My Sparkle

by CaringSlash

Rating: everyone
Tags: Human, Other, Romance, Second Person, Spike, Twilight Sparkle, Mrs. Cake, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2228

You have a crush on Twilight, but your afraid to tell her.

You've had your eyes on her ever since you met her, you get nervous around her, you pay full attention to her when she speaks, your heart melts when she giggles, and you wish to stare into her beautiful eyes forever.

When are you going to confess your love to her. Is it so hard to tell her.

Anon X Twilight Sparkle

2nd person story

Update: As of January 26th this story has reached 500 views.

Another Update: As of January 28th this story has 25 likes.

On February 16th this story has reached 666 views.

As of February 29th this story has 750 views and it's on a leap year.

As of April 10th this story has reached 1000 views.

As of April 27th. 35 likes! I didn't believe this story would be so awesome.

As of June 20th, this story has reached 1500 views.

As of August 18th this story has reached 50 likes. Whooo!

There's a sequel coming in May and it's out now.

Reading Of The Story By Lotus Moon: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZnTALvu9OwQ&t=8s

Published 2016-01-05 02:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-05 02:30:02 UTC

It's time to tell her.

It's been a month since you appeared in Equestria. Your finally starting to become relaxed being in Equestria. Well other than never seeing your friends or family again. But your hoping one day you will return home, crying in the arms of your friends and family. Ever since you appeared in this world you've made some friends, the friends you hang out with the most is The Elements Of Harmony, since they were the first ones you met once you entered this world. But there's one pony your somehow attached to, somepony you can't stop staring at, and that pony is the Princess of Friendship herself: Twilight Sparkle. But there's one problem with that, your a human and she's a pony. She probably will say no to you and that will break your heart. Also it might send you into depression and you might end up killing yourself. You gotta find a way to tell her this gently and you got to deal with what she says. So you need to set a appointment for you and her both to have a talk about it in private. There's only one problem, you'll need to find the courage to talk to her and let her know that you want to talk in private and what time and date that will be.

After hours of thinking of what to say to Twilight, you finally thought of what to say to her. But now you got to go up to her and say it. Which means if you go up to her and speak you'll start to stutter and you will embarrass yourself in front of her. So you have to think on how to get the message to Twilight without stuttering. Then the idea comes to you, if you don't look at her you will be able to get the message out without the worry of stuttering.

After an hour of thinking of how the plan will go, you ready to take your chances, and deal with the answer she gives you.

You reach her castle and knock on her door, there was no answer, until Twilight says something from behind the door. "Who is it".

"It's me Twilight". You say to her.

She opens the door. "Oh hi". She says. "What are you doing here".

You look down at the floor to avoid eye contact with her and you start to speak. "I was wondering if me and you could.....talk in private tomorrow, it's important".

"Okay, what time"? She says.

"Is noon ok". You say back trying your best to not look at her.

"Yeah noon is ok, but where at"? She says.

"Is here okay"? You say to her while trying your best not to look at her.

"Ok, i'll make sure Spike is out doing something. She says "Ok, you want to meet in the castle at noon and it's got to be in private". She repeats.

You nod your to let her know she's correct.

"Okay, well I see you tomorrow". She says.

"Alright, see you tomorrow". You say.

After that you both wave goodbye to each other. You leave with a smile on your face. "It worked". You say to yourself.

The day is here, today is the day you finally tell Twilight how you feel about her. But the only downside is that if she doesn't like you, that will tear you apart. So you hope she will like you. "If she says no, i'll be heartbroken for months". You say to yourself.

It almost noon and your on your way to Twilight's Castle for the private meeting. You finally reach her castle and open the door. Twilight was waiting for you on the other side.

"There you are, come with me". She says. You both sit in the chairs that are around the map. You sit down next to Twilight. "Okay, what were you wanting to talk about"? She says.

"Okay, what i'm about to tell you could change your life and mine once I tell it". You say. "Are you sure your ready for this". You say in a serious tone.

Yes, i'm ready. She says.

You take a deep breath and you start. "Do you know why I somehow attract to you like a magnet, get lost in your eyes, pay full attention to you when you speak, smile when you giggle, and get nervous around you". I explain.

She started to think about it. "No, I don't know why". She says confused.

You take another deep breath and then you say it. "It's because..........i'm in love with you, I love you Twilight".

Twilight's face turn into shock and froze. "Your in love with me, but that can't be possible, i'm a pony and your a human". She says becoming confused.

"Well, I knew you were going to say that, I guessing the answer will be no". You say feeling your heart sink.

"I didn't say no, it's just.....I just can't believe that your in love with me". She says.

"Well it's true, I had feelings for you ever since I came here". You said.

"You have bonded with my friends very easily, but you put them in a state of fear until they saw your not evil. How's this sound, how about we go out on a dinner date, and I will see, how does that sound". She says.

A smile forms on your face from hearing that. "Okay how about a private reservation at Sugarcube Corner at 7:00". You say feeling confident.

"I would love that". She says, putting a bigger smile on your face.

"Okay, I will see you tomorrow night". You say and then leave Twilight's Castle with same smile on your face from yesterday.

The date.

The day is finally here. It's the day you go on your date with Twilight, but there are some bumps in the road. First, you got to talk to the Cakes to see if you can have the place to yourselves,and last but not least you got to look good for the date, you can go to Rarity's Boutique and get fitted for a tux.

