Black Sunshine *fixed*

Equestria was in grave danger. Tirek has absorbed the magic from almost all the ponies in Equestria. The only one that remained was the alicorn Twilight Sparkle. The two beings were engaged in combat currently. The two so far proved to be almost completely even in terms of magical ability and strength. At least that's what it seemed. Tirek was getting angry, He was actually having trouble with a pony. Tirek original plan was to absorb her magic too, but the rage boiled inside him, he no longer cared about her magic. He wanted to see her suffer. He didn't want the ponies to know that it was getting to him so he hid his anger.

"Impressive, however I will no longer, be holding back. I am going to kill you.” Tirek snapped his fingers. Then came all of her friends, including Discord, each in a bubble, they floated above the battlefield surprised at the sudden appearance. "Now your friends can watch me kill you."

Twilight's friends gasped at what they heard. However Twilight showed no fear, she was going to fight, even till the end if she had to. She charged her most powerful magic attack preparing to launch it at Tirek. The blast was gigantic, it was as big as the mountains and was as bright as the sun.

"I WILL DEFEAT YOU!” She launched the attack, it flew a crossed the field at a very fast rate, Tirek caught the attack, but was struggling to keep it from exploding, He then smiled. Tirek began absorbing the magic that was launched, he sucked it up like a drink and he gained even more power. Twilight and her friends were in shock. 'Impossible' they all thought. Tirek successfully absorbed the attack.

"No way, I put all of my magic into that attack." Twilight was now afraid. She had never felt this scared. It was like she was frozen, unable to move a single muscle.

Tirek was laughing, he had won. He slapped Twilight to the mountain, he then charged and started punching Twilight into the mountain. Twilight was struggling to breath, she couldn't fight back due to being drained by the attack.

Meanwhile in Tartarus, Tirek had opened a portal, invisible to the other side, revealing what was happening. The princesses were in chains without their magic, they were watching what has happened. They were all angry, however the most apparent one was Celestia, She had veins popping out. She could feel her sanity twist, but she was too angry to care. She is watching Twilight, the pony who was like a daughter to her, get the most painful beating of a lifetime.

"That MONSTER!!!"

Luna and Cadance looked at Celestia and saw only anger. They had never seen Celestia so angry ever before. Sure they had seen her upset sometimes, but the look on Celestia’s eyes, it was almost terrifying how somepony you thought was so calm, be so angry. Luna did not know how to comfort her, she still tried

"I'm sorry sister but there's nothing we can do now." They did not see it but inside Celestia a darkness grows. This darkness has haunted her ever since she became a princess. It was lurking deep inside her preparing to be released. This darkness was fueled by rage, and the desire for revenge. That darkness was Black Sunshine.

Back in Ponyville, Twilight's friends watched in horror as Twilight was being beat into a pulp. She was punched into the mountain and then she started coughing blood. She tried fighting back but it was pointless. All she could do was take it.

Spike was trying not to cry, but was not successful. "Twilight."

Fluttershy was crying, more than she ever before, "W-why, why did all of this happen?"

Rarity was mad. "That MONSTER!"

Rainbow Dash was punching the bubble, trying to break free to help Twilight. "I have to help her!"

Applejack closed her eyes with tears floating down on her face."Ah don't think she’s gonna make it girls."

Pinkie Pie’s mane flattened as she was crying. "No, Twilight,"

Discord was angry. Not entirely at Tirek. But at himself. "No. No! NO!!" He then slammed his claw and paw at the bubble. He had never wanted any of this to happen. Discord, hated what was happening, he may have once been bad, but what Tirek was doing was far beyond Discord's line, Discord would never be so brutal. Discord only recently discovered true friendship and it seems he was going to lose one of them.

“If only I had never listened if only I...."

Fluttershy stopped crying, to see Discord traumatized. "This is not your fault Dis-"

"What are you talking about? This is ALL my fault. I listened to Tirek, I helped him gain the power. How is this not my fault."

Twilight was on the ground covered in her own blood, she couldn't stand up. Tirek was enjoying himself and he decided 'why not make suffer emotionally as well'?

"Now, watch as I kill your friends one by one." Twilight gasped at what she just heard. Tirek snapped his fingers, popping AppleJack's bubble. She fell on the ground, then Tirek lifted Applejack with his magic. She looked so more scared than ever. Tirek then fired his magic at her, she was vaporized into oblivion.

APPLEJAACCK!!!!!!!!!" Everypony screamed. Discord knew that the others were next. Then him.

Back in Tartarus, the princesses watched in horror as Tirek repeated the process with each pony. First AppleJack, then Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie and neither had the chance to say goodbye. Twilight began to breakdown and cry. She was watching her friends suffer one by one. Celestia's anger rises and so does the disire for veangance. "THAT BASTARD!!" Celestia screamed.

Luna looked at her sister finally realizing what is going on. A dark aura started surrounding Celestia, it covered her like a blanket, she,hasn't felt,this much dark magic since King Sombre."Tia, you have to calm down."

