The Fallen Angel

by theredbregade

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Romance, Sex, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Twilight Sparkle, Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 15733

A human writer named John Draken soon disoveres what its like to be an angel, a god, and a king.

After being zapped by his laptop a human writer falls into Equestria only to gain the powers of the character in his latest story. He is soon taken in by the main six and help him adjust to equestrian society, maybe he will find love (wink wink). All may seem fine for our protagonist but that may change as more and more of his past comes back to haunt him.

(Hey guys this is my first story and clopfic so comment what I should correct)

WARNING : contains clop, lots of cursing, and at some points a fuck ton of gore

Published 2016-02-06 01:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2022-06-30 12:02:15 UTC

Prologue, and introductions

(P.O.V: Drake)

Hello my name is John Draken but most people call my Drake, I am 24 years old and I am a famous writer. I have jet black hair and green eyes. My books sell for a fuck ton of money that I kept in the bank. Unlike the other rich snobs I didn't live in a giant mansion or pent house, I lived a nice life in the suburbs. I just finished the latest chapter call the 'Angel of Equestria' and Fuck yea I'm a brony, but I write MLP stories on the internet, and poste them on fanfiction sites. The story I'm writing is call The Fallen Angel wich is a crossover with my best selling book called Rise of The Angel King. The main character is a man given the powers of a god from a dying angel only to become the Angel king. He wore white armored robes and always had his hood up, and under his hood he had white eyes that glowed softly and had blond hair. He soon grew a pair of majestic white wings made of pure light witch made him ten times faster the speed of sound. He protected the innocent from the notorious shadow demons that come from the darkest parts of the Nether

He was my favorite character from my books and the center of attention when the book is published, heck he even had his own movie. I exit my study and enter my bathroom to take a quick shower hoping it would keep me awake to finish writing the next chapter only to almost fall asleep in the tub. 'Better get some sleep' I thought to myself as I turned the shower off and dried my self off. I hardly sleep because of the recent demand in books and fanfictions so I try to finish the book as fast as possible in order to get my sleep schedule back in order. I sluggishly made my way to my bedroom and slipped into my pajamas. 'Maybe ill dream of new ideas for the story' I climbed into bed and soon drift off into the realm of dreams.

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I was awoken to the sound of wind, I open my eyes and look to the window only to find it closed "Dam must have left the window open in my study before I went to be again." I mutter under my breath. I slowly make my way to the study "What the fuck?" I muttered. the study door was open a crack and there was a purple light seeping from it. At this point I was scared and did what any other person would do. I picked up a lamp on a nearby table and made my way to the study 'This fucker is in for a surprise when I smash his face in for rooting through my study.' I thought with an evil grin. I cautiously made my way to the door, put my hand on the knob, opened the door, and! "Nothing," I sighed in relief. I looked around the room and spotted nothing peculiar, that was until I laid my eyes upon my computer. I know I turned the thing off but now it was glowing purple, FUCKING GLOWING PURPLE. "What the fuck is this shit?" I asked myself curiously I placed the lamp on the floor and made my way to the computer. I was going to press the power button, but before I could touch the dam thing It shocked me "FUCK!" I shouted aloud. Purple lightning quickly traveled up my arm and into my ear. Before I could do or say anything I fell to the floor clutching my head in pain until I finally slip into sweet, sweet unconsciousness.

Dreaming State

I grunt as I lift myself off the floor into a sitting position, my head hurt like hell but other than that I seemed fine. I observe my surrounding only to panic because I was not in my study any more. I was in space "Wait, WAIT! I CAN'T BREATH IN SPACE!!!" I panicked. I gripped my throat expecting to suffocate but surprisingly I could breath. "Hm, I must be dreaming," I said as I mentally face palm. I pinch myself hard only to wince in pain. "Ok so I'm not dreaming so were am I?" I wondered.

"Your in the Void my dear boy" said a mysterious voice. I whip my head around towards the voice and meet face to face with someone I least expected, It was the dying angel in my book. He is exactly as I wrote him to be, he wore a white robe that went all the way to his feet, had all the wrinkles as expected because he SIX THOUSAND YEARS OLD! Anyway I step back in fear as he slowly limped towards me. "You have nothing to fear my child I come with a gift," said the angel in a soft gentle voice.

When he finally made his way to me I finally speak, but it was nothing above a whisper. "How are you real?" I asked in wonder.

The retired angel king sighed "I was born in the Ather as an angel but you already know that, but what you don't know is I was born to watch over you." He said with a small smile.

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Why me? out of all the people in the world in the universe?" I asked.

"It is because you are the only one worthy to become the next angel king my child." He said with a grin.

"But why?" I asked again trying to hide my frustration. He lets out a laugh witch was soon replace by a coughing fit.

"You will learn that soon enough my child." He said weakly. His eyes glowed a bright white as he transferred all the knowledge and power of the angels into my head. "Now my child go and save the realm of Equis." He said boldly.

With one last breath he pushed me out of the dream realm into Equestria. The last thing I said to the angel before he died was "I better not fuck this up,"

Author's Note

Hey everypony it's Red hear I just wanted to let you know that this is my first chapter so feedback is accepted and half credit goes to Randomepony2003. :twilightsmile:

P.S expect longer chapters if this gets above 8 likes

Suit up and first encounter

(P.O.V: Derrick)

I groaned as I lifted my self off the forest floor and rubbed the dirt from my eyes with an armored glove "Wait what?" I look down and sure enough their were two gold gauntlets with iron gloves attached to them. "No fucking way, this is a dream!" I looked down and noticed my attire consisted of a white armored robe with a hood, gold boots, and a ruby necklace. "Wait if I'm the angel king then do I have the-" before I could check a thunderous roar rang throughout the forest. I whirl around and twelve feet away was a manticore that appeared to be really hungry. "Um hi?" was all I said before I made a mad dash away from the behemoth. "shit, shit, shit!" was all I said as the manticore chased me through what I assumed to be the Everfree forest. 'wait if I'm dressed as an angel them maybe I'm armed like one?' I felt around my back and sure enough my hand brushed across the hilt of a sword.

I draw my sword and turn on the manticore slashing at its stomach causing it to doubled over clutching its stomach as blood seeped from the wound. I show no mercy as I continued to slice and dice until it was covered in slices up and down it's body. "I'm going to tell you this once, beat it ,or ill skin you alive and make a nice pair of boots out of ya." With a whimper the manticore crawled away. When the manticore was out of sight I decided to feel around my pockets hoping their was a map or something and sure enough their was. On the map their was a place circled in red marker. The location was the castle of the two pony sisters and under the circle also in red marker the word 'armory' was written. "Oh fuck yea!" I yelled as I sprinted my way towards the castle of the two pony sisters.

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When I arrived the place appeared to be empty like no one was hear. I look at the map for clues only to find it has miraculously changed and showed the layout of the whole castle. After hours of searching I found myself I front of a large organ in the throne room that was made of black metal. I look back down at the map to see change into music notes and at the bottom there was the word 'key' I sat down at the organ and began to play a song "Piano practice don't fail me now!" I said to myself as I cracked my knuckles.

When I finished the song the whole castle shook as a golden light filled the room and the walls began to turn revealing an assortment of weapons. The weapons ranged from swords and spears, to bows and guns of various sizes. Their was even racks of armor that appeared to glisten in the gold light. I slowly make my way towards the gun rack and pull out two dessert eagles and a strange barrette 50 cal.

I check the ammo and see that that there was a bullet with an infinity sigh on the side "No way infinity ammo for guns!" I let out a fan girly scream as I hold the barrette like it was a toy I got on Christmas morning. I strap it onto my back and slip the eagles into my robes holsters. The last weapon I got was a beastly looking sword

I click a button and the blade is surrounded by a blue hue that radiated with energy. "Cool it's like a light saber." I murmur in amazement. Finally sitting next to the throne was a suit of armor that seemed so familiar.

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I let out a chuckle and slowly made my way to the armor. I quickly undress and put on the armor with ease and reattached all my weapons that surprisingly were not that heavy. " Before I leave something catches my eye It was a gold and red book that was leaning against the throne. I pick it up and read some of it's contents which surprisingly had an assortment of spells meant for master angels. After 30 minutes I managed to master telekinesis, a powerful blast of magical energy, and a magical shield. I slip the book into my armor and pull up my hood as I walk from the throne room. I was about to leave but then I heard the clip clop of hooves against the marble floor and familiar voices. "Are you sure that the earthquake came from hear Twi?" Said a familiar western voice.

"For the hundredth time Applejack yes it was" said an even more familiar purple alicorn. "Not only is this the place were the quake accrued, but I'm picking up a really powerful magical signature." I quickly jump to the ceiling and look down at the six ponies that were searching the area.

"I say darling this place has changed quite a bit hasn't it?" Rarity said in wonder as she gazed at the golden tapestries.

