Brother of Mine
The Arrival
Load Full StoryNext ChapterPoV: Volburaal Nahlii
Location: Overlooking a once peaceful planet now turned war planet
Time: 9:00 A.M
This was one of the most hilarious endeavour I had to go through, and I haven't regretted any of it. If I had known the high king was just some ass wipe earlier this could've gone differently. But all in all, it's a job well done of I do say so myself.
Morning! I didn't see ya there, allow me to introduce myself. I'm Volburaal Nahlii, chaos incarnate and first chaotic being that Father has created.
Who is father you may ask, he's our creator. Anyway, I'm what he called a Draconquss like my little brother.
Father had originally made me to keep all the chaotic energy stored somewhere, resulting in me being born. At first, he had thought that keeping the chaotic energy away from the worlds would result in harmony. That soon changed when he noticed that monotonous life all his worlds had and began teaching me how to use my powers wisely.
Since then I've been somewhat of a life changer. It didn't last though, I had gotten tired of going to an infinite number of worlds, so he had made another chaos wielder and a little brother for me.
To be honest at first, I thought I was being replaced. I was such a brat back then, but as I grew I came to be more of a role model for him.
I still remember the first time he had caused the gravity to shift, and that was back when I was considered eighteen by Fathers standards. It was like what, twelve thousand years ago and no matter how many times I recalled that moment, I could never feel more proud of him.
Flashback: Eleven thousand, nine hundred and eighty six years ago
“Sorry little bro but I need to get to work, there's a world of ape like beings living without chaos.” I said to the small nine year old Draconequus trying to drag me by the arm.
“But you have to see this!” He whined as he let my arm go. I sighed as I looked at a nearby clock, showing me the time of the planet.
“Alright, show me.” I said as I looked back down at him as he pumped his fist.
“This way!” He said as he ran ahead.
“Hey, wait up.” I said as I sprinted to catch up. He stopped in front of a room labelled ‘House of fun’ and opened it.
What I saw made me go slack jawed. The items in the room where just floating around, ignoring the rules of gravity. I walked in and poked a toy car that floated past me, sending it away. I looked back at Discord with a look of disbelief.
“You did this? By yourself?” I asked in which he nodded as quickly as possible.
“Amazing, it took me until I was thirteen to do this.” I said as I walked back to him.
“Father will be overjoyed to see this. Maybe you'll be able to go out into the mutliverse with me sooner than I thought.” I said, ruffling up his hair.
“Thanks big brother.” He said, giving my leg a hug.
Flashback end
‘Heh, it always gets me.’ I thought as I wiped away a lone tear. I snapped my fingers to summon my ride and changed into my traveling clothes.
‘It's worth a visit.’ I thought as I sat on the motorcycle and revved up the engine, resulting in only silence. I rolled my mismatched eyes as I put on the helmet and drove off at the speed of light towards the world Dizzy is located at.
PoV: Discord
Location: Ponyville
Time: 1:00 P.M
A week after Tirek's attack
Another day full hate and distrust from the populace. I've been trying to make it up to them but they all think I'll do it again, all except Fluttershy.
She's a pure soul, if she were not chosen to ‘reform’ me, I wouldn't have been here. Of course there's Twilight and the rest of her friends but they're different, they actually let me help instead of trying to drive me away.
‘What else could go wrong?’ I mentally asked myself, trying to tempt fate.
I soon heard a faint boom coming from above followed by darkness. I lazily floated out of Fluttershy’s cottage and looked up.
What I saw made my pupils shrink to the size of pin pricks.
A giant Chaos symbol blocked out the light of the sun. I've only seen this in a few occasions but I didn't know if I should feel excited or terrified that he's coming to visit.
‘He'll probably think I'm a failure if he sees that this world doesn't have a sufficient amount of Chaos.’ I thought as one of the arrows grew.
I was about to go to Canterlot to tell Tia and Lulu not to get on his bad side but stopped as I heard somepony shout out my name.
“DISCORD!” I heard the new Princess shout out behind me. I looked behind me and saw Twilight and her friends.
“What did you do to the sun!?” Twilight shouted at me.
“Listen Sparkle, that up there wasn't me. It symbolizes Chaos but I can't do that, I don't have the magic to do it but I know one being who does and I consider him my role model.” I said to her, earning confuse looks from her and her friends.
I looked up and saw that half the arrows have grown, making my time to warn Tia about him grow short. I snapped my fingers, making me and everypony around me go to Canterlot.
