
Life Of The Party
This is just a practice short story. I want criticism so I know what to do differently.
This is a practice short story. I shouldn't be doing all of these big projects until I know the basis of wriiting I need to become better, so I wrote this practice one. When a Pony known as Sound Screech loses his parents unexpectedly he begins to fall into depression. Until he meets his idol, the one and only Vinyl Scratch, who shows him that even though he has lost what he thought made his life worth living, there is always so much more to it than meets the eye. (PS not going to bother putting in a cover picture for this one. Just read and give me some constructive criticism please.)
5825 words: Estimated 29 minutes to read
2 Chapters:
- Life Of The Party 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC4597
- Epilogue 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1228