Legacy of Kain: Harmony's Rise

by Time Reaper

Chapter 20: A Chaotic Deal

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Raziel tried to move back as he was surprised by the now moving statue but he stumbled with a wooden chair that appeared out of nowhere, forcing him to sit back as chains appeared from within the chair and made sure he couldn't move.

Raziel took a moment to think what he was hearing, trying to comprehend what was in front of him but his mind was unable to properly analyze what he was looking at. He understood what this creature was capable off but not who he was nor where did he come from, the idea of facing it wasn't one Raziel felt very keen to do so, he decided to bide his time so he could properly prepare.

Discord gave Raziel a bored look as a little book appeared on his paw.

Everything around Raziel disappeared as Discord put himself back on where his statue's pedestal was located but there was now a giant throne while he was wearing a royal red coat with a golden crown on his head.

Raziel started to analyse his words carefully and see how strong where the chains holding him down before answering. This creature certainly wasn't the Elder God but it was very close to be as dangerous as it but, there was something on Discord's words that Raziel took notice off...

Discord's eyes bulged at this.

Discord put his claw on his head as his mind thought of what he could do about with this piece of information and the answer literally came in the form of a light bulb on the top of his head.

Raziel was shocked at the speed Discord decided to help him, which meant there must have been something to look for.

Doesn't that sounds good enough for you? With that creature gone, you won't have to worry for either this world or your own from falling victim to that Mesonychoteuthis hamiltoni anymore. What could you lose from this?"

Raziel took a moment to think at the proposal and realize that, should he accept this deal, he didn't actually have something to lose but, his experience from Nosgoth told him, that this was just too good to be true. For a brief moment he wondered what could possible be there for him to lose but he quickly realized that, to know what kind of deal this was, he didn't have to ask what was in this for him to lose, but rather what was for Discord to win with this treaty.

Discord's eyes starting to move from side to side as his mouth could only squeak a shocked 'excuse me?'

Raziel then went through the chains as if they weren't there and started to move besides Discord as if evaluating him.

Discord tried to look around as if trying to search for an excuse but he relented.

Discord then transported in front of Raziel while wearing a black robe and while having a blackboard behind him.

This black board then came to life and started to draw Discord with much detail while showing him as someone who was helping the world by throwing his magic across the world and making it work by itself.

Raziel took a moment to think about this before asking.

Discord simply pointed at the blackboard, who quickly made a regular figure of Raziel.

The blackboard then started to draw the Elder God's eye as Discord tried to throw his magic at them and showing that his magic has little to no effect on them but the Elder God was starting to change the world surrounding it to its liking as it started to suck the magic from everything surrounding it.

The board as well as Discord's robes disappeared as his paw was once again offered.

The more Raziel tried to find a problem with his reasoning, the less he could find to refuse to this time limited deal. It wasn't as if Raziel trusted Discord (after all, he was calling Celestia and Luna the villains of the story) and more of worry over allowing the Elder God to destroy everything if he didn't found it quick enough but he couldn't accept. He knew there was something wrong in Discord's words and only by talking would Raziel find the problem.

He then remembered his discussions with Twilight about how the Reaver's magic could affect Equestria and he had an epiphany.

Discord's face briefly showed him annoyed but that quickly changed to his usual grinning face while his voice showed that he was getting exasperated with Raziel's denial to accept the deal.

Discord then turned around and mumbled to himself: "For the first time in centuries I find someone who isn't a boring parrot about harmony and it's not making it happy."

He then turned around, now disguised as a salesman, and made one last attempt to make this peacefully.

Raziel looked at Discord with contempt on his eyes and asked with such a cold tone that it froze Discord on ice.

By the time Discord thawed himself out, he realized that he made a wrong comment, so it was time to talk.

Discord then made a puppet show where he started to move around some ponies shaped with the form of Twilight and her friends.

A puppet with the shape of Discord then appeared and started to touch each pony, removing them of their color.