Using the shadows I sneak to a ledge and follow them as they walk down a corridor still investigating trying to find me. "Hey Twilight do feel like were being watched." Said a nervous Fluttershy

"Of course silly don't you see the cool looking creature above us" Said Pinkie Pie causing them all to stop dead in their tracks. My heart nearly stopped as they slowly looked up, but before they could say anything I leapt off the ledge and onto the floor in front of the six frightened mares.

"Hello main six care to explain why your snooping around my castle" I say with a smug grin.

Author's Note

Hey everypony Red again that was chapter two hope you enjoyed and don't forget to leave a comment down below :pinkiehappy:

How to make friends

P.O.V: Twilight

"Care to explain why your in my castle" Said the strange creature. It stood on two legs, had almost no hair accept on it's head, and it wore white armored robes which I could see Rarity gawking over. Finally it had an assortment of strange objects on it's back. My friends and I slowly back away except Rainbow Dash who stood her ground with a determined look.

"What the buck are you supposed to be?" She asked quite rudely I might add causing the rest of us to flinch. The creature smiled as it pulled down it's hood showing his facial features a little bit more. I look closely and noticed it had the facial features of a stallion but with ghostly white hair and glowing blue eyes, that seemed to put me at peace, and a flat muzzle unlike most stallions. After a few seconds he spoke.

"Now that's not the way to treat royalty is it?" his voice was smooth but stern. "I'm am Draken the angel king but my friends call me Drake." he said with a warm smile. "Care to introduce yourselves." Rainbow answered first

"I'm Rainbow Dash fastest flyer in Equestria!" She said with a smirk

"I'm Rarity pleasure to meet you darling, and might I say what fine attire you are wearing." The Drake seamed to blush at Rarity's complement.

"I'm Applejack proud owner of sweet apple acres, nice to meet ya sugar cube." Said Applejack with a tip of her hat and a smile.

"I'm Pinkie Pie but you can call me Pinkie" "HeydoyoulikecakesbecauseIdoohIgottagoplanyourwelcometoEquestriapartybye!" Pinkie said in his face causing him to fall over.

"PINKI!" we all shout at her

"Oh sorry Drakey!" said Pinkie with a smile still present on her face.

"It's fine" said Drake with a wave of his claw. "Hey what's your name miss?" he asked pointing towards Fluttershy who just eeped and hid behind Applejack. He slowly made his way over to her and kneeled down brushing her mane from her eyes. "Hey it's ok I just want to know your name so I can learn about you." He said with a caring voice that surprisingly seemed to calm her down.

'Wow no one has ever cracked her shell so fast before.' I thought to myself amazed.

"It's Fluttershy nice to meet you sir." she said with confidence.

"Oh that's a pretty name." Drake said with a smile. Fluttershy's face turned a deep shade of red causing Rainbow Dash to snicker. 'He seems so gentle, but what did he mean by king of the angels?' He didn't seem to be like any other species of equestria, but he has the similar traits of a monkey, or minotaur. I was so deep in thought that I failed to notice Drake wave a claw in front of me obviously trying to get my attention.

"Oh sorry my name is Princess Twilight Sparkle." I say with the upmost confidence. "If you don't mind me asking what are you doing in the castle of the royal pony sisters?" He seemed to ponder the question for a minute before answering.

"I came hear to reclaim my castle, this may come as a shock to you but I inherit this from a friend of mine that passed away not to long ago." He said with a small frown. I felt bad for making him sad but at the same time more and more curious. "I just unlocked the place to get some gear and was about to look around, until you six came along snooping." I winced when he said that.

"Sorry about that we thought that what ever caused the earthquake was going to attack Ponyvill so we came to investigate." "I hope we were not to much trouble." I asked hoping that he wasn't mad at us for technically breaking into his home. He just smiled and waved his claw dismissively.

"No harm no foul, but since your hear would you all care to accompany me for a walk around the castle this place is new to me to." He asked politely.

Rainbow Dash hoofed pumped in the air "Heck yea we would." Everyone seemed to agree with Rainbow Dash and drake seamed safe enough. Even if he were to try and turn on us I could take him down with my magic no problem. The only problem with that was I didn't know what he was capable of.

P.O.V: Drake

As we walk down the hallway the main six kept asking simple questions which I answered kindly. Although Twilight was the one asking most of the questions. I told her how I became an angel and what species I was originally. "You know not everyone can be an angel." I stop at the first door. "To become an angel you have to have good intentions, unless your an elemental angel who harnesses all elements including evil ones." I explained before opening the doors for them.

"Hey can you angels fly?" Asked Rainbow Dash curiously. Come to think about it were are my wings? I stop before we enter the room causing everyone else to stop in there tracks.

"Yea we angel can fly but we need to unlock them somehow. Some times it happens when the angel dose a good deed or is around very powerful artifacts." "We fly ten times faster than the speed of sound and our wings are made of solid light. I turn to look at the girls whose jaws literally hit the floor.

"T-Ten times f-faster then sound!" Rainbow Dash squeaked causing me to let out a chuckle.

"Yup just wait till I get my wings and ill show you what I can really do."

"Um if you don't mind me asking what are those things attached to your back?"

I didn't try to sugar coat this so I bluntly said "They are my weapons." causing them all to go dead silent. "If your thinking I'm goanna use them on you then your surly mistaking." This seemed to put them at ease a little bit.

We enter the room and surprisingly it was a giant dining hall with a long gold table, attached kitchen, and I kid you not a fucking soda machine. The windows were tinted a magnificent shade of purple and yellow and the rugs were also purple. As soon as we entered the room Rarity fainted on the spot causing all of us to burst out laughing. "You sure are luck partner tuh have such a big castle." "Twi's isn't nearly as fancy as yur's." Applejack complemented emitting a huff and eye roll from Twilight.

"Yea it's really pretty" Said Fluttershy. After Rarity woke up we all moved to the next room which turned out to be a training room. There were weights, stairs, even treadmills. At the far end of the room was a strange white room with a console in it. When It activated I read that it was a special holographic training simulator that can turn the holograms into anything. Rainbow Dash begged me to activate it for just one fight, but I told he to wait until tomorrow, she huffed in annoyance but agreed. The next room appeared to be the master bedroom complete with queen size bed, Flat screen t.v, and a wardrobe with an armor rack. Finally was a stereo with a smart phone attached to it which I happily picked up.

"What is that." twilight asked with curiosity.

"This my friend is a phone. It's purpose is to contact people or ponies from long distances but only works if that pony or person also has a phone. It also plays games, music, and has books." As soon as I said books twilight yanks the phone out of my hand and furiously tried to use my phone. She seemed to get more and more frustrated as the screen failed to move at her hoofs touch. "Sorry Twilight but it doesn't work with hard hooves, let me get that for you." I slide through the phone and pull up a book and show it to her. "Try sliding it with your nose." She gave me a quizzical look before trying it out and having it succeed. I pick up the phone much to Twilights dismay and put it in my pocket. After searching a few more awesome rooms I decide to take them to the thrown room. I walk them to the thrown room answering a few questions hear and there other than that it seemed to be a normal tour. The sun seemed to brighten the empty hallways as we made our way to the huge double doors

I open the doors to the thrown room / armory and sure enough their eyes seemed to bulge out of their heads as they see the shining walls and tapestries, and the weapons. I walk up to the thrown and I noticed there was a glistening gold and white crown with amethyst imbedded on the front. I casually slip it on and turn to the main six and strike a pose. "Who da king I'm da king." They all burst out laughing accept Fluttershy who let out a small giggle. "Anyway do you mind showing me this Ponyvill you speak of."

"Sure just one second I need to tell the princesses about this experience." Twilight magically summons a paper and quill and quickly writes the letter before magically teleporting it likely to princes Celestia. "Ok I guess were set. Lets go!"

"Wait before we go I need to check something." I quickly told them.

"Ok but hurry back darling." Said Rarity as I jog back to the master bedroom. I just remembered seeing a safe hidden behind the armor rack in my room and thought I should check it out before leaving. When I enter the room I quickly walk towards the closet an pull the armor stand out of the way. Behind it was a safe the size of a door and had a five digit combination. 'Hmmm maybe the map could help?' I pulled out the map to find it blank. I turn it around and find the word grace. I type grace into the lock and as soon as I hit the letter 'e' the door flies open to reveal a giant room easily bigger than the thrown room filled the brim with gems and bits. "HOLY SHIT I'M RICH!" I hear a few gasps and turn around to see Twilight and the others starring mouths agape at the giant room of treasure. At the center of the room their was a giant suit of armor 'I'll save that for later' I thought to myself.

"How did you get that many bits?!" The girls shouted in unison.

"I don't no." I said simply. I walked towards the armor and notice something strange sticking out of the armor's neck. It was a locket a familiar locket made of silver with a ruby on the front. I open the locket for it reveal.... my mother. The tears slowly trailed down my cheeks and I felt my knees hit the floor. The painful memories resurface even after I buried them in my work as a writer.

