to do! Pinkie just shook her head and smiled. “Now Pinkie, you are starting to think like Twilight, the princess wouldn’t punish me for this.” Gulping one last time, she pushed the doors open to her fate.

Celestia stood proud and majestic like she always did, as she smiled at the pony who had entered her chamber “What a pleasure it is to see you Pinkie! What is it you wish to speak to me about?” Pinkie stood in place, letting her nerves start getting the better of her.

Celestia just smiled and spoke. “Pinkie, you can always talk to me. I will not be angry at anything you say.”

Pinkie Pie smiled at the kind words spoken and knew it would be okay, quickly looking around the room for no apparent reason. “Well I was sitting in my room having my bored thinking time because the shop is closed today, and it always sucks on Sundays ‘cause there’s nothing to do, and I started doing math in my head thinking about corn and Big Macs, when it all sort of came together in my head that something has been left to question, and made me believe you haven’t been telling us the whole truth about the elements of harmony, and that you are keeping a super-secret from all of us including Twilight!”

Celestia didn’t even seem to be fazed by the accusation, seeing that this happens a lot more than you would think, and nodded her head for her to continue. Pinkie, noticing this, continued speaking. “So I came here to see if it’s true, because if it is it changes everything, and I mean everything! And I need to start fixing the issues that will come from this and soon! Before there is huge heartache and suffering, that could crush my friends, so let's cut to the case! Are we or are we not immortal?”

Celestia gulped, not expecting Pinkie of all people to come to her with this assumption. She had always thought Twilight would be the first to think of this. “Well Pinkie it seems we have a lot to talk about.”

Author's Note

Well here is the updated version of my first chapter, I hope its pacing is better, and I am still looking for proof readers. I just hope I get more likes and comments. I am not giving up, but it does sorta of suck when so many people dislike the story. So please leave me comments. I cant grow with out feed back.

A special thanks to my new editor DeltaNutmeg