Fluttershy, The Mare Who Touched His Heartby sungeeky60ChaptersThe kindest MareThe disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic.Meeting with the King.Adventure awaits. (full version)Under My Spell! (Sneak peak)The mysterious shadow. Getting prepared. The kindest MareDiscord was roaming around Ponyville, pranking ponies when ever he could. First he pranked Apple jack by painting her apples to look like oranges instead of apples then discord went to rainbow dash and stuck a sticky note it both of her flanks and it said IM STUIPD,after laughing historically he then he went to Derpy and turned her muffins into pavlovas making her fly like crazy to Mr and Mrs Cake for a refund, for his last trick was making Princess Twilights books into how to be an egg head for dummies.After about an hour of pranking he went near Fluttershy's cottage - Fluttershy was a good friend to discord but he had feelings that she didn't know about and discord loved her and would be hopelessly devoted to her if he had the chance- he heard her singing while she was feeding her animals. He listened intently to the sweet sound that was coming from this beautiful Pegasus, he was in trance of that lovely voice so he walked over to her cottage and knocked on the door, he then snapped back into reality realising what he was doing and he hesitated by quickly changing into a pony form of himself. He was an alicorn with a thick black mane that was sticking up, a brown coat, a blue horn, white bushy eye brows and his cutie mark was a tornado for he chaos. It was weird and surprising liked it but his thoughts were quickly interrupted by the beautiful Pegasus, Fluttershy opening the door. "Hello there" she said, Discord looked at her not knowing what to say. "Hello I'm disc... Drake" Discord said shakily unsure if she would by his lies. "Oh um.... are you new here and are you an Alicorn, a prince or something?" she questioned him unsure why he was an alicorn. "Oh that" pointing at his horn and wings. "Well my mother was a unicorn and my father was a Pegasus and no I'm not a prince" Discord answered. She looked at him and smiled sweetly " oh sorry for me being so rude my name is Fluttershy and did you need help with anything?" Discord replied with a smile "You see im new here and I was wondering if you would be able to show me around, you see I really need some help with finding my way." "Of course I'd be delighted to show you around Drake. "she smiled while walking down the steps of her cottage she slipped and almost fell if discord hadn't had caught her. "Are you okay?" he questioned hoping she wasn't hurt. It took fluttershy a while for her to answer him because she was looked in gaze at Drakes yellow and red eyes that reminded her of her friend discord. " huh... oh yes I'm fine thank you" she replied not taking her eyes of him. " well shall we start with the tour then my dear" he bowed holding out his hoof offering her to take it. "Yes of course Mr Drake" she curtsied taking his hoof. As they did this they both laughed in the process. So the two started walking into pony vile while holding each other's hoof. What the two didn't know was that a sneaky princess of the night watched the whole scenario with a face ready to laugh at discord. And she knew she had to look into his dreams. As they were walking down in ponyvile Fluttershy was telling discord all about ponyvile, how everything worked and were evething is and discord just sighed in awe as he watched her guide him through ponyvile. "Well thats our lilttle tour all done Drake" "Drake?" she questionly asked him. "Huh oh yes thank you very much my dear Fluttershy and might i ask would you like to join me out in the park... lets say tommorow?" "Umm ........ sure Drake but what time" "I'd say about 12:00 noon" he said with a wide toothy smile. "Okay then I will meat you then see ya Drake" "Bye my dear" he said shyly like a little filly. He watched her as she walked up the steps to her nature like cottage and he just imagined what it would be like to hold her in his mismatched arms holding her so delicacly and then lifting her up to his eye level, leaning forward and .... But he broke out of his trance and realised that he should get back to his pocket dimension and dream about what would happen with him and his sweet sweet Fluttershy when tommorow comes. As Fluttershy came into her cottage she sighed but then grew worried, why did Drake call her my dear only discord called her that could it be she thought to her self no discord it doing things that The Lord of chaos does so she didn't care but what she did care about was the picnic she going on tomorrow but then a thought occurred to her. "Oh no I have nothing to wear tommorow what am going to do?" She turned to angle bunny who was staring at her with angry eyes of wanting to eat. " oh ok angle I will feed you now " she chuckled. As soon as she feed angle she went to get ready for bed first she brushed her hair and brushed her teeth and wrote in her diary saying how she met Drake and then climbed into bed awaiting to dream good happy dreams. Meanwhile discord was having the best dream ever. He was on a hill top with fluttershy where they usually do the picnics. He gazed into her lovely eyes but then the dream vanished and everything was starry, he started to think if his mind was just going blank or if something bothered his dream and then his answer came to him when princess Luna showed up I front of him with a stare that was disapproving. "Discord as you may know that you and fluttershy are going on a picnic tommorow and your not going as yourself but as your...... Pony self " she said that word like it was posion. "Yes I am but .... Wait hold on a second how did you know that me and fluttershy are going on a date I mean picnic." "I am the princess of the night what do you expect " "Good point " discord remarked while putting his claw to his chin "I must go discord you are waking. Oh and don't mess this up discord or she will NEVER like you AGAIN" she said this in her Canterlot royal voice which perced discords ears but in a flash she was gone and he was awake. It was time. Time for the picnic with the mare of his dreams. Author's Note This is just a random thing I decided to write and im new here so please give me some tips I might need for future stories. it may be short but don't worry I will try and make the chapters longer next time. Please give me some ideas as well because I love hearing requests form everyone. The disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic.Author's Note Here is the full version of the third chapter hope you all enjoyed it and let me know