A foal's point of view

by maddiecunta

Rating: teen
Tags: Random, Slice of Life, Second Person, Alternate Universe
Length: 1627

this is the point of view of a foal.

this is a point of view of Rainbow Dash as she goes through being a baby with Twilight as her mother.Things don't seem fun at first but it ends up being something fun!
This is rated teen for non-understanding of younger ages (not that any would be here)
this story takes place before the cmc get their cutie marks.
if you don't like:bottles,diaper usage,pacifiers or more of the topic please do not read.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-18 17:11:00 UTC

the challenge of the pacifier

"Time to go to the post office!" Twilight said about to pick up Rainbow Dash."No!" Rainbow found out she can say "no" "yes" and "food".This time the answer was definitely "no", seeing how rainbow didn't want to wake up and she had to miss her afternoon nap for this! "Come on Dashie,we have to go!Mommy has a surprise for you!" "Surprise?!" Rainbow un-steadily stood up in her high chair with her fore-hooves on the tray of her high chair.Flapping her wings,wanting to get out of it,Rainbow would do anything for a surprise!Especially now,with her simple foalish mind.

            "First we have to change your diaper!" Twilight picked her up again. "No!" Rainbow struggled to get out of her grasp. "Here." Twilight gave Rainbow Dash a pacifier. "No,no,no!Let me go!I.want.a.surprise!" "Come on,Dashie!" Rainbow stopped trying to free herself,and put pacifier in her mouth.Rainbow was calm,but she still didn't want Twilight to look at her private parts,it was pretty disturbing.

             "Twilight when are we gonna go?" Rainbow was being impatient. "We're already outside Dashie!Be patient!" Rainbow nodded her head,she was really tired from missing her afternoon nap "So.Boring. [yawn] Falling.Asleep." Rainbow snored a cute snore."Now with her asleep I could go buy some groceries,and then go to the post office."Twilight went into the grocery store for only a few seconds,Rainbow Dash had 'senses' once they got into the grocery store,she couldn't deal. "Perfect!" Twilight was now on her way to the post office.

             "Thank you Derpy! Have a nice day! Twilight walked out the door,as Rainbow waved her hoof Goodbye to Derpy.They finally made it home,and right when they got their Rainbow was tuckered out."And this is why you don't cry that much!"Twilight put Rainbow in her crib,with her Soarin' plushie,rubbed her mane, and walked out "Also,I know you like Soarin'." Twilight walked out."[yawn]Nooooo."Rainbow waved her hoof as if to say "leave so I can sleep!" Rainbow hugged her plushie tight.

last chapter:probably as intersting as it's going to get

"Hi!Finally I have some ponies who understand what I'm saying!" Rainbow ran to the table where the three high chairs were."Food!" Rainbow tugged Twilight's tail.Twilight picked her up and put her in a highchair.If you were wondering the twins never paid much attention to the mane six,so the point Rainbow is a baby was no mind to them.The babies ate, and sneaked out of their highchairs."Show me around here!" Pound and Pumpkin brought her to the kitchen for a mission."See those cookies,Rainbow?"Pound pointed at the cookies in a glass case on the counter."We gots to get 'em.We ain't aloud to have any!So we gotta sneak 'em out!" Pound slapped his right hoof on his left,to show he meant it."Sounds like a plan!Pumpkin you stand there,Pound get on top of Pumpkin so I can get on top of you." They did as told,and Rainbow got on top of pound and got the cookies!

They toppled over,but luckily Rainbow landed on her back."Yes!"All the babies cheered. "Cheers!To succes!" They all hit their cookies together.They put the cookies back on the counter,and snuck back to their highchairs,and gave each other a hoof bump."Well we best be going ,bye Cupcake!" Twilight picked up Rainbow dash and was about to put her on her back"Why is there a bump on your back,Dashie?"Rainbow merely just shrugged her shoulders.twilight put her on her back.All tuckered out,Rainbow fell asleep.

After Rainbow's nap,she felt hot one second and cold the other."Twilight!" Rainbow was standing on her hind hooves waiting to be picked up."Yes Dashie?Oh you look like you're burning up!"

    "Mommy,I don't feel so well." Rainbow's nose was running,and her stomach was hurting.

        "I'll get you some medicine." Twilight hurried,not wanting this to get bad. Twilight got some baby's flu medicine from the medicine cabinet.

     Twilight gave her the medicine,and let her lay down on the couch with Twilight.Rainbow was watching some foal shows slowly drifting off to sleep,sucking her hoof.

     "I love you Dashie." Twilight said.putting a blanket over Rainbow Dash,rubbing her mane to comfort her.

     "I love you too,mommy."Rainbow said,her hoof muffling her voice.

Chapter 1 An Unpleasant Awakening

"Dashie?" "15 more minutes." Rainbow Dash turned to her side.

         Twilight levitated Rainbow with her magic."Time to go!We have a big day ahead of us!" Rainbow flapped her wings rapidly to the feeling of falling. "Wha-!?" Said Rainbow as she some-what had a heart attack."Why am I in a nursery?Wait why am I not in my house?" Rainbow face hoofed "Are we really doing this again Twilight Sparkle!?"Rainbow never called her that,but she has made Rainbow a foal multiple times and it was getting really annoying!

