Fluttershy - Your Opportunities at a Glance.
Chapter 1: Step by Step Towards Fluttershy
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You wake up in a forest, groggy and nauseous due to a massive headache. You look down at yourself, blood splattered randomly.
“Not too much blood was lost, but it seems to have gone in every direction”, You say to yourself as you look down at your clothes, torn up with large holes barely covering your body. As you look up you see the sun shining through the leaves and hitting your skin; it feels nice. Parts of your chest, stomach, and shoulders are starting to sting in the light though. “How long have I been out…? Better yet, where the hell am I?”
The fear has settled in, last thing you knew before ending up in this forest, you were going to sleep in your apartment. You had just been laid off of work and become extremely depressed. All those people you used to call your ‘friends’ were now having kids, getting married and moving to the next step in their lives, forgetting you. Meanwhile, you’re at college, getting your education (something those friends seemed to have forgotten about) and haven’t had a steady relationship in years.
“That’s the last thing to be thinking about at a time like this,” You tell yourself, cursing the memories of a past love. “If you are going to survive, you’ll need to find some shelter before it gets dark”.
So off you go. You wander around the forest, feeling the wind blow through the large holes in your pants and t-shirt, luckily it seems to still be the middle of the day and you have time to prepare before it starts getting cool.
“These trees just go on and on,” You think as you crawl through some tall bushes. You’ve lost track of time and it feels as though you’ve been out here for hours.
The sun is setting…
You’re blood starts to boil in frustration as you’ve realized that you’re running out of time.
“You know, you could cut me some slack here!” You yell at the sun. Then, after hearing yourself, you realize you just need to settle for what you can find. You find a very large tree, “It’ll have to do for just one night…” You say to yourself as you sit under the tree.
You’ve don’t know how long you’ve been awake, but you’re exhausted, sweaty, muddy, and sore, you just want to close your eyes.
Slowly, your heavy eyelids close as you lose consciousness.
Then, after sleeping for what feels to be a quick nap, you hear something rustling in the bushes, you quickly wake up and look around, realizing you have no weapon, you clench your fists when suddenly…
A furry white rabbit jumps out, twitching its’ nose and looking curiously at you.
“A rabbit… that must mean there are more animals here, I’m not the only living thing here… maybe I can survive this” The growling in your stomach tells you that it’s either the rabbit, or you.
You slowly walk up to the rabbit, then, as if he knew what you were thinking, jumped back in the bushes and left.
“Fuck…” You grunt, closing your eyes again and returning to your rest, if you can even call it that.
As you open up your eyes from a more proper nap, you see the sun almost done setting, the sky a light mix of purple and orange, then your hear some muffled voices. You jump to see what’s there and see a yellow pony with a pink mane and tail. “Whoa, I’m hallucinating,” you think to yourself, “What a weird little horse.”
“U-um… e-excuse… excuse me…?” The pony asked, hiding it’s face with it’s long mane. You run behind the tree and think to yourself, “Did that pony… talk?!”. No way, it has to be a trick. There must have been something in that rabbit you ate, wait… you didn’t eat the rabbit, it got away. As you keep thinking whether or not this is real, a loud gurgle rumbles the nearby area.
Uh-oh, it’s hungry, you need to run. Oh wait, that’s just your stomach, you’re the one who is on the verge of starvation after being in this forest for however long it’s been.
You hear the pony gasp, “A-a… are you hungry? Angel, fetch some of the fruit we gathered.” It’s talking to something, it sounds so feminine and gentle. You tell yourself to stop it and to think of something, this is a life or death situation.
You peer around the tree, and you must admit, you feel kind of like you’re playing Metal Gear Solid right now, you chuckle to yourself and notice that the ‘Angel’ that, uh, “she” was talking to was that same rabbit who refused to be your stew.
You reveal yourself as you get out from behind the tree, “You!” You point at the rabbit, who just laid a couple of apples at its’ feet, “You’re the one I saw earlier”.
The pony was looking straight at you with big teal eyes, but for some reason, you weren’t fearing for your life anymore, you looked down and saw the most delicious looking red apples you’ve ever seen in your life.
You look back at the pony, and she smiles gently. You point to yourself as you look back down to the food and then back up to her, as she replies with simply a nod. She’s feeding you, you think to yourself, finally something has gone right.
