Helping a Friend Out

Sorry everyone for not being on lately, but this thing called life got real obnoxious and demanded I actually do thing off line for quite a long time *shudder*. Also, I did happen to forget where I was taking this story so I'm going to try to figure it out.

BUT until I figure that out I'm going to show just how sorry I am by answering a few of your guy's questions.

I will also answer a few of the comments on previous chapters! I will be replying in this color! So, without further ado~

Eshiraith Malyra said : I always like twilmac story,
Me too.

Keriwi1 said : I want more of it, who is with me? Nice ship and story so far.
Don't worry, I will definitely be writing more. Thank you!

Arcadunato said : Aaaaaand funny.
Thank you. I thought the story was getting a bit to serious.

dracone said : "I don’t know if I want to him about it or not."
I believe you missed a word there, I think you meant to say "if I want to tell him or not."
Yeah... I was kinda rushing through writing the second chapter, so I did miss a few things.

Wally1988 said : Twilight and Big Mac. I have read a lot of stories and I have seen pictures and videos of other ponies being good couples and funny couples but these two I have to say this is perfect regionality can't wait to see what happens
Thanks. I was hoping I did somewhat well with these two so far.

Darkestar said : It's....interesting. I like where it's headed but seems to be rushed. Try to slow things down a bit. Flesh out the characters and how they fit into your story. Add more problems for them to solve. Things of that nature. Another thing that I noticed with the second chapter something that Applejack says that she wouldn't normally say. The line in question is this one....
"“Twiligh’. WHY WOULD YA DO THAT WITH MA BRO?!” Applejack hollered."
In any story that I've read on Fimfiction, I have never seen a story that featured the Mane Six or just Applejack and her family, use "Bro". I'm sorry, but when I read that line, Applejack was instantly transported from Sweet Apple Acres to the beaches in California. She would have used the full word.
Other than that one little line and the rushed feeling, it's a pretty good concept. Keep up the hard work and I can't wait to see what more you come up with.
I understand that the story was rushed, but as I said before I was in a rush to write the second chapter. So, yes I did make quite a few mistakes. I will take everything that you have said in this comment and keep it in mind for future reference, just like I will with the other comments others have posted. I also understand that she probably would have used the word "brother" instead of "bro" I hadn't seen the episode with Big Mac in quite a while though, so I will admit that I did in fact panic when trying to remember what she would have said in this situation. Thank you for reminding me on the correct word she would have used. Thank you.

ham con said : Okay, I do love that last line.
Lol. Me too.

So that all for right now everyone! Can't wait to read, and hopefully answer, all of your questions! See ya!