Tentle's Second Chance

by Michael Hudson

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, Sex, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Drama
Length: 3341

A year has passed since Twilight had to give up her dearest pet, but now, she finally goes back to see him.

A year ago Twilight said goodbye. Because of what a beast like her pet could do to other ponies, and her failure as an owner and parent, she could not keep her little Tentle. Now a year has passed, and she believes she knows how she can do right by him.

Preread by Foals Errand.

Written for the one year anniversary of the prequel, and is to make up for the rather somber ending of the first.

Thank you to PtolemaoisLS for the cover art!

Published 2016-01-20 22:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-20 22:20:02 UTC

Tentle's Second Chance

Twilight took in a shaking breath. She had spent the last few hours walking deeper and deeper into the Everfree forest, and while trying to follow the path she had taken a year ago with Fluttershy, she was still scared. In such a large place, a slight deviation in angle could cause one to overshoot their goal by miles. Of course, first you need to be moving at more than a snail’s pace to do such a feet.

She gently kicked a stone to the side as she began to trot once more. Even with a month’s thought and hundreds of pros and cons lists, Twilight couldn’t be certain. If he no longer recognized her, she could very possibly be torn to shreds. A shiver ran down her spine as she thought of her child devouring her, and she shut her eyes against the image. Tentle was better than that… she hoped.

The thick canopy over her head began to blot out the moon above her, casting the whole forest into darkness. Twilight thought of trying to stay hidden at first, but she hadn’t met any creatures in the last hour, she couldn’t be certain of not wanting the element of stealth. A smile crossed her face as she thought about how Tentle would probably feel safe from lightning with all the thick cover, and she even chuckled as the image of the thought of a creature of his size still worrying about that.

Her mind stayed on the thought of his size though. If he had continued growing at any sort of rate, it was odd that she hadn’t seen him yet. One of her hooves came down on a rounded vine, and she looked down as she noticed the slightest bit of movement. She pushed the vine she had accidentally hit away a little, and saw a sack appear at the end of it. While not too large, it looked like her hoof…

Wait. If a predator the size of Tentle appeared, it would cause other animals to run away, and only attract more prey by them wandering in, or using sweet scents from its juices. The darkness would also be useful for hiding its black vines, while the large trees would allow them plenty of space to hang… Twilight looked up, and the vines shot downward in response.

Twilight didn’t even flinch.

One of the long tentacles wrapped around her back hoof, and she slowly nodded to herself. Even if she had run, this would push her forward, and she could now see the vines that coated the way onwards. If it caught the prey like this, it would be a lot easier to- “Ah!” Twilight felt her stomach slam to the side of her body as it yanked her upwards. It didn’t keep a hold of her though, but instead let go, keeping her suspended in the air for a moment.

Before Twilight could get her bearings back, and just barely with her wings out, another set of tentacles sprang out of the darkness she had been going for, wrapping tightly around her barrel before yanking her in. Twilight shut her eyes to the pain of twigs slamming against her face, or the odd time when her hoof might crash against a tree. The only thing that stopped her from becoming nothing more than a ragdoll was her protective magic, and that was even being taxed.

It wasn’t too long though before she was let go again, and she found herself slingshotted against another wall of tentacles. Any other creature’s spine would have been rendered to dust by the impact, but instead Twilight simply felt her barrier shatter, and her magic drain from her body at the forced failure. She still was intact though, and had her breath.

Looking down though, she almost lost whatever air was left in her lungs.

Her little pet had indeed continued to grow, with thousands of tentacles writhing over its core. They ranged in all sort of shapes and sizes, and spread out into every direction of the Everfree. If he had been in Ponyville, Twilight suspected that other ponies may have mistaken the town for having been overrun by Plunderseed vines. Her mind dismissed those thoughts though as more moved away from the middle, and a large beak opened wide. One look at that and she knew she didn’t need to be shredded, but was about to be eaten whole.