You hesitantly move towards the apples, because you never know what could happen in an instant and quickly snatch one apple and move back. You take a bite and the flavor explodes in your mouth, washing all the dry parts of your mouth and dehydrated body with a delicious juice. You chew the apple and the taste just gets better and better.
“Mmmm…!” You let out, the pony starts to move toward you, but you’re too busy enjoying the apple to notice until you feel her hoof on your shoulder. You open your eyes immediately and look up, she’s not much taller than you, but then again, you are sitting down. She’d be at about your stomach’s height, the top of her head ending where your stomach and chest meet.
“It’s all right, you don’t need to be afraid, I won’t hurt you” The pony tells you. You tell yourself that whatever is happening, whether you’re hallucinating or dreaming, it’s best not to worry about it and enjoy what’s happening, now that the horrible fear of being completely alone in an unknown area is gone. The pony looks back down at you curiously, “Say, I could have thought I heard you talking to Angel… can you speak?”
You clear your throat, you probably wouldn’t have been able to, due to the fact that your throat was so very dry before she gave you that incredibly juicy apple.
“Y-yes… I can, I’m sorry” You look down.
“N-no, it’s quite alright, I’m the one who’s sorry.” She replies, looking down at the floor. “I-I didn’t mean to scare you…”
This pony is really shy, you think to yourself, it’s kind of cute. You shake your head, getting those thoughts out and just tell yourself to focus on survival.
“You and… uh, Angel, are the only living thing’s I’ve seen around here…” You begin to say, “See… I don’t know where I am”
She giggles, “You’re in the Everfree Forest, you shouldn’t have wandered in here, most ponies who wander in here don’t end up coming out again.”
“Never heard of this forest…” You say, trying to think of where you are. Germany? No, you’re thinking of the Black Forest.
“Well, you must not from around Ponyville then,” she said almost to herself, “I-I’m… Fluttershy”.
“I couldn’t hear you, what’s your name?” You ask, leaning in.
She mutters it again and after a couple of more times, you got it.
“Fluttershy… Nice to meet you”
She looks around and blushes, finally looking back down, then at you, then quickly down again “L-l-l-likewise…”
As you continue eating the other apple, she sits next to you. After shooting the breeze for a little while, explaining the last day to her as she looks at you seriously for a moment as you look down and finish the second apple.
“Um… if you want, y-you could come to my home. If you, uh, don’t have a shelter… or something” She asks hesitantly.
“Are you kidding? I’ve been wandering all day just looking for a place to stay”
She smiles again, and you smile back, this has been the one good thing to happen to you after what feels like an eternity. You begin to walk with the pony, Angel left to go to a nearby rabbit hole where there was another rabbit he’s had his eye on for awhile now as you two head back to her home without him.
She explains the basics of Equestria and the three different types of ponies, which you didn’t notice she was a Pegasus until she pointed it out. That reaction made her laugh, then apologize for laughing, then apologize for apologizing after you told her it was alright.
Finally, you made it back to her place and you walk in, noticing the “nature-ish” smell of her home, along with some cages, she must have other animals. So you ask her. She tells you, that all the animals in the forest are her friends and they spend time at her home a lot, the cages are just there if the animals like them, or if they are needed.
Now, you’re fed and you two sit down in what looks to be the ‘main room’, agreeing that you’re going to live with the young Pegasus until you get started here in Ponyville. Until then, you’re to abide by her rules.
“Seems fair,” you think to yourself. Then blurting out, without thinking, you say “I’m so glad she found me, otherwise I wouldn’t have made it”
She smiles and you blush brightly as you realize you just said that out loud. She tells you that you are welcome and that she has something for you, so you are to close your eyes. You do so, smiling, and then.
*click*
You look down, and see a black leather necklace attached to a long black leather chain leading to her hoof… Wait a second. She just collared you!
“Fluttershy… what’s going on?!” You raise your voice as she smiles a little differently then all the times before.
“Listen… You’re an animal, just like the others I’ve found in the forest, but the first sentient being on a level that’s equal to us ponies, but an animal nonetheless.” She starts to explain to you. “Since you’re an animal, you’re to behave and are to be treated like one till we find you a place to live, a job, and a decent future.”