of your ideas to let the story flow in any way and I would love to hear of your ideas for the story so let me know in the comments and have a wonderful day everypony. The disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic. As Fluttershy was waiting Discord, or Drake, was strolling down with nerves in his pony skeleton. He finally managed to get to her sweet little cottage and saw sitting on her Door step unaware that he had arrived, he thought he needed to gift her a gift to match her beauty and with that he summoned a bouquet of Roses, dasies and frangipanis. He was ready. He took a deep breathe before coming across the little bridge she had on her property. "Oh Fluttershy, are you here my dear?" He asked joyfully, caught away from the sights of her flowers she looked up to see Drake walking up to her. "Hi Drake it's great to see you again, so shall we go dear sir?" she smiled as she courtesyed to him, Discord bowed back and held out his hoof to her. "Indeed we shall go my dear." Discord said in a suductive tone and waited for her to take his hoof. Fluttershy placed her hoof in Discords and admired his blue horn as he was a alicorn. Then they started to walk to the park with Picnic basket in hoof. While them two love birds were walking down to their picnic destination King Sombra's royal adviser was looking at them two in a crystal ball to spy on Fluttershy and to also get her so that the all mighty King Sombra could have her as his bride to take over the Crystal Empire and take Shinng Amour and Princess Cadence. Hirt looked up from his crystal ball and saw the guards slacking off. "Hey, stop Slacking by order of King Sombra we ALL must participate to capture the lady Fluttershy to be our new Queen you idiots!" He said with all his might since they were still in the snow storm of the icey part of the Empire and the guards quickly started running faster than ever to make sure that they weren't gonna get told off and sent to the dungeon, so they picked up the pace and soon enough they were on the boaders of the Crystal Empire and they entered their way off the boaders of the Emipre and headed off to Ponyville. Discord and Fluttershy had arrived at the park and had begun to lay out the picnic blanket, discord wanted Fluttershy to rest and not do any work so she protested by helping him and making both of them laugh at her protests. Discord had brought down some lovely cucumber sandwiches, two mouth watering fruit salads and a carrot cake,just for Fluttershy. Fluttershy was amazed with all the food that Drake brought down and she took a bite of everything enjoying every bite, especially when having the carrot cake which she loved. While she was enjoying her food Discord just looked at her while eating his food, he started into her sea green eyes and he thought he could just get lost the sea she possesses in her eyes but his thought were interrupted by Fluttershy. "Hey Drake are you ok?" She asked. "Yes..yes I am Fluttershy... Oh and are you enjoying this picnic by any chance?" He answered with courage while hearing a loud clip clopping of an army of something but he didn't think about it as much. "Yes, oh Drake it's been wonderful I would love for us ..... To ...... Do it ....again." Fluttershy said stunned at what she was seeing, it King Sombra's Army and they were coming straight for her, Drake took caution and tried to protect Fluttershy from the guards trying to catch her up and into one of the carriages. Everyone one of the guards was hopelessly trying to grab Fluttershy and take her but Discord was fighting them off with his disguised magic. But all hope for saving Fluttershy from the guards was when Hirt's carriage arrived and every pony kept fighting but the some of the guards stopped. "Where is the Lady Fluttershy?" He said in the sternest voice he could do. "Come now TELL ME BY THE ORDER OF KING SOMBRA!" Shouted Hirt making Fluttershy whimper from behind Discord and loud enough that Hirt looked behind Discord to see Fluttershy and Hirt managed to grab Fluttershy by the hoof and nearly drag her to the carriage, Fiscord tried to stop him. "No stop you can't take her she is innocent she has done nothing wrong." Discord said with tears in his eyes since now he could reach Fluttershy when she was in the carriage. "Oh we know she has done nothing wrong it's just that the King is very lonely and he needs something to keep him occupied for a bit that's all and also you better wave goodbye because she's never coming back!!!" Proclaimed Hirt, Discord didn't get the courage to jump on the carriage which Hirt was now climbing on to, and just to hold Fluttershy with all his might and not let them take her away. But by the time he was going to do it Fluttershy and the Army had started their journey to the Crystal Empire. Meeting with the King.Successful, very successful the army was they had the Lady Fluttershy, Hirt was gonna get promoted and the King will be happy and finally take revenge on the Crystal Empire. They were making their way to the boarders of the Crystal Empire when Fluttershy got curious to why she was practically getting kidnapped. "Umm.. Excuse me but umm why have you kidnapped me.... If it's all right that you could tell me please?" Fluttershy asked softly not trying to anger him. Hirt looked at her and thought for a moment. "All your questions will be answered when we get to King Sombra ok Lady Fluttershy." He answered to her while she was trembling by the cold Hirt saw that time went by quick or maybe the guards picked up the slack and they where getting closer to the deep crack in the Empire and to where the secret kingdom was and that Kingdom was owned by none other than King Sombra. As they made their way in, Hirt's carriage stopped and he held his hoof out to Fluttershy for her to take it since it was a high carriage, Fluttershy took his hoof and got down safely and she was led to a throne room where the evil king sat in his throne caching the view of Fluttershy admiring her natural beauty and the way thought that she looked cute when she was scared. He stood up and slenderly walked over to Fluttershy, she was trembling in fear since she did not want to meet the stallion that her dragon friend defeated, he walked around her examining her and taking in her rose sent. "Umm.... What are you doing?" Fluttershy asked when he started touching her mane. He snapped out of his thoughts and straightened up and got In front of her to answer her questions that were bubbling in her mind. "You are probably wondering why you are here Fluttershy" he asked and she nodded. He leaned in close enough that their muzzles could touch. "Your here to