Fluttershy - Your Opportunities at a Glance.

by FiMWriterNone

Chapter 13: Style Outside, Rarity Inside.

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Chapter 13: Style Outside, Rarity Inside.

As you open your eyes after a long sleep you began to replay your dream. It was uneventful seeing as how you had been the plaything to both Fluttershy and Princess Luna before falling asleep. After the morning session yesterday, you were exposed to session after session, You had lost count, but they eventually put you through at least half a dozen more sessions. Each teaching you how to present yourself to the Mistress, how to respond, how to do this, how to not upset her, how to avoid that, avoid punishment, etc, etc.

It was annoying, all this stuff just to prevent Princess Celestia from being displeased with you. But, Fluttershy’s speech and lecture about how Celestia can single hoovedly make your life hell instantly replayed in your head each time you thought if this was necessary or not.

As you begin to awaken, you notice you’re on the cold wooden floor of the bedroom… you must’ve passed out from exhaustion, while Fluttershy and Luna are sitting up on Fluttershy’s bed, looking pleased with themselves, along with looking terrifying, they look like they have something planned. You slowly get up and stumble a bit, you’re body aching and stiff.

“Fluttershy, Luna, is all this really necessary? Why can’t I just do things naturally and do what ‘feels’ right when Celestia get’s here?” You ask, tired of all this. They both gasp, each raising a hoof to cover their mouth, like a mirror image of the other pony.

“What is this, you ungrateful whelp! Thou hast no idea the horrors Our Sister can inflict behind closed doors!” Luna yells at you. Fluttershy however got up and is helping you make your way to the main room. As the three of you start getting up and awake, you try to explain how you feel… though you might as well be talking to Owlicious…
Who?
You know… the Owl…?
Who?
Ugh, fine, why not Tom then…?
Who?
…Anywho… UGH!!

The voice in your head left the room (There was a room up there?) angrily, you could hear angry mumbling and someone leaving, only to soon have it replace with a similar voice assuring you everything was fine and to continue. That was definitely proving you’re completely sane in every possible way. You were being sexually dominated by 4 foot tall talking ponies, everything else would seem completely sane in comparison.

“I just don’t think that all this preparation is necessary…” You tell Luna.

“Thou hast no idea, though We can agree that thou deserves a break today. We can continue training another day, We are a… little sore ourselves.” Luna admits to you, blushing brightly, which stands out very easily on her dark mane. You feel Fluttershy sigh, she seems to be relieved, she hasn’t left your side and is clutching at your arm. It’s rather adorable.

“I need you to go by Rarity’s today Pet, I’m sure she’ll be happy to see you more than me.” Fluttershy looks down. You pat her head and begin to pet her, stroking your fingers through her pink mane as you look down into her large teal eyes.

“You know Rarity would be just as happy to see you, Fluttershy.” You reassure her, she hugs you in response, and you return by holding her as you continue to talk to Luna. “So you’re alright with taking a break for today, Luna”

“…Miss Luna to you, boy” She quickly corrects.

“Yes, of course. Is it alright with you if we take a break today, Miss Luna?” You try to sound as respectful as possible, as she seems to be in a worse mood than you thought.

“We suppose it is for the best, after all, We’re trying to save thou. It’d be terrible if We were to break thou by trying to protect thou from being broken by Our Sister.”

With that, she leaves the room, Fluttershy looking up at you with the same worried expression.

“It’s alright, she probably… I dunno what her problem is.” You tell Fluttershy, but she starts to snicker.

“It’s because you weren’t holding her. I bet she was holding back from clinging to you too, Pet” She laughs as she starts to return to her normal self. Or at least to you. Though it made sense in some ways, what she was talking about, Luna could possibly jealous. “Go ahead and head over to Rarity’s, Pet, I’ll take care of things here.” Fluttershy tells you as you get on a plain black dress shirt and pants. You can’t help but love black sometimes.

As you walk, you’re almost knocked down by Luna as she swoops down from above, continuing her trot, apparently she’s going to join you.

“Listen… Human…” She starts to go on, as if she didn’t just almost send you flying from the sheer force of her little move just now. “Hast thou thought about what thou wishes to do if Our Sister approves of thou’s residence in Our kingdom?” She asked, getting straight to the point. It did make you think though, she did have a point.

