Chapters Rainbow Dash
"I hope she's here!" I said flying down to Fluttershy's cottage, "She said she'd be there!"
"I'm coming I'm coming! Gee! What's the rush!?" shouted Fluttershy opening the door.
"Yo what gives?" I said, "I thought you were coming to Lake Fore-Stunt to help me practice my
"B-bu wha... huh? bu... but how? Not real!" she shouted slamming the door on me.
"What the huh?" I said shocked. 'I didn't know Flutters could shout that loudly...'
"But Y-you... you're Rainbow Dash!?" she shouted. But before I could respond she feinted...
"Um... Fluttershy?"
Sweet Apple Acres
Pinkie pie was helping Applejack with gathering apples.
"You guys! Come quick! Something's wrong with Fluttershy!" said Rainbow Dash.
"Ah can't go nowhere Dash, I've got Apple trees to buck!" exclaimed Applejack.
"You go ahead." said Big Mac "I'll take care of these apples!"
"Are ya sure?" asked Applejack.
"Eeyup!"
"Then let's go let's go let's go!" shouted Rainbow Dash.
Twilight's Castle
Twilight was experimenting with chemicals at her castle when somepony burst through the door.
"Twilight!" shouted Rainbow Dash.
The shock made her accidentally spill too much and created a small explosion into her face.
"This had better be good!" said Twilight.
Rarity's Boutique
Rainbow dash came into the boutique to find Rarity running back and forth trying to put together a dress.
"Oh dear. Oh no! No no no!"
"Um... Rarity?" asked Rainbow Dash. Rarity stopped running for a second.
"Oh, Hello darling! Um I'm sorry I can't talk right now, I have a very Important order to fill and the deadline's tomorrow!" said Rarity
"But it's-"
"Darling whatevers on your mind it can wait till tomorrow. Somepony very popular needs this dress for a performance in canterlot!"
"But it's- Wait... you mean Sapphire Shores?"
"Sapphire Shores? Oh no no no no, This is for the one and only Sky Diamond! Oh, but I can't find my pink thread anywhere!"
"Um... Isn't it right there?" asked Rainbow Dash pointing to a spot under a table next to one of the legs.
"Oh..." said Rarity embarassed. "I seem to have ran passed it." She then picked it up with her magic, put the end through the eye of the needle, and started sewing. She was too occupied in her work to listen to what her friend was saying, so Rainbow Dash just left.
Later
"What happened?" asked Twilight.
"Is she?..." started Applejack.
"No, she's just... I don't know what happened, she just feinted on me!" said Rainbow Dash.
"Tell us what happened." said Twilight levitating a notepad and quill in front of her.
"Well I knocked on the door and there was no answer, so I knocked again and still
"You were pounding on the door?" asked Pinkie.
"No Pinkie, I wasn't hitting it that hard! I was just getting impatient." replied Rainbow Dash.
"That is weird..." said Applejack. "Did she say anythin' to ya?"
"No, not to me... She was stuttering, not making any sense. Then she says I'm not real, and slams the door in my face!"
"Hmmm... Staring.... Stuttering.... Not real.... Slammed the door... Very unusual!" said Twilight
"Yeah! She opened the door again, but this time very slowly. And she totally freaked out!"
"Freaked out?" asked Twilight.
"Totally! She was acting as if she's never met me before!"
Twilight looked back at her notes trying to put the pieces together.
Fluttershy's cottage
"Look! She's coming to!" said a voice that clearly had a southern accent. I opened my eyes to
"Twilight Sparkle!?" I said shocked. "Okay this has got to be a dream! But then again I don't ever dream!"
"Well of course I'm real and... WOULD YOU STOP POKING ME!?"
"Oh, sorry!" I said with an apologetic smile. "Wait, why do I have hooves!?" I said looking at my yellow hooves.
"Over there!" shouted Pinkie pointing to the bathroom, not even questioning why I need a mirror.
"I'M FLUTTERSHY!?" I shouted. Then I screamed the most manly scream I could
"Fluttershy?" I said out loud
"Calm down, everything's going to be fine!" I said trying to comfort her.
The girls were looking at me with confused looks on their faces. "She's lost it!" proclaimed Applejack.
"What's so funny?" asked Rainbow Dash.
"What AJ said, it was hilarious!" I say laughing
"Ah don't get it!" said AJ
"Ok imagine Pinkie in my situation," I said pointing to the party pony. "and you say 'She's lost it!'