"DRAKE!" my friends try to call out to me but it was a lost cause as I let out the most bone chilling cry of emotional pain, grief, and loss. My mind was racing and pounding with one single thought 'Why, Why, Why!' My whole world seemed to shatter as I drift off into the empty void the last thing I saw was my six new friends dragging me off likely to Ponyvill hospital. Not that it mattered anymore because I kept those memories under lock and key for a reason. Reasons that could possibly mean the end of pony and human kind

Author's Note

Oh boy things are heating up how will Celestia react after reading Twilights interesting report, what secret is Drake trying to hide, and why is it so important. Just wait and see, just wait and see........ anyway please leave a like and comment down below and I will see you in the next chapta BYE!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Memories Under Lock and Key

(P.O.V: Draken)

Your probably wondering why I a 'god' fell to the floor crying my heart out. Well It all started back when I was a 6 I lived in a small house with my mother. I was a nice boy with a creative mind and a pure soul until THEY came.

(Flashback: 10 years ago)

It was a peaceful night in New York the lights from the city illuminating the night. Not to far away from the big city there was a big factory, but inside that factory there lived hundreds of torcher souls forced to do hard and painful labor. The leaders of said factory were cruel and brutal, and to top it off they were fucking Satanists. Every few months a new batch of slaves were brought to the facility to be either put to work or sacrificed to some 'demon king'. My mother and I just so happened to be in the latest batch of unlucky fucks that were sent to that hell hole. I clung to my mother like my life depended on it which is ironic because it was. We were both lucky that we didn't end up as sacrifices but in the end we end up suffering. My mother tried to take off as much of the work as possible but was whipped by the guards if she so much as touched me. Each day was more painful then the last, but on one dreadful morning my cell door opened to reveal a man, and two guards. My mother clung to me with all her might as the men stepped closer.

They weren't just any guards they were the executioners men. "Greetings young one my name I Jackson Cole." He said with a maniacal grin that. "My master said that there is a powerful entity in this facility. It just so happens that entity is you." My mother protectively held me to her chest.

"No you wont take my baby from me!" My mother screamed in the Jackson's face. His stupid grin seemed to grow even wider at my mothers words. He laughs maniacally seeming to enjoy our suffering.

"How cute your acting like I'm giving you a choice." He forcefully pulled me from my mothers embrace and threw me to the guards. He then proceeded to beat my mother until she was sobbing mess on the floor in a puddle of blood barely clinging to life. I quickly ripped myself from the guards grip and ran to my mother.

"Mommy pleas don't die, I need you!" I sobbed into her shoulder. She gently stroke my hair and whispered into my ear.

"It's ok baby mommy is going to a better place soon, remember that I will always love you even in death. The guards pried me from my mother as Jackson approached her knife in hand. I kicked and screamed as he held the curved blade to her neck and proceeded to slice her throat right in front of me. Her last words were almost inaudible as she gurgled on her own blood but I was certain heard three words. "I...love...you." and with that she laid there on the floor lifeless. I fall to my knees broken and alone. The man slowly and steadily made his way to me with a full blown smile.

"Now it's your turn you little shit." He pulled my arm out and put the blade to my arm causing me to yelp in pain. He continued to press down on the blade slowly cutting into my arm.

"STOP IT, STOP IT, STOOOOOOP!" With a swift motion he cut my arm clean off. I fall to the floor crying in pain one word racing through my mind. 'Why, Why, Why is he doing this?' I turn my head towards the corps of my mother and something seemed to snapped. I the corner of my vision I saw black mist leak out of my eyes. In my last moments of consciousness in a distorted voice I scream at Jackson with as much malice as I could muster "I'M GONNA RIP YOUR FUCKING HEART OUT!"

After that everything was a blur, fading in and out of consciousness I saw myself killing, no slaughtering guards one by one. I saw myself tearing there limbs off, hearing the satisfying ripping of flesh and cracking of bone, and the screams of agony as I feast on their organs. The darkness flowed though me like a river as I killed them all. In the back of my mind I heard it-no 'him' laughing as I tore those motherfuckers apart and burnt the god dam facility to the ground. I could not remember what happened after that all I remembered was waking up in a hospital bed covered in bandages that hid my scars. Sadly my arm was nothing but a stump. The doctor came in and told me I suffered from three broken bones, a concussion, and three bullet wounds to the chest, which miraculously missed my lungs.

I was discharged from the hospital a year later and was sent to my grandmothers home. In the newspaper it stated I was found by the police in a pile of blood and bodies in the ashes of the facility. The organization that ran the factory was called 'The Hells Fire' and has been kidnapping people for three years, to my dismay Jackson Coleson escaped. I swore to myself that one day when I was older that I would find him and I would kill him. (pat yourself on the back if you get the movie reference)

My grandmother was horrified after I told her about my time in the factory (Leaving out the slaughter part) and sent me to therapy. Good thing she did because I learned that I had multiple personality disorder. His name was Xana and he is hell bent on killing anyone who enrages me or reminds me of my past horrors and misdeeds. He tempts me to kill every time someone bullies or attacks me and I could barely contain him. I take medicine to keep him from trying to take over my body and cause harm. Weirdly enough in a dream I saw a weird being lock away a shadow like entity behind a big black door. Ever since that dream even if I don't take my medicine I don't hear Xana's voice in my head.

Five years later I went to high school and learned I had a unique talent in robotics and inventing new things. For my science project I made my own prosthetic arm that I use today. I looks feels like the real thing and the best part is I can control it with my central nervous system. Every few months I add or change small things to my arm. Now my arm has titanium plating, super strength, and has a built in holographic computer system that is also linked to my central nervous system.

Another year passes and I begin my career in writing and my grandmother encouraged me to publish it. After months of waiting it was finally sold and it became a best seller. After my eighteenth birthday I moved out my grandma's house and used my newly acquired riches to buy a house in the suburbs and began making more stories. While watching t.v on a boring Sunday morning I cam across the show My Little Pony. Ever since that day I became addicted to the show, making fanfictions, making comics, and even went to brony con. You probably no the rest. Now hear I am a god in a magically induced coma lying in a hospital bed. My new friends The Main Six are probably worrying about my well being.

(Present Time)

I am awoken to the sound of a heart monitor beating and the sent of sterilized utensils. *gasp* I start heaving until I finally throw up over the side of the bed. When I finally stopped puking I finally swing my legs over the side of the bed and stood up. I take slow and steady steps towards the closet to change out of the small hospital gown I currently wore. Inside the closet I found my robes and armor and crown but of course no swords or guns 'yay'. I slipped my robes on and swiftly made my way to the door. I tried to open the door only to find it locked. 'Well so much for doing this the civilized way' I raised my fist and like a piston I punch a hole just above the lock and unlocked the door myself.

"Doctor the patient is escaping!" I open the door and come face to face with a nurse with a blue mane and a nurses cap. "Doctor quickly it's trying to eat me!" She squealed. I tried to calm her down but before I could do anything I felt something sharp pierce my left shoulder. I whip my head around and notice there was a syringe with purple liquid being injected into me. At first I thought I would pass out from the sedative but weirdly enough nothing was happening. I mentally face palm as I remember that my new body was immune to poisons and sedatives. The doctor that stabbed me with the needle backed up in fear as he noticed that the syringe was not doing it's job.

"Now lets get one thing strait. I'm not gonna eat you and DO NOT try to sedate me again or I'll banish you to the moon. He looked at me quizzically when I said banish him to the moon.

"But only the princesses can banish ponies to the moon."

"This may come as a shock to you so don't freak out. My name is Draken and I am the ruler of the Ather realm." The doctor and nurse seemed to freeze at the word ruler and both began to sweat.

"So that means...I...Just stabbed....Oh Celestia." The nurse fainted on the spot. The doctor cleared his throat. "I'm sorry your majesty I meant no harm I swear." I simply wave my hand dismissively.

"No problem. Now if you don't mind can you point me to the direction of my gear and tell me why I'm hear?" He nods and leads me down the hall way. He explains that I was in a coma and was asleep for three weeks. He also explained that I had amazing healing abilities and process a huge amount of magical energy even more than Celestia herself. After a few minutes of walking past the fearful gaze of nurses and other discharged patients we arrived at a small booth. Behind the booth their was a mare with a grey main and orange coat who wore a cute snap back hat.

"Hello doc what can I do...for you? When she shifted her gaze to me her jaw literally hit the floor. How she didn't break her jaw I don't know. "Uh who are you sir?" I decided to have some fun with her.

That's your majesty you insolent whelp I could have you executed for such an insult!" I send a wink towards the doctor who seemed to get the gist of my little prank and was trying his best not to laugh.

"imsorryimsorrypleasdontkillmeididn'tmeanto-" It was at that point that the doctor and I couldn't hold it anymore. We both fell to the floor laughing our asses off while the mare at the counter looked at us confused.

"Oh my god I can't believe you actually bought that execution thing" If looks could kill then I might as well be six feet under. She looked like she was about kill me. "It's just a prank bruh get some humor."