Discord then literally dropped his nice face and started to look at Raziel with contempt and willing to fight.

Raziel looked at himself in the deep predicament that was facing him as of now. He was well aware that Discord had the advantage here but it would be unacceptable to leave his equestrian friends so he did what he knew was right. He looked at Discord directly into his eyes, with no fear to bear, and draw the Spiritual Reaver directly at him.

Discord's smile separated from his disappearing body as he answered.

Pieces of Discord's body appeared (the paw in front of Raziel, the claw behind him, the lizard's leg on his left and the pony's leg to his right) and shot all at the same time a series of yellow blast that Raziel quickly avoided by jumping but Discord's arms quickly appeared and gave Raziel an elbow that threw him down to the ground as his tail whipped him to the nearest statue.

Before Raziel could try to recover, Discord's body reassembled and started to throw a barrage of objects that Discord himself created. Chairs, tables, clocks, scrolls, statues, spears, etc. There was no limit of what Discord threw at Raziel and, knowing fully well that the fight would be boring if Raziel remained trapped under all of that, Discord quickly snapped his fingers and made all the objects surrounding Raziel to blow up.

As Discord saw the smoke rising up from the power coming from him, he started to smile with glee at the idea of actually being less restricted than usual. More often than not he couldn't use all of his powers since the other races wouldn't be able to resist so much chaos so he would have to use his magic to play mind games and see how his... playmates... reacted to whatever he did. The mind games were much more enjoyable, sure, but it was nice to find someone with whom he could play a bit rougher compared to the usual pony.

But Discord's fun started to melt as he noticed Raziel standing up very slowly, clearly weakened from all those attacks and, before Discord could have the time to say or do anything, he raised his arm and aimed at Discord. The draconequus was planning to ask what was all that about but the answer came to him in the form of a shock wave that stopped his body from moving.

Raziel then started to aim his Reaver at Discord, concentrating a great amount of power, much to Discord's concern and shot it in the form of a big white sphere of energy that caused Discord a huge amount of pain. Discord could feel through his whole body how the magic was trying to disintegrate him as considering him a vile entity that had to be vanquished and the only thing stopping this attack from destroying him was the fact that this was a simple energy blast and he had more than enough magic to recover from this attack but, still, it caused him great amounts of pain.

Raziel, meanwhile, thought for a brief moment, as he saw Discord's body going down to the ground and the creature started to pant as if he was tired, of how Discord was shown that he wasn't going to leave without a fight but the chaotic entity decided to show it's true strength as he snapped his fingers once again, making the land to reshape itself to constrict Raziel's body to make sure he couldn't escape this time with vines that held down his arms and the ground absorbing his legs.

As Raziel tried to release himself from Discord's new trap, the Spirit of Chaos decided to reincorporate himself back to the air as his hand started to concentrate more and more of his own magic while his eyes showed nothing but anger towards Raziel.

Discord then threw the magical blast towards Raziel and it didn't even got to touch him before all the area surrounding him started to fall apart and collapse in itself, destroying the separation between the two realms as Raziel could see what was happening through all of Equestria without even needing to shift from the Spectral Realm as it could be felt how everything was distorting and reshaping by itself. There was no way for him to tell what was happening to him before the blast could even touch him.

Pain though, it was all Raziel could feel as the energy attack hit him and tried to reshape him but Raziel could feel how his inner magic as well as his own being was resisting Discord's magic even though it was that resistance what caused Raziel so much pain.

By the time the pain ended and the magic surrounding Discord's attack was gone, Raziel managed to reincorporate himself only to see that he was no longer on the Castle's Gardens. He was now within the castle, still on the Spectral Realm, and it was also showing signs of being under Discord's influence as Raziel found himself to be on the roof while the ground was fragmented into various pieces that were floating around the place, making it look like Raziel would need to jump through the floating grounds to leave the chamber, if it weren't because the doors were blocked by granite and the windows were shut down. Raziel then looked at the center of the chamber he was now standing in, and noticed a portal to shift between realms.

