A Cog in the Machine

by Zoom zoom

Transition (You may skip this chapter but it does fix one small hiccup in logic)

Previous Chapter

Now how should I go about it to you audience? This story is of course second person, but here is where we have an impasse. See if I keep this up I’m not sure you would be able to keep up with who’s who at this zoo. So I believe at least for this chapter, I must change things for now. So as unfortunate as it is for me to do so, I’m going to need to change this into a third person story. DON’T LEAVE! I assure you it is only for this chapter, and it is only for the good of all. But you know, to make things a bit more fun I think I’ll have to have a special story teller instead of myself recapping for you.

Question is, who could it be? Ah, no that wouldn’t work. Maybe….yes that will. Besides because his cameo in another one of these author’s stories got canned he needs the work. What do you say to in?

*Snap*

Why I’d be delighted my good sir. Now go on and speak to your heart’s content about your concerns. And you know what? I’ll even do you a solid and keep it second person. Sound good?

A smile crossed his face, “Perfect. Thank you so much.”

Hey, helping those in need is what I live for. Besides this should be fun and lets me scratch off service time with Celestia.

“Don’t forget it keeps the entire, ‘Why isn’t Luna or Celestia helping if Pinkie is an element of harmony?’ plot hole at bay.”

Well I’m sure the readers will understand. Though shining a light on it may not be the best course of action. Guess we’ll see in the comments.

“Oh,” he said suddenly remember. “Cog’ll wake soon. Better get into position.”

Have fun. I’m sure this will be far more chaotic for here on out if you had to call me in.


Author's Note

I made this more as a joke and to explain how I will be keeping it 2nd person without making it too weird since the narrator is now a character in this thing. And yes as this part shows Cog really is related to Pinkie in this sense as well. I decided to make him the subconscious due to obvious hiccups if Cog could break the fourth wall at all.

As for me, I'm off to edit some of the older chapters to have it make more sense. at least up to the chapters I skipped before I return.

TTFN