Checking The Time

by Timeless Lord Slayer
Ever since I got here, in this "Equestria," things have been weird. My target, for one, was oddly friendly. Her friends and fellow ponies were just odd, always trying to coddle me or something else. Ugh, I can't wait for this mission to be over.

After quite a few more years than I - and likely all of you - would've liked, I've decided this story will be canceled...aaaaand once again rewritten. The good news? Asala will be the MC again. Or, at least, one of them. Arlais will be making a return as well. The new rewritten story will, sadly, not pick up where the original left off, so much as jumping ahead of it by...well, a lot. I won't reveal too much, but, I am taking major effort to make sure that this new rewrite not only restarts things and old interests, but also keeps my own interest going. I will do all I can to make sure this new rewrite does not also get cancelled.

More info on this situation will be provided in a blog post later on.

I apologize again for ruining any expectations.


I didn't think I'd ever have to be in a situation like this. I didn't think doing my job would ever lead to me being surrounded by women, er, mares. Sure, I may like my fair share of challenges and excitement, but these mares confuse me more than they do excite me. It doesn't help that they seem so scared of me. My target especially.

Seriously, what is with these ponies?


So, as you all may have noticed, this is a rewrite of the old story. Well, more like rework, but still. And, in my stupidity, I didn't save or backup any of the bits from the old story, so...

Bows deeply to all of you

...I'm sorry. I can only hope this new story is to your liking, even if only somewhat. If it helps, Asala is still present. If it doesn't...well, again, I'm sorry.


This is not a typical Displaced fic. It will only ever crossover with one story, and that story has already been decided on. As such, crossovers will be very scarce. Also, if you couldn't tell from the above, this is a RGRE story, my first, in fact. If you don't know what that means, go here.

Sex will not be shown for a good number of chapters, but there will be sexual references until that point.

Big thanks to thunderclap for helping me with the idea for this rewrite, and thanks to Theyellowninja13, ZephyrStrife, Nova_Eclipse, Pyro Mance and Clockworklich for helping me with the old story! (P.S.: Sorry for not using your ideas, I just had my own in mind.)

Cancelled
Romance
Comedy
Profanity
Violence
Slice of Life
Crossover
Sex
Dragon Ball Z
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
 
SPOPM

3833 words: Estimated 19 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. 1 - The Mission Begins (Edited) 2019-01-30 05:54:21 UTC
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  2. 2 - Arrival (Edited) 2019-04-23 18:18:51 UTC
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