Raziel was more than eager to use the portal but he then realized that he was too weakened to even try to use it and there were no souls nearby to fill him with energy. Then Discord came with a face showing no signs of stopping his rampage anytime soon.

Raziel's mind was trying to find a solution to his current conundrum. He had no intention to to accept that deal but Discord made it very clear that he was strong and smart enough to defeat him with little to no effort. There wasn't much Raziel could do but his mind quickly came up with an idea that was so desperate and so contrived that he really hoped it would work against the Spirit of Chaos.

Discord looked at Raziel with an intriguing look as he asked what did he want to confirm.

Discord pull a list out of nowhere as he sought for his titles and confirmed it.

Raziel then started to move one of his claws towards his scarf while Discord suspected nothing of it.

Raziel ignored his words and opened his scarf, giving Raziel the much desired results that he was hoping for as Discord's body started to be pulled into Raziel's mouth.

The lord of chaos himself didn't notice it at first, he was distracted by Raziel unfolding his scarf, but he then started to feel his energy leaving his body without his permission, he then started to feel himself being pulled by a mysterious force and what was initially dread turned quickly into fear as he noticed how his body was being completely pulled into Raziel's mouth. That fear was then turned into terror as he saw what was beyond Raziel's mouth and he was forced to quickly escape from that place.

Discord's response told Raziel what he needed to know: this battle was over for the time being.

Raziel's mind quickly flared into anger as all he could do was to shout at the air.

But there was no response to Raziel's insult. All that was left in that chamber was him and the portal to shift with the difference now that Raziel managed to recharge his energies from what he absorbed from Discord.

This time around, Raziel managed to get close enough to the portal and use it to go back to the Physical Realm and, to his surprise, he managed to see how the room started to reshape into how it was supposed to be like: The floor went back to the bottom, the windows closed and turned into their correct positions and the doors went back into a place where Raziel could cross them with no problem, allowing him to move through Canterlot Castle freely.

He wasn't sure of how long he went through the abandoned halls in the castle but Raziel was certain that there had to be someone in there which also begged the question of what happened to all the guards and servants? He should have stumbled upon someone by now and he didn't find a single soul in the castle.

In the end though, Raziel managed to find someone in the Castle as he got to Princess Celestia's chamber and found the Princess of the Sun sending letters through her magic. For how long she was doing it, it was hard to tell but the princess wasn't planning to stop anytime soon, not even if certain wraith decided to open a conversation with her.

The princess barely gave Raziel a look before responding.

Raziel decided to take a look at the medium sized stack of scrolls that Celestia was transporting with her magic at a decently paced speed.

Raziel raised his eyebrows as he heard this, remembering what Twilight once told him when he asked about her relationship with Celestia.

Raziel tried to rationalize the idea as he saw how the stack of scrolls was now low in quantity, failing to understand, he decided to ask.

Celestia briefly stopped as she gave Raziel a calm but serious look, as trying to put into words the description of her actions.

Raziel wondered what Celestia meant with that but, considering what those friendship reports were, it wasn't hard to figure out.

Celestia stopped for a brief moment as her eyes widened in shock at Raziel's words. She gave him a brief look and noticed that he wasn't under Discord's influence, which brought some curiosity to her.

Celestia briefly wondered what he meant, asking Raziel to go on as she rest and hoped for Twilight to figure out a way to defeat Discord.

As much as Celestia felt more trust towards Raziel, the idea of eating Discord (or even destroying him) wasn't one she wasn't fond off. She still believed that friendship was the best way to solve a problem and that included Discord, all she actually needed was somepony willing to be patient and kind to him but that was an issue for a future date.

It still didn't make Celestia to feel better, but it was a step forward in her opinion and it brought her an interesting question.