"Yea what ever you say monkey boy."

"I wasn't kidding about the royalty part."

"Uhhhh."

"Its fine no harm done just a little harmless fun." She seemed to brighten up at my words. "Anyway what's your name cutie." She blushed furiously before finally stuttering. "W-watcher Mare. n-nice to meet you." She timidly raised a hoof for a shake which I gladly accepted. "Nice to meet you my name is Draken I hope we can be great friends."

"Sure we can, so what are you hear for?" She asked me curiously.

"If you don't mind me asking could you take me to my cubby? Because my gadgets are unique in a way." She placed a hoof to her chin pondering the question before answering.

"Uhhh sure." I follow the pony behind the counter and into a small back room. The room was not to big or small but had many cubbies filled with many objects. "So what are you looking for?"

"I'm not going to sugar coat this, they are my weapons." She went silent as I finally made my way to the a cubby that labeled unknown species. Inside I immediately found my sword still being in it's scarab, one of my dessert eagles, and my phone. "Hey were is my other things?" I asked in anger.

"What wrong, a few weapons couldn't be that bad." She tried to calm me down but failed miserably.

"Those weapons could kill a whole squad of Celestia's solar guards in seconds." Her once orange coat was now a shade of white.

"I think I saw Twilight come back hear and take a few things from your cubby." She said quickly. I bit my lip hard trying not to scream in anger but fuck it she took my favorite gun.

"TWWWWIIIIIILLLIIIGGGGHHHTTTT!"

(P.O.V: Twilight)

My ears perk up to the sound of somepony screaming in rage. 'Must be nothing' I thought to myself as I continued to disassemble the weird looking metal weapons. Oh how wrong I was.

Author's Note

Hello everypony it me again hope you enjoyed the chapter. I just want to let you know that if I get any new followers any at all I plan on doing a Fallout in Equestria related story. (YAY!!!)

Anyway seya later :pinkiehappy:

Losing an eye and meeting royalty...all in one day?

(P.O.V: REALLY pissed off Drake)

Not even bothering to sighn the discharge papers I bolt from the hospital that would even challenge the speed of Rainbow Dash. 'I swear Twi if you lay a finger on Blaze (My barrett 50cal.) I'm gonna slice both your hooves off with my sword then eat them.' In a matter of minutes I was at the front door of the library. I pound my fist on the door and after a few seconds of waiting I was greeted by none other then Spike.

"Uh hello you must be that new guy Twilight was talking about. Drake right?" I shook his small hand with smile.

"You got it, so anyway what's your name?" I asked dumbly. (I don't wanna freak anypony out with my knowledge.)

"Oh my name is spike. Are you by any chance looking for Twilight because if you are she is in the library basement." I nod and he led me to the basement. I asked Spike if I could talk with Twilight alone and he happily obliged, but as soon as I turn my back my happy demeanor was replace with pure rage. I open the door to the stairs and sneak down the stairs to find twilight tinkering with something on a desk. My Eyes lock onto the table and I notice there were screws and parts every were. 'What the fuck, is that?!' Trying to my best to sneak up on her I slowly walk up behind her and whisper in her ear "You know what the penalty is for stealing royal weapons" She dropped what ever she was working on and began to tremble like and earthquake. "Just want to let you know if I find my gun disassembled on that desk I wont hesitate to put the most horrifying curse on you." I growled into her ear. She visibly began to sweat and pale as I slowly move her aside to see what she was working on. "B-B-Blaze." I could only stare in horror and disgust at the disassembled weapon. It's barrel was torn apart, the trigger was on the floor, even the fucking scope was smashed. With trembling hands I gripped the infinity bullet and promptly fell to my knees screaming so loud that beings from other dimensions could hear "NOOOOOOOOOO!"

12 seconds later I pulled my hood down and my back is turned to a very terrified Twilight Sparkle. I slowly raise my hand to the desk and grab the only intact weapon available, my energy sword. "Twilight I'm gonna give you to the count of three to get as far away from hear as possible, or I will tie you down, and make your life a living hell. She seemed to get even paler as I rose to my feet. "One." I push the button on my laser sword causing it to let out a whoosh sound. "Two." Twilight charged her magic. "THREE!" She fires a powerful spell at me, which I cleave in half. The spells bounced around the basement knocking over equipment and other lab equipment. With one last bounce a rouge spell hit the table knocking one of my still intact dessert eagles off the desk. Fun fact about my guns ammunition, not only dose it regenerate bullets, but it also when it hits angels or demons it feels like someone pored lava into the wound, and not only that it stops non important limbs from regenerating. Now take a guess where the bullet landed, yup in my FUCKING EYE!

I fall to the floor screaming bloody murder while twilight stood there looking at my gushing eye socket in horror. Blood was spraying everywhere as I tried to stop the bleeding, but it was no use I feel to the floor in a growing puddle of blood quickly losing consciousness. "You...shot...me. was the last thing I said to Twilight as I finally passed out from the pain.

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(In the void)

When I awoke the first thing I noticed was the area around me was just empty space. 'Hmm so I'm in the void huh.' In the third book I wrote which was called 'King Of The Void' I remembered that I was in command of the void. "Lets light the place up a bit shall we?" With a clap of my hands the darkness was replaced with blinding light. "Ah! To bright!" I snap my fingers again and the lights dim a little. Now instead of darkness the whole area was a dessert of nothing. "Wow and to think I have all this to myself. I'm am god hear, I'm in control." There was a dark chuckle behind me.

"That's what you think." I whip my head around and came face to face with non other then the god of chaos himself.

"Discord what are you doing hear?" I asked cautiously. He grinned and summons two chairs and a table, with some tea.

"Care for some tea?" He asked. I nod and sit in the chair grabbing discords conjured tea, and took a sip. For a god of chaos he makes surprisingly good tea.

"This is some good tea." I complement. His smile only seemed to grow as he took a sip of his own tea. "So Discord what are you doing in the void? Last I checked I was the only one with access hear." He lets out a chuckle as he finished his tea.

"The void can be accessed by all beings that no the spell to get hear." I raise an eyebrow at this. "The Void was created by Star Swirl the Bearded so he could live hear for all eternity, but before he could finish the spell he was killed. "Hear the god or in this case you can create anything you heart desires." I kind of knew about that already but what the heck it was story time. "After 200 years Celestia forgot about this place because she was not chosen to rule this place."

'Hmm anything my heart desires.' With a wave of my hand the whole Dorny Park appeared around us. "So wanna go on some rides?" I asked with a smile equally as smug as Discords.

"You know it!" And with that we set off to ride 'Talon'

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(P.O.V: Twilight)

I managed to get Drake upstairs into my room and bandaged his eye unfortunately he wont be seeing from it ever again. "Oh dear I nearly killed royalty, what do I do, what do I do?!" Spike wandered into the room with a look of annoyance plastered on his face.

"TWILIGHT!" Spike screamed knocking my from my panicking. "All we need to do is write to the princesses and ask them the come down hear. Maybe they can talk things out, you no royalty to, royalty?" My ears perk up to the idea.

"Good idea Spike!" I summon my quill and paper and began to write.

Dear Princesses

I need your help! I accidently injured Drake causing him to loss an eye, I'm really afraid and I don't know what to do. I may need you assistance with calming him down.

Your forever loyal student princess, Twilight

With a belch of green smoke and flames the letter was sent to Canterlot. "I just hopes she gets hear soon, who knows how long we have Drake wakes up."

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(P.O.V: Celestia)

Another boing meeting in day court, I got a letter from Twilight a few days ago and I was quite marveled by the fact that another god -no king was sent to our dimension. I planned on seeing next week and maybe even learn more about him so I tried to get as much work done possible. I was just finishing my paper work when I got a letter from Twilight. 'Another friendship report perhaps?' After reading the first few words I froze. "Oh Faust. LUNA!" A few seconds later she teleported to my side.

"Yes Tia, is there something wrong?"

"Indeed Lulu, Twilight may have just angered a god." Luna eyebrows shot up.

"Which god Tia?" I gulped.

"The god of the mighty angel race." Luna seemed to pale at my words and visibly began to shake. "We need to get to Ponyville now before Twilight starts a war with someone we can't beat." With a nod me and Luna, along with 6 other guards Rushed to the small town to calm a really powerful, and possibly very pissed off god.

(P.O.V: Drake)

After a few hours in the void riding roller coasters I finally decide to head back to Equestria. "Ok Discord I guess i'll see you some other time, maybe I can conjure up a 6 flags."

"You got it pal." Discord shot me one more smile before I created a portal back to Equestria.

When I awoke I was greeted with the most unbearable headache I've ever had. I rubbed my head trying to sooth the pain only for my hands to come across familiar feeling of bandages. 'Oh I think I remember now. I was about to shock Twilight with my laser sword, but she fired a spell that went crazy knocking over one of my guns and.....oh fuck no.' I leapt from the bed ignoring the burning sensation in my eye and quickly made my way downstairs. When I reached the bottom step I noticed that the main 6 talking about something. I stealthily hid behind a bookshelf to eavesdrop on the conversation.