be my.. My bride" he whispered to her slyly with a grin, Fluttershy was shocked by the news and by being so over whelmed Fluttershy fainted right in his arms and Sombra just chuckled as he carried her in his arms to his bed chambers and laid her down on the grand bed of darkness with black bed sheets and black pillow cases and he left he there to sleep while he did some planning for her lucky day. But Somepony who was invisible was watching how discord lost Fluttershy and how Fluttershy got taken and was about to get married as soon as she woke and that was Princess Luna. With fear for Fluttershy and the Crystal Empire she quickly teleported to her sister, Celestia to inform her of this very unfortunate event. As soon as Luna was next to her sister she blurted out everything she saw. "Celestia we HAVE to help her NOW Fluttershy should go a creature as horrible as Sombra PLEASE CELESTIA PLEASE!!!" Celestia listened to all this with horror and called her Fathfull student Twilight Sparkle, immediately Twilight and her friends, except Fluttershy, were in Canterlot and ready for action and surprisingly Discord showed up in his normal form ashamed with tears in eyes. Everypony turned to Discord seeing him in his state, Pinkie pie was the first to break the silence. "Hey what's up discord, what's your tail, why long..... Hah a get it long face hahaha" seeing that her jokes didn't work she ask seriously and wondered where Fluttershy was. "Hey discord what happened because I'm just wondering wh at happened to Flutter-" she was interrupted by discord screaming. " FLUTTERSHY OH WHY!!!" he sobbed so hard the room was starting to flood. Everypony calmed him down so they wouldn't drown in his tears and he started to give in. "We were having a picnic but I wasn't myself I was a pony version of myself and well King Sombra's army arrived and took Fluttershy away so she could be his bride" he whipped a tear away "And it's all my fault I didn't even put up a fight they just took her when I finally built up the courage and now she is probably already married to that horrible Stallion... Oh it's all my fault." He cried. Twilight had an idea. " why don't we dress up like on of the guards and sneak into the kingdom and steal Fluttershy back and King Sombra will never know." She declared, Princess Celestia thought of the idea but disagreed with it. "I'm sorry Twilight but King Sombra is like a spy you don't where he will be but he WILL be watching everyponies move and you will sent in to the dungon if you are caught buy him." Celestia said and they all stayed at the castle like statues and thought of a way to get Fluttershy back but Discord secretly had an idea and slithered out of the castle and begun his journey without the help of some Princess. Author's Note Ok here is the fourth chapter I hope you liked it and inform me about anything you would like me to add to the fanfic and a heads up to all viewers I'm gonna make this fanfic a really long one so I can keep on adding new stuff to Stretch out the story since I'm loving it myself. Adventure awaits. (full version)As Discord sneakily left Canterlot he stole a couple of weapons rations and amour. He then set off for his great adventure to free the one he loves and take her as his own. He wanted to feel her touch again he wanted to hold her in his arms and to Dance with her, he just wanted to see her sweet angelic smile that she had and to listen to her sweet voice that sounded like a dinging bell. Oh how he longed to see Fluttershy again. Fluttershy was still asleep and she was dreaming about Drake and Discord. Drake and Discord were standing next to each other in her dream and they were saying something but she couldn't quite make it out until they both shouted it with fear. "Fluttershy Discord is Drake and Drake is Discord, we are the same pony, Fluttershy listen please it's true and Discord will say it himself." She stirred as she started to wake up, opening her teal green eyes. She sited up on the bed and saw it was black bed sheets and black pillows, she rubbed her head and groned. "Ugh, where am I?" She got up and walked over to a window stilt and saw that everything's was a dark crevice, she kept looking through the window trying to find any sort of pony life but found none. She didn't notice Sombra coming through the door and walking towards her until she heard him. "Hello my dear, did you have a nice rest?" He asked in a slender tone which made her jump. "umm... Umm. Yes" she squeaked as she hid behind her mane. But she got the courage to talk again. "Why am I here Sombra?" She asked as sternly as she could. He looked at her slyly. "Didn't you hear me earlier?" He walked to her getting very close. "I brought you here... To be my bride" He said. Once he did Fluttershy just stood there like a statue and would have fallen if Sombra hadn't have caught her, she realised he was holding her and immediately wriggled out of his hold and looked at him with anger in her eyes. "There is no way that I will be owned to you by being your bride and even if you make me array you you will receive no love from me on any day ever for the rest of your life." She spat the last word like it was poison and he just looked at her stunned but retained his posture. "Well then I guess then you need sometime to think about and that I will but of course I'm not gonna let run free around the castle because you may find a way out and we wouldn't wanting that to happen now would we and ta-ta my darling." And with that he locked her door. She banged on the door and she tried to break it down but it would budge, she gave up and lied down on the bed and cried her eyes out knowing that she would be here forever and there was nothing she could do about it. _____________________________________________________ Discord was right at the front of the Castle and was thinking of a plan to get him inside. He decided to turn into a fruit fly and manage to sneak inside the room where Fluttershy was in. As he flew inside the castle he saw King Sombra and saw that Sombra was everywhere. Discord was in a maze of Sombras then it turned into Fluttershy dyeing right before his eyes. Discord was Screaming his head off now until he found a door with three butterflies on it and turned into his norm al slef and teleported in but he got teleported straight back. Discord was loosing hope right about now. What in the hole of Equestria could he do? Author's Note ok I have decided to keep continuing the story and yeah so hoped you enjoyed it and comment of what you might want me to write. Under My Spell! (Sneak peak)Author's Note Here is a sneak peak of the next chapter hope you