Chapters What about that Cute Mark!?
"No Sweetie Belle thats to girly!" stated a bored Scootaloo. "We need something that will look like a cool cutie mark, your idea of having a tea party cutie mark is, well... No offence Sweetie but.. Boring.." Sweetie just glared at Scootaloo and thought, What!? Why would Scoots say that? I think that it would be an absolutely lovely cutie mark! UGH! Snap out of it Sweetie Belle! You are starting to act like Rarity! "Oh come on yaw, can't we just agree!" Said an eager Applebloom. "Yeah you're right Applebloom, we should just find a subject that we can all agree on." Scootaloo replied. Sweetie Belle just sat in the corner still annoyed by the remark she had heard Scootaloo say. Scootaloo just stared at Sweetie. "Come on Sweetie Belle! Don't be mad at me." Sweetie Belle just glared at her with piercing eyes. "Um. Okay i'll just leave you alone then.."
The crusaders threw out many more ideas. "Bowling!" "Ping Pong" "Baking" " "Knitting!" "Kite flying!" Then Scootaloo said she had a very perfect idea. "Hey guys! Come over here so can tell you something!" A still upset Sweetie Belle and a exited Applebloom trotted on over to Scootaloo. "Alright guys, everypont except for us has their cutie mark! But this idea may get us a cutie mark!" Applebloom and Sweetie Belle waited amxiously for Scootaloo to continue talking. Scootaloo then started to speak in a whisper, "When I was trotting around town yestrday I say Rainbow Dash, and I ran up to her but she flew off the minute she saw m.." Scoots was cut off by Applebloom. " Aw shucks Scoots wha would Rainbow do dat?" A upset Scootaloo replied "Let me finish! Anyway, I guess Rainbow didn't notice that she left a Rainbow trail behind her, I followed the rainbow to a really cool place. She didn't see me at all but I saw her meet up with a stallion. And then well I saw that they well.." Scootaloo went into a huddle and whispered in their ears.
"EWW!" Screamed Sweetie Belle trying to comprehend what she just heard. "Were dey wrestlin'?" Asked a curious Applebloom. "Is that even LEGAL?" They said simotaneously. Scootaloo just shrugged and said "If Rainbow can do it why can't we? But who in Equestria would we do it with?" They all started throwing out suggestions. "Big Macintosh!" "Spike!" "Featherweight!" Then suddenly a lightbulb flashed. This person would be perfect, they would do anything they were told. Scootaloo had a wide smirk go across her face as she said the last idea they would need. "Pipsqueak." Applebloom was the first to speak "Aw Yah! Pipsqueak wud be purfect!" Sweetie Belle then followed Applebloom's statement " Agreed! now crusaders lets go! We got a stallion to track down and.." Hey Scoots what was that word again? Scootaloo was suprised, apparently Sweeties anger was gone. "Uh, fuck Sweetie, the word was fuck." "Yeah! We got a Pipsqueak to fuck!"
"Hey hold on there!" said Applebloom. "We dont even know where he is, we should ask around town!" Both of the other fillies just stared at her. "Ughhh! FINE!" Said Scootaloo. "Oh my Celestia, you got me all pumped up for nothing!" Applebloom replied to the two impatient fillies. "Not for nothing, we WILL get a cutie mark!"
The ponies then thought of places where he would be. They made a map of all of the places in Ponyville. They also made a list of people who would be reliable enough to trust to give them valid information. "Pinkie Pie?" one of the fillys asked "No way! She is cra to the zy!" "Hmm, Rarity?" "No way. Rarity would never help us." Then for once Applebloom was the one to throw out a great idea. "Twilight Sparkle!" All of the fillies cheered and then rushed out of their clubhouse. They have some searching to do, and a stallion to fuck!
AUTHORS NOTE : Was this rushed? Yes a lot. It is my first story, well ever. I recently became a brony and Im a huge fan of FIM. And idk why But i have gotten fascinated in Fics. MLD, Cupcakes, and other stories. I will probably edit this in the future to make it longer. But for now just give me some CC. Im okay with thumbs downs. Just tell me what I need to edit. AND PLEASE DONT SAY IT WAS BAD BECAUSE IT WAS RUSHED. I AM ALREADY AWARE!
What about that Cute Mark!?