Twilight swallowed down her fear, and felt a tear come down the side of her face. “Tentle, it’s me! It’s Twilight Sparkle. I came here to say sorry, and to seek your forgiveness. Please, don’t do this!”

While it paused for a moment, the behemoth beneath her seemed to either be incapable of understanding her, or incapable of caring. Either way, Twilight began to once more lower towards it gaping maw. “Please! Remember all of those wing- Ah!” At the mention of the word, Twilight could feel it pull on her wings as it felt like it was trying to rip them off. “Please!”

She could smell the stink of prey before as she came ever closer, and even began to see tentacles slowly rising out of its maw. She knew what those were for. Just in case a prey was still struggling, they could make sure it stayed within the beast. She felt a tear slide down her face as her body went limp, and whispered out one last, “Please.”

Twilight slowly breathed in, waiting for it. Whether it would be by simply being dropped into its stomach, having her neck broken against the hard core, or whatever her little one could think of, she would accept it. She had known the risk he would pose, and the likelihood that she had been forgotten. A part of her had never been happy for abandoning him though, so now she had to face the consequences of her actions. At the very least, the tentacles preening her wings made her more comfortable for the drop.

Wait… tentacles massaging my wings? She opened her eyes, watching as the beak closed, and she could feel them now. Smaller, gentler vines that were running themselves through her primaries. Another tear fell down her face as a gentle purr escaped her child, and she was lowered to be against the core. She nuzzled her muzzle against it, before gently pecking it. The vibrations coming from within it only grew louder as its purrs did.

For almost an hour, Twilight simply stayed there. She let Tentle poke and prod her body as he continued to massage her stiff muscles. One of the tentacles snaked beneath her body, and she shivered as she felt the smooth fibers grind against her nethers, teasing her lower lips before it wrapped around her barrel. She pet against the bind, humming herself as she began to feel tired. This was what she had been waiting for though.

Twilight’s horn glowed for a moment, and she caught her breath as her body twitched in response to the spell. A warmth began growing within her, and the tentacles against her body suddenly became far more apparent. With one more shaky breath, Twilight knew it was time for her true purpose to be shown to him. “Tentle, do you remember those holes you weren’t ever supposed to go into?”

For a few moments, the beast didn’t respond. Twilight felt a tentacle slowly wrap around her back hoof again as it slowly made its way upwards. It stopped just below her pussy, and she slowly spread her legs open, trying to invite it in. While it did not plunge into her core like she had expected, she did feel it tap against her wet folds while also depositing the slightest bit of its pink gel against the already sensitive pussy. Twilight let out a very small moan as she nodded. “Y-you now have full permission to come into them. Seed and all.”

The core beneath her shook for a moment, before she could hear the trees around them shaking. Looking back, she saw as hundred’s of vines began to raise and point at her, and suddenly, the idea of being ripped apart came back to Twilight. She turned back to her dear pet and swallowed hard. “N-now Tentle, remember, I’m not as strong as you, s-so maybe a couple less?”

The core shook for a little longer, before quieting as the tentacle by Twilight’s nether slowly moved against her pink lips, now giving out generous amounts of its pink juice. The liquid caused Twilight to catch her breath for a moment, but it was a good surprise, one she wanted, and so shook her hips back against the beast. When the vines on her wings pulled on her, she co-operated, and allowed them to flip her over.

More of Tentle’s appendages came now, slowly sliding over the hard, marble surface of his core, and coming for their beloved. One wrapped around each of Twilight’s limbs, before gently pulling on them so she laid spread eagle for all of Equestria to see, moaning as her own limbs were coated in the aphrodisiac, and then massaged by the gentle undulations of the vines. What felt even better for the princess though were the thinner ones that hugged her thighs now. Each one showed a needle within the bulb that she had never seen, and the three vines lunged forward.

The two in her teats got a small yelp from Twilight, before her eyes almost came out of her head. She could feel the heat she had put into herself double, no, quadruple in intensity as the pink nubs were flooded with the plant’s gel. The next to enter got an almost primal scream out of her, before her body shuddered. The needle had barely pierced her clit when the mare threw her legs up, her pleasure peaking at that moment, just before she let her own juices gush out.

