Fluttershys trap

by TiberiusMaverick

Rating: mature
Tags: Sad, Romance
Length: 749

Fluttershy has read applejacks private diary and she has been thinking about what she read. once she lures Applejack into a trap she puts her plan in action

this is my first fanfic so it will be really bad plus i got a C and a D in my English exams. constructive criticism most definatley wanted, plus i need a proof reader

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-10 11:46:00 UTC

Chapter 1

Fluttershy was tense, she hadn't been THIS tense since...since... well, she couldn't remember...

She started pacing about, thinking to herself. *where is she..? I’ve been waiting for hours*.

Applejack was galloping as fast as she could down the road; she knew she must NOT let Fluttershy down. Not again...

Apple jack thought back

4 days ago

"Applejack what do you mean you can't you promised"she sounded desperate but Applejack let it slide

"Well there's just to much for me to have to do with cider season coming up and Applebloom starting to get to the age if you know what i mean?"

"-sigh- OK then I guess we can postpone it for a few more days" Fluttershy looked even more down now.

"don't worry how about this Saturday i think i can be spared for maybe a hour" upon hearing this Fluttershy immediately perked up and flew away celebrating. now Applejack new that was weird, Fluttershy rarely flew anywhere

Fluttershy was getting really nervous now, she had everything planned. Applejack just couldn't ruin it she just COULDNT!

Applejack turned the corner just trying not to crash into everypony that was in town " oh no I'm gonna be late, she'll be devastated if I'm late*

Fluttershy was just finishing setting up the net when she saw some dust rising *ah my dear Applejack is coming, excellent*.

Applejack was going so fast she never saw the net and before she knew she was hanging 10 feet in the air, “Dangnabbit, what the hell is going on here." "SHY SHY YOU THERE!" She was yelling now

.

"Oh yes Applejack I’m here, I’ve ben here waiting...waiting for you"

Applejack was confused "what do y'all mean waiting for me?!"."Simple my dear Applejack... I’ve been waiting for you I have a suprise, which I know I'll LOVE! HAHA"

Applejack wasn't conscious long enough to reply, all she felt was a dart hitting her neck...

Applejack woke up disorientated *was that a dream, it must be shy couldn’t have become twisted like that*

"Applejack your awake how wonderful". That voice sent a chill down Applejacks back; only one person had that voice. Fluttershy!

"Shy why are ya'll doing this?".  "You don't have the right to call me Shy anymore Applejack, only mistress" as she said this Fluttershy stepped out of the shadows.

Applejacks eyes grew when she saw her, her normally lovely yellow fur had turned black

"Shy what hap- AH!" Fluttershy whipped her as soon as she heard Shy come out of Applejacks mouth

"What did i just tell you?” a hint of the stare coming on. Applejack felt scared but strangely thrilled from that whip, "I'm sorry mistress"

As soon as she heard that she brightened up, "now you wait here while i go get you a little surprise" as she was saying this Fluttershy walked away and disappeared round a corner

Applejack now finally had a chance to survey her surroundings, she was spread against a wall with chains round each her hooves, luckily she still had her Stetson on however her hair was undone, she was in a dark cell with a toilet to one side and a bed to the other. *Where on Celestias green earth am I* she thought to herself, she suddenly felt a breeze on her flank she looked down and let out a small gasp her tail had be cut! “NO FLUTTERSHY YOU BASTARD!” she yelled at the top of her lungs, she then broke down crying. She felt something across her stomach that made her cry out in a mix of pain and pleasure. this bought her back to the real world. she looked up a saw Fluttershy, no not Fluttershy she wasn't Fluttershy anymore she was a monster, standing there with a cat-o-nine tails with a scary smile on her face.

“Now now Applejack don’t pretend you don’t like this, I read your diary…. All of it”. she said in a dark way knowing that it would affect Applejack.

Upon hearing this Applejack just broke down, “how, when, why” she said in-between sobs. *YES* screamed Fluttershy in her head *It has worked she has lost all her spirit, and i thought this was going to be a challenge*

"It’s simple isn’t it? I wanted to make you feel happy. I snuck into you room one night and I saw it on your table and so I read through it and I decided to help you achieve your fantasies”

To be continued