Author's Note

Now that this fic is complete I would like to see your criticisms. Please take a moment to read this. It is important.

Btw I know it's sorta cheating to post a chapter like this but if you see one of my latest blogposts you will understand.

Mods don't lynch me please.

Author's Notes and Alternative routes

The Loyal Patiot as a result of this contest, has won a sequel that GodOfBBQ is going to write. Please keep in touch with all three for more news.

Alternative chapter 5 route: Selune gains a glimpse of an alternate reality where she hasn't gotten the black coat. She sees a barely sucessful seer, copycat of her mother Lumina Oculus. She is utterly dissatisfied with her life and doesn't have any of the friends Similarly to how Tye Lee in Avatar wanted to be in the circus, simply because she wanted to be different and not part of a set, Selune lives resenting her heritage that defines her life.

Alternative chapter 6 route: "The Mask"-Jim Carrey. Utterly comical, ridiculous, absurd, and generally wacky the heist goes all kinds of weird, flashy, and funny. The fact that I put the ponified Gangam Style in the original should tell you just what could happen.