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Locked Out Kindness

by Onyx Archer
Fluttershy is on her way to Sugarcube Corner, when she comes across a frustrated pony looking for her lost keys. Introducing herself as Sour Sweet, Fluttershy offers to help her. How long will it take, and will a new friendship form?

On a chilly winter day when all of her friends are busy in one form or another, Fluttershy decides to pay a visit to Sugarcube Corner to pass the time. On the way, she comes across a distraught Sour Sweet, annoyed that she has lost her keys somewhere in Ponyville, a place that she only recently moved to. Being the bearer of the Element of Kindness, Fluttershy offers to help the mare find her missing keys. The question is how long will it take? Or will they even find them in the snow covered streets of Ponyville? And will this act of Kindness earn Fluttershy a new friend?

This story is a two-shot that takes place around in the same universe as "Cracks In Our Reflections," specifically between the events of Chapters 1-3. If you want to see where this goes beyond this two parter, than I suggest you follow the main story.

The "Romance" tag is for Implied FlutterSweet (Fluttershy x Sour Sweet). The rating is mostly because of Sour Sweet's language. Cover art done by Zanies!

Teen
Complete
Random
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
OF

6115 words: Estimated 31 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Part 1: Please Let Me Know 2016-02-21 23:53:46 UTC
    2475
  2. Part 2: What It Takes 2016-02-22 05:23:06 UTC
    3640