A Monster In Equestria

by Nightmare_of_the_Night

Strange Creation

Previous Chapter

I was still being carried to wherever these ponies were taking me too and I was still very tired from running away from those wooden wolves and lashing out at a tree. I had barely regained any strength so I’m going to have to kick it into overdrive. The ponies around me were talking about something and I didn’t focus on it. Mainly because they were talking about me and something about the possibilities of the knowledge I could hold. Hey even though I wasn’t paying attention I’m still right next to them so it’s kind of hard to block out everything.

But while they were talking I wondered something. How is it that just a few hours ago I was just a college student and then I get abandoned in the woods and humiliated and then I come here and I couldn’t even move from being too tired. Its lie the universe is playing another sick joke on me. I opened my eyes to see the starry night sky and I felt that they weren’t pinning me down for some reason but I didn’t care it’s just easier for me to escape. I also felt my dagger in my hand still while my arm hung limply. I looked around me and saw that there were many buildings and that could be useful for cover or for out running any of these ponies.

I still couldn’t move when I heard the sound of a door opening. I cracked my other eye open and looked around and saw that we were going into a building. The lights came on and I shut my eyes quickly from the harsh light that burned my eyes. They kept walking and another door opened and I could feel that we were going down some stairs from the way gravity was pulling on me. It started to get colder the more we went down and I thought that this must be a basement or something. I was set down on something cold and was strapped into whatever I was set on. I finally opened my eyes back open and saw that I was indeed in a basement, there were concrete walls around me and I looked at what I was set on and it was a metal table with buckle straps around my wrists and ankles.

“Thank you girls. Now let's find out what this thing is. Oh it’s awake.” a voice said and I looked toward where the voice was originating from and I saw a purple pony with a indigo mane and tail with a dark purple and pink stripe going through her mane and tail. She had a butt tattoo of a purple star with smaller white stars around it.

“What? Where am I?” I asked my memory becoming fuzz for some reason.

“You’re in the Golden Oaks Library in Ponyville. What are you exactly? I’m not picking up any magic from you so you can’t be from this world.” she says putting a hoof to her chin and humming in thought. All of a sudden she gasps loudly and gets a huge smile on her face. “This means that your from a different world! Your an alien that's right here in Equestria!” she says and she squeals.

“Uh wait what? I’m in Equestria? Where’s that at?” I asked clearly out of it from blood rushing to my head.

“Well Equus of course! I mean where else would you be?”

“What is he some sort of spy?” a rainbow maned pegasus pony asked flying up right into my face.

“Ah don’t think he’s a spy. If he was one of em’ then he would be better at sneakin,’ well that's what Ah think anyway.” the orange one with the stetson hat on said.

“Let me run some tests and research what he might be. Oh I should send a letter to Princess Celestia about him. He could hold secrets that could help with science!” the purple unicorn said with a much too creepy smile ear to ear. I mean seriously her smile went from ear to ear.

“What are you going to do to me?”

“I’m just going to run some tests on your blood and your magical ability. Although I don’t sense any magic coming from you but my machine might be able to pick some up.” she said walking over to a big metal machine.

It had all kinds of wires coming from it with red and green lights with a console that had many buttons on it. She took something that looked like a draining bowl that had wire running from the top of it and levitated it over to me and put it on top of my head. She went back over to the console and pushed some buttons and the machine came to life as it sputtered and kicked as it started working. An electrical bolt went up the wire that lead to the thing on my head and I felt my senses immediately starting to fade away.

Then a surging pain went all throughout my body and I screamed in pain as I tried to force my hands out of the buckle straps strapped around my wrists as I pulled on them trying to slip out of them so I could pull this thing off of my head. But my intentions were useless since it was very tight to where I couldn’t get enough space to pull them out and I laid there screaming in pain. The pain strengthened and I screamed even louder as I could feel my bones and flesh starting to turn. I heard one of them say something but there was so much pain that I didn’t care and I just screamed while hoping this would stop.