“That’s insane, you’re racis-”
“Well…” She interrupts you, “I guess you can just go back outside again. All my animal friends have shelters, so I bet you do too… wait, you don’t, and it’s freezing out there, we still haven’t cleaned up all the winter yet, so it looks like you’re stuck here either way.” She smiles a devious smile, one you’d never expect from this kind and shy Pegasus.
“That’s…! Um, well…” You stutter then look down quietly, you’ve accepted your fate.
“Good” She replies, head held up slightly. “Now, our first step is to start training you. Let’s see how well you can take a command; Strip!” She says with power in her voice… something that completely catches you off guard, along with the ridiculous order.
“No way!” you yell at her bluntly.
Suddenly your head jerks to your right, your left cheek stinging badly. She just slapped you! Is there anything you can do to stop this? No, there isn’t, is there?
“Those clothes are filthy, Pet.” She tells you, “I have a friend who can get you some new ones if you need them, but if you notice, we ponies don’t wear clothes often, so I doubt you’ll be dressed very often.”
Your cheeks burn as you remove the little amount of tattered clothing you have left. She smiles that devious grin at you, “Goood….” She says, drawn out. “But Pet, you’re so very filthy, you need a bath” She wraps the end of the collar to a piece of furniture, leaving you naked, sitting on the floor. After a few minutes, she removes the leash, the drags you into the bathroom by your collar and into the bath tub.
“This is a huge tub” you say to yourself as you look and she’s suddenly gone. Only to feel her fur against your back as she slowly sinks into the tub behind you, letting out a relaxed “Ahh…” as her body dips into the hot water and relaxes for a minute. Next she wraps her hooves around your chest, reaching for soap as she begins to wash you. First your back and shoulders, then your arms, around then to your chest, back to your back again and-
*plop* She dropped the soap.
“Pet, would you stand up for me, so I can grab that, it seems that I dropped the soap” You snicker, she glares and you obey, still snickering in your head about what she said. She picks up the bar of soap, but that isn’t the only thing she grabs, with her other soapy hoof, she begins washing your ass, grabbing it fairly hard and rough, making sure to get everywhere, she moves her hooves forward and begins cleaning up front.
You gasp out loud and she snickers now, this feels so weird, having this Pegasus wash your genitals. You don’t know what to feel or what to think, so you ignore everything and focus on the pleasure, then her hooves go down and wash your legs and she orders you back down.
You comply, not wishing to upset her, and she begins to rinse you off, then she begins to wash your hair. She leans in from behind and breathes heavily on your left ear with her hot breath, “You have so little fur, but it’s so well taken care of, so very soft. I am very lucky to have found this little treasure in the forest today huh?”
You blush a deep scarlet, you are unsure if it’s because of what she said or if it’s what she’s doing to you, but you figure it’s both. You have a weakness behind your ears and neck, and this is something she’s noticed and is exploiting. Besides the sound of running water, all you can hear is your little pants under your breath and Fluttershy whispering “So cute…” into your ear as she continues.
Then, she scoots back, ordering you to get out, dry off and sit and wait for her to finish. As you dry off, you watch her wet her mane, watching the way it flows behind her intensely as she washes herself quickly. Then, as she drains the water and rises, she orders you to come and dry her off.
You hurry, grab the towel, then realizing your feet are wet, slip and fall right onto your face. She gasps, worrying if you’re alright, either genuinely or sarcastically you cannot tell, but you just hurry up and start to dry her fur off, starting shoulders down, then wrap the towel around her head to dry off her hair as she gestures you to leave it there.
You two go back out and she leads you to the bedroom, where she pulls the covers off her bed and gestures you to get inside, she quickly follows you and gets in too. She is behind you again, and now she starts to pet you. She’s humming a sweet tune, and you have to admit that this is really weird… but then you think, you’re hallucinating still so it’s ok if this situation is weird. You are quickly falling asleep, you were so very tired and now you’re safe.
As you drift off to sleep, there’s one thing that won’t get off your mind…
Why are you enjoying this so much…?
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I hope you enjoyed this, it was my first kind of fiction in this genre, but was fun to write nonetheless. Please give feedback about what you think, if negative, try to help out by telling me what you think I could do to improve my stories.
I’m debating whether or not to continue this, but tell me what you think. I’ve had people tell me to not stop doing this because… blah, blah, blah.
But I want to see what the people who’d actually read this particular kind of writing would think.
Hope you enjoyed it, and sorry for the length… wait a second-
~Jetsfantasy
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