"What the buck Twilight you disassembled one of his weapons?!" Rainbow Dash scolded the purple mare.

"I wouldn't think he would mind, I mean did you see the amount of weapons in his castle?!" Twilight fired back.

"Well yer curiosity got the better of ya and what happened? Drake is upstairs with a hole in his head!" Screamed Apple Jack. I flinched at her volume.

Twilight sighed in defeat "I know, I know lets just hope he isn't one to keep a grudge." I frowned making myself visible to the rest of the girls causing them all to gasp.

"DRAKE! " All the mares screamed in unison. I flinched grasping my ears in pain trying to soothe the aching pain in my head. I was soon tackled to the ground by a certain pink pony, and butter yellow pegasus, who cried on my shoulders staining my robes in tears. "W-we were so w-worried about y-you!" Pinkie cried. Her once poofy mane was now flat and she seemed to be a darker shade of pink.

"Shhh it's ok, I'm fine now." I look to my friends to see they all had tears in there eyes tears, heck even Rainbow Dash shed some tears. "You know I should be angry at you Twi. Twilights ears folded back and she had a look of absolute regret on her face. "-But I'm willing to forgive you." Her ears perked up and she gasped in surprise along with everypony else in the room.

"But I made you loss your eye! How can you forgive me for something like that?!" I couldn't help but let out a chuckle.

"Lets just say it isn't the first time I lost a body part." I deactivate the nanotech with my neural interface ,causing the nanotech to deactivate revealing my robotic arm.

The room was dead quiet until Pinkie decided to speak up. "So are you a cypony?" Ok at that point I couldn't take it I burst out laughing. Causing her mane to re-inflate like a balloon.

"Oh god that was hilarious, but to answer your question yes I'm a cypony, even though the correct term is cyborg in my world. "The mares around the room let out oohs and ahhs as I brought up my holographic health monitor. I apparently had a few bruises and of course one missing eye. "Ok while I'm hear I guess I can answer any questions you may have, but first can you to cute mares get off please" Pinkie and Fluttershy both blush but comply. When I got to my feet I made my way over to the sofa and sat next to Pinkie and Rainbow. "Ok now were going to do this school style, in order for me to answer you question you need to raise your hoof. If you ask a question without raising your hoof I'll ignore you completely. Ok?" Everyone in the room nodded. "Ok who's first." All their hoofs shot into the air so the first pony I picked was Pinkie.

What's your favorite cake? Pinkie asked with excitement. I took me a little while to think but I finally came up with an answer.

"I guess my favorite cake is chocolate fudge." Pinkie let out a little squee and started jabbering about a party or something. Anyways I chose Rainbow next.

How did you get that arm? She asked mesmerized by the pulsing blue energy flowing through my arm.

"Well I made a few years after I lost my real arm and before you ask no, I won't tell you because it brings up to many painful memories. I can tell you the cool attachments and upgrades I got for it though." Everyone in the room nodded vigorously. "Well my arm can project images from my memories, since there is a digital chip implanted in my central nervous system." I pull up a memory of me shooting hoops in my high school's gym, causing all the pony in the room to look at it slack jawed. "I know cool right? Anyway my arm also has hidden weapons, super strength, and can detach." I give my arm a little tug and it pops off. I put it back on and look to dash. "Ok I want you to pull as hard as you can. Rainbow dash proceeded to try and pull my arm off but failed miserably after 5 minutes. I pointed to Apple Jack next because she was the most patient of the bunch.

"What do ya plan on doing about yer eye sugarcube?" It took me 2 minutes to think but I finally came up with a solution.

"Well I may just replace it, I have some old blue prints just incase something like this happens." I nod to twilight who had he hoof up the whole time while writing notes 'impressive.'

"What is your arm made of?"

"Hmm if my memory serves right it supposed to be made of a soft plastic and titanium. "

Before I could answer anymore questions I heard a rapid knocking at the door. Twilight teleported to the door and opened it to reveal non other than princess Celestia and Luna themselves. "Oh greetings princesses come on in." With a wave of her hoof they both came in along with 6 other guards came into the library. Everypony in the room bowed except me which apparently didn't sit well with the guards because they all pointed there spears at me.

"You shall bow to the princess you filthy ape." Oh my god this guy was seriously asking for but thankfully I manage to stop myself from throwing him into the sun.

"No I shall not." He put the spear to my throat which didn't phase me the slightest. I slowly walked forward impaling my neck in the process until I was looming over the terrified guard. Some of the guards vomited while others simply passed out. I gripped the long end of the spear and slowly pull it out of my throat.

"What...are...you?" The shaking guard asked. It took seconds for my throat to heal but I answered plain and simple.

"I am King Draken, lord of the Ather, King of The Void, God of the elements. At this point slowly one by one the guards, princesses, and the main 6 bowed. "You may rise." I made my way over to the princesses and raised one hand "It is an honor to meet you two." We both shook hands and hoofs and began to converse. After hours of boring talk that is not even worth mentioning the princesses finally moved to the last topic.

"What do you plan on doing in Equestria?" Celestia asked

"Well I was sent hear to protect this realm so that is what I plan to do." Both the princesses let out sighs of what seemed like relief. "Hey Celestia if you don't mind could you hire me some castle staff because my castle has many rooms that need to be filled. Celestia smiles and nods agreeing to my request.

"It has been a pleasure Draken but my sister and I must be off." I look out side and holy shit it was night!

"Ok see you later, oh and Celestia, Luna?"

"Yes?" They both replied together.

"Call me Drake, I all my friends do." Send them a wink. Causing Celestia to smile and Luna to blush. With a burst of magic they and the guards were gone. "Well I guess it's time for bed, do you mind if I stay over Twi?" Twilight nods with a tired smile. Well see you tomorrow everypony!" When the last of the main 6 left it was just me Twilight and Spike. "Well goodnight." At those words I fell on the couch passing out as my head hit the cushion.

Author's Note

Hey everypony I plan on doing some editing with a friend so bear with me hear. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the chapter. BYEEE :pinkiehappy:

Suprise Mothaf**cka

Suprise Mothaf**cka

(P.O.V: Drake)

(In the void)

I awoke in the void and as expected Discord was there waiting for me. He seemed to freeze when he saw my bandaged eye and simply asked with a grin "What did I miss?"

"Twilight thought it would be funny to mess with my gear and sure enough I was the unlucky fuck to get shot in the eye." I said between clenched teeth. 'I may not be mad at her but I'm sure as hell gonna teach her a lesson.' I thought evilly.

"What ya thinking about?" Discord asked.

"Oh nothing. Just thinking of a way to get back at Twilight." Discord grinned manically and whispered into my ear, and soon enough I also began to smile. "Discord you are a freaking genius." Discord snapped his claw and with a poof he was wearing a college professor's attire.

"Why thank you my good sir!" Soon after a whole lot of building and setting up the 'prank' we decided to kill some time by hanging out in the new 6 flags I conjured up next to Dorny Park.

"So what shall we ride first?" I ask with a friendly smile, and at the same time me and discord shout

"KKKKKKKKKIIIIIIINNNNNGGGGDOOOMEEEEE COOOOOOOOMMMMEEEEE!!!!"

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(Equestria)

I awoke in reality with a start. I rubbed my eye only to be greeted with the most painful headache a man could wish for. "FUUUUCK!" I screamed as I gripped my head in pain. Twilight must have been awake to because she was on me in a instant, with a look of worry plastered on her face.

"Oh Celestia! Drake are you ok?!"

"No I just love screaming in pain in the morning." I said with obvious sarcasm. Twilight's horn glowed and I felt a warm tingly sensation in the back of my head.

"There. That should relieve any pain you my have this morning." I thank Twilight and proceed to stretch causing my bones to creak and pop. "Anyways just wanted to let you know that breakfast is ready." I nodded with a smile and followed her into the kitchen. When I got to the table I was greeted by a giant stack of pancakes. My mouth was watering and my mind seemed to be in a haze.

"Paaaancaaaaaakkkeeeeesss." I said with a half lidded eyes. Not many people know this but I have an extreme addiction, yes addiction to pancakes. Before Twilight could react to my weird look I already gulped down 2 pancakes. I continued to shovel down the pancakes and at one point I saw spike come into the room only to walk out muttering under his breath.

"I'll eat later." After my pancake freak out I looked over to Twilight who starred at me with her mouth agape. I let out a nervous chuckle before explaining about my 'addiction'. She then fell to the floor laughing her flank off failing to notice that I walked out of the library and over to sugarcube corner. During my walk over there I took time to search my magic book for the spell required for my revenge. I was just about to sugarcube corner when I heard the sounds of sobbing coming from a nearby ally. When I peaked my head in the black ally I noticed there were three stallions standing over a familiar looking mare.

