Jack The Changeling: The Beginning

by JackAttack

Rating: everyone
Tags: Drama, Sad, Random, Adventure
Length: 1328

My O.C goes on his first adventures of the first 20 years of his life.

The adventures of my O.C., Jack the changeling. Someone who is bad, but want's to be good.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-02-21 11:00:02 UTC

Canterlot

I have been walking for 5 hours now. I can see a sedlement in the distance. I knew it would be a pony seddlement, so I transformed into a filly. It was a male, blonde haired, and had a hammer cutie mark. The town was right in front of me the sign said Welcome To Ponyvile! I walked in and asked a local where canterlot was. He said that on that mountain, and pointed at one with a whole city on it. I asked how I could get there. My wings and legs barely had any strength left.  He said I could catch the next train. I thanked him, and he dissapeared. I heard a strange noise after his dissapearence. It was a sound like ooweeoo ooweeoo. I just walked along. The train had a lot of guards, so I snuck of the back. A guard must have saw me, so he yelled you there! Stop! I read the sign on the train and it said canterlot bank delivery. The train started, and I blew a raspberry at the guard.

When I reached canterlot I saw a chariot fly overhead. I thought I saw a dragon in it. I transformed into a guard. I didn't want people to think I was a kid any longer. I ran Into the castle doors. There I saw, Princess Celestia. I ran up to her and said, my princess, I have urgent news. She looked up from her mail, and asked what was wrong. I said I needed to tell her in privacy. She orderd the guards out of the room. I made her promis she wouldn't react until I  explained everything. She promised, and I transformed back into my Normal changeling self. She looked surprised, and I came clean. I told her my whole life story. It took a long time. She asked a few questions, and I answered truthaly. After I fineshed, she asked why a came all the way here. I told her I wanted a job. She asked what kind of job. I replied, I want a spy job, like if there's a party you are to busy to go to, I'll transform into you and go instead. She thought about it and said yes. I litteraly jumped for joy. She said my first mission was to go to ponyvile, and watch everything.

And our story has only just begun. THE END. (For now)

Origins

(Cooing) is this #453 General Blackwing?  Yes, that's the one #54.  OK, paperwork is all done general. May I see it? Sure, general. Go take your break, #54. Yes sir, general. He's gone, little one. Its time I take you with me to my chambers. (Rip) there, now the paperwork is destroyed. The next born will be #453. General Blackwing? A female voice said. It was the queen of all the changelings, Queen Chrisylis. She looked puzzled when she saw a lump in his suit. Then, a tiny head popped out. She also had a tiny head peak over her shoulder. I can explain everything, my queen, see I... I. He was interrupted. I understand, you wanted an apprentice, correct? Yes, I do. He said. She chuckled and said,"how about two?" General Blackwing Smiled. He asked what the second ones gender and name. The queen said a girl, but she was unnamed. Blackwing asked if he could name the two. He said,"the girl shall be Dark Rose." The queen liked that name. He then said,"the boy shall be named Jack, Jack the changeling." And so our story begins.

The Young Years

Hi! I'm Jack the Changeling! I'm only 5 years old! Im an apprentice of the fearless general, General Blackwing. He is very old, so that's why he got me and my friend, Dark Rose as his apprentices. She is training to be a spy. I am a special changeling. I'm way smarter that anyone my age I know! I've even made gadgets and gizmos. Sad thing is, they must be used for bad. I never wanted to be bad, and to be truthful, neather does General Blackwing. Jack? Said Dark Rose, What's wrong? She could tell I had a sad look on my face. Nothing, I said, and walked off.

I'm now 10 years old, and to graduate to General, I must be 20 years old. I don't only want to be general, I want to help my hive with my inventions. I've made some weapons, but nothing to harmful. From freezerays to net guns, I don't really know what there used for, but I hope its not as bad as I think. Dark rose has had Intense training. I know she wants to be a spy, but I think I should try to lead her to good. Our queen mentions our #1 enemy's name is Celestia. She says she's good. She also says she lives on the surface. I want to see the surface, but I don't wan't to get in trouble.

I'm just 15 and I have to go through the worst time of my life. General Blackwing passed away. No one knows how, but he died. His funeral is tommorow, and everyone will be there. Dark Rose didn't take it lightly. She has "changed" in a way. She is now training 2x as hard as before. I'm worried there's no trying to bring her to the good side. I'm working on a major wepon, said to capture all ponies on the surface. I still don't know what we will do to them once they are captured, but I've heard its not good. I just hope by the time I make this wepon, the hive is completely technical.

The Escape

Today is the day. I am now 20 years old! I am now of age that I can be general! Dark Rose is also of age for her job, Secret Agent.  We are doing the transition ceremony tonight, and I'm so exited! Dark rose is to. The ultimate wepon has been completed as well. We launch it right after the ceremony. I hope it doesn't do much damage. I added a self destruct button on it, too, just in case. Before the ceremony, I asked Dark Rose If she could talk to me for a minute. She said yes. I asked her if she ever, just ever for even one second wanted to be good. She said no, sadly. I acted like it was nothing, and entered the ceremony.

Its after the ceremony, and I am waiting for tonight. I can hear voices down the hall, I'm not much of a snoop, but the queen was talking to a guard. She sounded exited. Once this wepon is launched, all of equestrian will be converted into changelings! I didn't know what to do. Do I stop the plan? Or do I go along with it? I've made my dessision, I will hit the self destruct button. The whole hive will be destroyed, along with my technology, I hope. I will grab Dark Rose and run.

Its time to launch the wepon. The queen is to my left, and Dark Rose is to my right. In front of me, were two buttons. One to launch, and one to self destruct. Launch the wepon, Jack. The queen said. I then wispered to Dark Rose, run! And I slammed the self destruct button.  I flew out of the closing hole in the ceiling. I thought Dark Rose made it out, but she was still inside. I tried to fly back, but the door shut. I tried to break it open, but I heard a loud BOOM! And got launched far away. I hope my technology was destroyed I found a frog, and surprisingly, I could understand it, and it could understand me. I asked, why are frogs always happy? He ribbeted, and I said, because they eat whatever bugs them! I laughed so hard, and he ribbeted. I waved goodbye, and went on my way.