Insanity

by Swagboy 66

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Princess Celestia, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Gore, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Other, Adventure
Length: 1425

Apple Bloom has almost given up on life thanks to her being bullied, however there is another side of her that wants revenge this is the story of it's arrival to equstria and the impact it had on everypony.

Apple Bloom has been drove to the bleak of insanity from constantly getting bullied by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, however unknown to all of them Apple Bloom has a different side just waiting to come out and when it does, Equstria will know the true meaning of fear.

(This is also my first story so I would appreciate some advice/criticism from y'all)

(WARNING:Heavily DBZ influenced)

Published 2015-12-26 05:40:03 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-18 21:20:37 UTC

Chapter 1: Insanity Pt.I

Insanity

A yellow filly with a red mane was floating in a black room with glowing red eyes.

"Soon I shall be free" Said the filly in a disturbing voice. "And when I am this pathetic planet will crumble underneath my hooves, for I am.....Insanity" The yellow pony let out an laugh that only a madman could produce.

Then everything went white....

Insanity

A yellow filly awoke in shock, her heart was beating at an insane rate and her eyes were open like sauces. It took her a minute or two to catch her breath back.

"W-What kind of dream was that?" Asked Apple Bloom as sweat trickled down her forehead. "T-That was insane"

"Apple Bloom Ah need you down here" Said another pony with a southern accent.

"Comin' sis" Shouted the filly now dubbed as 'Apple Bloom'.

Once Apple Bloom got down stairs she saw an orange pony with a blonde mane eating breakfast, along side a red big pony with an orange mane and an old green pony with a white mane.

"Hey sis" Said Apple Bloom.

"Hey AB," Said the orange pony, "Are ya hungry?"

"Yeah" Said Apple Bloom as she sat at the table. "So Applejack what are your plans for today?"

"Eh, Nothin' much, I think Ah'm just gonna hang out with the girls" Said Applejack. "And Big Mac is gonna sort out the fields today aren't ya?"

"Eeyup" Said Big Mac with a nod.

"You best eat your food now" Said Applejack.

"Ok" Said Apple Bloom.

Insanity

Apple Bloom walked closer and closer to the school gates...until two unwanted fillies blocked her path.

"Hey look who it is Silver Spoon" Said a pink pony with a tiara and a purple mane.

"Are you thinking what I'm thinking Diamond Tiara?" Asked Silver Spoon with a smirk.

"Oh, I certainly am" Said Diamond Tiara with a smirk of her own growing on her face.

Apple Bloom had a good idea of what was about to happen and gritted her teeth. The two fillies grabbed her and threw her on the floor.

"Eat the dirt!" Said Diamond Tiara with a giggle.

"Yeah! Eat it all you ugly farm pony" Said Silver Spoon with a giggle of her own.

Apple Bloom's left eye twitched then everything went white...

Insanity

Apple Bloom's eye's snapped open and her pupils darted around, the place looked familiar to her.....the it struck her, it was the same place were the dream took place.

"W-what is this place?" Asked Apple Bloom in fear.

"I spy something with my eye" Said the same disturbing voice from her dream. "And it begins with V" Then smoke started to appear seemingly out of nowhere and it all came to together to create a shape....a shape of a pony. "V for Victim" Then it's body began to get colour and it's fur was yellow and it's mane and tail was red.

Apple Bloom's eye's widened this pony looked exactly like her....however it's eye's didn't carry the same innocent's as her's in fact all it carried was a cold glare that would make Triek run away in fear, the other Apple Bloom looked down at her counterpart before a sadistic grin formed on her face. Then without a warning she disappeared.

Apple Bloom took a couple steps back, before her head made contact with something behind her and that something was the other Apple Bloom.

"W-who a-are you?!" Asked Apple Bloom in fear.

"I am Insanity" Said the other Apple Bloom now known as 'Insanity'. "I can help you with those bullies of yours"

"Y-you can?" Asked Apple Bloom in shock.

Insanity nodded a reached out her hoof.