"That is so, true!" said rainbow holding her gut in hysterical laughter.
After everyone was done laughing I asked "Where's Rarity?"
"She couldn't make it, she had a very special order..." said Twilight who upon further
"Um... actually..." I started "You probably won't believe me, but I'm not Fluttershy..."
"WHAT!?" shouted everyone.
"What do you mean you're not Fluttershy?" asked Twilight.
"You're not a changeling are you!?" said Rainbow Dash accusingly.
"I'm not a changeling!" I said rolling my eyes.
"Then where's our Fluttershy, Huh?" said Rainbow.
"I'm not sure how, but I think she's in here," I said pointing to my head, "and this is her physical body too."
"You can hear her thoughts?" asked Twilight.
"I think so."
"What's she sayin' right now?" asked Applejack.
"She's scared, but she thinks she'll be okay."
Pinkie's face turned to sadness, "Poor Fluttershy!"
"I'm sure she's fine Pinks!" said AJ
"Listen, my name is Kevin, and I'm a human from another world."
"Human? You mean you're from Canterlot High?" asked Twilight.
"No, I'm from another world, but you're on the right track!"
"Wait a minute, if you're from another world and just got here, how do you know our names?" asked Pinkie.
I cleared my throat, "Yeah... about that..." I said, "Where I come from this world and all of the
"So what you're saying is.... We're famous!?" asked Rainbow Dash.
"You could say that..." I replied a little unsure.
"Awesome!" says RD
"Hold on!" said AJ "So you're sayin' we're made up?"
"Humans have very big imaginations."
"But if we're made up... Then what's the point of anythin!" Asks AJ
"Well if you think about it Applejack Canterlot high could also be considered fake but we can actually go there."
"We would if you actually let us go there." Says Rainbow crossing her arms annoyed.
"Hey it's not my fault there's other versions of you! It would get confusing!" Explained Twilight.
"Well um... Have you heard of the multiverse theory? That could be it." I reply shyly. Twilight gasps.
"You know the multiverse theory!?" Shouts Twilight grinning widely.
"Mhm..." I say rather embarrassed "It's just a theory though I didn't expect for this to happen."
"Anything else we need to know Kevin?" asked Twilight.
"Um... I'm not a mare..." When I said that they all had shocked expressions on
"That must be so weird!" AJ then bumped Rainbow. "Ow! Hey!"
"Rainbow, that wasn't nice!" said Applejack. "Sorry bout' that!"
"It's okay AJ!" I said. "So Twilight, do you believe me?"
"We'll see, It's not that I don't trust you it's just that I need more info!"
"How about an official tour of Ponyville from, yours truly?" asks Pinkie with that smile of hers.
I thought about it for a minute. "I'd love that!"
Ponyville
Pinkie was showing me around Ponyville. She told me the names of everpony we crossed paths with.
"This is Sugarcube Corner!" said Pinkie with her right fore-hoof around me giving me a buddy hug. "Which is wheredelicious cakes!" Pinkie and I then headed West.
We walked... Well actually, Pinkie happily trotted while I followed close behind.
"Gee, I would have never guessed!" I said being sarcastic.
"Hey, did you know I grew up on a rock farm?"
"I did," I replied "but how does one FARM ROCKS? It doesn't make sense!"
Pinkie placed her hoof on her muzzle tapping her chin. "I'm not sure..." she said slowly.
My right hoof met up with my face. What she said was totally worthy of a facehoof.
"So Kevin, tell me more about yourself."
"Well, my favorite color is blue, I was born the 27th of September and-"
"What year?"
"Huh?"
"The year silly! What year were you born?" I could hear giggling from the real Fluttershy.
"Oh! 1999."
Outside Carousel Boutique
Pinkie's tour ends at the Carousel Boutique.
"And here is the Carousel Boutique!" exclaims Pinkie. "My best friend Rarity is the best designer of dresses and fabrics in Ponyville!"
"Let's go meet Rarity!" I held the door with my left fore-hoof. "Ladies first!" I said half jokingly.
Pinkie bounced with glee into the Boutique all Pinkie style. "Thanks!!" she said "You're such a gentlecolt!"'What?!' She then disappears from sight again.
I placed my hoof over my face. "Ugh!"
