The story of BerryCup

by BronyBoy339

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Sad
Length: 926

Berrycup was a pony who liked to impress otherponies. But one day he took it too far, and it cost him.

BerryCup was a pony who liked to impress otherponies. But one day he took it too far and and it cost him. He lost everything. His job, his home, and his sweet marefriend whom he loved more than anything else in all of equestria.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-31 17:26:55 UTC

Chapter 1.0

     It all started when BerryCup, a normal pony, was turned into a unicorn by who knows what magic. He was shunned by his friends for a bit, them thinking that he's a weird pony turning earth to unicorn.

     But one pony came along. A mare by the name of Fluttershy. She was brave enough to walk up to him.

     "I um... like your horn..." she said stammering. "It looks really nice..."

     "Thanks," BerryCup said encouraged that somebody, especially a shy mare doesn't mind the change. "Your wings are pretty cool too."

     At that conversation, a beautiful relationship began to form.

     But now, here comes the troubling part. BerryCup was showing off to Discord and Fluttershy when Pinkiepie burst in squealing like an excited pig. "GUYS GUYS" Pinkie yells. "THE ANNUAL SHOW-OFFATHON IS HERE! EEEEEK!!"

     "The what?" BerryCup, Fluttershy and Discord said in unison.

     "The show-offathon, duh," said Pinkiepie. "The most amazing ponies in all of equestria will  be there! Even Applejack's friend Ra-Raw will be there! It's going to be SO amazing!

     So, here's my chance to show off?  BerryCup thought to himself. Ill make this worth the while, I swear it!

     "Umm... Berry? Are you okay?" Asked Fluttershy.

     "Huh? Oh, yeah I'm fine." BerryCup said. "Just dozed off, I guess." BerryCup then smiled at Fluttershy, which then she started to blush.

     "Hey Fluttershy," Discord said. "Didn't you want to talk to BerryCup about something?"

     "Oh yeah," she said. "Lets go talk... in private..."

      "Umm... okay?" BerryCup said.

     They enter Fluttershy's room, and she locks the door. "Umm... BerryCup? Can you use some soundproof magic?"

     "Okay, if this anything to do with se-" BerryCup got cut off by Fluttershy.

     "No! Of course not!"

     "Just wanted to be on the safe side." BerryCup cast a spell so no one outside the room (except maybe Discord) could hear what they were talking about. "So what is it it Fluttershy?"

     "I was hoping umm... how do I put this... we could be... more than friends?"

     BerryCup's expression grew surprised. "I thought you were dating Discord!"

     "He's been... what's a nice word for bitch?"

     "A female dog?"

     "Yes that's it. He's been a female dog to me lately" Fluttershy responded.

     "Hmm... won't he be broken hearted if you told him?"

     "No he already knew. So back to the topic. If you... say no, that's fine." Fluttershy said assuming the worst.

     "Yes."

     "Ok then I guess ill leave... What?!" Fluttershy said suprised.

     "Well... I've been meaning to ask the same thing. I never suspected you'd ask me. I mean, you've been shy all your life. No offense! Not that that's bad!"

     "No no, I understand. It's fine. Lets just tell nopony else for awhile."

     "Ok! I've only been in one other relationship, and that turned out cruddy. Awe horsefeathers,, we're  gonna be late!" BerryCup swung open the door, only to be met with the excited face of Pinkiepie and the impatient face of Discord.

     "Are you done yet 'having fun'?" Discord asked.

     "Discord! How dare you! THIS is why we broke up!" Fluttershy yelled with a big scowl on her face.

     "Oh, just announce it to the world why don't you! Fine, let me tell you what you and BerryCup want to do?"

     "You wouldn't dare!" Said Fluttershy as her scowl grew deeper. BerryCup was confused. He knew Fluttershy liked him but what did she want to do?

     "Oh but I would dear Fluttershy. Fluttershy and BerryCup want to fu-" Discord was cut off as Fluttershy landed a deep ass kick to him in the face.

     "OW! What the fuck Fluttershy how dare you!"

     "Oh I dare, YOU SON OF A BITCH! BerryCup we're leaving!"

     BerryCup's face was already shocked from hearing Fluttershy curse. But when she kicked Discord, that was... Amazing.

     "BerryCup? Are you okay?" Fluttershy asked in her usual calm tone.

     "Umm... yeah, I guess. Where are we going?" BerryCup asked, still shocked.

     "We're going to go practice for the show-offathon, I guess..."

     "Okay! Let's go!" BerryCup said.

     "Bye guys!" Pinkiepie shouted after them.

Chapter 0: The Prologue

     Now he had done it. All of his friends had abandoned him. Sigh. If only he hadn't hurt her so bad. He regretted every minute.

     BerryCup is my name. I tried to do everything right. I tried to impress her. The only mare in the world he loved more than anything. But he hurt her. He hurt her so, so, bad. Fluttershy.

     He sighed again. He didn't mean to. He really didn't. But he had. And because of that, even her friends started ignoring him. Fluttershy even kicked him out. He decided to go back to his apartment. I mean, he had nothing else to do. But what came next was worse. He became infamous throughout Ponyville.

     He lost everything. His house, his money, everything. His best friend, BerryPunch, even shunned him. Everything was gone. No matter how hard he tried, no matter how amount of apologising he did, Fluttershy still ignored him.

     Oh Celestia, why? Why the fuck did I do that? Just to impress her? What the hell was I thinking? He thought. What was it he did? Well, this is going to be a looong story. Here it goes, straight from the beginning of the relationship.

     To be continued...