Chapter 1-New World (Un-Edited)-(New Version)
Author's Note
Well I'm happy to say that my newest story is here. Though this is a completely new version of how it started. I had gotten some feed back on my old chapter and decided to delete it and change it to this chapter. So I do hope you enjoy. The small description and long description have been changed to fir this story. This is will probably been the only fix chapter as I have the rest of the story done up in an outline. The tags will stay the same. Now I do hope you enjoy this new chapter and this new story. I'll try to keep the chapters coming for it.
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Chapter 1-New World (Un-Edited)-(New Version)
New World (Un-Edited)
Chrysalis slowly woke up and looked around. She could see she was in some kind of forest. She could also see that the night sky had come up. She slowly picked herself up off the ground. She rubbed her head with her hoof as she straightened up her crown, but she instantly noticed it was gone. She then looked around to see that she was in a forest. She then began to growl and pound her hooves on the ground.
"No this can't be. How could I have lost?" Said Chrysalis
Chrysalis wasn't sure how long she was out or where she even was. She sat on the ground and replayed the events of this afternoon. She remembered her plan for taking of Equestria was perfect. She had Princess Celestia in a cocoon and she had Cadance trapped. She had her drones hunting down the element bearers. She had Shining Armor in her spell and her drones were destroying the city. Everything was going according to plan until that unicorn got involved. She then remember Shining and Cadance coming together and using love as their weapon. That love made a wave of energy that sent her and her forces flying. Damn, defeated by the very thing I drain. Ironic if there ever was an ironic situation like it. But how could I have known Shining Armor and Cadance's love each other would be my defeat. This isn't fair!
She sighed as she got up and looked around again. She couldn't see any of her drones. Now where are they? She activated a spell to tell her of any drones were close, but none were. Wait, I'm alone, this just got better. She sighed as she used her horn to illuminate the area around her. She looked to see she was on some kind of path. Well now this interesting, I wonder where this leads. She began to walk it and hoping for something interesting to happen to her.
She kept walking the path with her horn lighting the area. She soon found herself in front of an old temple. She could see that it was falling away with time. I wonder where in Equis I am. I have never seen anything like this before. She slowly entered the temple and looked around. She could see that it was extremely old as a lot of the writing on the walls had begun to fade with time. But she could see some of it was still intact. She stopped at a wall and looked at it. It had no words but only a few pictures. First was of two worlds that were extremely similar to each other. Then she could see ponies and some kind of monkeys. Both stood by a planet, she knew the planet the ponies were around was Equis, but the planet the monkeys were around was unfamiliar
"What is this place?" She asked herself
She began to walk more and soon found the moon light shining on a massive slab still standing. Everything on it was still intact. She looked to see the top showed the same image, but now had a strange tube connecting the two planets. She then stepped forward to see some words in Equis. She read them out loud to herself.
"This is the portal to the land of two walkers. To travel, one must sacrifice one part of themselves to open the portal. But be warned as you may never get back what you sacrificed. But you will be granted your greatest wish you desire. But be warned this portal is a one way trip to the world of two walkers. But also to claim your wish you must accomplish the goal the stone gives you. To begin, tell the tone what you wish to sacrifice about yourself."
Well now this is interesting. A portal to a world of two walkers, I guess those monkeys I saw. So if I complete some kind of goal, I get my greatest wish, well now that would be nice. Sure they say a one way trip, but I know with my wish, I'll be right back here. Now what to give up. Well surely not my magic. I'll need that in this new world. But I could lose the Changeling powers, though I would lose my shape shifting powers, but I wouldn't need to drain love. Alright, let's get this over with.
"Gate or whatever you are, I sacrifice my Changeling abilities to you." Said Chrysalis
She watched the stone slab began to glow and blue tentacles came out of it. They quickly wrapped around her and she watched as they turned red. Then they released her and she looked at herself. She was still a Changeling, but she didn't feel like a Changeling. Then she felt more tentacle wrap around her legs. She then watched as the middle opened into a portal.
"Your goal to accomplish is to find the key to your lock. Now be warned as you will never return to Equis and again and will live out the rest of your life in the world of two walkers. Do you wish to leave forever?"
"What kind of goal is that? Find what 'key to my lock'. Well I want my wish to be fulfilled, so I guess I'll take your deal. Send me and we will see if I ever return." Said Chrysalis
"Your wish isn't always the one may think you want. For this gate will give you a wish you have wanted for years and sits at the back of your mind waiting to come true." Said the slab
"Whatever, just send me already." Said Chrysalis
The portal soon opened and Chrysalis smiled at it. Goodbye Equis and hello world of two walkers. She was flung into the portal and it closed back up behind her as it went back to just stone, waiting for the next pony to come to its gates.
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Chrysalis kept falling more and more through the portal. It felt like it was taking years to get herself to this other world. She soon saw a light and smiled as the portal was coming to an end. Soon it spat her up in a forest. She looked behind her as the portal closed. She then looked to see it was morning now and she was again in the forest, but something felt different about this forest. She could tell she was no longer on Equis. She could also feel no magic running through out the land. She then looked to the sky. She saw that the sky was full of clouds. She could also feel the sun light on her, it felt different.
Well this is a strange world. It looks like Equis, but doesn't feel like it. Oh well, time to get this goal quest done. Then back to Equis so I can rule Equestria and maybe all of Equis to. But first I still have to figure out this stupid goal, 'find the key to my lock'. What in the hay does that mean?! She sighed as she began to walk the forest hoping to find some kind of life. She soon started to feel dizzy, like the world was spinning faster than she was used to. Her vision was started to blur and she would have to blink to get her vision back. She even started to walk strange, like she was drunk. What's going on?! She then fell to the ground but pushed herself back up. She then began to walk again, but with the same effects.
