A Night With The Mare In The Moon

by Dark Chocolate

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Princess Luna, Sex, Human, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2891

Raiden finds he can no longer keep himself away from the one pony in all Equestria who understands him: the insatiable and seductive Princess Luna

After saving their kingdom from a brutal war, First Captain Raiden can no longer resist the call of the illustrious Princess Luna. Turns out she feels the same.

Some more subtle romance between Luna and Raiden if you want (see my blog post https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/601391/excerpt-from-king-of-the-dead-most-critical-scene-between-raiden-and-luna )

Published 2016-03-02 18:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2016-03-02 18:50:02 UTC

A Night To Remember

I lay in bed, staring at the massive full moon outside my window. Sleep wasn’t being a good sport, and I found myself with nothing to do but dream. I couldn’t get enough of her. I laid my head back against the pillow and closed my eyes.

I dreamed I had just walked up to the top floor of the castle, strolling outside and being met with the cool breeze of the night. Luna stands before me. Those teal eyes ever so intoxicating. She can’t hold back her feelings for me anymore. We look longingly into each other. Her gorgeous dark-purple fur looks like silk in the moonlight. We stop a mere foot from each other. I get down on one knee, and stroke her neck right under her jaw. She narrows her eyes, caught up in a storm of compassion, and desire. I bring my mouth to hers and we enjoy one long over-due kiss.

“Mmmmm, not bad.” I hear from my right, in that wonderfully stimulating light voice of hers. I look over, as a second Luna lays on the top of the banister surrounding the edge of the castle roof. She seems almost human like with her mannerisms. She has herself propped up on her side with her right-front leg. Her left leg lays relaxed on her side, with her hind legs stretched out and crossed. Her hair flows with the breeze, an astonishing blue and purple with a dash of glitter in it. She smiles at me, with that aroused stare she always has. A small bucket of popcorn sits in front of her. She pops a few pieces into her mouth with magic.

“Oh come now, don’t stop just because I’m here.” she says with a light giggle.

Something about her calls to me. As I stand, the Luna in front of me disappears, leaving just myself and the exotic creature on the wall. I want her. She was different somehow. My fantasy disobeys me, as I can’t get her to do anything. It arouses me even more. I slowly walk towards her, compelled to touch her. She brings her head back, mouth gaping open in a wonderfully surprised expression.

“Really? You’re really doing this?!” She beats her lashes at me. She turns her head to the right so I can only see one eye and cocks an eyebrow, still keeping that flirty smile she does so well.

“Captain Raiden...being forward romantically...never thought I’d see the day.” She embarrassingly glances at the ground, and closes her eyes for a second, then looks back up,
“It’s actually kinda hot.” She tilts her head back, and some of her hair covers one eye. She narrows an eyelid at me; I can barely hold it together. She was so good at looking seductive, it drove me wild. She gets up on all fours, gentle climbs off the banister and casually trots over to me.

We meet just a few feet from each other. She giggles softly.

"I'm not gonna lie, I've always liked your auburn hair." She reaches up with a hoof and brushes my beard playfully. She tilts her head to the side, all wide-eyed and erotic. Without hesitation I put my left hand under her jaw, tilt her head up towards me and kneel down to kiss her. Her mouth hangs open.

“Seriously? I’ve never seen this side of you!” She giggles right before we lock lips. Her breath tastes like oats and sugar. Her jaw trembles slightly as I bring my lips back and kiss her again. The corners of her mouth smile. I massage her tongue with mine. My pants had suddenly become too tight. I pull my mouth back from hers and stare into her teal eyes. She gapes at me.

“Holy!” She stammers for a second, an expression of overwhelming joyous surprise. Her eyes dart back and forth but she doesn’t break eye contact as she bits her bottom lip in anticipation.

I stand up, my eyes enjoying her form. I don’t care if I’m being forward, I want her. She giggles loudly and covers her mouth with both front hooves and sits back on her haunches.

“I can’t believe you’re really doing this! It’s so weird seeing you come charging out of your shell!” I reach forward and gently run my thumb across her mouth, licking my lips. I tilt my head back slightly and smirk.

“I want you so bad…” I say in a low, deep tone, full of all the repressed sexual tension between us. Her playful, but lustful giggle fills my ears. She puts her front hooves on my chest and raises herself on her hind legs so we’re equal height. I grab the back of her neck with my left hand and shove her mouth into mine. I go back to massaging her tongue with mine; she tastes wonderful like she’s been eating sugar cookies.