We popped in the throne room and I looked up at Tia on her throne as she gave me an angry look.
“Discord, what could've caused you to block out the sun?” She asked me.
“That's what I'm here for! That's not me, and you have to show respect to the one who did.” I said to her as I noticed their was two arrows left.
“And why is that?” She asked.
“You really don't want to get on his bad side. If you thought I was a powerful being of chaos, he is Chaos Incarnate and is coming to this world.” I said to her, earning a wide eyed stare.
“So he's a threat to Equestria.” She declared as the final arrow grew. The center of the the symbol lit up and fired a beam of light that was heading towards us.
“Guards! Be ready, we do not know what he can do or what he will do.” I heard Celestia say to her guards who were getting ready for a fight.
The light fade and a motorcycle could be heard up in the air along with music.
As he flew down, I got a better look on his motorcycle and was impressed on what he did to it.
He showed no sign of slowing down, instead he sped up towards the ground then pulled up, making him head towards the window I'm looking out of.
I moved out of the way just in time as he crashed through it, and landing it to a full stop. He turned it off and stood up.
He stood above the height of Tia, dwarfing anypony who tried to surround him. I noticed his choice in clothing and it reminded me of the time we went to the human world.
He has a thing for overcoats, can't say no to them.
He looked around the room and stopped as he saw me. He walked towards me and stood only a few feet away from me. He then surprised me by giving me a hug.
“Hey Dizzy.” I heard him say as he pulled away.
“How's my little brother doing?” He asked as he took off his helmet, showing everypony his dragon/pony looking face, mismatched horns and different colored eyes.
“Um, H-hey Vol.” I said, hoping he didn't notice the lack of Chaos.
“Why are you nervous?” He asked, noticing my nervousness.
“Also, why is that I don't feel Chaos around? Did you not spread enough like Dad said?” He asked as the guards stood closer.
“You see about that, I didn't. I made some real friends and I guess I forgot the main reason for being here.” I admitted.
“Friends you say? Tell me, do your friends try to surround me in an attempt to capture me?” He said as he quickly turned around as the guards charged in but was soon stuck in the air. He then proceeded to express his anger by sending the guards to the wall.
“Discord, you have about five seconds to explain before I completely scorch this planet.” He threatened me.
“You will do no such thing!” I heard Tia shout as Vol was hit by a blast of magic.
PoV: Volburaal Nahlii
I was struck by someone behind me, so I looked back and saw an anthropomorphic Pony alicorn mare.
“Really? Then explain how you're going to stop me.” I said to her as she fired another spell, to which I flicked away.
“Stop, Vol!” I heard Dizzy shout.
“Then explain.” I growled out as I kept glaring at the mare.
“Originally I was doing my job but I guess I enjoyed it a little too much, making me go mad with power. Long story short, I had been turned to stone for being cocky.” He said as he walked towards a group of six mares.
“A thousand years later, I escaped but it didn't last so long as I got way too cocky again and turned to stone again. I was then freed in attempt to reform me and I guess I forgot my job along the way.” He explained.
“Wow, So you got stoned twice and went to rehab.” I said jokingly to him.
“Really? Now of all times?” He said as he crossed his arms.
“Yup. Now then..” I said as I turned to look at the Alicorn.
“If you really wish to stop me, by all means, strike me down.” I said with a bow.
“What?” I heard her ask.
“If you really want to stop me, you have to kill me.” I said. I soon heard the sound of a sword being taken out of its sheath. Then came the decapitation, my head was sent right off.
PoV: Discord
At first I thought he's gone insane but I then realized where he was getting at. Luna came in and quickly took the opportunity and sliced his head clean off his shoulders.
Vol’s head landed near the thrones steps and the body fell limp as it began to spill blood.
“Luna!?” I heard Tia shout at her Sister.
“He said it himself, we had to do it and unlike you, I can take a life.” Luna answered, giving the sword back to a guard who was busy trying to keep a straight face.
“That doesn't excuse you for murdering him!” Tia shouted.
“You didn't have an excuse for attacking him, so why should I have one?” She asked as Vol’s hand twitched. I couldn't help but chuckle, then busted my butt laughing.
“What's so funny?” Luna asked as she looked over to me.
“Oh I don't know, maybe he's laughing at the fact that you can't kill me.” Volburaal said as the body stood up.
PoV: Volburaal Nahlii
“Now walk to the left.” I said as my body walked the opposite direction.