"All you have to do is give into me and then I will stop their abusive games" Said Insanity.

"N-no! Ah don't trust you" Said Apple Bloom, backing off.

Insanity frowned at this but then her sadistic smile returned. "Very well, you have just closed the only door of escaping their abuse, however if you change your mind then just give into your anger and I'll take control"

"T-thanks for the offer, but Ah doubt that Ah'll do that" Said Apple Bloom stepping back again.

"You won't be able to hold it back for any longer and when your anger is released I will be in control" Said Insanity with an insane laugh that sent shivers up Apple Bloom's spine. "This is goodbye......for now"

And then everything went white....

Insanity

Apple Bloom's eye's opened and she seemed to be in some kind of hospital.

"W-Where am Ah?" Asked Apple Bloom as her eyes scanned the area.

"Ah, Apple Bloom you are finally awake" Said a female voice from her left.

"Miss. Redheart" Said Apple Bloom. "W-Why am Ah here?"

"You collapsed in front of the school and you were muttering about 'not trusting' somepony" Said Redheart. "Umm, is there any chance that I could know about what you were muttering about?"

"Um, Sorry Ah don't seem to remember" Said Apple Bloom, as she didn't want to have ponies calling her crazy since she got bullied enough already.

"Ok then you should be fine to leave in a hour or so" Said Redheart. "I just want to run a couple tests quickly"

"Fine by me" Said Apple Bloom with a smile, however Apple Bloom's face suddenly paled.

"I will be free....and when I am no pony will ever hurt you again....Apple Bloom"

Chapter 2: The Past 1/2

Insanity

Apple Bloom was in a corner of a room that was covered in blood. Many cuts and bruises covered her body, not that she cared though. She used to. But not anymore. Her mind had shut all those emotions down a long time ago. She wondered how her life would have been if she was born in an better environment, with friends and a family that truly cared for her and-

Her thoughts was broken when a whip struck her back. Not that is fazed her anymore though. A Black Pegasus with a white mane and tail was breathing heavily with a whip in his hooves.

"Your no fun anymore, Apple Bloom! I think a certain filly needs to remember who she is dealing with!" Said the Pegasus as he whipped her again.

She still wasn't fazed.

He whipped again.

Still no reaction.

He gritted his teeth and striked her again, still no movement.

"Why aren't you in pain?!" Screamed the stallion.

No response.

His teeth stabbed into his tongue like a dagger and his grip on the whip tightened.

"FEAR ME!!!"

And with that he brought the whip down again as hard as possible and a sickening crack echoed across the room. Apple Bloom was silent for a while before she started making strange noises.....that sounded like she was crying.

The stallion grinned and approached her...but then his pleasure turned into shock, anger and even a small piece of fear as he saw Apple Bloom laughing. The stallion growled and whipped her in the face but she only laughed harder.

Apple Bloom didn't understand it herself, but she felt like a comedian just told her an hilarious joke. It was like a pathetic rat told the devil that he was more stronger. Apple Bloom fell over laughing. The stallion stepped back in fear....she was becoming more insane and unpredictable as days went by.

The Stallion growled, The kid was becoming to unstable for him to handle. He couldn't see why his daughter was so insane then it hit him. Literally. He crashed into the floor with a sickening crack. He looked at his bloodied nose and then back to his daughter who had a bloodthirsty look in her eyes. She grinned as she over towered her prey. Her eyes glowing red in the darkness. She pointed her hoof at him and a red ball appeared.

His last thoughts before the ball made contact with him was that what he had witnessed was not an act of an innocent filly no...this was an act made with a madmare...a monster....a creature with only one thing on it's mind...

Insanity

Then Apple Bloom woke up...

Author's Note

Alright sorry about this being extremely late, I had lots of stuff to deal with so sorry about that. Also I know I just mind-fucked you all here...but stuff will start to make more sense as the story progresses.
Also sorry for the short chapter like I said, I have a lot of stuff to do but I promise that the next one will be longer.