Author's Note

First draft, not yet finished.
just publishing this temporarily to get critiques and figuring out what to improve :P

2 Mr. Cake

Mr.Cake sees himself as a respectable colt, who cares for his wife and family greatly, and who wouldn't give them up for anything in the world.
That said, this time of year is an exception when it comes to his wife, who kept riding him to exhaustion almost non stop last year, forcing him to hide himself in random places to give his dick some time to rest.

This year needs to be different, he thinks two fillies are more than enough for him, and as such Mr.Cake finds himself at the local bar, barricaded inside, along with 4 other stallions who all wants a break this year too.

Hopefully the planks holding the door tight are gonna last, as the horde of horny mares tries breaking through the door, though most just gives up, and either waits for others to succeed in their place, or tries finding another stallion who is either more willing, or easier to get to.

Thankfully the barricade should be the only thing they need to worry about, since the bar is fully stocked with food and drinks.

After a while of just listening to the moaning mares, one of the stallions leaves his seat, and goes to one of the windows to try speaking to them.

Mr.Cake just sips his drink, and watches as the red maned white stallion starts yelling.
"Hey you! Yeah all of you! Could you please just buck off! I am getting a headache from all of your banging and moaning."

A blue coated earth pony mare sees the open window, and starts jumping up against the wall, desperately trying to get in as she angrily yells back.
"oh yeah! Well why don't you get some balls like a real stallion then, and come out here to satisfy us!"

The red maned stallion takes a moment to consider the offer, but gets pulled away from the window by a big brown coated stallion, before he does anything he would regret.

Before the brown coated stallion can close the window, a yellow bat pony with a large pink fluffy mane flies through, sending all three onto the floor, landing right in front of one of the dining tables.

She darts confused around the room, trying desperately to leaving, but ends up grabbing one of the stallions at the bar, practically screaming at him.
"You need to fuck me right now! If I get much hornier I'm going to end up hurting somepony."

As she sits on the blue coated stallions lap, dripping slowly on his balls, they all stare at him as they wait for his response.
"I am very sorry to tell you this miss, but I chose to go here this year for a rea."

He doesn't get to finish his sentence, before she bites him in the neck, and pushes him to the floor, before aggressively starting to ride him, using her wings to pull her up with each stroke, allowing her to push and pull more of his length into herself with each stroke.

The others just watches in awe, as she just pushes his full length into herself right from the start, not giving either of them a chance to getting used to each other before applying full force.

She lets go of his neck, allowing her to focus fully on riding him with all her might, only slowing down for a moment to enjoy his size, and kiss him on the cheek.
"Oh and by the way, just to make this less weird for you, my name is Fluttershy."

Mr.Cake's jaw practically hits the table, he already had a hunch it was her, but getting it confirmed, and after seeing her speed and bestial instincts in action, he can't believe that that is the same calm and collected pony, who he usually sees walk into his store, ordering carrot cupcakes every morning.

He watches in awe as the blue coated stallion moans loudly, as he fires his load into her, giving the others a good view of the liquids squirting from them both, as the mare stands upright, teasing the stallions tip before allowing him to leave her lips.

As the stallion lies pale faced on the floor, staring at the ceiling as he fires the last few shots, Flutterbat kisses his dick goodbye, before walking calmly towards the red maned white stallion.
She sits down next to him, rubbing her hind leg against his lower belly as she whispers into his ear

Mr.Cake can't hear what they are saying, but its clearly sounds good, since the stallion becomes rock hard as she speaks, and starts blushing heavily as she gently bites his ear, before rubbing her chin along his body, moving slowly towards her prey.

The bat pony kisses his shaft lovingly, as she makes her way to the tip of his throbbing member, and starts playing with his tip, biting gently down on it, and licking it passionately in a swift circular pattern.

He starts thrusting slowly forwards, as she starts taking in more of his meat, getting more eager with every inch, pushing him slowly in and out of her mouth, leaving a trail of saliva and precum on his shaft.

With every lick, and every stroke, the white coated stallion becomes more eager, and starts thrusting himself into her more aggressively.