“Um… well I guess Fluttershy was going to help me start finding my own place to stay and make sure I have a job or something, I haven’t been able to think about it to much after all this happening.”

“Well, Human…” She begins to go on, she’s not looking at you or anything, she’s hard to read sometimes and is quite confusing… she’d be a great gambler, you think to yourself as she try’s to talk. “How wouldst thou like a home in Canterlot, not just a home… but the palace?” She asked sheepishly, this was obviously huge and shocked you.

“That would be amazing Luna, you could do that?” You asked, almost giddy with excitement.

“Yes, Human, the Royal Canterlot Symphony has contacted the Royal court asking for thou to be included amongst them. They need a pianist apparently and you’re just the pony…. Person… to fill that. They’d be willing to pay, and We know we could make room at the castle, provided you do one thing in return…” She dragged that last part, there was obviously a catch.

“What would that involve?” You ask her, giving her the suspicious raised eyebrow look.

“Well, You’d have to proclaim thy love for Us and agree to join us in matrimony and become Prince of the Night.” Luna said, looking at you quite seriously.

Was she just saying what you thought she said?

“Um, are you asking…-”

“Yes, Human, We wish to marry thou and have thou join us in ruling these lonely nights.” She was dead serious.

You felt honored to be asked such a thing, but also pitied the Goddess, she’s been alone for so long, you can’t help but empathize with her. After all, you’d been through similar until a week or so ago.

“I don’t know what to say, Luna…” It’s not exactly an offer to refuse, but as you think about it, you’re reminded of Fluttershy. You look down and see her cutie mark on your collar and that only helps to cement the fact that you’re already with Fluttershy, well kind of.

“Thou has time to consider Our generous offer. Just remember, thou needs a real mare and not some filly… and what more perfect mare for thou than Us? We have tried to abide by traditions, but even We must break traditions every so often to acquire what we desire.” She said as she spread out her dark wings once more, preparing to take flight. “Remember where thy loyalties lie, Human.”

And with that, she was off. Confusing to say the least, but as you made your way into Ponyville, you thought of what that could mean. I mean, who are you kidding, Prince of the Night sounds like one really badass name to be called by for life. Maybe even King eventually, and perhaps if ‘Night’ sounds to cliché, you and Luna could always change it back to “Darkness” from when she was Nightmare Moon.

Prince, or King, of Darkness. That had a really nice ring to it…

As you thought about the ever confusing situation, you noticed you were already at Rarity’s boutique.

You knock, then walk in, signaling the bell. Rarity quickly yells “Just a minute!”. After a few minutes of waiting around, you see her come down and she suddenly gasps.

“Oh my! Darling, you should have said something, if I had known it had been you, I would have come down in an instant!” She exclaimed, seemingly a little bit flustered.

“It’s ok Rarity, I wasn’t waiting long… Anyway, Fluttershy sent me and-”

“Ah yes!” She interrupted, seemed like all the ponies like to do that. “I have her stuff right here ready to go, she’s lucky she’s got me, anything like these and she would have had to pay a fortune, I’m only charging 50 bits for everything.”

“How very generous” You try to say and fake mean… such irony in what she said. Apparently, she was the element of generosity. And apparently, such generosity comes at a price.

As you grab the bag and head to leave the store, you’re stopped by a wall of psychic energy and a “AHEM!” kind of cough from Rarity.

“Fluttershy did have my payment… didn’t she?” Rarity asked shrewdly.

“Um…” You now realize that you are in some serious trouble. “Well, about that…”

“Ah, I see… she just came and expected her lingerie to come from the generosity… well I can’t run a business on generosity!” She exclaimed, seeming to almost be ranting to herself. Wait… did she say lingerie? You shake the sexy images out of your head and try not to peek, but you did notice a particularly naughty looking outfit on top, along with what looks to be some kind of leather, though that one you’d rather ignore for now.

“Well, can’t we work out something, or she could come by with her payment…?” You ask, just wanting this over with.

As she thinks about it, you look around, trying everything not to look inside the bag, aka Pandora’s Box. She suddenly gasped, this impasse was finally going to be resolved.