Carousel Boutique
I walked into the Boutique to see Rarity running around back and forth.
'Probably worrying about that special order.' I thought.
"Hi Rarity!" I said.
"Fluttershy! Darling, are you alright? I had heard something had happened, from Rainbow Dash. But I was so caught
"Um... Rarity?"
"Oh, what am I talking about? Of course you forgive me! We're best friends!" Interrupted Rarity. "Here try this on!"
"Rarity..."
"Oh hush now dearie, I know exactly what you're about to say, and it looks simply divine on you!"
"Rarity!" I shouted cutting her off.
"Or perhaps, just leave it the way it is?"
"Rarity listen," I said. I'm not really Fluttershy..."
"I beg your pardon?"
"Well...." started Pinkie taking in a deep breath. 'Oh dear!' I thought. I knew exactly
"ThisFluttershyisn'tourFluttershybecausethisFluttershyisactuallyahumanfromanotherworldnamedKevin!AndthatKevinisn'tamarehe'sastallionwhichisreallyreallyweirdonceyouthinkaboutitbutthegoodthingisthat FluttershynotthisFluttershybutourFluttershycanspeaktothisFluttershythroughFluttershy'sbrain!"
I honestly didn't understand a single word of what she said (neither did Rarity), but If you must know.
"This Fluttershy isn't our Fluttershy because this Fluttershy is actually a human from another world named Kevin! And that Kevin isn't a mare he's a stallion which is really really weird once you think about it! But the good thing is that
'How did she even say all that in one breath?' I thought.
"I don't follow..." said Rarity.
(I explain)
"Oh dear! I am so sorry! if I had known-"
"Rarity, it's all right! Besides," I look at my reflection in the mirror. "this dress looks really good on me! You truly have an eye for fashion!"
"Aw, why thank you for the compliment!" said Rarity. She levitated the dress off of me, and then Pinkie and I walked
I placed my hoof on my face.'Ugh! Really!? "This dress looks really good on me!?" Did I seriously just say that!?' I thought.
'Ugh! That was a rhetorical question! You don't answer a rhetorical question!'
Ponyville
On the way back to the cottage, I ran into Derpy. Heh, literally!
"Are you alright?" asked the grey mare.
"Yeah Ditzy, I'm fine."
"How do you know my name?"
"Well..." I thought for a minute. "Do you want me to lie to you or-"
"Just tell me the truth." she said with an unamused face.
"Okay, you're probably going to think I'm lying, but-"
"Ah, Derpy! There you are!" I was interrupted by a third voice. "Oh, Hello! Sorry, I didn't see you there!
"Not exactly..." I said
"Whatever do you mean? Twin sister?"
"No..." I said 'I've gotta ask him!'
'Nothing you need to know!'
"Let me answer your question with another." I said. "Does the term blue box mean anything to you?"'Probably faking' I thought.
"No, I don't believe so... Ditzy? Do you know anything about a blue box?"
"No."
"Alright, this is going to sound crazy and maybe insane, but..." I had to say it!
"Ok...." said Ditzy Doo
"Well, nice to meet you... Kevin." said Time Turner
"Bye..." I said.
Fluttershy's Cottage
Back at the cottage I say goodbye to Pinkie, and say hello to Angel Bunny. (even though he can be stubborn at times.)
Sure enough, I found the kitchen. I opened up the fridge and got 2 apples for me, and a carrot for Angel.
I expected him to throw it at me wanting carrot cake or something, but he started eating it without a hitch.
'That was unexpected'
After eating we were all tired. I took Fluttershy's body upstairs and into bed.
"Good night Angel." I said as he hopped into his cute little bunny bed.
'Good night Fluttershy.'
And with that, we were all fast asleep...
Author's Note
My longest chapter yet! That Angel scene was unexpected wasn't it?
Well, Angel isn't always a misbehaved bunny. In fact, he can be very sweet!
What do you think of my story so far?
Post your answer in the comments!
Day 1
09/27/2016
Fluttershy's cottage
I arched my back and stretched my wings trying to wake up. 'Wait, wings?' I thought. I tried to remember what'Oh yeah, I'm in Equestria...' I rubbed my eyes with my hooves, and felt some kind of soft'That's strange, why is this here?' I wondered. I opened my eyes, but all I could see is black.
'Morning Fluttershy.'
'I was wondering the same thing.'
I pushed the fabric off my eyes.