enjoy and comment if you have any ideas for this story. Under My Spell! (Sneak peak) Fluttershy was still crying, her tears literally made a flood in her bedroom like prison. She was thinking of a way to get out, through all of her tears, but the only one she could come up with was death! Suddenly there was a knock on the door, she stoped crying and remained slient for she knew that it was sombra, since she could see his shadow. "Fluttershy, I'm coming in okay I just need you to come out and eat some lunch with me, I'm sure your starving!" he said as his voiced muffled in Fluttershy's ears. Her stomache started rumbling and she heard the door lock click open, the door creaked open to reveal Sombra standing there determined to get Fluttershy out of the room. "Come Fluttershy, let's go have something to eat shall we?" He said in a soft but from voice. She got up and started walking out of the room relieved to finally some fresh air after being locked up like a caged bird. Once he led her to the dinning room she saw a mini feast laide out for their Lunch, there were sandwiches, salads, roast pork and anything else she could imagine. He seated her like a gentleman and seated himself. Fluttershy began to grab a salad and smiled once the food entered her mouth, it was like getting presents at Christmas but better, the food was so wonderful. But before she could think of what the food was like anymore, Sombra spoke. "Are you enjoying your food, Fluttershy?" He asked her, she stoping chewing then swallowed and spoke. "Why yes...... Umm thank you for the food and all... ". Sombra surpized her by coming right up next to her and looking into her eyes. "Fluttershy. Look into my eyes." She did. "Fluttershy do not worry, I am,, your friend not your enemy, in fact I'm your future husband. Now Fluttershy you are going to love unconditionally. You will love me until death do we part. Do you understand." His eyes turned into green and purple swirls. She nodded and her eyes became purple and green swirls too. Fluttershys stomache wasn't feeling good it had a queasy feeling and her head tried to tell her to run and get. Away from this horrible stallion, she didn't want to be near him but he had already taken on of her hooves into his hoof. As her mind raced at why she should get away from him her heart was saying stay here Fluttershy who knows, maybe he will treat you good and not leave you alone like Discord did, think about it Discord hasn't spoke to you in two days. Go with Sombra. And she did. He looked at her "Fluttershy do love me?" He asked evilly She nodded. "Yes my love. And I will be your queen forever and ever." She said absentmindedly. Sombra evilly laughed at his future queen and thought of what he was going to do to the Crystal Empire! Sombra was smearing at his prize he finally had her for himself and she loved him, even though he had forced her, but he didn't care all he cared about was getting revenge on the Crystal Empire. The mysterious shadow. Getting prepared. Author's Note This is the second chapter of the story and I maybe changing discord into a unicorn instead of an alicorn because I want to make the story reflect more to what he looked like from Twilights kingdom pt1. Also please let me know if you want discord to be a unicorn like in Twilights kingdom pt1. The mysterious shadow. Getting prepared. When Fluttershy awoke from her sleep she felt a tiny bit like something was watching her but she shurged this thought off and she went to tend to her animals. As she went down the stairs from her bedroom she saw all of her animals fighting and screaming at each other. She looked around for angle only to see him fighting with the other rabbits for a carrot, Fluttershy rolled her eyes. " mm excuse me.... Umm angle bunny could you please... Stop fighting?" She said with gently. Angle ignored her and kept fighting but every other animal stopped since they now knew that their care taker was awake. "ANGLE!" Fluttershy shouted angry this time round. "What are you doing to the oTher bunnies you know that I will feed you, now go and wait for your food you little cutie" she delighted said and Angle did as she said and waited until it was his turn to get fed. Once Fluttershy had finished tending to her animal friends she let everyone of her animals outside to help her with her garden. She had a grand garden it had Roses, Tulips, Carnations, Frangipanis, lilies and much more. First she planted new seeds and watered them carefully by the help of Mr Bearing ton. She talked to her flowers for a bit and examined them for any bugs, she walked over to her tools basket to grab a weed tool but before she took hold of the tool she thought she saw a shadow go pass then she had that feeling she was being watched as she pulled the weeds out. After gardening she went inside to check the time to see if she was going to be late for her picnic with Drake. As she was getting ready she thought of her friend Discord, oh how she loved being around him but where was Discord. Once she was ready she looked gorgeous, she had put her mane in a loose ponytail and was hanging over her right shoulder, she had floral head band on and she put little makeup on because of her natural beauty. Once done she strolled out the door and waited on her door step for Drake. But as she walked out lurking in the shadows of the deep crack of the crystal empire was a being that was defeated long before and he was watching Fluttershy wait of this so called Drake. It was King Sombra. Sombra was looking through a glass ball of darkness, he watched as she waited for this pony named Drake. Who was Drake? He didn't know but he shrugged this off and summoned his glass ball of darkness away. "Hirt!" The king cried out in booming voice enough to intimidate ponies. "Y....yes sire" The scared royal adviser shakily said. "What does Shining Amour have that I don't in the Crystal Empire that makes him SO special and loved by every pony?" Sombra said in a slender tone. Hirt thought for a moment then he had the answer but tried not to anger his master by the answer. "Uhh a Queen my lord... Yes that's right he has Princess Cadence." Sombra thought deeply and nodded at Hirt's answer, he then put on an evil smile. "Yes of course I need a queen" he stood up "if I had queen then the Crystal Empire will be mine for the taking" he laughed evilly at his plan. "And Fluttershy will be my Queen!!!" He laughed and laughed with Hirt joining in with the laughter since he didn't want his majesty to think him bad stupid. "Hirt today I want YOU and the guards to get Fluttershy and I want her ALIVE!" He declared yelling out he last part, Hirt nodded quickly and started preparing the guards for the adventure and once done preparing they set off to get the Lady Fluttershy.