Could it be this planet? She soon saw a one story house that looked like nothing she had ever seen. She soon tried to walk, but her body wouldn't let her go another step. She soon fell straight down and laid there. She tried to take some calming breaths, but it just made her want to vomit. She soon heard the sound of something coming up to her. Before she lost consciousness, she saw a being on two legs wearing some kind of foot wear. I wonder if this is that monkey two walker I saw. She couldn't think anymore as she fell into an unconscious state.
Chapter 2-Meeting (Un-edited)
Meeting (Un-Edited)
Ethan White sat back in his chair. He was chewing the end of his pencil. He found that it strangely calmed him down, but it was more to keep himself entertained with his boring life. Ethan White was a twenty-five years old, 6'1'' male human. He had dark brown hair and sea green eyes. He had a modest set of muscle on his body. He worked out here and there since he knew a healthy life style was the best way to live. He was in a brown suit as he sat behind his desk. Ethan worked at a local law firm in Florida. He was a smart kid and was able to make it through college and then law school. He was able to pass the bar exam in one take, but took him a lot of studying. He was now a lawyer, but he found it wasn't what he had expected. But he felt other things in his life were the reason he felt so bored with it.
He sighed as he looked at his clock. He saw that it was 5 pm. He sighed happily as his day was over. He packed up his brief case and closed up his office. He then proceed out and waved goodbye to all the people that worked at the firm. He then went out to his convertible and then placed his keys in the ignition. He then began to drive down the road to his house.
Just another boring day at the office. Man, I never thought that I would live such a boring life. I mean, I thought the life of a lawyer would have been interesting. But I have to say, this is completely boring. He slowly pulled into his private drive. He lived in a forest area of Florida. It allowed him to live without many neighbors. He liked living without many people troubling him. He soon parked his car outside his one story house. Even though he had a large salary, he still left a one story house with two bedrooms and one and half baths was great. Plus he had a nice backyard. He got out of his car and locked it.
He walked up to his door and began to insert his keys into the lock. He then turned them and was hit with cool air from his air conditioner. He didn't mind the Florida heat of Summer, but it could get crazy. He closed the door and placed his brief case in his home office. He then walked over to his room and changed into something more comfortable. He came back out in a grey colored t-shirt and a pair of basketball shorts. He stretched out his back as he walked into his kitchen. He went over to his fridge and pulled out a tub with some left overs in it. Inside was a modest sized burrito from last night. He popped it into the microwave and began to let it cook.
He lend against the counter and looked at his nice house. But he sighed as it felt so empty. He had a large loving family back in South Carolina, but he found his job in Florida. Sure he could have worked in South Carolina, but this job paid more and was something he was always looking for when he was searching for law firms. But he never thought he would feel so lonely. He sighed as he heard the microwave beep at him. He pulled out his meal and grabbed a fork from a drawer. He then sat at his table and began to eat. He looked at the other chair and sighed again.
If I keep bumming myself like this, I might not find my life here. There's plenty of single ladies in Florida, well if they are interested in a lawyer like me. I guess I'm just to average for them. Well I guess I just keep moving along till retirement. Well I never now, the right girl might just be right outside, in my backyard. He chuckled to himself as he kept eating his food. When he was finished, he placed the tub and fork in the sink. He then went outside to water the vegetables and fruits he had planted. He found gardening to be quit relaxing, plus he blamed his mother for getting him into gardening.
He opened his sliding door that led out to his screen in patio. He then opened another door, which took him to his yard. He went over and looked over his garden. It was full of all types of vegetables and fruits. He looked through his garden to make sure no weeds had began to grow up. He then checked to see if any of his plants were ready to be picked. He could easily see that none were. He then grabbed his watering hose and began to water his plants. When he was finished he put his hose away. He was about to go inside when he heard a thud. He turned around and couldn't believe his eyes.
On his lawn was a some kind of bug horse thing. He ran up to it. When he got close, he could see it close its eyes. Huh, must have fell unconscious. He then looked over the strange creature. He could see that it was covered in some kind of black armor. Its hair or mane in this case and tail were a cerulean. It had a few set of holes throughout it. He could also see that its hooves also had holes in them, making them look like Swiss cheese. It had a strange jagged horn coming out of its head. It then had a pair of bug wings on its back with some kind of green thing on her body where the wings were folded onto.
I have never seen anything like it. I wonder what gender this thing is. Ethan went over to her tail and gently pulled it up. He easily put it down as a slight blush came to her face. Well female it is, I'll make sure never to look there again. He went back to the front of her and looked at her face. He then saw the fangs that hung from her upper lip. I wonder who and what she is. He scratched his head and looked up to see storm clouds rolling in and the distant boom of thunder. Oh what to do, should I call somebody. Well I'm pretty sure everybody would call, would think I was high on something. The police, well they might just think the same thing. The government's out, since I have no idea who I would even call. Well I guess I should take her in and make sure she's ok. Then when she wakes up, I'll get my answers.
Ethan bent down and lifting with his knees, picked up the strange female bug horse thing. He then took her into his home as the wind began to pick up. Crazy timing storm, but I guess we were planned to have rain for this weekend. Ethan opened the door to his screened in patio of his home and then walked into his house. He closed the sliding door. He then gently set the bug horse thing on his couch. He then went over to make some tea as the storm began to rage outside his house. I guess I was lucky to get her before the storm got her. Well I guess it did happen, I found a girl right outside, in my backyard. Ethan chuckled to himself as he kept brewing up the tea. He had so many questions to ask this new stranger. But little did he know, this was the beginning of something more than he could have ever expected.