"Hey Scoots did you see him yet" Asked Sweetie. "Nope not yet, but i'm sure we can find him we just need to look harder." The CMC kept walking down the narrow street, listening to the crowded people. The rocky road was aching their feet. They have been searching for hours. Well actually, thats only according to Sweetie Belle, to be exact its been about 6 minutes. "Hey yaw! I see Twilight Sparkle!" Applebloom then ran off to the intelligent unicorn. Following her Scootaloo and Sweetie Bellle.
"Oh hey you guys." Said a busy Twilight. "Hey Twilight, whatcha readin?" Asked all three fillies. "Oh it's just a book about Equestria. So how's everypony doing?" "Well, My hooves hurt and this weather is killing me. I think we shou..." Sweeties nagging was stopped by Scoots hoof. "Anyway Twilight, Have you seen Pipsqueak anywhere?" All of the fillies waited anxiously for an answer. Twilight thought for a minute and was about to answer but just then Spike ran up to Twilight and gave her a letter. "Hey guys, Twilight Celestia sent this to you!" "Oh my what does it say?" Twilight began to read it outloud.
Do not tell them were Pipsqueak is. For they are only kids. Cutie Marks arent earned this way And this may not be the day Let them know they are confused. And that this activity will change their mood. Twilight dont worry what this is about Just do what I say Have a nice day.
A puzzled Twilight just started at the letter and back at the CMC. "Uhm guys?" But to her suprise they were gone, "I HUFF think we should go ask Rainbow Dash! PUFF " The fillies came to a stop when they saw they were no longer in Twilights vision. "Aww yaw, dat was a close one!" Said an exhausted Applebloom. "Agreed!" Said both Sweetie and Scoots. After they were all rested up they decided to go search for Rainbow Dash.
After 10 minutes surpisingly they were able to find her. She was with Fluttershy resting on a cloud watchign over Ponyville.
They passed many ponies on the way. "Oh Hai you guys!!!" Said Pinkie but the crusaders kept running. "Oh Okay!! Guess you're busy! If your hungry come back! And please don't offer me none! I heead a big breakfast!" Said the goofy pony skipping back into the Sugarcube corner. The fillies ran as fast as they could, trying to avoid people along the way. But then they passed Applejack. "Hey yall!" she said but got angry when they ran right past. "All naw yaw din't!" Said Applejack and before they knew it they were all tied up. "So yaw why did you just ignore me?" " Sorry sis we were racin! Ah din't know you said anythin, honest!" Applejack looked into Appleblooms big sad eyes. "Aw shucks, Im sorry guuys. you can get back to you're race." AJ untied them and then they started to run again. "Almost Huff there!" Said Sweetie Belle. And they passed many ponies they knew, but didnt bother to talk to any of them. Finally they arrived his house. It was not very familiar. They knocked on the door and heard Ding Dong! They waited until somebody opened the door, it was Pipsqueak and Featherweight. "Hey yaw can we play with you?" "Sure cmon' in!"
The house looked nice. Many pictures were on the walls, and it smelled like pancakes. The CMC asked what game they were playing. They replied "Pirates!" Scootaloo asked something different, "I know a game, but I wass talk to the girls first" Then she trotted over to the rest of them. "Okay, Ill get Featherweight, you guys can play rock paper scissors for Pip. Okay" They all agreed and then the fun started.
Authors Note - SOME OF CHPTER THREE WILL CONAIN SCENES THAT ARE FROM ANOTHER FIC. THE FIC IS BY YOUR ANTAGONIST. ITS A SCENE FROM FEATHERWEIGHT AND SCOOTALOO. IT SNOT A COMPLETE COPY AT ALL. BUT IT IS SIMILAR.
What about that Cute Mark!?
"Hey uhh, do you mind if I see you're camera?" A very nervous Featherweight just stood nervous. "Uhm.. okay, I guess?" And he handed over the camera. "Wow you are amazing at photos!" "Yeah.. thanks...." Scootaloo had him in the palm of her hoof.