The kindest MareDiscord was roaming around Ponyville, pranking ponies when ever he could. First he pranked Apple jack by painting her apples to look like oranges instead of apples then discord went to rainbow dash and stuck a sticky note it both of her flanks and it said IM STUIPD,after laughing historically he then he went to Derpy and turned her muffins into pavlovas making her fly like crazy to Mr and Mrs Cake for a refund, for his last trick was making Princess Twilights books into how to be an egg head for dummies.After about an hour of pranking he went near Fluttershy's cottage - Fluttershy was a good friend to discord but he had feelings that she didn't know about and discord loved her and would be hopelessly devoted to her if he had the chance- he heard her singing while she was feeding her animals. He listened intently to the sweet sound that was coming from this beautiful Pegasus, he was in trance of that lovely voice so he walked over to her cottage and knocked on the door, he then snapped back into reality realising what he was doing and he hesitated by quickly changing into a pony form of himself. He was an alicorn with a thick black mane that was sticking up, a brown coat, a blue horn, white bushy eye brows and his cutie mark was a tornado for he chaos. It was weird and surprising liked it but his thoughts were quickly interrupted by the beautiful Pegasus, Fluttershy opening the door. "Hello there" she said, Discord looked at her not knowing what to say. "Hello I'm disc... Drake" Discord said shakily unsure if she would by his lies. "Oh um.... are you new here and are you an Alicorn, a prince or something?" she questioned him unsure why he was an alicorn. "Oh that" pointing at his horn and wings. "Well my mother was a unicorn and my father was a Pegasus and no I'm not a prince" Discord answered. She looked at him and smiled sweetly " oh sorry for me being so rude my name is Fluttershy and did you need help with anything?" Discord replied with a smile "You see im new here and I was wondering if you would be able to show me around, you see I really need some help with finding my way." "Of course I'd be delighted to show you around Drake. "she smiled while walking down the steps of her cottage she slipped and almost fell if discord hadn't had caught her. "Are you okay?" he questioned hoping she wasn't hurt. It took fluttershy a while for her to answer him because she was looked in gaze at Drakes yellow and red eyes that reminded her of her friend discord. " huh... oh yes I'm fine thank you" she replied not taking her eyes of him. " well shall we start with the tour then my dear" he bowed holding out his hoof offering her to take it. "Yes of course Mr Drake" she curtsied taking his hoof. As they did this they both laughed in the process. So the two started walking into pony vile while holding each other's hoof. What the two didn't know was that a sneaky princess of the night watched the whole scenario with a face ready to laugh at discord. And she knew she had to look into his dreams. As they were walking down in ponyvile Fluttershy was telling discord all about ponyvile, how everything worked and were evething is and discord just sighed in awe as he watched her guide him through ponyvile. "Well thats our lilttle tour all done Drake" "Drake?" she questionly asked him. "Huh oh yes thank you very much my dear Fluttershy and might i ask would you like to join me out in the park... lets say tommorow?" "Umm ........ sure Drake but what time" "I'd say about 12:00 noon" he said with a wide toothy smile. "Okay then I will meat you then see ya Drake" "Bye my dear" he said shyly like a little filly. He watched her as she walked up the steps to her nature like cottage and he just imagined what it would be like to hold her in his mismatched arms holding her so delicacly and then lifting her up to his eye level, leaning forward and .... But he broke out of his trance and realised that he should get back to his pocket dimension and dream about what would happen with him and his sweet sweet Fluttershy when tommorow comes. As Fluttershy came into her cottage she sighed but then grew worried, why did Drake call her my dear only discord called her that could it be she thought to her self no discord it doing things that The Lord of chaos does so she didn't care but what she did care about was the picnic she going on tomorrow but then a thought occurred to her. "Oh no I have nothing to wear tommorow what am going to do?" She turned to angle bunny who was staring at her with angry eyes of wanting to eat. " oh ok angle I will feed you now " she chuckled. As soon as she feed angle she went to get ready for bed first she brushed her hair and brushed her teeth and wrote in her diary saying how she met Drake and then climbed into bed awaiting to dream good happy dreams. Meanwhile discord was having the best dream ever. He was on a hill top with fluttershy where they usually do the picnics. He gazed into her lovely eyes but then the dream vanished and everything was starry, he started to think if his mind was just going blank or if something bothered his dream and then his answer came to him when princess Luna showed up I front of him with a stare that was disapproving. "Discord as you may know that you and fluttershy are going on a picnic tommorow and your not going as yourself but as your...... Pony self " she said that word like it was posion. "Yes I am but .... Wait hold on a second how did you know that me and fluttershy are going on a date I mean picnic." "I am the princess of the night what do you expect " "Good point " discord remarked while putting his claw to his chin "I must go discord you are waking. Oh and don't mess this up discord or she will NEVER like you AGAIN" she said this in her Canterlot royal voice which perced discords ears but in a flash she was gone and he was awake. It was time. Time for the picnic with the mare of his dreams. Author's Note This is just a random thing I decided to write and im new here so please give me some tips I might need for future stories. it may be short but don't worry I will try and make the chapters longer next time. Please give me some ideas as well because I love hearing requests form everyone.
The disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic.Author's Note Here is the full version of the third chapter hope you all enjoyed it and let me know of your ideas to let the story flow in any way and I would love to hear of your ideas for the story so let me know in the comments and have a wonderful day everypony. The disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic. As Fluttershy was waiting Discord, or Drake, was strolling down with nerves in his pony skeleton. He finally managed to get to her sweet little cottage and saw sitting on her Door step unaware that he had arrived, he thought he needed to gift her a gift to match her beauty and with that he summoned a bouquet of Roses, dasies and frangipanis. He was ready. He took a deep breathe before coming across the little bridge she had on her property. "Oh Fluttershy, are you here my dear?" He asked joyfully, caught away from the sights of her flowers she looked up to see Drake walking up to her. "Hi Drake it's great to see you again, so shall we go dear sir?" she smiled as she courtesyed to him, Discord bowed back and held out his hoof to her. "Indeed we shall go my dear." Discord said in a suductive tone and waited for her to take his hoof. Fluttershy placed her hoof in Discords and admired his blue horn as he was a alicorn. Then they started to walk to the park with Picnic basket in hoof. While them two love birds were walking down to their picnic destination King Sombra's royal adviser was looking at them two in a crystal ball to spy on Fluttershy and to also get her so that the all mighty King Sombra could have her as his bride to take over the Crystal Empire and take Shinng Amour and Princess Cadence. Hirt looked up from his crystal ball and saw the guards slacking off. "Hey, stop Slacking by order of King Sombra we ALL must participate to capture the lady Fluttershy to be our new Queen you idiots!" He said with all his might since they were still in the snow storm of the icey part of the Empire and the guards quickly started running faster than ever to make sure that they weren't gonna get told off and sent to the dungeon, so they picked up the pace and soon enough they were on the boaders of the Crystal Empire and they entered their way off the boaders of the Emipre and headed off to Ponyville. Discord and Fluttershy had arrived at the park and had begun to lay out the picnic blanket, discord wanted Fluttershy to rest and not do any work so she protested by helping him and making both of them laugh at her protests. Discord had brought down some lovely cucumber sandwiches, two mouth watering fruit salads and a carrot cake,just for Fluttershy. Fluttershy was amazed with all the food that Drake brought down and she took a bite of everything enjoying every bite, especially when having the carrot cake which she loved. While she was enjoying her food Discord just looked at her while eating his food, he started into her sea green eyes and he thought he could just get lost the sea she possesses in her eyes but his thought were interrupted by Fluttershy. "Hey Drake are you ok?" She asked. "Yes..yes I am Fluttershy... Oh and are you enjoying this picnic by any chance?" He answered with courage while hearing a loud clip clopping of an army of something but he didn't think about it as much. "Yes, oh Drake it's been wonderful I would love for us ..... To ...... Do it ....again." Fluttershy said stunned at what she was seeing, it King Sombra's Army and they were coming straight for her, Drake took caution and tried to protect Fluttershy from the guards trying to catch her up and into one of the carriages. Everyone one of the guards was hopelessly trying to grab Fluttershy and take her but Discord was fighting them off with his disguised magic. But all hope for saving Fluttershy from the guards was when Hirt's carriage arrived and every pony kept fighting but the some of the guards stopped. "Where is the Lady Fluttershy?" He said in the sternest voice he could do. "Come now TELL ME BY THE ORDER OF KING SOMBRA!" Shouted Hirt making Fluttershy whimper from behind Discord and loud enough that Hirt looked behind Discord to see Fluttershy and Hirt managed to grab Fluttershy by the hoof and nearly drag her to the carriage, Fiscord tried to stop him. "No stop you can't take her she is innocent she has done nothing wrong." Discord said with tears in his eyes since now he could reach Fluttershy when she was in the carriage. "Oh we know she has done nothing wrong it's just that the King is very lonely and he needs something to keep him occupied for a bit that's all and also you better wave goodbye because she's never coming back!!!" Proclaimed Hirt, Discord didn't get the courage to jump on the carriage which Hirt was now climbing on to, and just to hold Fluttershy with all his might and not let them take her away. But by the time he was going to do it Fluttershy and the Army had started their journey to the Crystal Empire.
Meeting with the King.Successful, very successful the army was they had the Lady Fluttershy, Hirt was gonna get promoted and the King will be happy and finally take revenge on the Crystal Empire. They were making their way to the boarders of the Crystal Empire when Fluttershy got curious to why she was practically getting kidnapped. "Umm.. Excuse me but umm why have you kidnapped me.... If it's all right that you could tell me please?" Fluttershy asked softly not trying to anger him. Hirt looked at her and thought for a moment. "All your questions will be answered when we get to King Sombra ok Lady Fluttershy." He answered to her while she was trembling by the cold Hirt saw that time went by quick or maybe the guards picked up the slack and they where getting closer to the deep crack in the Empire and to where the secret kingdom was and that Kingdom was owned by none other than King Sombra. As they made their way in, Hirt's carriage stopped and he held his hoof out to Fluttershy for her to take it since it was a high carriage, Fluttershy took his hoof and got down safely and she was led to a throne room where the evil king sat in his throne caching the view of Fluttershy admiring her natural beauty and the way thought that she looked cute when she was scared. He stood up and slenderly walked over to Fluttershy, she was trembling in fear since she did not want to meet the stallion that her dragon friend defeated, he walked around her examining her and taking in her rose sent. "Umm.... What are you doing?" Fluttershy asked when he started touching her mane. He snapped out of his thoughts and straightened up and got In front of her to answer her questions that were bubbling in her mind. "You are probably wondering why you are here Fluttershy" he asked and she nodded. He leaned in close enough that their muzzles could touch. "Your here to be my.. My bride" he whispered to her slyly with a grin, Fluttershy was shocked by the news and by being so over whelmed Fluttershy