My flesh felt as if it was being moved around with my bones moving inside my body all around and it felt like more bones were being formed and put into place all throughout my body. In the corner of my eye I saw fear in all of their eyes as they all went to the machine and started to push buttons trying to turn the machine off but they couldn’t and it sent out a shockwave and they fell to the ground unconscious as I still laid there screaming in excruciating pain.

Soon I couldn’t take the pain anymore and my body started to feel cold as my eyes started to feel heavy and slowly started to close. My head drooped down and the last thing I saw were my clothes being torn apart and then it all turned to black.


I woke up to the sound of something clanging on the ground and hoof steps I think. Th last thing I remembered was blacking out from the pain I was in because of that machine. I slowly opened my eyes and saw black spots all over the basement with the three ponies laying on the ground and groaning in pain. I looked all around the room with a horrified expression and I noticed something else too, I wasn’t on the table like I was before, now I’m on the floor without being strapped down to the table. I looked around slowly and saw the table broken in half and leaned up against the wall on the side of the room. I placed my hands on the ground and tried to push myself up but my body felt so sore that I just fell straight back to the ground.

I could feel my body slowly convulsing and bones moving around quickly like it had before I blacked out. I sensed a strength in my body I never felt before and I tried to get up again and I did so shakily at first but jumped up onto my feet. I looked at the ponies that were still lying on the ground and they started to stir awake and I looked over at the stairs and slowly started to walk towards the stairs. I heard them starting to stir even more and I looked back and saw them starting to stand up and I tried to walk faster and I felt my bones move around in y legs and chest and I could walk better now and I started to run up the stairs. I looked down at my feet while running up the stairs and saw that i didn’t have my shoes on anymore and I saw that my feet had very long claws where my toenails should be. They were at least a foot long and they were very sharp to the point and I almost lost my balance but caught myself before I did so.

I made it to the top of the stairs and opened the door and I was met with a bright light and I brought my hand up and shielded my eyes and I saw another alien thing. My hand was completely black with purple veins showing as it pulsed and pumped blood throughout my body. I looked at my hand closer and saw that my nails were sharp as well and weren’t as long as the nose on my feet but still very sharp. I clenched my hand into a fist and a large blade came out of my arm as fast as lightning and it was about five feet long and I almost stumbled back but I used my other hand and waved it around in circles regaining my balance and stood up straight. I heard voices coming from the basement and I decided to study my body even further once I find a place to hide.

I run to a door and opened it and moonlight invaded the room and I ran outside not bothering to close the door behind me. I ran as fast as I could with my renewed energy and it seemed like I was even faster than before as buildings zipped past me like streaks of light. In the distance I heard hoofsteps and I turned my head and looked behind me and I saw the three ponies that were in the basement with me chasing after me. I ran even faster and I could feel more bones in my back shifting and I started to lower myself to the ground and ran on all fours and I was getting away from them. But the rainbow maned one caught up to me and flew right beside me and was yelling something but i didn’t pay any attention and I ran faster and turned a sharp corner and she flew and ran into a street light post head irst.

I ran off with no ponies behind me and I saw a first off in the distance and I made my way towards it hoping to finally get away from all these dangerous things. After a few minutes of running I broke through the tree line into the forest and stopped running and my bones shifted and I stood up straight on two legs again. I was panting heavily from running so fast and I was confused and very scared at what I had become and what I could do. I need to find something to show what I look like. I thought to myself as I looked around and I knew that I wouldn’t find any mirrors in this place so the best option is to find a puddle or pond.

So that's exactly what I did, I started to walk around in dead silence through the forest I had come out of from being chased by those timberwolves. Hey that’s a good name, I’ll start calling them Timberwolves from now on. I thought as I came to an opening in the forest.

