I'll Tell You What Revenge Is

by King ShimmerOreoLover

Chapter Five: A Chapter Far From Over

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  That night was the most happiest day of my life. The wind blew a in a soft rhythm, landing softly in our faces as we marveled at the wonder of the stars, the beauty in the moon itself, and the coolness of the night. Nothing could possibly ruin this moment, as the sun set down, tinting the sky dark, like a large bottle of ink splattered across the sky, in which all us humans have to do is try. This world and the other doesn't matter. For all I know, we are another dot in the universe just to splatter. Now, well, why is it, that we can call my happiness? Two hours ago, it happened. What happened? That memory will flood my head for the rest of my life.

Two hours ago...

  She looked out the porch, and on the street, were hundreds of flowers, lots and lots, each in a row of red and yellow, saying, "Sunset Shimmer Will You Marry Me!" and a load of fireworks fly from the sky. Tears of joy stream in her cheeks, and she turns around to where I am, and she cries even more as she see me on my knees, holding her favorite ring of all times from the store, and I look straight into her large teal eyes.

"Sunset Shimmer, I love you and always want to be be with you. Will you make me the happiest man in the world and marry me?"

Tears once again form in her eyes, and with a hug she yells, "Yes! Yes! Yes! Forever yes! I do love you! Yes!"

She then looks up to my face, and she plant her soft marshmallow lips onto mine. Fireworks fly from the sky as the darkness in the black celestial roof gets illuminated with thousands of lights, the fireworks displaying grand color into the emptiness of the sky. After the wonderful bliss, I insert the ring in her finger, and to my relief, it fits her perfectly, as if it were meant for her. My last surprise came in a paper bag, with a neat logo, and when I present it to her, her eyes go wide. We went inside, after a long kiss and a wonder at the fireworks, and I lead her to a kitchen to a large black bottle of Jack Daniels.

"What do you say, honey? Cheers?"

"Um..we aren't old-"

"Baby, 18 is the age for the consume of this, and I'm pretty sure we qualify for that."

"I'm barely 18."

"But still you are, aren't you? And I just so happen to be a year and a half older that you, so yeah, I had no trouble buying this if you're going to ask."

"Are you sure about this hon?"

"Let's just not overdo ourselves, shall we?"

"Indeed we should."

"But I'm sleeping on the couch tonight."

"What! Why!" She made that cute puppy that was getting scolded, and boy that face was impossible to ignore.

"You see, your heat and this beverage won't end up in something good.''

"But we are married! And we should, well, start sharing our love with one another-"

"This is our first night sleeping together then."

"Cause of you! You ALWAYS give me that speech that the man should respect the women and her privacy, blah blah blah, and now for once we should move that aside and do what married couples do!"

"That's since I take you for granted."

"Then don't!"

"Okay, okay fine, but no drinking tonight then."

"No! C'mon!"

"Either that or I'm sleeping on the couch."

"Why do you always do this to me! For once at least-"

I hate to see her argue with me, and this is the main reason couples break with each other. That is why I never, ever argue with her, and go along with the duel. I sigh, inhaling a ton of air, then slowly releasing it. Sunset doesn't deserves this! She deserves to be happy, even if that means skipping ahead my prize I was going to claim AFTER we got married 'married. If you know what I mean.

"You win. I won't sleep in the couch and we will enjoy the drink."

"Really! And you'll sleep with me?"

"Yes."

"And no sleeping on the couch unless I tell you to do so ever again?"

"Yes."

"And we'll snuggle all night long till we go to sleep?"

I breathe in and out slowly again, and give her the answer she was hoping for.

"Yes. I will do all those things and won't argue."

"Eeeeeh thank you!" and with that we both fall on the ground, and she then starts undressing my shirt, and I quickly stop her.

"No funny things tonight, got that?"

"Awww alright."


And that was how this night ended so delightfully, and we went outside, and we brought the large bottle with us to the hammock.

"So, how was it?"

"Horrible, but after a few tries, I guess it's worth the shot."

"Well, yeah, and....Oh my goodness we drank the whole bottle!"

"What!" Sunset yells, suddenly looking at the nearly empty bottle.

"Now what?" I tell her.