I reach down with my right hand and touch her side with my fingertips. She flinches a bit, her body overcome with sexual electricity. I run my fingertips down her side. She convulses more, wrapping her hooves around my neck and shuffling closer to me. I can feel a sense of warmth and wetness on the outside of my pants as she grinds against me. I pull my mouth off hers. Her eyes are wide and twitchy as she’s overcome with anticipation and desire.

I gaze into those exotic eyes of hers, the ones that have been driving me mad since I arrived here. I bring myself just an inch from her face. Her mouth hangs open and twitches, unsure of what to do next. I give her my most serious stare and say “I’m going to ravage your body.” She stares at me, then slowly nods her head, still gawking at me. I put both hands on her haunch and pull her in as hard as I can. I can’t possibly be any more erect at this point and she feels it. She grinds to the left and right on it, forcing me to feel the gentle ridges of her clit. I start sucking on her neck, growling in my throat which vibrates all along her skin. She gasps and moans in my ear, with that delicious light voice of hers. I was leading this time. She wasn’t going to play with me any longer.

We gently fall to the floor. She holds onto my neck as we squirm. I aggressively run my hands up and down her haunches, still sucking and kissing her neck. Her head flails to the left and right, unable to take my sexual advances.

“Oh...oh god…” she moans over and over again. The front of my pants are now dripping wet from her desires. I reach up with my left hand and hold her mane, keeping her head still, bringing her ear to my mouth.

“I’m gonna make you get off all over this damn roof.” I tell her, as if I was ordering around a soldier. I unbutton my pants as I say this, pulling out my spear for her.

She can’t get more than two words out as she keeps moaning and groaning from anticipation. I get between her hind legs, despite her excited squirming. I grab my shaft, and caress her clit, trying my best not to dive straight in. She lifts her head, eyes wide open, watching me massage her. She pants and moans as loud as she can, not holding back. She finally cries out “Just do it!!”

I ram myself in. We both let out yells of pleasure, as I feel the silky moisture all over. All the looks she’s given me, every smile, every wink, I give her a hard pounding for every last one. She holds onto my neck with her hooves. I reach around to her back and lift her off the floor. I stand there, deep in her, holding on to her as I ram every last ounce of sexual tension from her body.

She screams “yes!” in my ear over and over. I can feel a warm wetness running down my leg, and it makes me pound her even harder. She presses her mouth against my ear as she screams her praises to me. I hold her still for a brief moment, trying to stop myself from finishing. She pants in my arms. I gently lay her on the ground before aggressively turning her over on to all fours. I grab ahold of her thighs and pull her up to me, and dive in again. I hold onto her hips, slamming her over and over. She moans as loud as she can. I slap her ass a few times while pounding her, before grabbing the top part of her mane and making her head jerk backwards. She arches her back, making my iron rod thrust violently into her moist canals.

I continue my assault for another 10 minutes before pulling out, grabbing her from behind and putting her front hooves on the banister. I plunge back into her, holding onto her mane. I stand behind her, slobbering all over her silky neck. Her hot breath is a giant steam cloud in the night air. I hold her haunches close to me with my right hand, as my left keeps her head back by holding on to her mane. I pound her so hard that her rear hooves come off the ground just enough to make a slight clomp sound as they land again. I hear her scream my name over and over again, right before she lets out one final shriek, as her body shudders against the banister.

I open my eyes, gazed up at the ceiling, unable to believe the vivid fantasy I just had. I noticed it had become much darker in the room. Curious as to the lack of moonlight, I turn my head towards the window. Blocking the moonlight was Luna sitting in the window with a mischievous smile on her face.
I tried to cover up the tent I was pitching by raising my left leg, blocking her view. She gives me a quiet chuckle and glides to my bed.
“Can’t sleep again?” she says with a flirtatious wink.
I stammer for words but nothing comes to mind, as I stare at her in an awkward horror.
She looks towards my crotch, and smiles slightly larger.
“Whatcha got there?” she giggles.
“Um...nothing, just getting comfortable.” I say weakly. She reaches over with her left hoof and bats it once. “What’s dat?” she says, in a pretend innocent voice.
“Nothing!” I roll over to my right side.
“Aw common, I wanna see what it is!” She tries to nuzzle her way under the blanket.
“It’s nothing!” I roll back to my left side, facing her to head her off. She reaches over and bats it again. “Aw common, what is it!?”
“What are you doing?!” I say in a harsh whisper.
This back and forth continues four more times, with her giggling madly the entire time.
She finally reaches over with her teeth and pulls back the blanket, revealing the truth behind what I was thinking about. She lets out an intentionally overacted gasp.
“Raiden!” She proclaims, looking me in the eyes, still smiling slightly despite trying to appear shocked.
“I...I just…” stuttering is all I can manage.
She goes back to just staring at me, with that same gentle smile she does so well. I try to slowly reach over and move the blanket back over my crotch with my left hand, but she protests by putting her hoof gently on my hand. She climbs next to me in the bed, and sits there, enticing me with her eyes. Part of me starts to relax.
“What’s wrong? Was the first time too much?” She lets out a soft giggle.
“Wh...what do you mean?”
“You know I can go into dreams right?”
I gawk at her, then realize she’s just messing with me. I scoff.
“Yeah, sure you can.”
She licks her lips and brings her mouth to my ear. She whispers in that exhilarating flirty voice.
“I want you so bad!”
The tiniest smile I had on my face disappears completely. My mouth hangs open in a silent horror.
“I...I’m sorry..I…”
She grins and narrows her eyes, doing that arousing flirtatious look.
“I don’t think you’re quite getting the picture, I can do a lot more than just go into the dream.” she beams softly.