"Oh look it's the cross eyed freak delivering her stupid mail." One of the stallions with a dumbbell cutie mark sneered at the mare causing her to whimper. The stallions continued to insult the mare when all of a sudden one of them threw a punch that nailed her in the cheek.

"Oi!" I shout from the end of the alleyway. The stallions stopped their advances on the now injured mare and looked to me with disgust.

"Eww what the buck is that thing!" I chuckle as I cracked my neck causing all the stallions to shiver uncomfortably.

"I'm gonna be your worst fucking nightmare if you don't apologies to that mare right now." They all laughed at my threat and one was dumb enough to insult me.

"And what are you gonna do about it you dumb ape!" A unicorn stallion with a football cutie mark jeered. Before any of them could do anything I used my super speed to run up and punch him with the force of a cannon, which in turn sent him flying into a brick wall with a bloody nose. The stallion with the dumbbell cutie mark decided that It was a good idea and attack me and ended up flying out of the alley into a fruit stand. The last stallion was smart enough to just run and never look back. With smirk I look down to at the mare who only seemed to look at me in wonder. Although her one eye seemed to drift off in another direction which I recognized in an instant.

"Ditzy Doo, its a pleasure to meet your acquaintance." I gripped one of her hooves and pulled her up from the dirt floor. She blushed but accepted my kind gesture.

"O-oh thank you for saving me s-sir." I smiled as I led her out of the dank dark alley into the street.

"I could never resist helping a beautiful mare in distress. Oh and call me Drake." Her face turned a nice shade of red and she began to stutter.

"Y-You think i'm-" Before she could finish her sentence a battle cry rang through out the market. I was just about to turn around when I felt a light pressure being forced on my back. I turn to Ditzy who only starred at me in horror, pointing a shaky hoof behind me. I turn my head and the same stallion brute I threw into the fruit stand was staring at me smugly. I turn my head further and noticed the hilt of a knife sticking out of my shoulder blade.

"Heh"

"Ha"

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" I fell on my stomach laughing from the hilarity of the situation. Everyone in the town looked at me as if I was insane, while Ditzy and the football jock starred at me in horror. I gripped the knife and pulled it out causing blood to poor from the slowly closing wound. I slowly stood up and pulled my hood down causing my eye to glow gold. "Didn't your momma ever tell you not to fuck with a god." I said with an evil smile. I slowly raised both of my arms and at the base of my finger tips small runes appeared and out of each small rune, yellow enchanted ribbons shot towards the poor excuse for a stallion. All 10 ribbons wrapped themselves tightly around his torso. I then slammed my fists deep into the earth and loudly announce. "I Draken the Angel King hear by curse you to remain hear in the town market for 3 weeks." and with that I dragged ditzy along to sugarcube corner, leaving the poor stallion to his much deserved fate.

"How did you do that?" Ditzy asked in wonder.

"Oh that little trick? I learnt it from my spell book." I answered pointing to my spell book. Just as we were about to enter sugarcube corner I ask Ditzy a life changing question. "Ditzy would you like to learn some magic?" She looked a me in surprise before nodding furiously.

"YES, YES, YES!" She hopped in excitement. I let out a soft chuckle and tell her to meet me in the market every Saturday. I reached for the door knob to the restaurant and pulled. Inside it was pitch black and Ditzy clung to me like an oversized teddy bear. I was about to leave when all of a sudden the lights turned on and a bunch of voices screamed in unison.

"SURPRISE!!!"

Author's Note

Yo everypony sorry for the late update. My nanna has cancer:fluttercry: so I have to help her around the house allot. I also am working on a super secret story related to Bionic 'Soldier of Equis!':rainbowdetermined2: Hope you all still like the story and good BYYYYYY!!!:pinkiehappy:

P.S Need ideas for cool super powers

P.P.S #:heart::derpytongue2:

A party to remember

After the momentary shock I smiled and then I laughed. "Hello everypony I'm happy you all are willing to take time out of your schedule to welcome me...Thank you." I bowed to everypony in the room.

"Enough talking! More PARTY!!!" Pinkie shouted from the crowd. A few minutes later music was blaring and I was helping myself to the buffet table. Although most of the food there wasn't safe for my consumption I found most of the salads delicious. There was even a giant double chocolate cake that reached the ceiling! Me and the rest of the main six danced for a bit then decided to split up and go do our own thing

"Alright everypony it's karaoke time!" Over by the music booth vinyl scratch held a microphone in her rose red aura. I felt somepony tap my shoulder. I turned my head and I came face to face with Pinkie Pie!"

"AHH! Jesus Pinkie you nearly gave me a heart attack!"

"Oh sorry Drakey! Anyway are you gonna do some karaoke?" I winced and looked away. The last time I sang was on my mothers birthday, she said I had the voice of an angel (Ironic I know). Pinkie noticed sad expression and her mane flattened. "Are you ok? did I do something wrong?" I shook my head with a sad smile.

"Oh don't mind me! I think it's just about time I dust off the old vocal cords." Pinkie didn't seem to believe me but before she could protest I was all ready at the music booth. I tapped Vinyl on the shoulder and I was met with a mouth full of hair as she turned to face me.

"Oh hey, your the new guy in town right?!" She screamed over the music.

"Yea that's me! Hey I was wondering is it possible to take music from my phone?!"

"MUSIC FROM ANOTHER WORLD?! HECK YEA DUDE!!! Her horn lit up and I felt something tugging at the back of my mind. After a few moments of waiting I felt myself being teleported on stage. The music suddenly cut off and everypony locked there gaze on my nervous form on stage. Vinyl raised the microphone up to the stage and I grabbed it in my own magic.

"Ok everypony this is my first time in awhile singing so bear with me ok?" The music kicked in and I began singing

When I finished everypony in the room stomped their hooves and cheered. The main six looked at me wide eyed, Pinkie jumped up and down with joy. I took a bow and hopped off the stage and made my way over to the corner of the room, getting complements along the way. I sat down in a nearby booth and pulled down my hood so I could take a small nap
so I could have more energy later on.

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I was just finishing my last cup of cider when I someone watching me. I looked around until my gaze came across a suspicious pony wearing a cloak. His/her hood was down so I couldn't see the face. 'Hmm. looks really shady.' The pony noticed that I was looking at him/her and quickly exited the party. Seconds later 3 other stallions exited. 'doesn't look really good, I better check it out.' I chugged the rest of my cider and made my way through the mass of partying ponies. Music blared and I noticed a few ponies face first on the ground, passed out drunk. Did I mention my new body can't get drunk easily? That's one of the downsides to being a nearly unstoppable god of peace and harmony.

Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy were having a conversation about something in one of the table booths, Rainbow dash and Apple Jack were having a drinking contest, and Rarity and Twilight were eating cake at the buffet. I even saw Derpy mingling on the dance floor. I tapped her on the shoulder and she whirled around knocking me to the ground. She gasped is surprise and tried to help me up, only to end up tripping over a displaced cup. She landed directly on top of me and I felt something soft connect with my lips, both of us froze.

'I.....am.....kissing.....Derpy.'

My mind was racing as I felt my face grow into a really large blush, I was surprisingly enjoying it! Derpy's face also became a rather bright shade of red and she scrambled to get off me. She fled the party with slightly erect wings. When I got to my feet I reached up with one hand and touched my lips. "Soft..." I shook the thoughts away and continued making my through the crowd. I felt a hoof grab my shoulder and spin me around. It was Rainbow Dash and ho boy was she drunk! She could barely stay airborne and she reeked with cider.

"I shaw a what you did." She giggled and continued "You kished my besh buddy Derpy." My eyes widened and I shoved her away from me

"N-no I didn't!" She blushed and let out another girly giggle

"Ok sho that means I can do thish." With out any warning Dash wrapped her hooves around my neck and pulled me in for a sloppy, drunken kiss. She pulled away with a blush. "mmm...you taste good, wanna give me something better to taste?" She asked lustfully. I felt one of her hooves trail down to my groin rubbing the noticeable bulge in my pants.

"Wh-what?!?" I pushed her away and used my magic to shroud myself in an invisibility cloak to escape.

Finally after 30 minutes of hiding from a horny drunk mare I finally made it to the door undetected and exited into night, to find my mysterious admirer.

Author's Note

HEY HEY HEY!!! Its me Redbregade and I'm back from the dead baby!!:pinkiehappy: After my computer decided to FUCKING DIE ON ME!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::twilightangry2: I took the time me pre write a few chapters. Sorry this one was short next ones will be longer OH and I picked the winner of the OC contest!! After much thinking and planning I finally made a decision...the winner is- *WACK*

Looks like you'll have to wait till next time readers

New friend

I pry myself from Rainbow's grip and burst out the doors of Sugarcube Corner into the the streets of Ponyville. I roll across the ground getting a few cuts and bruises. I grunt and hop onto my feet looking around for the ponies that left the party and catch a glimpse of somepony being dragged into a nearby alley. The sounds of muffled screaming of a mare soon followed, I could barely make out the words. "Sompony hel-" The mare cried before something muffled her. Curiously I follow until i'm near the alley entrance, my head peeks around the corner and what I see shocks me to the core.