“I’ve got it! Darling, I think YOU can work out a payment with me in the back.” She said with a sexy wink. You had to admit, Rarity was certainly oozing sexuality, even when she didn’t mean it. Though, this behavior seems appropriate for Rarity, or just about anypony for that matter.

You sigh, your options limited. “Alright Rarity…” And with that, they’re off… well, You’re off. Rarity quickly dashes up the stairs pulling you along with her magic. You quickly arrive to what appears to be her bedroom, with bits of dresses and outfits strewn everywhere. She tells you it’s “organized chaos” but your parent’s would have said it’s an ass whoopin’. Speaking of which, where were her parents… Probably doing the same thing you’re about to be doing.

She tosses everything off the bed and places you on it, using her magic to close the door, shut the blinds, and create a surprisingly sexy atmosphere… then again, this IS Rarity’s room after all.

She trots along the bed, looking at you with those lustful eyes.

“Oh my, Pet. You’re simply to die for!” She exclaims. “Now, I was going to have you model some of these outfits…” She begins to say “But you look far too fine in what I already made for you, the black really brings out the beauty in those blue eyes of yours. Now, be a dear and give us a little show, I want to get my money’s worth” She giggles.

You sigh, how do you get in these situations? Does Fluttershy do this on purpose? You, get up, and lay Rarity down, who’d apparently been wearing clothes herself. Stockings to be exact… though sockies would’ve been just as nice. Anyhoof, you get up and try to tease her by unbuttoning your shirt one at a time, slowly, taking a moment to spin, then continue to slowly tease. God, you felt like an idiot, but Rarity was squeeing and giggling. She was loving this, so you continued. Slowly shedding your shirt, she gasps, looking at your naked torso. Since you try to wear clothes all the time, it must be extra special for her. As taking clothes off a pony isn’t nothing special, their almost always never wearing any in Ponyville. Apparently that was different in Canterlot though.

What if Ponyville was an Equestrian nudist colony…?

Anyway, back to erotic fiction and not conspiracy theory. You begin to slowly unbutton, unzip, and lower your pants. Taking the time to, of course, tease the hell out of Rarity. Slowly performing each action seems to be taking it’s toll on the pale unicorn, as she looks like she’s about to strip you herself. Her eyes, focusing intensely on the bulge in front appearing from your undergarments.

You make your way onto the bed, and kiss her neck. Though one hoof is wrapped around your neck bringing you into a kiss of her own, the other immediately goes for the bulge. She’s only rubbing it from outside the cloth of the soft undergarment she made, but the feeling is strong for you. She smiles as you pull away from the kiss.

“Darling, you seem to have gotten as worked up from your little show as I did… didn’t you?” She asks, you shake your head in response, which only serves to have her start rubbing you harder. “Oh, really? Then why’ve you already made the bulge here this large?” She draws it out, with a low, seductive voice. She weighs the words heavily onto your ear and neck with a hot breath as she teases you.

“Rarity please…-” You tell her, this was getting to be too much.

“Ah yes of course, here, allow me to help” She leans down and bites at the garment in her way and rips it away, allowing you relief from the confines of that tight trap of dignity. “But, I need help with these stockings…” She teases as she lies back and starts to rub her hind hoof along your cock, the soft material of her stocking creates another amazing feeling as it caresses you.

You immediately oblige and begin to remove the stockings on her fore hooves, allowing her to continue the bliss she’s created with her hind hooves and the soft material. As you finish removing those and tossing them wherever is out of the way, she gets up and turns around, allowing you to remove her bottom stockings.

As you pull them down her hind hooves, you notice the middle being darker than the rest and the sticky arousal tugging against you as you tried to remove this tight material from the top of her mare hood. She’s been heavily aroused for awhile and she doesn’t feel any shame in that.

“Now Darling, I want you to rut me. But, be sure to tell me before you get too close, alright?” She presses against your throbbing cock as she tells you this. You simply nod and she pushes against you, you respond by putting your hands on her hips and pulling her towards you.

You start pushing gently, and the head begins it’s journey, slowly at first, then finally as she adjusts to your intruding member, allows you into her. She’s gripping onto your cock fairly hard as she lets out a moan and begins to lay against the bed, only keeping her waist lifted up.

