Sins of the Mother

Greetings,

I figured I'd give a final offering of what the plans were, and a final farewell as I seriously doubt i'll ever actually finish anything, so... Here goes:

First off: lemme outline for you what the remaining chapters were going to be (This is going to be a direct copy/paste from my notes in google doc, so... yeah...):

-ship docks, big event given experimental engines. Eclissi reunites with mane 6, Vinyl and Tavi, ponies wondering about griffin staff and what happened to Eclissi.

-Luna and Celestia show up, Luna recognizes griffin's as slave tribe but stays quiet till later. Eclissi formally recognized as Equestrian royalty, Eclissi seems… uninterested in new title.

-later on Tavi, Georgia and Eclissi talk about what happened to him in detail in private, Eclissi more interested in Octavia’s flanks than the topic at hand. Begins to make passes at her, Octavia accepts and they spend the night in heat with Georgia taking up residence in a guest room.

-next morning? Same night? Tavi and Eclissi chat about how much more rough and beatial the sex was, slightly concerning to Tavi but Eclissi rejects notion of change. Tries for a couple more rounds but Tavi declines, Eclissi gets more forceful until Tavi refuses with violence and runs off. Eclissi activates and converses with Lust while Tavi talks with Georgia, Georgia makes up a story to cover Eclissi’s new behaviour, something about being stranded in an inhospitable jungle or some bullshit.

-Tavi calms down a bit, accepts this story as probable cause for mood swings but becomes weary of Eclissi.

-next day Eclissi moves Dark Eclipse members into Everfree Castle, gets final restoration projects underway. Luna shows up with inquires about griffin origins, talks with Eclissi about the slavery laws and all that as they explore the castle. Eclissi states that Georgia and other griffin's are not slaves and that they are free to come and go as they please but they all insist on serving Eclissi. Luna speaks with Gerald and a couple others and accepts this.

-Eclissi, having assimilated Lust, apologizes to Octavia about his behaviour before the three of them, Eclissi, Tavi and Georgia, head into town to introduce Georgia to the mane 6 and to get reacquainted with them and Starlight Glimmer.

-Eclissi noticeably doesn't like Starlight but keeps quiet about it for sake of being gone respectable.

After this, Eclissi would continue to accumulate more and more of the Sins, his behaviour changing each time he does. Original plan was for Eclissi to ultimately achieve gaining all his Sins before the Element Bearers could react, and Eclissi would get his ultimate revenge by banishing the Royalty to their respective celestial body, and the bearers of the Elements of Harmony would be banished to the stars, turning into new constellations. Tavi and friends would notice this as Eclissi in his nightmare form starts taking over the country, Georgia even siding with the good guys, and the six "side characters" would end up temporarily taking up the Elements themselves, banishing Eclissi to the stars himself, then bringing the Mane six and royalty back soon after.

Final chapter would be a short one, where the dragon female (who's name I can't remember rn,) from the last chapter would be escaping to the furthest sides of the planet, carrying a Kirin child that Eclissi bore to her. Would've left it either with that, or set it in a way that it could've done a second story.

So: That's that. Those were the plans, the ideas and the theories. Thank you for staying with the story while it lived, and thank you for the support I had at the time.

Sincerely,

Soren Mercer