In the alley 3 pony's surround a downed mare, their hoods are down so i can't see their faces. "Well, well, well. If it isn't our old pal Raincloud! We were wondering where you ran off to." said a gruff voice. The stallion pulled down his hood and the first thing I noticed was the rather big scar running down the side of his face. "If I remember correctly you owe me and the gang allot of money isn't that right boys." the other cloaked ponies nod. The stallion with the scar glared menacingly "You have what we came for?" Raincloud nods fearfully before reaching in her coat with a shaky white hoof. She pulls out a brown bag of bits from her pocket and raise for him to see, her hooves tremble even harder, her voice cracks when she speaks.

"Hear t-take it." Raincloud whimpers as she tosses the bag of money towards the supposed leader of the group.

"Hammer Hoof check the goods." He snorted. Hammer hoof let his hood down revealing a curved horn and bug like eyes, his 2 sharp fangs curved towards his bottom lip. I recognize this creature as a changeling, I'm puzzled that this changling isnt with his hive, so I assume he's an outcast.

"Yessssss Blue Blade...." The changling merc hiss. Bits fly from the bag in his sickly green aura, each one being closely examined by his buggy eyes. "She is off by 20 bits bossss." Blade stares at Raincloud with a ponderous look but it quickly turns into an evil grin.

"Well there is one way you can make up for the lost bits." Rainclouds eyes widen to the size of dinner plates and she attempts to fly away, but the stallions had her cornered. "You're not getting away this time!" He tackles and pins her to the ground while the other 2 hold down her wings. My teeth clench when I realize what they were about to do and I sure as hell wont be standing their and watching it happen. My hand grasps the handle of my pistol, I pull it from the holster and walk into the opening of the alley.

"Don't worry babe this will feel good for the both of u-" Blue Blade's sentence is cut off when he hears me shout.

"HEY FUCK FACE LAST I CHECKED RAPING IS ILLEGAL!!!" I have my gun up ready to shoot at him. The other 2 stallions let go of Raincloud and grab their nearest weapons. Hammer hoof yankes his cloak away to reveal black and red combat armor, on each one of his hooves is a black armored hoof shoe. The other stallion who I decide to call Meat Head grabbed a rusty pipe from a nearby trash can.

"What did you just call me...MONKEY?!" By this point Blade completely lost interest in Raincloud and focused on me. Under his cloak I can see the outline of a short sword. My feet dig into the ground and I smirk in my mind I come up with a plan, he obviously was set off by insults. Like my mother once said, words can be mightier than a sword.

"You need a hearing aid buddy? Or is your brain as small as your dick?" Blade draws his sword with one hoof and attaches it to his arm. The blade shimmers with magical power before turning into a midnight blue. With each movement of the blade it leaves a trail of blue and indigo, energy ripples from the weapon. 'Enchanted sword? That looks like lunar magic' My eyes widen slightly in shock. 'How did I know that?!'

"Kid I'm giving you one chance to get on your knees and beg for mercy. I may just let you let you live." Blades eye twitches and he gets into a ramming stance.

"YOU A FUCKING FUCK FACE WITH 2 FUCKING HOES AS BODYGUARDS" I taunt flipping them off with one hand. Hammer hoof charges and kicks my leg, causing it to give out. I fall on one knee giving Meat Head enough time to run up and crack the metal pipe over my head. I yelp and punch him in the stomach the force of my punch sends him flying into the wall of the alley. His eyes roll up and he passes out, Hammer hoof lets out an agitated his and turns around bucking me in the face. There is a loud crack when the metal hoof shoes connect with my jaw, it dislocates. The pain was INTEnse

"That should teach you ya freak of nature" My rather strong assailant snarks. "Rainclouds all yours boss." The 'boss' made his way towards Raincloud licking his lips lustfully.

"Now where were we?" Before he could walk any further a glowing blade impaled his hind leg pinning it to the ground. He howled in agony as the blade burns away most of his skin and bone, creating a large hole in his leg. The smell of burning flesh fills the air causing the both stallions to vomit. Using my magic I yanked the blade downwards splitting the boss's leg down the middle. He shakily turns his head towards me and his eyes widened. I was simply standing there completely unscathed, with my arms crossed and my sword floating beside me.

"Unless you want that blade through your skull I recommend that you leave now." The two goons quickly grabbed their boss and bolted from the alley way. 'Something tells me this isn't over.' Meanwhile Raincloud sits there shell shocked, trying hard to process what just happened.

(P.O.V: Raincloud)

'What the buck just happened?! The new creature in town came out of nowhere and saved my sorry flank, but why?' I wrap my wings around myself to keep the cold from brushing against my fur.

"You okay madam?" I look up and notice that the stallion is smiling kindly and offering me a helping hoo-err claw. I grabbed his claw and pulled myself off the ground.

"Yea I'm fine just a little scared no biggie, Just some old problems that came back to haunt me is all. I saw what you did to those thugs in the market today so I hoped that those guy's wouldn't have the balls to assault me while you were around." I look away avoiding the creatures gaze. The last thing I need right now is pity from some creature like him. "I saw them come into the restraint with me so I tried waiting them out. I thought that they were distracted when you sang, so I decided then and there would be a good time to disappear.

"Yea I saw you. I thought those guys were friends of yours or something" The creature rubbed the back of his neck and let out a frustrated sigh. "it really gets on my nerves that such a peaceful planet would have assholes like that." He suddenly smiled. "I can provide protection if you want, my castle is super secure." I don't know why but I blushed at his request.

"Oh I couldn't-" He cuts me off before I can finish my sentence.

"Ah-Ah-AH! I insist, officially under royal protection" I felt my heart stop. 'This....Thing....Is....Royalty?!' That is the last thing I can remember before I feel myself fall onto something soft, then....nothing

Pov: John

I reach out just in time to catch Raincloud before she hit the ground, I held her in my arms with a worried expression. "Hmmm..." I pick her up effortlessly and hold her in my arms. 'I guess it would be a good time to practice teleportation....' I dug my feet into the earth and braced myself...."For the love of god please don't teleport me into the basement" I charged myself with magic and POOF I was gone. I gotta say...I was not expecting what was on the other side. We reappeared in my room yes, but I also teleport on top of one of my new "maids" that was cleaning my room. She lets out a startled "Eep!" then leaps into the air.

"Y-your highness! Your early, how was the party?" She seemed a bit nervous but I ignored it. I was more concerned about who the hell let her into my castle. The place is a literal fortress!

"Uhhh....good? Do you mind if I ask you a few questions? She nods slightly nervous. "How the hell did you get here, who sent you, and what's your name? The maids eyes widen and I noticed a faint red tinge to her cheeks. She shuffles on her hooves obviously feeling uncomfortable of the situation.

"How silly of me I forgot about your letter!" She gives me a scroll which was wrapped up in a red ribbon. I opened it and red quietly to myself.

Dear, John

It has come to my attention that your castle has no staff so me and my sister thought it would be a nice surprise to hire them for you. There pay his being managed by the royal treasury so don't worry about the pay. My sister has also taken the liberty of hiring guards from the lunar guard to keep your castle secure. You can meet them in the the barracks with captain Night Wing who will be more then happy to show you what they are capable of. There are 6 maids, 5 cooks, 60 guards, 1 mage, and a few researchers who have come to study your new technology. If you need anything else don't afraid to write back...

Yours truly, Princess Celestia

'Wow....she did that all for me?' I smile and roll up the letter. "What is your name miss?" I ask in a kind and soothing voice so i dont come off as threatening. The mare yelps and hides behind her mane slightly scared. 'So much for not trying to startle her' I sigh internally adjusting so i'm leaning on one leg.

"S-sweeper your highness" She bows down low to the point her little maid hat fell off her head. Man i haven't seen a pony get so red especially one that already had a red coat.

"What a lovely name" I smiles down at the mare who was blushing crimson. "I hope you find your accommodations acceptable." I gave a polite bow back. Raincloud shifted in my arms but did not awaken, I smiled and placed her on my master bed. "Yo

ur free to go." I need some sleep."

"W-would you like a guest room prepared for you guest?" She pointed a hoof at Raincloud who was currently snuggling my pillows. I shook my head and the maid left the room. 'Hmm.....I guess I'll ask her about staying in the morning'....I curled up on the opposite side of the bed and fell asleep.

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I finish writing my journal and slide it under my pillow, no matter what i did i couldn't seem to SLEEP. 'Maybe I should go visit Discord in the void'.....I lay my head on the pillow and concentrate. I feel a small tingling sensation in the back of my mind, I ignore it and continue to concentrate. After a few minutes of laying on the bed, i feel my body raise from my softness of my bed. I levitate above the mattress for a few seconds before a small golden rift opens above me, my body suddenly jerks forward into the swirling portal and it's at this moment i feel the familiar sense of emptiness. When i open my I eyes I see nothing but white, I walk forwards feeling the cold hard ground. I smile when I walk up to the amusement park i created with Discord's help. "Yo Discord?! You here?!" Nothing. I begin to feel nervous as i continue to navigate the amusement park.

