My Little Pony: BLADE
Prologue
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A Subarashian word for "true blade".
Who ever wields that name can save the world from evil.
In the land of Subarashi, there was a war. Between the army of light, The Hikari Alliance, and the army of dark, The Konchu Demons. The Konchus are the race of insects that are very brutal and terrifying.
Shocking to the Hikari Alliance, the queen of Subarashi named Himiko Shinken was captured by the Konchu king. With that news, it's lost morality to the alliance. However, they don't give up as the royal family gives the support.
Few months later continuing the war, the Konchu king has a greed on world domination. He found another country from a evil pony who lives there. It was Equestria. So, the king made an alliance with that pony and gave his army to him along with one of his commanders.
After hearing the news, the alliance cannot let that happen. So, the royal family let the 5 sibling to let them and about 3,000 Subarashian people to sail to Equestria in order to stop them.
Back in Equestria, here is the reaction from a princess.
In the castle of Canterlot, Princess Celestia was in her throne busy creating new laws. Each and each of law she makes causing her to get a headache. She stops writing and placed the quill and the paper down.
"Jesus, these law-making really get my head hurt." Celestia groaned from the headache.
As she was about to gets some rest, Princess Luna barged in as she takes her breath.
"Luna, what's the meaning of barging in to my throne?" Celestia shouted at her younger sister.
Luna breathed, "Sister, I got some news. 2 of them it is."
"News? Tell me." Celestia called.
"Well, let's go to the first one. I got a message from Cadence at the Crystal Empire. It appears Sombra is back."
Celestia quickly becamed shocked when she heard what Luna said.
"What do you mean Sombra is back? I thought he dissappeared from the power of the Crystal Heart." Celestia stated.
Luna replied, "I know, but Cadence can sense it. She doesn't know why or how did he reawakened himself and neither do I."
"This is terrifying. If Sombra's back, then he must want revenge. I have to tell Twilight and her friends about it." Celestia said.
"Well, that's the bad news. Because, we don't know where he is." Luna stated.
"That's true. We didn't know what his new hideout is." The sun princess agreed until she realized something else. "Speaking of Sombra, you notice another news."
"Ah, right." Luna called. "Well, this one is not related to the Sombra part. So last night, one of my royal guards send me a notice that about 3,000 ponies is coming to Ponyville."
Celestia raised an eyebrow and said, "That's it? That's the shocking news? Luna, they're probably from another empire in Equestria."
"No, big sis. They're not from inside of Equestria. They're from outside of Equestria." Luna said.
"Outside...of Equestria?"
Luna nodded, "That's right. They're not Equestrian ponies. So, my royal guard stopped them and asked questions. They say that there from another country....how do you call again? Su...Suba...Su....barashi?" Luna trying to correct the word.
The Sun Princess paused for a second after hearing the word "Subarashi". It looks like she knows about it.
"Subarashi?" Celestia paused.
Luna looked at her sister and asked "Sis, is there something you know about it?"
Celestia replied, "Yes, Luna. Come. Let's talk about it secretly in the bedroom."
The two princesses walked together to the bedroom to have a lonely conversation. As they arrived in the bedroom, Luna closed the door as Celestia sits in the bed.
"So, tell me about this Subarashi country." Luna called about the country outside of Equestria.
"Of course, but I really know a few about it. It all started a year before Equestria created. There was a massive earthquake. It creates a divergent boundary splitting the land in two." Celestia said.
"So wait. If the land is split into two, how do you know about that country after Equestria was named?" Luna asked.
Celestia then told her about a little bit of her history, "A thousand years ago when I banished you to the moon, I met this wanderer who is from Subarashi. I don't know what his name but, I know what he looks like. He's a traveler that wanted to see the world. He told me all about his country. However he's not very talkative, so he made scrolls. Scrolls about Subarashi."
"He mades scrolls about them?" The moon alicorn repeated. "Then, why doesn't the scrolls became public? We never know about that land."
"There was a reason for him but, never told me why. So, he hide the scrolls anywhere in Equestria and that was the last time I see him." The sun alicorn answered.
"So, that means he made Subarashi.....forbidden?" Luna asked.
Celestia nodded, "Exactly right, my little sister. Subarashi is a land that nopony in Equestria knows."
"So if these Subarashi ponies are forbidden also, then how did they find these land?" Luna asked again.
"To tell you the truth, I really don't know. The older sister answered as she stands up from her bed. "This is serious trouble. We must find these Subarashi wanderers at all cost."