I looked around and didn’t see an animal in sight. Not even those glowing green eyes were anywhere near me, I also noticed something strange, when I had entered the forest all sounds of animals stopped and there were a lot of sounds going on when I was running towards the forest. I stopped thinking and saw a big pond in the center of the opening and I stepped out into the opening and I saw that my pants were torn to shreds and my whole leg was black. I walked over to the pond and prepared myself for what to see. I slowly leaned over the edge of the pond and saw nothing but a dark figure. I noticed that my hood was over my head and I lifted my black hands and slowly took off my hood. I gasped in horror at what I saw and stared in shock at what was showing me in the reflection. The reflection looked like me but also not me, instead of my green eyes I had dark red eyes with cat like pupils replaced them and I didn’t have a nose either just two holes to allow me to breath. I still had my hair but it was much shorter than before and it was black instead of brown. My ears weren’t rounded like before either, instead they were pointed and had holes in them. The worst part was my flesh that was once tanned was now black like my hand and leg. I opened my mouth and I had very sharp teeth that looked like it could tear through anything with a snake like tongue in my mouth replacing my other one.

I stumbled back horrified at my reflection and tripped over my feet and fell to the ground. I slowly crawled back over to the pond thinking it was playing a trick on me and I see the exact same reflection. I scream in horror, agony, and in fear at what I had become, and I screamed a terrifying roar that even scared me making me think something was here. I was nothing but a freak, a beast… a monster. I crawled into a ball and started to cry but I didn’t cry tears at all and I just weaped with no tears flowing down my cheeks or even collecting in the corner of my eyes.

Why did I have to become a monster? Why did it have to happen right after being abandoned by my friends? Why did it have to happen to me!?

I thought to myself as I just laid there on the cold damp ground huddled into a ball thinking that this was a nightmare and that I would take up any second. I waited minutes and even what felt like hours just waiting for this horrible dream to end. But I never woke up, the dream never ended. I was stuck like this in a planet I don’t know anything about and with beings that want to experiment on me and most likely tear me apart just for science.

I felt my eyes becoming heavy and the last thing I saw was the moon shimmering almost like it was winking to me as I fell into a deep sleep. All I wanted at that moment… was to be killed quickly for this nightmare to end.


I woke up to the sun blinding my eyes and the sound of a cool breeze blowing past me. I slowly sat up with my eyes shut tight and my hand covering my eyes. I slowly opened my eyes and saw a black hand and my eyes widened as memories of last night flooded my brain. I let my hand drop back to my side and I slowly stood up and looked around at the scenery before me. Even though I had looked around at the scenery last night I didn’t get a good enough look from the moonlight although having enough light for me to see I couldn't see everything that was around me just the pond and some other things.

There weren’t any animals around me, that's to be expected, and there wasn’t much around here to tell about. There were a few plants around the edge of the pond on the other side and one patch of them looked blue and very small with lighter blue spots on the petals of the flower and they seemed to give off some sort of odor that smelled strange and I could also see the odor coming off of the flower itself. I walked over to them and tugged one out of the patch and I stood up straight and brought the flower up to my nose and sniffed it a bit. I could feel something moving around in my body, it wasn’t my bones for some reason and I felt a familiar sense rising up in my stomach. I puffed out my cheeks and belched a huge one and instead of it just being gas it was fucking blue smoke.

I stare at the strange smoke and reach my hand out to touch it but it felt like my body stopped me from touching it and it floated away from me and over to the blue flowers and right on top of them. My eyes widened at what happened next, the flowers all white and turned black and died, the smoke wasn’t just gas, it was poisonous gas. The smoke dispersed and I bent down and poked the flowers and they turned to dust when I poked them. I wondered what made me do that and if I could do that again.

There was a howl that made me jump back to reality and I looked towards the direction it came and didn’t see anything yet. Then after a few seconds a timberwolf jumped through the treeline out into the sun. Three more jumped out and made their way around the pond while growling at me. I looked at them and then remembered the blades that came out of my arms yesterday and I clench my hands into fists and a blade came out through each arm and the wolves didn’t slow down or even flinch when they came out, they just kept their eyes on their prey. They came over to me and started to circle around me and I waited for them to try and pounce on me.