Raziel took a moment to think about it. With that kind of power, Discord would certainly be a great ally but there was no way to ensure he would follow his word or that he was trustworthy. Perhaps if Raziel threaten him by using him as an edible but that wouldn't ensure Discord to stay loyal to them. Still, it was worthy to consider.

Celestia took a moment to let his words sink and meditate on them.

Raziel's words took Celestia out of her thinking and payed him back attention. He was looking through a window in the direction where Ponyville was located.

Raziel kept on looking at Ponyville as he answered.

Celestia took a time to ponder on what Raziel could imply and remembered his memories of what was expected from him. She briefly wondered what was the difference between her and those who manipulated Raziel but that thinking was interrupted as a rainbow wave went through Equestria (with Ponyville as the epicenter) and fixed everything back the way it was supposed to be.

Seeing Raziel looking at the window so lonely, Celestia decided to get close to him and put her hoof on his shoulder and responded with a kind voice.

Raziel only gave Celestia a neutral look that was hard to figure out even to the Princess of the Sun but that didn't stop the two of them from going to Ponyville to celebrate Discord's defeat... well... Celestia celebrated. Raziel just stood within the library and other places where he could remain on looking at the party being celebrated while he could remain outside of it since those kind of celebrations weren't of his style.

Still, that didn't stop his friends from checking up on him from time to time.

In that moment, Pinkie's muzzle was opened and she finished what she was saying.

Everyone looked at her with shock but Pinkie didn't understood what she said.

Raziel briefly wondered about the possibility of it but Twilight quickly dashed that idea.

Pinkie then started to look at Twilight with the face of a puppy, at which Twilight responded.

Pinkie started to smile again and simply said her usual 'oki doki loki'.

After seeing all of that, Raziel decided to simply calm them and answer to their words of cheering.

The ponies then started to go back outside the library and into the celebration. One by one started to leave until it was only Twilight and Raziel the ones left, something that Raziel decided to ask about.

Twilight started to look at the outdoors as if what she was about to discuss was supposed to be a secret.

Raziel, seeing no problem with this, decided to indulge her by listening to her ideas.

Raziel gave it a thought, knowing well that Twilight was going to ask him for help to experiment on his magic before making sure that it would be safe to put the Reaver's magic into Twilight's friends.

Twilight beamed a smile at Raziel as she decided to take this moment to hug Raziel (much to his shock) and leave to enjoy the party but not before stating.

And she left to the party, leaving Raziel alone as he saw the party moving, wondering how much time left he has before the monster decided to take over Equestria. That was what his mind was thinking about as he decided to shift between planes and move through Ponyville without being noticed.

As he passed through Discord's statue though, much to Raziel's surprise, it started to talk with no hints of anger or grudge towards Raziel.

Raziel took his words and answered with no problem.

The statue didn't move but its silence said more than enough for Raziel before Discord finally asked.

Raziel wanted to make a long speech about the importance of having someone to trust, of how the few figures that he could ever trust even back in Nosgoth (Janos, Vorador and, to some extent, Kain) and how having allies has always made even the harshest of journeys to be easier than being on your own but, knowing that he simply wouldn't understand, Raziel preferred to leave and simply respond:

He then turned around and added before leaving.


Author's Note

As I was writing this, it came to me that there probably are fics about Discord being the actual good guy and Celestia/Luna being the bad ones/the ones who ruined everything by inervining with their ideas while Discord was only doing his job of making the world something similar to ours. Whether or not he derailed from his job varies.

I wonder if I can use this somehow...

Writing Discord and make 4th wall jokes, just like making any type of dialogue with Pinkie Pie and the sole idea of Zecora talking, has been one of the hardest things I have ever done in my life and I hope to never do that again so, next time I write Discord, don't expect me to make him as fun as I did here (and I doubt it was even funny) and, yes, Discord will come back and be a thing. I have some plans with him.

Once again, if you like what I write, please feel free to donate to my Ko-Fi, it really helps me to keep on writing this.

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