"It wasn't even good! How did we manage to drink it all? Well, we'll just have to try to hold it iiinnnn..."

Oh God no.

"Are you alright Sunny?"

"Let's just go to bed, okay?" She asks biting her lip in a seductive tone.

"Okay, but once again, no funny  things tonight, alright?"

"Nah, don't w-worry!?" She suddenly perks up with a happy smile, again with the puppy smile, just this time, somethings intoxicating both of us, mostly her.

"You sure?"

"Y-yeah!"

"Pinkie Promise?"

Her smile dissapears into a dissappointed frown. I knew she was doing something fishy, so I went to the bottom of it straight away.

"Or did you have something else in mind?"

"Yeah....."

"So, what is it?"

"I........'m in heat badly. Really, I'm starting to freak out a bit."

"Can't you hold it till the day of our wedding?"

"NO! I CAN'T!"

"But still, Pinkie Promise me."

"Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye."

"Good. Now shall we go?"

''Fine."

As we went  to the bed, a strange smell started pouring out. I liked it, but it meant Sunset was begging  for love, since it was probably her internal fluids. We reached the bed, and started making out. Her lips on mine, our tongues softly touching, and our bodies pressed firmly together, this was great. As long as things didn't escalate to the point where Sunset's estrus is relieved, we were ok. I moved over on to on top of her and started giving her a deep massage, sofly kissing her neck, and cuddling her. I was about to get off her when I felt my pants dread wet, and now that it was called, a bulge started to appear.

"Um, Sunny, you're dripping."

"You see! Now what?"

"I don't know what to say, uhh-"

"Do me.''

''WHAT! NO!"

"Please?"

"No!"

"I beg you?"

Gosh darn it, she's begging me.

"C'mon, don't be that way-''

"You do it or I will."

"What?"

Sunset then walks out of bed, then starts  posing, and suddenly she's on me, whispering in my ear, and rubbing my bulge in my jeans.

"Don't be this way Sunny..."

"Then surrender."

"No...."

''Oh well then, then it's this way then.''

"You Pinkie Promised!"

"I had my fingers crossed!"

"WHAT! That doesn't count!"

"Of course it does, and besides, you'd do it for me, right?''

'' Darn you, but fine."

"You won't be saying that in a couple of minutes!" and with that, she takes off her underskirt and so does her bra goes, I just got my bandana that I always wear, a long black one, and tie it up to my eyes.

"Ok, now you can do whatever the heck you want."

She instantly removes it  and the first thing in sight are her wonderful tits, and her body is smooth, and perfect, no spots, no nothing, just perfection. My crotch goes warm, and starts to grow until it was about to rip off my pants.

''Oh wow, umm, I think I'll go to the couch.."

"No you won't!"

"Listen, you don't know how much lust is in me right now. In fact ah don't what's more intoxicating: the drink we just had, or your amazing body."

She smiles and blushes at the compliment, then looks into my eyes and says, "It's about time we do some real loving, ok?"

I gulp, and sigh, knowing that soon we'll have to give up our v-cards, and slowly dream of her curves, my head falling back, and soon enough, she rips my pants off, and so does my boxers, exposing my one terror I did not want Sunset to see.

"Oh my, it's bigger than what I was expecting...."

"Let's just give up here, that'll never fit in you, it's too big.''

"No, it's not! I can handle it!"

"If you say so.."

She gives my fully erect penis a casual lick, then another, and another, and then she takes in all in, slowly bobbing her head back and forth, and, it felt amazing. I was sure I was going to faint, this was all too real. Sunset's eye's shimmer, and an idea surges through her head.

"We should both enjoy this, okay?"

"What?''

She stands up, and moves her body opposing mine, and soon enough, she takes off her pijamas and panties, exposing her soft vaginal lips.

"Are gonna...." was all that my mouth could say, struck with awe and her smooth skin, and everything sent me to reality, and then Sunset was again sucking my cock, but this time, her back was facing me, and her pussy was centimeters from mine. I licked it once, savouring it, and the taste was pretty nice. I gave in to my desires, and noticed how wet Sunset was getting, and the fact she was WAY too sensible. Every lick caused her to grip the bed, and for her legs to shut tight, pushing my head, and all I could do was to continue licking, until...

