Author's Note

Here is the full version of the third chapter hope you all enjoyed it and let me know of your ideas to let the story flow in any way and I would love to hear of your ideas for the story so let me know in the comments and have a wonderful day everypony.

The disastrous date. Opps I mean picnic.

As Fluttershy was waiting Discord, or Drake, was strolling down with nerves in his pony skeleton. He finally managed to get to her sweet little cottage and saw sitting on her Door step unaware that he had arrived, he thought he needed to gift her a gift to match her beauty and with that he summoned a bouquet of Roses, dasies and frangipanis. He was ready. He took a deep breathe before coming across the little bridge she had on her property. "Oh Fluttershy, are you here my dear?" He asked joyfully, caught away from the sights of her flowers she looked up to see Drake walking up to her. "Hi Drake it's great to see you again, so shall we go dear sir?" she smiled as she courtesyed to him, Discord bowed back and held out his hoof to her. "Indeed we shall go my dear." Discord said in a suductive tone and waited for her to take his hoof. Fluttershy placed her hoof in Discords and admired his blue horn as he was a alicorn. Then they started to walk to the park with Picnic basket in hoof.

While them two love birds were walking down to their picnic destination King Sombra's royal adviser was looking at them two in a crystal ball to spy on Fluttershy and to also get her so that the all mighty King Sombra could have her as his bride to take over the Crystal Empire and take Shinng Amour and Princess Cadence. Hirt looked up from his crystal ball and saw the guards slacking off. "Hey, stop Slacking by order of King Sombra we ALL must participate to capture the lady Fluttershy to be our new Queen you idiots!" He said with all his might since they were still in the snow storm of the icey part of the Empire and the guards quickly started running faster than ever to make sure that they weren't gonna get told off and sent to the dungeon, so they picked up the pace and soon enough they were on the boaders of the Crystal Empire and they entered their way off the boaders of the Emipre and headed off to Ponyville.

Discord and Fluttershy had arrived at the park and had begun to lay out the picnic blanket, discord wanted Fluttershy to rest and not do any work so she protested by helping him and making both of them laugh at her protests. Discord had brought down some lovely cucumber sandwiches, two mouth watering fruit salads and a carrot cake,just for Fluttershy. Fluttershy was amazed with all the food that Drake brought down and she took a bite of everything enjoying every bite, especially when having the carrot cake which she loved. While she was enjoying her food Discord just looked at her while eating his food, he started into her sea green eyes and he thought he could just get lost the sea she possesses in her eyes but his thought were interrupted by Fluttershy. "Hey Drake are you ok?" She asked. "Yes..yes I am Fluttershy... Oh and are you enjoying this picnic by any chance?" He answered with courage while hearing a loud clip clopping of an army of something but he didn't think about it as much. "Yes, oh Drake it's been wonderful I would love for us ..... To ...... Do it ....again." Fluttershy said stunned at what she was seeing, it King Sombra's Army and they were coming straight for her, Drake took caution and tried to protect Fluttershy from the guards trying to catch her up and into one of the carriages.

Everyone one of the guards was hopelessly trying to grab Fluttershy and take her but Discord was fighting them off with his disguised magic. But all hope for saving Fluttershy from the guards was when Hirt's carriage arrived and every pony kept fighting but the some of the guards stopped. "Where is the Lady Fluttershy?" He said in the sternest voice he could do. "Come now TELL ME BY THE ORDER OF KING SOMBRA!" Shouted Hirt making Fluttershy whimper from behind Discord and loud enough that Hirt looked behind Discord to see Fluttershy and Hirt managed to grab Fluttershy by the hoof and nearly drag her to the carriage, Fiscord tried to stop him. "No stop you can't take her she is innocent she has done nothing wrong." Discord said with tears in his eyes since now he could reach Fluttershy when she was in the carriage. "Oh we know she has done nothing wrong it's just that the King is very lonely and he needs something to keep him occupied for a bit that's all and also you better wave goodbye because she's never coming back!!!" Proclaimed Hirt, Discord didn't get the courage to jump on the carriage which Hirt was now climbing on to, and just to hold Fluttershy with all his might and not let them take her away. But by the time he was going to do it Fluttershy and the Army had started their journey to the Crystal Empire.