“No! My left, you fuck!” I shouted, making my body turn around and walk towards my head. It picked my head up and reattached it, like I've done so many other times.
“Now just because I'm still kicking doesn't mean it didn't hurt.” I said to the midnight alicorn.
“Oh who am I kidding? You can't hurt me or kill me, bitch.” I said as I flicked my wrist, sending her to the wall and knocked her out.
“I came here for a little visit and the first thing I get is a magic bolt to the back as a ‘Welcome to our world’ gift.” I said as I started taking off my Overcoat.
“Then again, I've been shot at, burnt, ripped in half, exploded, heart was stolen, electrocuted, and crucified. Then again, those were occupational hazards.” I said as I threw the overcoat to the floor. I saw that the guards and the group of six mares looked a little green.
“Who are you?” The Alicorn on her throne asked.
“That's the age old question, isn't it. I am Volburaal Nahlii, First Kiin of Father, destroyer of countless worlds, creator of countless words thanks to Father for giving me his permission, and Chaos incarnate.” I said to her with a bow. I could tell the occupants of the room were staring at me with wide eyed looks.
“Aww, did I scare da wittle ponies.” I said in a mocking tone. I was soon assaulted by a blur of rainbow.
“What did you say to us?” The mare asked in a threatening manner.
“Hmm, let me rephrase this a bit.” I said as I looked down at her.
“You either sit there and be quiet while I explain what the fuck is going on or you'll be the next thing that'll be staining the walls.” I said to her with a grin. She paled at the threat and backed away.
“Discord, do you know who he is?” I heard the Alicorn ask as she got up to check on her Sister.
“How can I not know my older brother.” I heard Dizzy say. The Alicorn looked at him then at me, then back to him and back to me, fortunately I'm not him, that would've been hard to explain than most things.
“You have a brother? And this is him?” She said in disbelief.
“Discord Uzgrolein, Second Kiin of Father, and spirit of Chaos. Right before I forget Dizzy, I finally made Pandora.” I said to him.
“What is it that you're here for?” The older Alicorn asked.
“Nothing, just thought I'd visit my little brother in peace but that was a complete fuck up, now wasn't it.” I said to her, earning a regretful nod from her.
“I apologize for my actions-” I didn't let her finish as I raised a finger.
“I'm just gonna stop you right there. You royals always say you're sorry but in truth you're not. Now, I've gotten to know quite a few king and queens, most of them were selfish pricks with a crown on their fat heads.” I said to her as I pulled out a cigarette and snapped my finger, causing it to lit a small flame on it. I lit the cigarette and smoked.
“I don't condone smoking, bad for the health but when you're an incarnation of chaos everything is possible, except death.” I said as I crushed the cigarette in my hands, then opened my hand to reveal that it had changed into a dove and flew away.
“So, what's so good about this world that it isn't chaotic enough.” I asked no-one in particular.
“Like I said earlier, I've gotten friends and I didn't want to lose them.” Discord answered. I sighed as I looked over to him.
“Friendship made you reconsider? Friendship is a lie, I would know.” I said as I walked past the six mares as they backed away.
“Friendship is very true.” I heard the lavender Alicorn say.
“Then tell me, do friends burn you alive, steal your heart for money and shoot you in the back?” I asked as I looked over to her. She looked at me as if in pity, I couldn't help but sigh.
“But there was one man, friends till the end it was. It's funny really, the only being that actually stayed true to his words was hanged by his own kind, the same day I found out he was actually supposed to be a spy trying to follow my every movement. At first, I was furious at him but found out why they hung him. Disobeyed direct orders from the King of his world, so I packed up my things and proceeded to torch the planet.” I said to her.
“That's why you stopped believing in friendship, isn't it?” The lavender mare said.
“Tell ya what, I'll give you a week to show me that friendship is not a lie.” I said to her, earning a nod from her. I snapped my fingers, repairing any damage and healed any one I've inflicted pain on, including the midnight Alicorn.
“Perks of being me, I can bend reality to my will but I know better to not upset father.” I said as I walked towards Discord.
“If your friends fail, this world will be the new Pandora.” I said to him, earning a fearful nod from him.
“No pressure.” I added as I walked out of the throne room.
‘That could've gone better and why did I tell her that? Ugh, I feel like the time I had to check up on earth’s wasteland.’ I thought as I walked passed a few window murals.
Author's Note
If this is good enough, I'll keep at it and if not. Oh well can't win them all.
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