"Ahhhhhh, please, don...t s-stopppp...."

She's on her climax. I continue to lick, and slowly insert my toungue deep in.

"AWWWWW AHH I LOVE YOU MIIIDDDDDD!!!" she screams, taking my cock out of her mouth, and hugs my legs tight, gasping for air, and her eyes wide as ever.

"Please suck mmmmmmmmee.....ah...I....d..o.."

Her sweet spot was struck over and over and over again, destroying her completely, and then she comes.

"I'm cumming Midy, I...Love you very much.."

Strands come from her vagina into my face, and on my neck, and the rest I had to swallow.

"So we are done here, right?"

"Oh no, this is just the beggining, my heat isn't over that easily."

"So what now?"

"Here, let me show you."

Sunset stands up, and is now facing me, and her cute little butt is now against my penis, which is throbbing.

"Now I'll take you up nice and easy.."

"Oh God! This is too..much Sunny..''

Her pussy has completely taken my cock and now she is so tight, it's impossible not to faint now. She is so tight, and now I'm in the girl I've loved forever, this is way  past that. She is sitting on me, and I'm laying on the bed, and she then presses her hands against my chest.

''Ahhhhh it's too big, I don't want to stop!"

She shuts her eyes tight, and immediately opens them again, feeling something.

"Owwww I'm going to get crushed!! Harder, please! And faster!"

I gradually try to, but can't so I lift her off, and she lets a squeal of pain, then she's on her knees, so I insert it back again, and start fucking her hard, harder tan ever possible, and as fast as I can I pound and wham into her pussy lips, and she cries in pleasure

"Ahhhhh yessss.......AHHHH WAIT WAIT WAIT IT'S TOO MUCH I CAN'T HOLD IT IN!!!!''

Upon those words i immediately remove my penis from her glory and she looks at me with confusion.

"What's wrong Sunset? Did I go too in? Are you hurt? Please don't tell me your-" and with that she brings her lips onto mine, and kinda, well, stay there for some time.

''Look, even if the worst, I'll never stop loving you, and it really doesn't matter."

"Unless there's the chance I might hurt you. Did I?"

"No, it feels very good...''

''The way you say makes it like an order. Does this mean I'm your bitch you can command."

"No? Ok, then sit, and go back inside."

''Ok master..."

"Stop saying that! Hey, you know what, good boy, we can play this game all night."

I roll my eyes and do as Sunset commands, this is going to stay for some time, especially when we leave in this hotel.

"Ahhh, more please!" she yells. I shut my eyes closed, it's like heaven in earth. "Ooohhhh, please don't stop.."

She throw her head to the bed and her arms quickly cling to the bed, and then she thrusts foward, taking my cock completely once again.It happens no longer after I impulse completely and reach my end.

"AWWW SUNNY I'M CUMMINGGGGG!!!'' and her pussy gets pumped in, filling her with my cum. She gasps and I grunt in pleasure.

We both collasped, and I fell on the bed, and Sunny resting on my chest.

''This was the best night I ever had in my entire life, and with you.."

"I love you, Sunset Shimmer."

"Me too, and this was great, but.."

"But what?"

"We didn't use a comdom nor anything."

''Oh."

"We arent supposed to have kids at this age."

"Shit. We shouldn't have done this."

"We'd both enjoy this, and we shared our love..."

"And I cured your estrus."

"Yeah. I love you."

"Me too."

''And we have school.''

''Yeah.''

"But I love you, and can I ask you something?"

"Yeah?''

"Can we get married in Equestria, the other world?"

"What! Ok, I'll talk to Celestia and-"

"NO!"

"Why not?"

"I'll tell you tomorrow, alright baby?"

"For now, yes."

I turn off the lights, and try to drift off to sleep. I am extremely happy, but some questions remain in my mind.

What does Sunset have with Celestia and going back?

Why did Sunset ask for mercy so quickly, especially when it's me that should be sorry? Oh well.

I was going to enjoy a good sleep when I felt a very tight squeeze within me. I gradually try to turn around and see Sunset happily asleep hugging me. It's good to see her happy, except, how am I going to sleep?

Oh boy...

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