"Hey.. Wanna play a game?" The stallion was nervous he knew he had a crushon her but he didn't know if he would crack under pressure of playing game with her. Maybe he could pass it off like he didnt like her. But this was a dream come true Maybe she liked him also. All he could do was guess. He was too nervous to speak, so he just nodded his head in agreement. "Great, can you show me you're bedroom?" He was still to nervous to speak or even look at her. He just shook his head yes and walked into his room. "Now hop up on the bed." He did what he was told it was like he was in a trance and she was his master. He felt like a puppet on strings. "Now just let me do the work." Scoot said with a sinister smile on her face. She hopped up onto the bed. And then something Feather was dreaming he could do all his life happened. He was embraced in a kiss. He felt like he was the king of Equestria. Nothing could be better then this, or so he though.
Their tounges touched. And when they broke apart a string of saliva still held. It was the best thing that ever happened to Feather. Then Scootaloo kissed him from his mouth all the way down. His neck, his chest, his stomach, and then the main course. She grabbed his halfway erected penis and did what she saw Rainbow do, move the skin up and down the base up to the head. She was also very shocked by it's size. It was big, it seemed to be 5 inches, and it was not even fully erect!
She went down and did the same thing with her mouth. The pleasure Feather was getting was unstopable. It was amazing. "Uh! Oh no! Scoot Im gonna. IM GONNA." It was too late, the salty cum flew into Scoots mouth. She thought its be nasty, but it tasted pretty tolerable. She then embraced him into another kiss, swapping the cum into his mouth then hers so they could share the sensation, she finally swallowed it.
"Its not over yet!" She said with a smile, she then had him lay on his back, with his 6 inch penis sticking straight up. She then did exactly what she saw Rainbow do. She went to put it in all the way but then felt a terrible pain. She yelped in agony. And blood dripped from her vagina. Her clit was bloody and wet. Well no way I can let him lick it like Rainbow did.. She thought. After this the feeling of his penis in her and the warmth she was overcome with pleasure in her first climax. She wished it would never end. "im gonna blow!" He yelled then shot into her again. It felt good.
After this was over they just sat there. Her vag was bloody and cum was dripping out. But it felt good. Feather hugged Scoot. "Thanks Scoot" He said. Scoot looked on her rear, "No cutie mark, dang." But she didn't care anymore. "Hey Feather," "Yeah Scoot?" "Lets play this again sometime"
What about that Cute Mark!?
"Scissors beats paper, I win!" said an victorious Sweetie Belle. " All shucks, awkay Sweetie Belle." Applebloom just waited as she saw Feather and Scoot walk into the room soaking wet. "Did yall get a shower or somethin, youre the wettest ponies in Equestria!" Scoot and Feather just now noticed that tey were, indeed covered in each-others fluids.
"Anyway Applebloom I gotta' tell you somethin'." said Scootaloo who got into a huddle with Applebloom. She explained what to do, and how great it felt. The penis throbbing in her, the sticky white stuff, the amazing taste. But then told her about the blood. "I don't know what happened one second everything was amazing the next I felt a very bad pain that only lasted for a little while." Applebloom was giggling at how fun it sounded. " Aw Scoots, I can't wait. How big was his.. Manly parts?" Scootaloo then went to explain how his penis was actually suprising quite large. So big that she almost choked. "Wow, now ah cant wait! Ah wonda' how Sweetie Belle is doin."
"Alright my loyal pirate, I have something to tell you." Pipsqueak looked up at her with his tiny eyes. "We are hunting for the treasure, well I am. And guess what? You already have it!" Pipsqueak looked up at her completely confused. But then he knew what she meant because at that minute she tackled him onto the bed, "But captain, how do y.." He was over come with an amazing amount of pleasure as he saw Sweetie Bell moving her tounge around the erect penis. She was amazing at doing this. Each second that passed was one to me remembered. She would deep throat him, suck him off, and even slurp up the precum.
And finally he was about to shoot. Sweetie Belle knew that she didn't want to have the cum in her mouth, so she instantly stopped. He was confused, it had all happened so fast. One second they were playing now this. This was happening way to fast, and how did she know what to do, Probably that slutty ass sister of hers, Rarity Pip thought, but really how was Sweetie so talented at this, maybe she could earn her cutie mark like this.
After thinking Pip was suprisingly embrace din a warm kiss. Pip put his arms around Sweetie, even though it was happening so fast, he thought he would have this feeling forever. This amazing feeling that he wished would last forever. But then he experienced something much better.