You start to slowly work in and out, and she’s just maintaining a gradual low moan, but as soon as you get a little rougher, she gasps and flinches.

“Oh Darling! You have no idea how good this feels!” She yells out, turning onto her side. You merely smile, you’re glad she’s enjoying it.

“Like… this?” You ask as you thrust harder into her.

“Y-yes!!” She moans. And with that, you start to go faster. The entire length of your cock plunging in and out of the unicorn’s mare hood is an intense feeling. And she’s obviously loving it, with all the moaning and sexy expressions.

You pull her against you as you push in rougher and she suddenly clamps down on you, not letting go at all. You try to pull but nothing comes out of her, she’s holding onto the entire length, the walls of her mare hood rubbing all over you at once.

“Darling! You’re making me cum so h-hard!” She moans as she continues the death grip.

“R-rarity…” You say, trying to get her to let up. But she’s now thrusting into you, panting and moaning. This quickly sends you overboard as you start to cum, but as soon as the first wave is realeased, she tightens up to the point where you can’t even let it out.

This frustrating feeling is only intensified at your denied orgasm. You pant and lay on Rarity who is still trying to thrust into you from below.

“Rarity, please come back to Equestria…” You whisper into her ear, petting her. After a minute, she finally lets go. But it was too late for your orgasm. She hugs you tightly as she seems really pleased.

“Celestia! That was the single most intense rutting I’ve ever gotten! You were amazing Darling!” She praises you. You thank her, and try to explain that you didn’t exactly get your chance to feel good. Rarity smiles a sexy smile and tackles you to the bed. These ponies were a lot stronger than you could ever think something this small and adorable could ever possibly be. “Ah yes, where are my manners? Pet needs to get some release too, don’t you?” She teases.

You’re at that point where you don’t really care as long as you get to cum, so you nod and she goes down, licking and nibbling here and there. She begins to lick your cock and rub your thighs with her hooves, eventually going down on it and beginning to suck. You’re decently close already.

“Pet, are you sure you haven’t cum yet? It tastes kind of…-”

“Yeah, I was just about to when you tightened up and kept me from coming…” You told her, her cheeks immediately turned rose as she giggled embarrassingly.

“Oh my, Pet, I’m sorry. But now, it’s your turn, ok?” She gives you a big grin before she begins to go down deep, taking it all in and moaning. The vibrations always create an amazing feeling as she begins to start thrusting her mouth along the entire length, her tongue wrapping around sometimes, then she slows and probes the tip of your cock with the tip of her tongue. After a few minutes of this assault, you finally get close again.

“Rarity… I’m close…” You tell her, as she asked, before she sent you overboard. She immediately stopped and lied on her back, which was disappointing.

“Come, Darling, let it out all over me!” She exclaims, pulling you onto her. She puts her hind hooves together at both sides of your cock and begins to work them along you. “Go ahead, rut it like you rut me and just let it all out!” She exclaimed as she began to work faster.

You did as you were told and began to thrust, it created a similar feel to her mare hood, but still an interestingly unique feel though. It was a nice change, though noticeably dryer. As you got close, Rarity moaned and yelled out. “Let it all out, Pet. All over me!” This dirty talk was unlike her, but definatly helping the mood as she sent you beyond the point of no return. You began to cum, and as your previous orgasm was denied, this one was considerably longer.

You moaned and thrusted as you let wave after wave of cum out and onto Rarity, covering her randomly from mane to tail. After a minute, you laid down next to her, you could hear her licking her lips and here and there.

“Oh my, that was simply wonderful!” She said as you rested.

After about 15 minutes of her cleaning herself up, and licking you clean. You parted ways. On your return, you discovered Luna was still gone, which didn’t really seem to surprising. Though as you explained what happened to Fluttershy, she looked confused.

“But Pet… I had already paid Rarity before hoof, I made sure to get that done before she even started on them… though I wish she didn’t tell you what it was… I was going to surprise you…” She blushed, you told her you only saw the top pair, which seemed to cheer her up a little.

Now, more than ever, called for a face hoof of your own…

All the ponies in this town are crazy! You tell yourself, letting out a heavy sigh…

----------End of Chapter 13-----------
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