After several seconds of waiting one of them finally pounced on me. It was the one behind me and I spun around and used my blade to cut through it like a hot knife through butter. The wooden wolf fell to the ground in a pile of sticks and twigs. The others growled even louder and two more pounced on me and I ducked before they could get me and I heard them collide and I felt my bones move upward and i could feel them come out of my back and I heard a gurgling sound and then I felt something sticky on my back. I looked back and saw that I had metal bones sticking out of my back and it was like a fish fin. They stuck through the timberwolves as their blood oozed down my metal bones and onto my back. instead of their blood being, well blood, it was tree sap. My bones immediately sank back into my body and the two now dead timberwolves started to fall and I rolled out of the way before they came tumbling down on me.

I looked at the last one which was giving me a death glare from mie killing his comrades. He gave me a blood shivering growl and he lowered himself and readied himself to pounce. After a few seconds he finally pounced and in one quick motion I brought my hand back and put as much force into my swing and as soon as my hand was close to him and I brought my blade out at the last second and it went through it’s mouth and deep into it’s body. I sheath my blade back in my arm and let the body fall down while tree sap oozed out if the limp body of the wolf.

I looked around me at the body that laid on the ground with puddles of tree sap around them. They all had incisions on their bodies from my blades and I looked down at my hands and I was confused, and mostly terrified. How did I even do that? Was it out of instinct, or was that actually me? So many questions were going through my head at the time but there was one that stuck out the most. What have I turned into?

I felt tears starting to form in the corner of my eyes and I wiped them away and I heard a twig snap. If that's anymore Timberwolves then I don’t want to face anymore so I best get out of here while I can. I started to sprint in a random direction trying to get away and still wanting to wake up from this nightmare. But I didn’t know a certain purple unicorn stepped out into the open area and caught a glimpse of the creature running away.


Twilight Sparkle sat in her living room sipping on a cup of tea while staring at her basement door. Spike had brewed her some tea for the night soon after waking up and finding out what had happened to her machine, and had stayed up and it was now around 9 o’clock. Well that's what she thought the time was as of now. Even though she didn’t completely know what happened to the creature that had came here she knew that it didn’t have any magic, but now it had magic that was off the charts. It also looked completely different than from when she saw it at first.

She took another sip of her tea and she let out a deep sigh. She decided that she wouldn’t be able figure everything out without that creature and she got up and sat her cup of tea back on the silver platter and walked up the stairs that led to her room. once she got up to her room she grabbed a satchel and started to grab scrolls, ink wells, feathers she used for writing and many other things she thought she may need. Once she was satisfied with what she had she walked back down the stairs and into the living room.

“Spike I’m heading out!” she yelled throughout the house to her assistant.

“Alright see ya!” the dragon yelled back from somewhere within the tree library.

Twilight walked over to the front door and opened it with her magic and walked out and closed the door behind her. She started to make her way towards where she saw the creature the last. After a few minutes of trotting to her destination she made made it and stopped at the edge of the Everfree forest. She took a deep breath and took a step into the forest and started to make her way around hoping to find the creature.

After several minutes of walking, which felt like hours for her, through the thick and dense forest she was about to give up on finding the creature. then she heard a noise off not to far from where she was at. She didn’t know what it was but it was a clue to what she is looking for. She slowly made her way to the direction of the noise and after a few minutes of walking she came to a stop at the edge of an opening in the forest.

What she saw was something of a nightmare. It was the creature fighting off timberwolves, breaking and dodging their every move that they threw at it but it was so agile that their attempts seemed to be useless. She watched the scene play out with bated breath as the strange creature tore the timberwolves to pieces. After it had finished the last timberwolf off she blinked a few times from not being able to take her eyes off of what was happening. The creature just stand there for a few minutes before running off into another part of the forest and she tried to cry out for it to stop but she choked on her words and watched as the creature broke through the tree line and off into another art of the forest. She stepped out into the opening and looked at the bodies of the timberwolves and covered her muzzle with a hoof from the smell that seeked through her nostrils.

“I need to report this to the princess.” she said to herself as she made her way back to her house. It seems our little friend will be having trouble soon. Or will he have an ally?


Author's Note

Hey guys thanks for reading this chapter and I’d like to give another huge thanks to ZexFireWolf109 for helping me with everything in this chapter and many further chapters that will be coming out soon. Once again I hope to see you all soon!