It's 5:00 now, only 2 more hours left. You were able to get the Cakes to agree on letting you having the place to yourselves for the night and you got yourself fitted and got a tux, on a positive note rarity says you don't have to pay for it, since it was for a special occasion.

It's 6:50. So you decide to head toward Sugarcube Corner and wait for Twilight to get here. 5 minutes later you can see Twilight leaving her castle and heading towards Sugarcube Corner. From where your standing, you can't tell if Twilight has dressed up for the occasion, while trying to see if she's wearing anything, she's in front of you and looking up at you.

"Um.....hello is anypony home". She says breaking you from trance.

"Oh sorry, I was trying to see what you were wearing for the occasion". You say feeling stupid.

"Well then, let your eyes gaze". She then starts to pose for you. Starting from the left and finished on the right. "Like what you see". She says.

You can see she's wearing a light purple dress with purple sparkles on it, just like her cutie mark, and a flower on the right side of her head, which is the same color of her dress.

"Yes, I do. You look beautiful". You say without thinking.

"Why thank you, shall we go in". She says.

"Lets". You say. You move your hand over to Twilight. She puts her hoof in your hand. You gently gripped it, so it wouldn't hurt her, you both then walked into Sugarcube Corner.

"Where do you want to sit Twilight". You say to her.

She looks around and she points to a table."How about over there". She says.

"Okay". You say as you lead her to the table. You pull her chair out for her and push it in, then you seat yourself. The table is next to a window and it's got a great view of Luna's moonlight. You start up some conversation, you tell her about your life and what you did before you came here.

"What would you two like". Mrs. Cake says putting your story to a halt.

"How about one milkshake with two straws, so me and Twilight can share". You say while looking at Twilight, causing a smile to form on her face.

Okay, one milkshake with two straws coming up. She says and then walks off to go make your order.

You continue your story, but once you were finished Twilight decided to jump in and tell you some things about her.

Once Twilight finished, Mrs. Cake dropped by and gave you two your milkshake and your two straws. "Thank you". You say to Mrs. Cake.

"Your welcome". She says to you.

You both stick your straws into the milkshake but you didn't drink out of it yet. "I'm guessing you got the tux from Rarity". Twilight says while looking at your tux.

"Yep. She fitted me and gave it to me for free for this special occasion. I'm guessing you got your dress from Rarity as well". You say pointing at her dress.

"Yes I did. Rarity had made it for me in very little time.". She says.

"Well, she done a really good job at it". You say back.

You both sit in silence for a couple of minutes until Twilight started to look out the window. "Isn't it beautiful". She says.

"What the sky,moon, stars, or Ponyville".

"Everything, Everything i'm looking at is beautiful". She says still staring out the window.

"Just like you". You say. When she heard that she looked directly at you with a smile on her face.

"Aww, that's so sweet". She says.

"Well, I think your beautiful anytime of the day". You say meaning it.

"Your so sweet". She says. Then the both of you went for the milkshake, while you do that you both looked into each other's eyes. After you both had some of milkshake your still looking into each other's eyes.

Eventually Twilight moves the milkshake away and starts to you pull you closer with her magic and it happened. You and Twilight lips finally connect. You both stayed connected for almost a minute before breaking the kiss.

After breaking the kiss, you look for a few minutes in silence before Twilight had spoken. "How was that".

"That was amazing". You say with a smile on your face. "So does this mean we are......"

She nods her head. "Yep".

"Okay, here's the bill. Whenever your done, just go to the counter". Mrs. Cake says droping in by surprise, then walks away.

"Thank you". You say. "Are we done, you want me to take you home". You say to Twilight.

"Yes". She says. You pull her chair out for her and push it back in once she's out. You go up to the counter and paid for your shake. Then you exited Sugarcube Corner while holding Twilight's hoof.

You walked Twilight to her castle and waited for her to go in, as soon as you start to walk away Twilight called out your name. "Hey". You turn around to see Twilight staring at you. "I forgot to tell you something". Getting your attention you walk up to her.

"Yes". Wondering what she's going to say.

"I had a great time tonight". She says.

"I had a great time too". You say, making a smile form on her face. She flys up to you and kisses you passionately. You wrap your arms around her neck and she does the same to you.

She breaks the kiss and whispers into your ear. "I love you".

"I love you too Twilight". You whispered into her ear. After that you release each other from your embrace.

She flys back down on all fours and she waves at you, you wave back. "I'll see you tomorrow". She says.

"You too". You were about to leave, but then Twilight called out your name again.

"Hey, I got an idea". She says.

You turn back around, wondering what she thought of. "Yes".

"Why don't you stay at my place tonight". She says.

"I would love to stay at your place tonight". You say.

After agreeing on staying at Twilight's place, Twilight told Spike that you and her went on a date and Spike came up to you and said. If you make her cry, "I will burn you in places that should never be burnt. Oh and please don't try to make love to her, I don't want to be scarred for live if I see it happen".

"I'll try my best and don't worry that won't happen unless Twilight's ready". You say reassuring him.

After your conversation with Spike. The three of you started to get ready for bed. You followed Twilight into her bedroom, the both of you climbed into bed together and you both layed down facing each other. "Goodnight my Sparkle". You say and kissed her on the forehead.

"Goodnight my love". She says and kisses you on the nose.

You both wrap into an embrace, fell asleep in it, and you both have a smile on your face.