fainted right in his arms and Sombra just chuckled as he carried her in his arms to his bed chambers and laid her down on the grand bed of darkness with black bed sheets and black pillow cases and he left he there to sleep while he did some planning for her lucky day. But Somepony who was invisible was watching how discord lost Fluttershy and how Fluttershy got taken and was about to get married as soon as she woke and that was Princess Luna. With fear for Fluttershy and the Crystal Empire she quickly teleported to her sister, Celestia to inform her of this very unfortunate event. As soon as Luna was next to her sister she blurted out everything she saw. "Celestia we HAVE to help her NOW Fluttershy should go a creature as horrible as Sombra PLEASE CELESTIA PLEASE!!!" Celestia listened to all this with horror and called her Fathfull student Twilight Sparkle, immediately Twilight and her friends, except Fluttershy, were in Canterlot and ready for action and surprisingly Discord showed up in his normal form ashamed with tears in eyes. Everypony turned to Discord seeing him in his state, Pinkie pie was the first to break the silence. "Hey what's up discord, what's your tail, why long..... Hah a get it long face hahaha" seeing that her jokes didn't work she ask seriously and wondered where Fluttershy was. "Hey discord what happened because I'm just wondering wh at happened to Flutter-" she was interrupted by discord screaming. " FLUTTERSHY OH WHY!!!" he sobbed so hard the room was starting to flood. Everypony calmed him down so they wouldn't drown in his tears and he started to give in. "We were having a picnic but I wasn't myself I was a pony version of myself and well King Sombra's army arrived and took Fluttershy away so she could be his bride" he whipped a tear away "And it's all my fault I didn't even put up a fight they just took her when I finally built up the courage and now she is probably already married to that horrible Stallion... Oh it's all my fault." He cried. Twilight had an idea. " why don't we dress up like on of the guards and sneak into the kingdom and steal Fluttershy back and King Sombra will never know." She declared, Princess Celestia thought of the idea but disagreed with it. "I'm sorry Twilight but King Sombra is like a spy you don't where he will be but he WILL be watching everyponies move and you will sent in to the dungon if you are caught buy him." Celestia said and they all stayed at the castle like statues and thought of a way to get Fluttershy back but Discord secretly had an idea and slithered out of the castle and begun his journey without the help of some Princess. Author's Note Ok here is the fourth chapter I hope you liked it and inform me about anything you would like me to add to the fanfic and a heads up to all viewers I'm gonna make this fanfic a really long one so I can keep on adding new stuff to Stretch out the story since I'm loving it myself.
Adventure awaits. (full version)As Discord sneakily left Canterlot he stole a couple of weapons rations and amour. He then set off for his great adventure to free the one he loves and take her as his own. He wanted to feel her touch again he wanted to hold her in his arms and to Dance with her, he just wanted to see her sweet angelic smile that she had and to listen to her sweet voice that sounded like a dinging bell. Oh how he longed to see Fluttershy again. Fluttershy was still asleep and she was dreaming about Drake and Discord. Drake and Discord were standing next to each other in her dream and they were saying something but she couldn't quite make it out until they both shouted it with fear. "Fluttershy Discord is Drake and Drake is Discord, we are the same pony, Fluttershy listen please it's true and Discord will say it himself." She stirred as she started to wake up, opening her teal green eyes. She sited up on the bed and saw it was black bed sheets and black pillows, she rubbed her head and groned. "Ugh, where am I?" She got up and walked over to a window stilt and saw that everything's was a dark crevice, she kept looking through the window trying to find any sort of pony life but found none. She didn't notice Sombra coming through the door and walking towards her until she heard him. "Hello my dear, did you have a nice rest?" He asked in a slender tone which made her jump. "umm... Umm. Yes" she squeaked as she hid behind her mane. But she got the courage to talk again. "Why am I here Sombra?" She asked as sternly as she could. He looked at her slyly. "Didn't you hear me earlier?" He walked to her getting very close. "I brought you here... To be my bride" He said. Once he did Fluttershy just stood there like a statue and would have fallen if Sombra hadn't have caught her, she realised he was holding her and immediately wriggled out of his hold and looked at him with anger in her eyes. "There is no way that I will be owned to you by being your bride and even if you make me array you you will receive no love from me on any day ever for the rest of your life." She spat the last word like it was poison and he just looked at her stunned but retained his posture. "Well then I guess then you need sometime to think about and that I will but of course I'm not gonna let run free around the castle because you may find a way out and we wouldn't wanting that to happen now would we and ta-ta my darling." And with that he locked her door. She banged on the door and she tried to break it down but it would budge, she gave up and lied down on the bed and cried her eyes out knowing that she would be here forever and there was nothing she could do about it. _____________________________________________________ Discord was right at the front of the Castle and was thinking of a plan to get him inside. He decided to turn into a fruit fly and manage to sneak inside the room where Fluttershy was in. As he flew inside the castle he saw King Sombra and saw that Sombra was everywhere. Discord was in a maze of Sombras then it turned into Fluttershy dyeing right before his eyes. Discord was Screaming his head off now until he found a door with three butterflies on it and turned into his norm al slef and teleported in but he got teleported straight back. Discord was loosing hope right about now. What in the hole of Equestria could he do? Author's Note ok I have decided to keep continuing the story and yeah so hoped you enjoyed it and comment of what you might want me to write.