Celestia did not listen, she was full of anger and hatred. She can't hold it back much longer. Through the portal, Tirek stomped on Fluttershy. Her guts are splatter all over the ground. Discord for the first time was crying. The first one to consider him a friend was now dead, splattered all over the ground. Only he and spike were left. Tirek was about to give Discord the same fate, he walked up to his bubble and was about to use his magic to pop it.

"STOP, PLEASE!" Twilight cried, "Just kill me!” she said as she cryed. "I don't want to live anymore!"

Celestia's blood vessels started popping out. Her blood was boiling like soup. "You suffered long enough, now it’s time for me to put you out of your misery." Tirek said. Celestia started shaking, trying to break free.

Discord attempted to destroy the bubble but that did not work. "No. Twilight. No!" Spike tried to do the same with his but to no avail.

Tirek charged a magic attack, "DIEE!" The attack was launched at Twilight. And the attack directly hit her. Twilight has been reduced to ashes.

"NOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Discord and Spike screamed. The only pony Discord had left to call a friend was now dead. Twilight was Spike's best friend and now she is gone. A waterfall fell from Spike's eyes.

Celestia couldn't hold the darkness in any longer. The darkness within exploded out, causing smoke. Luna and Cadence looked at Celestia in fear, once the smoke cleared up, it revelled Celestina's equivalent of Nightmare Moon. She doubled in size, her coat turned grey and her mane turned black. Her cutie mark was the same except it was black. She opened her eyes. Her pupil was slit, but was white. Her pupil was surrounded by blackness. Her magic had returned, Luna and Cadence were confused by that.

Celestia screamed in rage, "I WILL KILL YOU!" Celestia broke free of her chains, then explosions appeared and storns formed. Luna and cadence looked at her with terror in there eyes. When it was all over, Celestia breaths heavily.

"Tia, what happened to you." Celestia ignores her and she flyes out of the portal.

Tirek, Spike and Discord was surprised to see an Alicorn appeared out of nowhere. Discord took a closer look to see a familiar face. "Celestia? Is that you!"

"Celestia is no more. I am Black Sunshine."

Discord widen his eyes, he had never thought that Celestia of all ponies had darkness in her heart. He look into Black Sunshine's eyes and saw one thing was on her mind. Vengeance.

The dark aura started surrounding her, the sky turned pure white, and the sun. Black. Black Sunshine was angry. She looked Tirek straight in the eye and said one word.

"Die." She teleported in Tireks face and punched him in the face. He screamed in pain, he grabbed hold of his own face. B.Sunshine smiled. "Aw what's the matter does it hurt. Good." Tirek looked back with anger he attempts to punch her. Black Sunshine caught the punch and she broke his arm. Tirek once again cried in pain. "Scream fool. SCREAM AND BEG FOR MERCY!" she summoned lightning from her horn and she began to electrify him. The pain became unbearable, Tirek felt like his heart pumped at a very fast rate and the burns from the shocks was to painful to even describe.

"Stop, stop please."

"Stop what, THIS!" She powered up the lightning. Tirek couldn't take it anymore, he screamed he begged for mercy over and over.

She finally stopped to look into his eyes. She saw fear, Tirek felt nothing but fear. Black Sunshine laughed at how pathetic he had become.

"Do not worry. I'll make the pain disappear." She teleported up,to his face, and then launched Tirek in the air with an uppercut. He flew out all the way into space.

"THIS IS WHERE YOU DIE!!!" B.Sunshine used a black magic blast to launch at Tirek. When the blast was nowhere in sight when ithad exploded. Tirek was no more.

The magic that Tirek stole from everypony returned to their rightful owners.

The bubbles that kept Discord and Spike floating was now gone. Both of them fell to the ground. Spike got up and ran to B.Sunshine to thank her. However she walked pass him, her eyes was set on Discord "One down, one to go." She said.

Discord heard what was said and then a mysterious feeling came to him, 'W-why a-am I sss-shivering like this? I-is this f-fear?' The answer to that was yes. Discord crawled back only to hit a wall. B.Sunshine was walking closer, closer and closer. Then out of nowhere Luna appeared. She had her magic back when Tirek died, so she teleported to the situation. "Celestia, stop this, please this is not the answer."

B.Sunshine looked at Luna and said,"Silence, he is a traitor to Equestria. And so he dies. And I am not Celestia, not anymore."

"Your wrong. I know you’re still in there, please come back, this is not who you are."

"I SAID SILENCE!!" She began to charge at Discord, she tried to stab him with her horn but Discord barely caught it. She rose her head up with Discord still holding on. Spike ran near Luna, She did not intervene knowing she would not stand a chance. B.Sunshine's horn was now near Discord's face. She then did a surprise slash down with her horn, leaving a huge scar on Discord's face. He screamed in agonizing pain. He now has a scar that he has to wear on his face for all of eternity.

Luna then decided to launch a magic blast at B.Sunshine to distract her. "Go, get out of here."

Discord used his magic, that returned to him after Tirek died, to teleport to a place far away.

B.Sunshine walked up to Luna and she slapped her right in the face. "You are lucky your my sister. I'll figure out what to do with you later, let's go." B.Sunshine flew away to the castle, Luna lifted Spike with her magic and she followed.

Discord bent down on his knees. His scar dripping blood, and tears slipping past his eyes. "I'm sorry.”