Twilight looked to the side, her body shaking through a second, less potent orgasm as she could feel a gentle pull beginning on her most sensitive points. The bulbs had fully enclosed them, and she could feel every part being teased by the vacuum like space now around them. She wrapped a hoof over her eyes, trying to regain control of herself, though she knew soon it was going to be useless.

While the tentacle at Twilight’s nethers continued to tease and tremble, still not sure about entering the long forbidden hole, Twilight’s moans had attracted the creature elsewhere. She felt its tip for a moment, a small bit of gel sliding onto her muzzle as she panted, as if to ask permission. She smiled at the gesture, before leaning in and kissing it. Tentle’s response was to promptly push it inwards. After a small gag, Tentle slowly outwards, but stopped as she put her hooves on the tentacle.

Twilight flicked her tongue against the quivering vine, her body trembling as it awaited her next orgasm, almost on the brink of it already as her eyes closed halfway. She hadn’t expected this sort of pleasure so quickly from her wondrous pet, but she wasn’t about to complain, not while her tongue slid along the girth of the tentacle in her mouth. It pushed forward, slowly sliding into her throat, and Twilight breathed in deeply, adoring the warmth that emanated from the appendage that now sank deeper into her.

At this point, Twilight was sick of waiting. She had one hole filled, but she knew the one she wanted to be filled, and nothing was stopping the mare now. Her rear hooves spread as far as they could, before she stopped the teasing tentacle straight at her sopping wet folds, her thighs now soaked in her juices as she made sure Tentla knew exactly where to go.

Her eyes widened as she felt her nethers be filled with his thick, throbbing vine. Every inch of it filled Twilight’s consciousness as she felt her body beginning to spasm like she had never before. It was a pleasure she wasn’t sure if she could handle, and soon found she couldn’t by the world slowly fading away.

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Twilight took in a small breath as she snuggled against the soft dirt beneath her, taking in the fresh scent of morning dew and damp ground as consciousness slowly returned to her. A slight rustling beside her brought her attention over into that direction, her neck screaming as it moved. She could see what looked almost like plundervine there, and she tilted her head as confusion filled her addled mind. When it came forward and nuzzled against her cheek, the memory of last night rushed back,

She reached forward, and the tentacle wrapped around her hoof as a tear began to fall down the side of Twilight’s face. The black vine moved forward and brushed against her cheek, before shaking side to side, as if to tell her not to cry. One of the other vines in the area slinked forward, before gently grazing against the underside of her stomach. With her attention on it, she could feel something there, within her womb.

The first vine moved forward and wrapped around her neck for a moment, before all of the vines there pushed her away. She could feel them trembling, as if Tentle himself did not want her to go. Twilight didn’t blame him though. This was the last time she would probably see him, no matter how much it hurt. Despite having remembered her, it was only in the nick of time, and she couldn’t risk her life a second time, not for this. It went doubly so now, since if she passed out like last night, he could decide to keep her next time.

No, as much as it hurt, she had to agree. Tentle seemed to know what he was doing, and she wouldn’t betray his kindness for letting her go free. She didn’t feel hollow like the last time she walked away, as her mission was technically a success, but not even a warm seed within her would stop her from showing her pain, and staining the trail with her tears.

Twilight only looked up as the light glared in her eyes. It was almost midday by then, and she found herself at the edge of the Everfree once again. Before she could look back, or anything of that sort. she heard the clatter of hooves, and watched as Fluttershy came closer and closer to her. The scared mare threw her arms around Twilight, and the two nuzzled for a moment, before letting go. “So, um, did you… did you find him?”

Twilight nodded as she started trotting with much more purpose in her hooves, leading her friend towards Ponyville as she left her regrets behind her. She was free of the Everfree, and needed to look forward towards the future, and think about the legacy her dear pet would be able to leave now. “I did, and it was… messy.”

