The Beginning Of A Bad Day.
Hi welcome to my first ever fimfiction.
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(p.s-the punctuation and grammar really is terrible if anyone has the time to go through and proofread for me pm me and i'll mention you in my next chapter.)
Without further ado here is
[The Strange Adventure Of A Dangerous Being]
Its body jerked, bringing itself up from the luscious green grass. A cold shiver worked its way down his spine as he stared out at the deathly quiet village. The eyes even from this distance could be felt burning a hole through his head.
He could feel the fear, curiosity and hate accompanying those eyes, and by all rights he deserved it. He would've never chosen the path he was walking if he had been of right mind at the time of his decision’s.
His mind, finally coming into focus after such a long time of being controlled by his darker side felt akin to having a veil lifted away from his eyes and a ton of weight being lifted from his back.
But with the great sense of relief that had been lifted from his mind came an even greater sense of despair that pressed down on his mind squashing it into his skull. Yes, the fear and damage he had caused the population of this village by far outweighed the benefits of being released from his rage filled dark side. It was despicable.
The memories of the children running away screaming at this strange bipedal creature that had just appeared out of nowhere covered in blood. The frightened yells of the population as he went round destroying the buildings would be forever etched in his mind, and probably theirs as well.
Standing up to face his fate a wave of gasps escaped the throats of the villages occupants. At least the one’s that weren't absolutely terrified of him.
Gasps could be heard from the ones that weren't cowering in their homes in fright, which didn't really count for much as only 6 ponies were actually standing defiantly and bravely willing to defend their village despite the horrible being they had just had to face. They were honestly extremely lucky that in his rage-filled rampage that they hadn’t been spotted or else there may have been more blood covering his shirt.
Despite all this they HAD managed to hit him and hit him they did. The strange multicolour beam alike to that of the cyan ones mane had hurt like a bitch and had seemed to wrap around his dark half and constrict it into his body letting the true owner of the body gain control. He should thank them.
Yet despite the recent aura of malevolence leaving the air, his eyes turning back from the terrifying pitch black, back to their regular dark blue and his glossy brown short hair back on his head rather than the strange glowing blood red hair that adorns him during his transformations.
All but one of the ponies (guess who) still stared at him with determination in their eyes knowing that there was a chance that the strange bipedal could still attack in a moments notice, and they had seen first hand how fast he was and Rainbow Dash didn't think even she could react in time to keep up with it.
There heartbeats raised as he stood, adrenaline still coursing through their veins they prepared to use the elements of harmony on the creature once again. What they weren't prepared for was for it to lean down picking up his coat and sword and then start walking calmly towards them with its hands raised above its head as if in a gesture of surrender.
If they had looked closer they would have also seen the small glint of a tear in its eyes and look of extreme guilt on its face.
As it got closer its speed slowed from a walk into a crawl until it stopped five or so feet in front of them lowering its arms and did something none of them really expected. It got on its knees. lowered its guilt-ridden face and spoke “I’d like to thank you for your help burying my dark self back into my body”. Its voice showed true gratitude.
Its head rose bringing its solemn dim blue eyes to meet theirs seemingly able to stare into all of their eyes in a single instance. “ I shall fix the damage and remove the fear that i have caused”. Its eyes glowed a brilliant white and all they knew what darkness.