"I agree, sister." Luna called. "I'll report this in all of Equestria."
"Good, then I'll send a message to Twilight about this." Celestia said.
"Sis, do you think these Subarashi ponies are good or bad?"
"I don't know, Luna. We'll never know."
Luna then walked out from her sister's room and Celestia began to write a message to Twilight and her friends.
Meanwhile.......
In the empty grassy hills, they're about less then 3,000 foreign ponies wandering to find a home. As they keep walking, there was 5 ponies in the front who leads them.
One from the far left is a male earth pony who has a brown spiked up mane and dark yellow skin, one from the mid-left is a female pegasi pony who has cyan curly mane showing her forehead and baby blue skin, one from the far right is a male earth pony who has a dark green long-sized straight mane and green skin plus wearing a glasses, one from the mid-right is a female pegasi pony who has long straight mane that has bangs covering her left eye and light grey skin, and the one in the middle is a unicorn pony who has red straight mane with bangs going to his left and crimson skin.
"Uwa, watashitachiha aruite kita donokurai? Watashi no ashi wa ima tsukarete kite imasu." (Ugh, how long we've been walking? My legs are getting tired right now.) The brown stallion groaned.
"Anata wa, ima no aniki tsukarete wa narimasen. Watashitachiha kyūkei suru jikan ga arimasen, yaku roku-bainode, kyanpu sa rete." (You shouldn't be tired right now, Aniki. We been camp about 6 times so, there's no time to rest.) The grey mare said as she placed her hand on the brown pony.
"Mappu ni yoru to, watashitachi wa hotondo tōku Ponyville ni shite imasu." (According to the map, we're almost far to Ponyville.) The green pony called, looking at the map.
"Watashi wa Nii-sama ni dōi shimasu. Totemo tsukareta. O nīchan-san, Equestrians koko ni taizai suru watashitachi o ukeireru to omoimasu?" (I agree with Nii-sama. I'm very tired. Onii-san, do you think the Equestrians will accept us to stay here?) The cyan pony cried in exhaustion.
"Sore ni tsuite sukoshi imoto no o shinpaishinaide kudasai. Wareware wa karera ni watashitachi no riyū o setsumei suru hitsuyō ga arimasu. Watashitachi ga ikiru tame ni koko ni taizai shite inai, oboete oite kudasai. Watashitachiha Konchu o mitsukeru tame ni koko ni taizai shite imasu. Watashitachiha, otōsan kara mappu o motte imasu. Don'nani karera ga nani o watashitachi o ukeirete inai ka, inai yo baai."(Don't worry about it, little sis. We'll have to explain them our reason. Remember, we're not staying here to live. We're staying here to find the Konchu. We have the map from Dad. No matter what if they'll accept us or not.) The red pony smiled. "Nii-san ga itta yōnanode, watashitachi wa hotondo Ponyville ni shite imasu. No wa, akiramete aruki tsudzukeru wake ni wa ikimasen!"(So like Nii-san said, we're almost to Ponyville. Let's not give up and keep walking!)
All of the Subarashian cheered as their morale rised up. Their stregth and trust helped them to keep walking. What will the reaction from The Mane Six, The Princesses, and the other Equestrian ponies if they see Subarashian ponies are coming? Will they let them live in Equestria or deported back to Subarashi?
Author's Note
Hi, there. So, this is the first chapter for MLP: BLADE. In fact, this will be last chapter for the main Subarashian characters to speak their language only each other. Cause, few of the chapters will let the mane 5 speak Subarashian to their citizens and some of the chapters will let them use phrases each other. For example on the last part where the blue mare called the red stallion, Onii-san.
Anywho, this chapter shows that the 5 Subarashians are siblings. Here are the order depending the oldest (1) to youngest (5); also will put parenthesis on who's the leader.
- Yellow Pony
- Grey Pony
- Green Pony
- Red Pony (leader)
- Blue Pony
So basically, I do have some troubles on making a MLP story. I don't watch MLP sometimes which is why I put about Sombra's revival in this chapter. I got info in the wikia about his death so I trying to make something on how did Sombra is alive. And I even can't match the personas of the characters which is difficult to me.
I do sometimes made mistakes, I try to make the story fits the plot, and I make misunderstandings. So, I like to see your review and maybe I can re-edit my chapters.
Before I end this, I'll let you guys know on the next chapter. The introduction will be different and I'll be putting up an opening. Plus, I might put up the authors notes soon.
I hope you guys enjoy reading this.