       "Sounds like somepony wants to eat!"

Twilight sat Rainbow in a rainbow colored high chair,and sat a bottle and a bowl of baby food in front of her.Rainbow crossed her fore-hooves and stared at Twilight."What do you want me to do,sit here and do something!?You're the one who did this!Be responsible!" Each and every thing Rainbow just said was babble to Twilight.

"Go one,eat up while mommy gets your bath ready!" Twilight trotted off.

       "Well,it looks like the flies have something to eat.I hafta get outta here!" Rainbow slid out under her high chair,and walked to to the door. Rainbow flapped her tiny wings with all her might,but she never went up an inch!"For the love of- "Rainbow pushed the high chair all the way over to the door,in the process having the baby food bowl tip over and fall on Rainbow's head.Rainbow climbed to the top of the high chair almost at the door knob when Twilight came in.[gasp] "Dashie!"

bath time

"Get me out!" Rainbow tried her best to get out of the bath. "Dashie!You have to stay in the bath,you got baby food in your mane!" "Hey,my hooves are sensitive!" Rainbow knew Twilight didn't know what she was saying so she signaled by pulling her hooves away.Rainbow tried to get out of the bath and she succeeded!But not for very long,Twilight picked her up with her magic once more.

          There was only one thing for Twilight to get her out of this tub,she had to cry which was something she would never do,but if she needed to she would.She could bite her but she had to think again,she would never do that to her best friend,but she would give her a headache! "I'm warning you Twilight sparkle,let me out!" Twilight definitely wasn't letting her out.

        "LET ME OUT!" Rainbow was screaming at the top of her lungs and splashing soap and water on Twilight."Fine your bath is over!I need to go dry myself off." Twilight brought Rainbow to her play room with toys for a foal to play with."There is no way I'm playing with these!Hmmm except for that one!"

       There was a Soarin' doll sitting in the corner,not that she liked Soarin' or anything she just liked it because it was a wonderbolt plushie!Rainbow adored these,but when she was a mare she didn't want to look like a foal so she didn't get one.A few minutes went by,and Rainbow was getting hungry."Well I guess I should've eaten that baby food.Ooh that bottle's still over their!Maybe I can call Twilight and ask her if she could get it for me!" Just in time Twilight came in."Well, I guess we could try to eat again." Twilight picked Rainbow up by her neck."Food!Food!" Rainbow tried to act nice,not that she wanted to stay a foal,but she still wanted to eat."Here drink this bottle,while mommy go gets some coffee." Twilight went over to get some coffee."Then we can go to the post office!"

lessons

A few hours later the cutie mark crusaders came to Twilight's to see if they could get there cutie marks."Hi girls!" Twilight came out of the nursery with a happy Rainbow Dash next to her. Rainbow waved her hoof around to say hi. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle paid no attention to it,not surrpising seeing as they wanted their cutie marks so badly, and went with Twilight,but Scootaloo sat there in utter silence. "Rainbow Dash?!" Drool coming from her mouth, Rainbow sat there for a few seconds,her face getting a tad bit red."Ewww!what's that smell!?"Scootaloo put a hoof over her muzzle.Rainbow walked off to go play with her dolls. "Twilight?Ugh do I even have to ask!?"Scootaloo face hoofed.

         "Time for be- Smells like someone had an accident!"Twilight tried to hide away her disgusted face with a smile.Twilight changed her diaper,and gave Rainbow her surprise!"Surprise!Surprise!"Rainbow jumped up and down from excitement."Mommy got you Wonderbolt 'jammies!"Rainbow Dash slipped them on.After that she started rubbing her eyes."'Night 'night!" Rainbow climbed into her crib with her plush. "Good night!" Twilight smiled back at her,and left the nursery.[spoiler][/spoiler] Rainbow was awake earlier than Twilight.Rainbow realized,now that she's walking herself,she trips multiple times."Stupid tiny hooves!"Rainbow put her pacifier back in her mouth,and went on.What could I do?Oooh!I'll wake Twilight up!"Rainbow went to Twilight's bedroom door.[knock knock]"Mama?" Twilight opened the door,it smelled like perfume ."Whatcha doin'?"Twilight picked her up and changed her diaper."Well we're going to go see some friends!" Twilight went and put a multicolored overalls dress on Rainbow.You could see her Diaper from behind when she stood up.

           "Friends?" Rainbow was about to get her plush but Twilight picked her up."we're going to go see Pound and Pumkin cake! we're going to Sugar Cube Corner,and I don't want you to get that dirty!" Rainbow's face was welling up."Don't you want your pacifier?Here." Rainbow took the pacifier and Twilight picked Rainbow up and put her on her back.Rainbow held onto Twilight's neck the whole way there.

           They finally made it there,and Rainbow saw the cake twins."Hi!"Pumpkin and Pound greeted Rainbow.