"Hi there!" said a familiar voice.
'Ah!'
I looked left and right but I saw nobody but Angel in his bunny bed.
"Huh?"
"Up here!"
I looked up to see a pink pony hanging from the ceiling with plungers on her hooves.
"Aaaahhh!!"
I fell off the bed with a THUD.
"Wakey wakey sleepyhead!"
'That pony is so random!'
"Pinkie Pie what are you doing here?! You scared the feathers right off of me!"
"I can't tell you that! That would spoil the secret!"
'What the hay is she talking about?'
"Now put your blindfold back on! I have a surprise for you!" she said covering my eyes with the fabric
'What could she have planned for me? Think Kevin think!' My mind still needed time to'Did I REALLY just say that? These equestrian terms are getting to me!'
"You'll see!" She said pushing me to who knows where.
Location:
??????????????????
Pinkie finally stopped pushing me. The air felt a little colder and the ground felt smooth, so I must be inside.
'Where am I? Why did Pinkie drag me all the way here? Wait... Please don't tell me this is what I think this-'
"Surprise!" exclaimed at least 30 ponies, maybe more...
'Aaannd... it is...'
Pinkie ran off and came back with a bunch of instruments 3 seconds later.
"Are you seri-"
"Happy, Happy birthday! Your day is filled with cheer!"
"Happy, Happy birthday! I'm really glad you're here!"
With a smile Pinkie got in my face, so I backed my head away. 'Okay...'
"Happy, Happy birthday! We smile when you arrive!"
"On your special day I'll make you, THE HAPPIEST PONY ALIVE!!!"
Pinkie then jumps high into the air while several confetti cannons fired, shooting out confetti and streamers.
As her song finished, I couldn't help myself from laughing.
"P-P-Pinkie Pie!! What is all this!?" I asked in laughter.
"Well duh!" said Pinkie with a frown, which returned to a smile. "It's your Happy Birthday Party!
"Um thanks, but I'm not really into birthdays anymore."
"WHAT!?" shouted Pinkie who was apparently sensitive about my statement. "How, how? HOW do you not like birthday parties?!"
"I don't know," I said "I just don't see the point of birthdays anymore."
"You mean I planned this entire party for nothing!?"
"No, I didn't say that. I will gladly enjoy this party!" Pinkies eyes lit up with excitement. "But this party needs one more thing..."
"More punch bowls?" asked Pinkie.
"No, it needs... LESS BALLOONS!" I then grabbed every single balloon and brought all of them up to Pinkie's room.
"Uh, what are you doing?" asked Rainbow Dash.
"Yeah, what are you doing with all those balloons?" continued Twilight.
"Well you see, I don't like it when balloons pop." I said
"Seriously!? What's a party without balloons?" yelled Pinkie.
"A party I can enjoy?" I said. It looked like She was going to explode, but then.
"Okidokeloki! If you're happy, then I have accomplished my mission!"
'I seriously thought she was going to explode!'
"Come on everypony!" said Pinkie. "LET'S PARTY!
Author's Note
EDIT: I did not know pinkie had only one party cannon so i changed it.
Earth 09/26/2016
It was just a day like any other ordinary day. I ate breakfast, went to school, and came back home afterwards,
"My Little Pony, My..."
"Skip!" I said without hesitation. pressing the fast forward button on the remote. Now I know what you're thinking,
I continued to watch more, when there was some blue lightning sparking from the television. I then saw a bright
Chapter 1 Knock at the door
Chapter 1 Knock at the door
Location: Home?
(Knock! knock!) I woke up to a knock at the door. 'Who could that be?' I thought as I lazily got up and slowly
(Knock! Knock! Knock!) "Calm down, I'm coming!" I quietly shouted half to myself.'Hang on, why does my voice sound like that? ' I wondered. I just dismissed it though.
(Knock! Knock! Knock! Knock! Knock! Knock!) The person outside was yelling something, but the walls muffled
On the other side of the door flying in place was a cyan pegasus that I knew all too well. She had
"Yo, what gives?" she said in her raspy voice, "I thought you were coming to Lake Fore-Stunt to help me practice'This can't be real! I've got to be hallucinating!'
"B-bu wha... huh? bu... but how?" I stuttered. "Not real!" I shouted slamming the door closed and turning'It's not real! It's not real!' I keep telling myself.
It's okay...