They both try pushing more of his length into her, until the stallion snaps, and pushes himself to his feet, forcing Flutterbat to the floor as he eagerly fucks her face, holding her head with his hooves as he thrusts with all his might.

She takes in more than she can handle, but tries her best to bring him to climax faster, so she can get her meal before she runs out of air.

Within seconds, the stallion thrusts forwards with all his might, and moans loudly, but leaves Flutterbat disappointed, as a pitiful dribble of cum, barely big enough to fill her tongue, drips sadly out of his pulsating cock.

Flutterbat pushes the stallion to the floor, and growls at him.
"What the buck was that! I can't feed on this, its barely enough for a snack! Where is my meal!"

The red maned white stallion shivers as he tries his best to respond in a seductive tone.
"Maybe you just didn't work hard enough for it, how about round two?"

Everyone stares at the two ponies in complete silence, as the bat pony walks in circles around him, before placing herself over him, teasing his tip with her slit.

"so you want me to work harder huh? I have a better offer."
She flies over to the bar, and picks up the tipping bowl in her mouth, before flying back, placing it under his dong.

"how about this, I can do whatever I bucking well please with you pitiful cock, and you aren't leaving until this bowl is full, sound good?"

The stallion nods happily, seeming really pleased with himself, and leans back with his hooves behind his head, before thrusting his hips forwards, pointing his cock squarely at her lips, making kissing sounds.

"get to it then bitch, you are gonna be my cock warmer for a while if you're looking to fill a whole bowl."

She giggles at the smug stallion, before kissing his tip

"oh you have no idea, I can make you cum so hard that you will pass out."

He moans happily, as she gets to work on his shaft, licking and kissing it passionately as she moves towards his balls.
The first few drops drip into the bowl, as she starts sucking on his nuts, taking them into her mouth, and juggles them around with her tongue.

He tries to catch his breath, as he teases her by shaking his dick.

"is that all you got? You barely even got as much as before"

Flutterbat gives him an annoyed look, but then starts tugging on his nuts, watching his rod twitch as he moans happily again, before she moves on to licking the root of his cock slowly.

As she moves further up his shaft, towards his tip, he tries to pull back enough to push his tip into her mouth, but gets rejected.
He tries it a couple of times, getting angrier with each rejection.

"come on now, you said you wanted cum, so why don't you please me like a real bitch would? Just suck my dick whore!"

That's it, you can say a lot to an eager mare, but calling her a whore whilst providing such a pitiful meal is just not acceptable.
She stands back up, and stares at him with death in her eyes.

"You want me to suck you off? fine! just know that you asked for this! You big meanie!"

She pounces onto his cock, swallowing as much of him as she can reasonably take in, letting him aggressively fuck her face, as she desperately tries to bring him closer to climax.

He looks at her smugly, as he watches her go at it, moaning and thrusting eagerly as he enjoys his cock warmer.

Just as he is about to cum, she pulls him out of her throat, and stands up, looking him in the eyes as he practically begs her to finish.

"As I said, you asked for this, it shouldn't hurt too much."

Everyone in the room covers their dongs with their hooves, as Flutterbat digs into his shaft with her fangs, sucking eagerly, as she watches her prey on the floor, pale faced, and in a completely euphoric state, as she swallows as much cum as she can, watching the rest spurting into the bowl, filling it completely, even managing to suck enough out to make a puddle around it.

As she pulls her fangs back, licking his tip clean to finish her meal, she watches him twitch on the floor, pale faced and staring at the ceiling, panting slowly.

She takes a sip from the bowl, and swallows it with a smile on her face, before looking down at the stallion awaiting approval.

"What a disappointing meal, I'm going to need a better one"

She pours the contents of the bowl onto the red maned stallions belly, giggling happily as she watches the contents spread around his body, and onto the floor.

"Now if you hadn't been such a meanie, I would have cleaned that up for you"

The bowl slips off her hoof, and lands topside up on his chest, before she stands back up, pointing at Mr.Cake.
"You're next!"