Fluttershy’s cheeks turned a bright red as she hurried to keep up with the princess. “And the final test you wanted to do?”

Twilight smiled at her friend, almost able to feel the heat coming off of her friend. She liked the awkwardness, as it was now all that stopped her from focusing on the beating her body had taken. Even her protective enchantments for last night had been able to stop all the pain, and Twilight wanted to get to bed soon. “A complete success, though i could only tell you about the first couple minutes of the experience.” She swallowed hard, unable to contain the blush on her face now.

Fluttershy’s eyes widened. “Does it hurt? I know it shouldn’t, but-”

Twilight shook her head as they began to trot into Ponyville. “It doesn’t now, but we’ll want to keep an eye for it wanting out, as I do not look forward to that.”

Fluttershy nodded as they almost galloped into the edge of the square. Twilight sighed at the sight of the large, open area where her library had once stood, and slowly walked closer to it. While her old home was gone, now a small cottage, filled with a bed, kitchen, and books sat there. A white, picket fence outlined its large garden, and Twilight stopped at the sign in front of the swinging gate. She couldn’t help but smile at it, and hope that it stayed true.

Fluttershy placed a hoof on it as well. “Do you think it will work out? I mean, even if it’s out here in the open, he might end up like Tentle again.”

Twilight shook her head as her eyelids lowered. “I do, or I need to. His race has the chance of being amazing, and I know we can make this sign be true, especially if it’s Tentle’s son who will be with us. However, first things first, I need some sleep.”

Fluttershy nodded, and slowly removed her hoof from the sign that read, Ponyville’s Royal Guarden. Cultivated and approved by the mother and princess, Twilight Sparkle.

And the consequences of his actions.

“Twilight, get out here already! I have stuff to do.”

Twilight peered out the window of her cottage and smiled as she saw Rainbow Dash awkwardly shaking her hoof. A yawn forced itself out of her muzzle, but that’s something she had grown accustomed to after what felt like a month without sleep. She didn’t mind though, not when she got to step out into her garden and feel a warmth grow in her chest. “Rainbow, just ask him to let go.”

Rainbow glared at Twilight for moment while lifting her hoof another inch or so, allowing the black vines around her hoof to show above the grass in the garden. “You don’t think I haven’t tried that?”

“Maybe he just takes after you a bit?” Twilight chuckled slightly as she slowly walked towards the patch of ground where the grass had flattened out. Tentla was still so small, only having hatched from his seed a month ago. Ever since, Twilight had made sure to have routine visitors from around Ponyville play come to the house. While at first the plant monster had shown signs of fear at the movement, it had obviously abandoned those notions by now. “You should be happy. He doesn’t cling to many ponies like that.”

Rainbow huffed out a large steam cloud as she looked Twilight right in the eyes. “Look, normally I would love an excuse to put off work, but you know I’m not good around your kid, especially when he gets clingy.”

Twilight nodded as she extended a hoof towards her little one. “I know Rainbow. I was simply trying to have some fun. However, Tentla, she is right too. You need to come off.”

At first, Rainbow winced as the vines only got tighter, before Twilight gently rubbed the beast’s core, and the grip loosened. Soon, the vines were surrounding Twilight’s hoof, and the proud mother nuzzled against one of them. Rainbow mimicked a gagging motion, before saluting Twilight as she started her way up. “I still don’t know how you put up with it, but it is pretty cute while you do it.”

Twilight laid down in the grass, smiling at the sky as she felt her little one’s grip slowly wrap along her forehoof. Looking down at the one she knew would one day protect all she cared for, even if it put that which she now loved as much as herself in danger, blossomed a joy she had a hard time describing within her chest. Instead, she merely did what she did every day, and gently pecked Tentla’s core, before whispering, “I know you’ll do good, just like your dad. You’re too amazing not to.”

And as always, a small chirp escaped the monster as his vines coiled tighter on his mom, and his core grew warmer.