Under My Spell! (Sneak peak)Author's Note Here is a sneak peak of the next chapter hope you enjoy and comment if you have any ideas for this story. Under My Spell! (Sneak peak) Fluttershy was still crying, her tears literally made a flood in her bedroom like prison. She was thinking of a way to get out, through all of her tears, but the only one she could come up with was death! Suddenly there was a knock on the door, she stoped crying and remained slient for she knew that it was sombra, since she could see his shadow. "Fluttershy, I'm coming in okay I just need you to come out and eat some lunch with me, I'm sure your starving!" he said as his voiced muffled in Fluttershy's ears. Her stomache started rumbling and she heard the door lock click open, the door creaked open to reveal Sombra standing there determined to get Fluttershy out of the room. "Come Fluttershy, let's go have something to eat shall we?" He said in a soft but from voice. She got up and started walking out of the room relieved to finally some fresh air after being locked up like a caged bird. Once he led her to the dinning room she saw a mini feast laide out for their Lunch, there were sandwiches, salads, roast pork and anything else she could imagine. He seated her like a gentleman and seated himself. Fluttershy began to grab a salad and smiled once the food entered her mouth, it was like getting presents at Christmas but better, the food was so wonderful. But before she could think of what the food was like anymore, Sombra spoke. "Are you enjoying your food, Fluttershy?" He asked her, she stoping chewing then swallowed and spoke. "Why yes...... Umm thank you for the food and all... ". Sombra surpized her by coming right up next to her and looking into her eyes. "Fluttershy. Look into my eyes." She did. "Fluttershy do not worry, I am,, your friend not your enemy, in fact I'm your future husband. Now Fluttershy you are going to love unconditionally. You will love me until death do we part. Do you understand." His eyes turned into green and purple swirls. She nodded and her eyes became purple and green swirls too. Fluttershys stomache wasn't feeling good it had a queasy feeling and her head tried to tell her to run and get. Away from this horrible stallion, she didn't want to be near him but he had already taken on of her hooves into his hoof. As her mind raced at why she should get away from him her heart was saying stay here Fluttershy who knows, maybe he will treat you good and not leave you alone like Discord did, think about it Discord hasn't spoke to you in two days. Go with Sombra. And she did. He looked at her "Fluttershy do love me?" He asked evilly She nodded. "Yes my love. And I will be your queen forever and ever." She said absentmindedly. Sombra evilly laughed at his future queen and thought of what he was going to do to the Crystal Empire! Sombra was smearing at his prize he finally had her for himself and she loved him, even though he had forced her, but he didn't care all he cared about was getting revenge on the Crystal Empire.
The mysterious shadow. Getting prepared. Author's Note This is the second chapter of the story and I maybe changing discord into a unicorn instead of an alicorn because I want to make the story reflect more to what he looked like from Twilights kingdom pt1. Also please let me know if you want discord to be a unicorn like in Twilights kingdom pt1. The mysterious shadow. Getting prepared. When Fluttershy awoke from her sleep she felt a tiny bit like something was watching her but she shurged this thought off and she went to tend to her animals. As she went down the stairs from her bedroom she saw all of her animals fighting and screaming at each other. She looked around for angle only to see him fighting with the other rabbits for a carrot, Fluttershy rolled her eyes. " mm excuse me.... Umm angle bunny could you please... Stop fighting?" She said with gently. Angle ignored her and kept fighting but every other animal stopped since they now knew that their care taker was awake. "ANGLE!" Fluttershy shouted angry this time round. "What are you doing to the oTher bunnies you know that I will feed you, now go and wait for your food you little cutie" she delighted said and Angle did as she said and waited until it was his turn to get fed. Once Fluttershy had finished tending to her animal friends she let everyone of her animals outside to help her with her garden. She had a grand garden it had Roses, Tulips, Carnations, Frangipanis, lilies and much more. First she planted new seeds and watered them carefully by the help of Mr Bearing ton. She talked to her flowers for a bit and examined them for any bugs, she walked over to her tools basket to grab a weed tool but before she took hold of the tool she thought she saw a shadow go pass then she had that feeling she was being watched as she pulled the weeds out. After gardening she went inside to check the time to see if she was going to be late for her picnic with Drake. As she was getting ready she thought of her friend Discord, oh how she loved being around him but where was Discord. Once she was ready she looked gorgeous, she had put her mane in a loose ponytail and was hanging over her right shoulder, she had floral head band on and she put little makeup on because of her natural beauty. Once done she strolled out the door and waited on her door step for Drake. But as she walked out lurking in the shadows of the deep crack of the crystal empire was a being that was defeated long before and he was watching Fluttershy wait of this so called Drake. It was King Sombra. Sombra was looking through a glass ball of darkness, he watched as she waited for this pony named Drake. Who was Drake? He didn't know but he shrugged this off and summoned his glass ball of darkness away. "Hirt!" The king cried out in booming voice enough to intimidate ponies. "Y....yes sire" The scared royal adviser shakily said. "What does Shining Amour have that I don't in the Crystal Empire that makes him SO special and loved by every pony?" Sombra said in a slender tone. Hirt thought for a moment then he had the answer but tried not to anger his master by the answer. "Uhh a Queen my lord... Yes that's right he has Princess Cadence." Sombra thought deeply and nodded at Hirt's answer, he then put on an evil smile. "Yes of course I need a queen" he stood up "if I had queen then the Crystal Empire will be mine for the taking" he laughed evilly at his plan. "And Fluttershy will be my Queen!!!" He laughed and laughed with Hirt joining in with the laughter since he didn't want his majesty to think him bad stupid. "Hirt today I want YOU and the guards to get Fluttershy and I want her ALIVE!" He declared yelling out he last part, Hirt nodded quickly and started preparing the guards for the adventure and once done preparing they set off to get the Lady Fluttershy.
