Ray The Procupine II: The Friendship Games
Hey everyone! It's TrueSonicFan ( a.k.a SonicCosmiX) and I'm here with a brand new Ray The Porcupine and My Little Pony Crossover. A sequel to Ray The Porcupine Rainbow Rocks. You know what comes after that, right?
RAY THE PORCUPINE 2 : THE FRIENDSHIP GAMES
Before I begin with the prologue of this story, I'd like to get a bunch of stuff out of the way:
First, plot
As you'd probably predict, this story takes place after the spin-off Ray Rocks (if haven't read that story READ IT KNOW!) after Ray Rocks (SPOILERS) Ray returns to his own world and thing return to back the way they were. Quiet.
Second, charcters
No OCs, this is Ray once again at center stage. There is one new character in this story but I won't tell you. A clue:
Crystal Prep.
A bad clue, but someone might figure out what type of character it might be. Review if you worked it out. Also Mina not in this story. She'll best have a better role on Ray's world when I make regular Sonic stories that just focus on Ray and his friends. But that's for another time.
Thirdly, this is the first time I'm writing in the proper story format, no more script, If I make any mistakes in my writing, point them out, but DO NOT go all Grammar Nazi on me, this my first time writing like this so bear with me and I'll do the best I can.
I'll be thinking of the target I got as a review on my last story, by a fan of 'Sonic x Pinkie Pie'... (you know who you, thanks for the review point me in the right direction for the future.)
Now that that's all ouit of the way, let's dive right in
READ!
This story starts in Ray The Porcupine's world, Freedom.
Welcome to Ray The Porcupine 2: The Friendship Games! Where the Wondercolts once again face the Shadowblts in the Friendship Games!
Planet Freedom
Greenville Zone
(Yeah there are zone in Ray's world, but roll with it. I made this to be some sort of alternate 'Mobius'.)
(Ray's POV)
"This is the llife. Snoutface is gone once again and I can get back to relaxing again. Not one thing to bother me. Aaaahh..."
I'm Ray Sipkes the Porcupine. The super speedy hero of this world, Planet Freedom. I'm a red porpcupine with red fur and spiky hair. I wear azure gogles and have light green eyes. I also have grey sneakers with whtie stripes and whitye soles. Thing have been really quiet ince Snoutface's latest defeat. Planning a new plan for world domination? I wouldn't be surprised if he comes now with some new killer robot.
Then he thought about something else. About that other world he went to (I am refering to the future remake of the last story, Mina won't be in it.). When would he return? Would the Sirens come back? Any other threats?
He stopped his train of thoughts. Why would all that happen? They defeated Sunset and he wasn't there.
"Nah. They have everything under control. Nothing went wrong while I was still there*."
*RAY ROCKS! CHECK IT OUT!
"Hm. I'll go see what Beany's doing."
So, he got up from his relaxig spot and dashed of to nis best friend Beany's house.
Beany is a duck with a yellow beak and blue fur (feathers). He has three bangs (like Tails). He also wears a white shirt. He has green eyes and wears red boot with white stripes and gold buckles.
Other part of Greenville Zone
Beany Workshop
"Hi. Beany. What's up, buddy?" I greeted the blue duck.
"Ray? Hi.," Beany excitedly replied. "You've gotta' see my new machine!"
"What is it, an new machine that can open portals to the Spectrum Dimension?**"
**RAY'S VERSION OF THE SPECIAL ZONE.
"You're half right Ray. It can open portals, but not to just the Spectrum Dimension, but other dimensions," Beany continued "I was surprised that you warp Crystal randomly appeared and sent you to that other world. If all of us were to go, I don't think another Warp Crystal would open out of nowhere."
"Prophecy?" I questioned
"Maybe. So.. I made the Dimensional Tansporter! Now we can have new adventures not just in this world."
"Cool!" I said, giving thumbs up to Beany.
"Thanks, but I need a test subject. You don't mind me sending you back to that world again?"
"Of course! And besides if things do get bad. I always have the Warp Crystal so I can come back!" I said enthusiasticly.
"OK! LET'S FIRE IT UP THEN!" he shouted
"Let's not get overexcited. We only just started this story, Beany.." Ray reminded Beany.
"Okay then ...," he said "Let's go!"
Test room
Me and Beany both walked into the test room, where the dimensional transporter was.
"So how does this thing work?" I asked.
"You go onto that pad..." Beany said
I did so.
"And I'll fire it up. The portal only opens for like three seconds, so I'll tell when to go in."
I nodded, and Beany started up the transporter, a few sparks of electricity started forming at the centre and then a rainbow-like portal began to appear. Everything was going a it should have, until...
The portal began to expand further than it should have, and the transporter couldn't contain the portal. Spark began to fly and Beany and I were getting pretty nervous
"Uh, Beany... Is it supposed to be doing that?" I shouted frantically
Before Beany answered that question, the portal became even worse. It began pulling everything inside it, us included.
"STOP IT BEANY!"
"I'M TRYING BUT-"
The transpoter's control pad exploded in sparks of electricity. Now there was nothing we could do to stop the portal. The only thing we could do was...
"RUN!" we both yelled. We ran as fast as we could. We didn't get far. I ran at supersonic speed. Still not far enough. Ultrasonic. Further but not that far. Transonic. The force of the portal was too much and I was pulled in. To the world of the Equestria Girls...
And that is how it all started.
So, What do you think of it? I'd love to hear your opinion in the reviews. Any mistakes? Point those out as well.
Also, before you think Greenville came from Green Hill. It didn't. It's a reference to the street me and my family used to live on. Grenville Drive.
I need to get better at writing like this. If you're new, thanks for taking interest in my new story! I hope you had Happy Holidays and a Merry Christmas!
Goodbye for now!
Sorry if this is short, but this is just the beginning...