I do everything in my power not to ravage her. She leans in and gives me a slow, passionate kiss. We lay there, making out for a bit. Her hot breath pouring from her nose gets more and more rapid. I slide my tongue around hers, enjoying the taste of her mouth just like in my dream. She pulls her head back, smiles at me, gives me a quick kiss, then moves her head down to my shaft.

She steals one last glance at me, before smiling, and licking it. She does it slowly, almost admiring my spear. Her lips ravage my head and I feel myself pulse in reflex. I grab the sheets at my sides, grit my teeth and moan. She’s thorough and leaves no part untouched. I shake my head up and down a few times, barely able to handle the immense pleasure I’m receiving. She gives it another slow lick, I prop my head up, just wanting to watch her.. My eyes bulge as I feel her tongue curls around my meat.

She hears me, and turns her head so I can see her right eye. She takes the whole thing in her mouth as far as it will go. I gasp as I feel the inside of her mouth on every inch of it. She almost inhales it in her mouth, gradually lifting her head, wrapping her tongue around it. It starts throbbing in her oral grasp. She doesn’t let the tip slide out as she smirks at me. I try to think of something to say. I want to thank her or promise her the world. My thoughts are a train wreck as she gradually goes back down. The roof of her mouth makes me squirm as she lets it go deeper. I feel every ridge and every twitch of her tongue. I let out a loud groan. It echoes down the halls. I was grateful my room was in a completely secluded section of the castle, although I’m sure there were a few guards who heard what was going on.
She lets go of my shaft. It stands tall; throbbing and bobbing, wanting more.
She makes her way back to my head.
“Did you like that sweetness?” I’m in shock.
“Where...where did you learn that?!”
She giggles to herself.
“I’ve had a lot of time to think over the years. So I had plenty of time to practice what I would do if I finally found a good suitor.”
I stammer, trying to think of something romantic to say on the spot. “You’re...amazing…”
She smiles and gives me another passionate kiss again. She pushes my head back with her mouth. My skull grinds into the pillow as she searches the interior of my mouth with her tongue.

She positions herself directly over my waist. She moves her lower body right behind my shaft, and uses her clit to press it down onto my stomach. She starts grinding against it. We both moan, as we do our best to make out. She supports herself on her front legs, with my head in between them. Her moisture drives me wild. I run my hands up and down her sides, massaging her tongue with mine. She gets more furious with her grinding. We’re throbbing, doing our best not to get off, thus ending our fabled night. Panting, she grabs hold of my bottom lip briefly, then shoving her delicious tongue down my throat. I grab her haunches and hold her down as hard as I can, almost trying to erode our genitals together.

She springs up, and guides my shaft into her. We both let out loud gasps, followed by vigorous groaning. Her smooth insides make me quiver. She rides it up and down, forward and back, side to side, letting months of our mutual repressed sexual tension fly out the window. We’re panting too hard to kiss anymore. All we can do is stare into each other, wide-eyed and full of pleasure. Her warm breath on my neck is almost enough to do me in. I hold on to her sides, doing my best not to get off. She rocks back and forth as hard as she can. She closes her eyes and starts crying out. I feel her pelvic bones deep inside her. Her joyous cries and warm breath are too much. I grab ahold of her mane and back, and hold her against me as I get off. The sensation makes her shudder too, as we both enjoy climaxing together.
She lies on top of me, still keeping me inside her. We lay there, just enjoying the moment. I stare at the ceiling, still in shock of what just happened. I couldn’t believe it. Her silk, warm fur feels like heaven under my fingertips.