Sweetie Belle told him that he should put that, in there. So he did, and he thrusted into her as hard as he could, as fast as he could. Sweetie was overcome with pleasure. She just wanted him to cum in her. So she would tell him. "Harder... FASTER!" "Yes captain, YES CAPTAIN!" And finally he shot his load. It filled up her pussy as much as it could take. Then Sweetie had another dubious idea.
"Let me sit on you're face." Pipsqueak didn't know what would happen, but he knew he should just obey her every word. She sat on his face, and pushed the cum onto him, giving him his first cream pie.
After that was over they just stood there. Pipsqueak in shock and Sweetie looking for her cutie mark. She was suprised when nothing was there, she thought she did so good! Pipsqueak jus twatched her as she walked out of the bedroom. Just as she was about to close the door she turned around and said with a smile, remembering one of her sisters best friends quotes. "Ehh, I've seen better." and with those words the doors slammed and she walked away to meet her other friends who were waiting for her in the room.
Sweetie Belle explained how it wasent THAT good, and that shes seen better. But she would do it again with somepony else.
What about that Cute Mark!?
Applebloom was very exited, but then she got afraid that she didn't wanna' go through with it. Even though it ounded like fun she was to scared. So instead she just told the other that she would meet them at the clubhouse after she went and ate dinner. The others agreed and they all trotted back home.
Instead of going to dinner Applebloom wrote in her diary
Dear Diary, I am scared that my "fucking" would be as good as theres was what if the stallion I meet dosent like me, and he rejects me. I know that I should just be calm but really Im scared, I hope that I can probably find a good reason on why I shouldent go through with it that will make the girls understand. We are just fillys there is no reason we should be doing this. I know that one day my time will come for me to do this but I honestly dont think that that time is now. I really hope that the others will understand and not call me a chicken. Maybe I will go through with it though, but there are just a lot of things on my mind at the moment so maybe I wont fuck for a while. But mark my words I WILL fuck a stallion. It will just take some time for me to decide when Im ready. After she set down her diary she thought for a while.
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"Where is she!?!?!?" Said an extremely frusterated Sweetie Belle. "Maybe shes la.." She was cut off by a yell "HERE AH AM!" screamed Applebloom rushing into the clubhouse. "Bout time. Anyway who are you gonna' fuck?" "Well yaw, ah honestly thought itd be easiest if ah fucked, well you."
Both of the other ponys were confused. Filly on filly action, was it possible? Sweetie Belle was the first to talk. " Sorry but im not a ponybian." But Scoots was still very curious on how this could turn out. "Okay.. Ill do it." "Really! Aw shucks, thanks Scoots!" Said Applebloom who embraced Scootaloo in a hug. "Okay. Let me lead."
Scootaloo slowly mooved her hoof down to Appleblooms vag, the wetness of it was amazing. You could hear it dripping when it hit the floor. She shoved her hoof into the vag, just like a colt would do with his penis. She went faster and slower, harder and softer on command. Until she was squirted by Applebloom. "Now its my turn." Said an exited Scootaloo.
Just as Applebloom went to clop Scoots off she was stopped. "Not with that. WITH THAT." She said pointing to Appleblooms mouth. Applebloom simply caught on and got a devilish look on her face. She licked Scoots clit clean, and whenever the squirting would come Apple would lick it all up. Scoots eye srolled to the back of her head it felt amazing! And when they were done they were all so exhausted they just all went to sleep covered in fluids with smiles on their faces.
"Hehehe!" Giggled a wacky Pinkie Pie looking through the clubhouse window. "Ever since they passed me I've been onto them spying, My pinkie sences didn't fail me! hehehe!" She pulled out a clipboard. "Feather and Scootaloo lose their virginity, check! Pipsqueak loses his virginity -wink wink- check! I get to see happy ending. Check! I lose my virginity.. I DIDNT DO ALL THE CHECKS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah what about me and Dashie yesterday hehehe silly me forgot. Check!
What about that Cute Mark!?
This is my first story I have ever written online. I am a twelve year old brony. Criticism is appreciated. I do not care about how detailed it is. It is what it is. It has a good storyline and is only rushed at some parts Thanks for reading. I will do stories JUST like this featuring the CMC but one at a time. Thanks again! - .:BronyPower:.