The farther i walk buildings become warped and twisted, like someone grabbed them and twisted them around like playdough. Something isn't right..."Discord?" I call out walking deeper into the warped amusement park. The trees i planted are glitching and phasing in and out of reality like a broken videogame. "Discord come on! T-this isn't funny man!" The air was dense and musky the faint metallic scent of blood floods my senses almost making me gag. Far off I can hear music playing, it sounds so familiar but at the same time so foreign to me.

*DING*

I fall on one knee holding my head, the pain oh god the pain is UNBEARABLE. I scream as my mind seems to rip itself apart, visions of the past, present, and future fill my mind. The blood, death, hate...all the things that would soon become reality. "MAKE IT STOOOOOOOOOOOP" Just like that the visions stop. The unbearable pain slowly resides until there is nothing more than a dull throb. My heart feels as if it leapt into my throat, my eyes are clenched shut. I slowly open my eyes and what i see fills me with horror and dread...A man, no older then me towers above my weak form. His eyes are black and drip an unknown fluid onto the now BLACK ground. I look around and see the world i built is gone. The sky above us is blood red, corpses litter the ground around us, some dismembered, others disemboweled. Mares, stallions, FILLIES, COLTS, I look up at the man only to see he is gone. "where did he-" I'm cut off by an intense pain in my stomach. I look down and stare at the claws that impaled my stomach. I gurgle on blood as it poured from my mouth, I try pulling myself off my assailant but he quickly slams me into the bloody, gorey ground.

"No matter how deep you bury me...i will always claw my way back up." The man's face contorts into a look of sick sadistic glee as he grips my spine. His cold black hands burning my insides like a cold flame. "Accept it Drake....you cant win this. GIVE IN" His claws tear out something from my body. I let out a long scream of pain as I feel it leave my body, in his cold black hands lays my heart. The organ throbs and beats in his hand. My legs fall out from under me and I collapse at the beings feet, my and outstretched trying in vain to escape him. His foot slams slams down on my hand with a sickening CRUNCH.

"S-stop!! PLEASE!! WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME!?!?" I yell with a mix of pain and anger. The man chuckles and rest his boot on my head, the bottom of his boot is caked in blood and other viscous fluids. Using his one free hand he grabs my neck and lifts me up so were eye to eye, his words burning into my mind like a wild fire.

"Its simple. I. Want. You" He crushes my heart and I plunge into total darkness.

Falling...

Deeper and deeper I fall into the darkness....Not a speck of light to be seen...Nothing

I bolt upright in bed screaming loudly, Raincloud tumbles to the end of the bed letting out a startled yelp as she dose. "Are you okay sir?" She asks with a look of sadness and slight fear. Beads of sweat trail down my forehead, I wipe them away with a shaky hand. My throat is parched and dry like I stuffed sand in my moth and tried to swallow it. 'Another damn dream...' I think to myself. It was common for me to get nightmares like that after the "incident." The nightmares came and went when they pleased, not even my therapist could decipher them. This time they were different. They felt....real.

"Yea...i'm okay" I reply to Raincloud with a false smile, but she could see right through it.

"Bull..." You look terrible, she says bluntly with squinted eyes, those eyes...they stare deep into my soul, kinda remind me of Fluttershy when she uses 'The Stare' I shiver wiping that thought away.

"Fine...it just a nightmare..." I rub my eye before climbing out of the soft confinements of my bed. My eyes close and I yawn loudly, Raincloud blushes looking away. She plays with her hooves while I stretch.

"S-so...you brought me here?" She asks curiously. She manages to untangle herself form my bed comforter sheets and plop down on all 4 hooves. Her small wings flutter, knocking some of the feathers back into their original places.

"Yea...you passed out and I doubted that you had any place to go..." I say while slipping my shirt off. I go through my wardrobe and pick out a yellow shirt and some dress pants. 'I need to ask Rarity for some more modern clothes...' My mind drifts back to that dream...why did it feel so real? Who was that man? Was that really me?

"Thanks again sir...I owe you..." I raise a brow and look back at her.

"You don't gotta owe me anything and please...call me drake" I smile scratching behind her ears, she coos in delight as my fingers massage the skin beneath her fur. She goes limp at my touch, letting out a low moan, at this point my cheeks turn beyond red to the point I look like an apple. My hand pulls away and she lets out a small adorable whine. "S-sorry...I didn't mean to..." I look away to hide my blush. Raincloud looks up with a shy smile, her rosey red mane covering her eyes.

"I-Its ok Drake...it f-felt kinda g-good with those c-claws of yours." I chuckle, my cheeks dimming to a flustered pink. I raise my pointer finger and gently boop her muzzle with it.

"There called fingers heh." She goes crossed eyes before letting out an adorable little sneeze. I chuckle which in turn made her cheek turn a deep crimson. She seemed to get more nervous the awkward silence in the room becomes more present. Suddenly without warning both our stomachs let loose a low growl. "Wow...i'm hungry...and judging by the loudness i'm guessing you are too?" I didn't notice before I saw her ribs slightly in her white fur, almost as if she had been starving herself.

"Y-yes...some food would be nice...if you don't mind that is..." She asks timidly. With a chuckle I ruffle her hair and get off the bed. Walking over to the closet I open it and pick out a pair of jeans, a purple shirt, and a leather shoulder strap to make me look cool. I freeze when I realize somthing, I toss the leather garb back into the closet. 'Rather not have an angry Fluttershy....' I think to myself. Raincloud blushed and stared slightly as I began to strip. Looking over at her I raise a brow but put on a sly smirk.

"Like what you see?" I ask in a playful seductive tone. She yelps and looks away, her cheeks as red as her mane. With a muffled laugh I slip into my clothes.

"Let's go get you somthing to eat..."

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P.O.V: Celestia

I pace back and forth in the throne room waiting for my sister to arrive. We have much to discuss and much to prepair for. The doors burst open and Luna walks into the room, with a wave of her hoof the guards leave the room. Using magic she closed and locked the doors befor surrounding the room with a magic barrier. "Hello sister...we have much important things to discuss....please sit with me." I sit on my throne and she sits on hers.

"What is it sister...dose Drake not like his accommodations? Is his armorment not to his liking? I was sure the artifact would replicate as much as it could from his mind..." She asks with a slightly raised brow. I shake my head and in a flash of gold a black scroll appears in my telekanetic grip. It radiated with dark magic, akin to that of Sombra or Tirek. Luna's eyes shoot open in shock and surprise.

"This...this changes everything...."

Author's Note

Hey guys I'm back sorry about that as many of you may have known I was in a compromising situation and didn't have time to write. I'm so happy you made this story reach over 200 likes and as you can read the oc winner was raincloud! Credit goes to the maker and not me. You know who you are! ^-^ anyways expect more chapters over the summer! Redbregade out! Peace!

ALSO NEW EDITOR .

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100 LIKES OC CONTEST

HEY HEY EVERYPONY!!! Oh my gawd I actually reached 100 likes!:pinkiehappy: I just want to thank you all for liking this story. As you can tell from the name of the chapter I am starting an oc contest. In order to participate you have to follow the following rules below.

RULES

1. OC has to be a pony (Unicorn, Earth pony, Pegasus, etc.)
2. OC must be submitted with a small bio before getting accepted
3. OC must be self made (not taken from any other stories)
4. OC cant be overpowered like an Alicorn
5. Winner gets their name inserted into the next chapter
6. Can only insert 1 OC
7. Bio must include a fully body description (Ex: Grey mane with a yellow coat)

The contest will go on for at least a couple weeks and if no one inserts one ill make one myself.

The Angel Returns, SORTA!!! (Author's Note)

That's right ladies and gentlecolts, theredbregade is back, alive, and well! I'm so sorry to everypony whom might have been worrying about me or the state of this story. WELL I have good news, and bad news, so to rip the bad news off like a crusty bandage, I unfortunately will not be continuing "The Fallen Angel". But wait, WAIT! Before you break out the pitchforks and torches, I'd like to say that I was in a bad place when writing this, and more or less looked upon my old work with much embarrassment. :twilightsheepish: Looking at all the mistakes and cringe made my insides flop, which is why I've improved my craft drastically!

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🎉IM DOING A STORY REBOOT!🎊

That's right yall! Jonathan is coming back, bigger, better, and more ridiculous than ever before! With a goal of releasing regularly every 2 days, 3000+ word chapters, a minimum of 1 custom art piece per chapter, and reader OC insertions galore! I hope yall will stick around, and those who do stay tuned! Maybe Ill even throw in a few Easter eggs for those with a keen eye!~

Title drop and first chapter release will hopefully later today! If not then expect it to come this weekend! That is a pinkie promise through and through! :pinkiehappy: