More than enough. Why can't you just accept that I love you?

by Jade Crossroads

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Slice of Life
Length: 705

A sweet moment between Discord and Fluttershy where Discord explains to her why he wouldn't have any other mare, and Flutters thinks she isn't good enough

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-17 20:46:06 UTC

Your love is more than enough

More than a little imperfect (unless together/ until we’re together again.)

“Why can’t you just accept that I love you Fluttershy? There is no mare in all of Equestria I would rather be with.”

I say this as I twirl a lock of the beautiful/ ravishing Fluttershy’s mane.

“Not even Celestia?” She asks, still fighting me off, not willing to believe she was enough for anypony, especially one such as I. Oh stars/ celestial bodies above! How I love her modesty and gentleness….. her kindness is enchanting, but she tends to annoy me with these deflections. She just doesn’t realize how much she means to me, or how special she is. Why can’t she see it’s me that doesn’t deserve her?

“Who now?” I ask smoothly as I trace the line of her jaw, and tilt her chin ever so slightly.

“You really mean it?” Fluttershy asks, “I know I’m nothing special but-”

I silence her with my kiss, her eyes go wide with surprise, but she closes them, but then when we break away.

I move away gradually, while she just sits there, shocked.

“FLuttershy… w-was I being too forward with you? If so then-”

“N-no, no, you were just um.. fine.” She blushes but she still doesn’t look at me.

Oh no, I’ve really messed up now haven’t I? Why did I have to kiss her?! I’ve ruined everything with this mare, now she will never want to be with me again and will surely ask me to leave… but she’s not like that, right? my voice of reason tries to get a word in, but I’ve never been one to listen to any conscience of mine more anypony else's. Wait.. did she just say it wasn’t me?

“What is it then? Tell me and I’ll do all that’s in my power to fix it!”

“There’s nothing broken that you can fix Discord… I just.. well, i’ve never been kissed before.”

Discord, upon hearing this asks her again in disbelief, do you mind repeating that? You were so quiet that I believe I misheard you… Did you just say that… that you’ve never been kissed by anypony before?”

Fluttershy only turned her face away, her blush deepening on her fair complexion.

“Stars above…”

“You’re kidding me..” DIscord says without a trace of anything in his voice, FLuttershy in confusion and worry turns to face him, only to see she can’t gauge his expression either, he’d a stony look to his face, and he looked a little… bewildered and a little ashamed.

“I’m… sorry. I-I didn’t realize… I should never have kissed you. Just… forget this ever happened, I’ll take my leave of you, my dear. It seems I’ve overstepped my bounds/ overstayed my welcome.”

“N-no! Wait, Discord, IT’s not that, I said it was nice, I-I” She blushed a deeper red. “I thought it was nice./ I-I like dit… I like you. a lot. Please, won’t you stay with me? We still haven't finished our picnic/ we still have a few hours before sundown.”

“I would love to Fluttershy.” Discord gives her a smile, “I’m afraid that I can’t / can hardly keep the princess waiting long, she has a tight enough leash around my throat as it is/ where, I’d hate for her to cut back on my visits with you/ time spent here with you just over one minute too late, but… I can spare a moment...:” With that he embraces Fluttershy and kisses her sweetly on the lips again/ on the forehead, making her blush, but she’s a bit disappointed. Why did he hesitate before he kissed her on the lips. She was a little relieved too, she wasn’t familiar with that melting feeling he brought forth. She would have to come to terms with that, if he noticed he'd probably point it out and joke about it, he always knew how to embarrass her, although he always meant well, he just tended to take things too far. Fluttershy didn’t mind , however, she prefered the sweet and funny side she’d come to know from Discord during their tea parties. He was always great company. She couldn’t imagine anypony more perfect than Discord.