rainbow factory liberation

by dom763

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Random, Human, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1829

the nightmare haunts me to this day. my friends rachan, aaron, jacob, and steven are concerned about me. my paranoia is outrageous... the factory and her, rainbow dash are here. im thrown in the loop with my friends. im scared. i must take a stand.

Dominik has been haunted by this dream of the factory that he has not spoken to anybody about. being a human on earth no one believes a fairy tale. except when they come to life to the person who fears it. follow him on this most hellish story ever. in the ever ongoing attempt to erase the nightmares that haunt him.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-03-15 16:24:26 UTC

chapter 2- the time has come

                                                                                           chapter 2- the time has come

An hour after friends left for work.

" the day has started." talking to myself, very deadpanned.

"that nightmare still clouds my head like a thundering lion roar. i need to find out what this means." i go to my laptop searching up what this was. all that popped up was a story about the "rainbow factory" story.

i had no idea what it was but then i gave it a shot to read. (3 hours later)

"holy shiitake mushrooms. that's...that's messed up." i read the whole thing and from the way it was thought out from the author aurora dawn, made me tingle up inside.

"was this what i was dreaming about?" i asked myself.

i thought about it for 10 mins before coming to a conclusion...the rainbow factory was my dream.

i had only gotten glimpses of it and here i was looking at it.

the picture was clear, but what didn't make sense was when i said " is this real?"

it couldn't have been real.

it was a made up story.

but it hit me when a weird thought came to me. "it will come" i thought.

i didn't even think it was my own thought, i thought it was someone else's thought.

i was looking at my OC coolstare. a picture drawn for me long ago in high school...by a friend named Alex.

i wonder to myself if that's what i'll look like. i decided to take a nap. (1 hour later) i was dreaming again. this time a blue horse looking Alicorn came up to me. i recognized her name, Luna the dream walker, the princess of the night. she told me that what i fear most is going to happen. i can't remember after that but i think she was talking about the rainbow factory.

i woke up later to hear the sound of rachan walking in the door saying " Dom! you need to come see this."

i responded, "what is it?"

rachan then said "i don't know but something is in the living room."

i got up and ran to the living room where the others were. i started thinking when did these guys get here. then they answered that they got off work early. i was looking at what seemed like a portal. i could tell because of the shape, the size, and the sound. we all wondered what it was, until i spoke out, " it's a portal."

Steven asked " should we go through it?"

then Aaron said " are you dumb?! good things never happen when going into a portal!" Aaron shouted.

then i said " only one way to find out. are you with me gang?"

all except Aaron "sure".

then we looked at Aaron.

then he said " ah, what the hell. YOLO."

we all went in. i was wondering what was on the other side. i was gonna have to wait.

chapter 4- the price you pay

                                                                                                        chapter 4- the price you pay

when we woke up we were next to a bunch of fillies and colts. the one i recognized when i got up was scootaloo. she had failed her flight test and this was her punishment... to be grounded up into rainbows. my friends were all here but we didn't have time to talk as two doors opened up.

                         "welcome worthless foals. To the rainbow factory." a masked voice said.

"i recognize that voice." i said whispering.

the pony rainbow dash went on and on about the spectra and answered any questions the foals had. that was when scoots had enough.

                         " i thought you loved me!" scoots shouted.

       I've never heard scoots say that before or scream. after her episode with rainbow dash, rainbow dash told a guard to bring one of the foals up. specifically Orion. when the guard was about to bring him up, Jacob intervened.

                         " like hell you will!" jacob shouted as he ran to free the little colt.

                         " stun him!" rainbow dash said.

jacob was stunned to the ground, still conscious. rainbow had them both ready to be thrown in the Pegasus device.

                         " no don't, please!" i shouted.

                         " for those of you who attempt to rebel...this is the price you pay." rainbow dash said as she pushed Orion and jacob over the edge.

                         " no! (i see them pushed over and the last thing i hear is the noise of the device grinding them up) NOOOOO!" i shouted crying.

          i saw my friend die in front of my eyes...i had no hope after that. the last thing i remember, was steven sobbing. he had given up hope.

chapter 5 - the plan of attack

                                                                                                chapter 5- the plan of attack

Jacobs dead... I've lost my friend...now i have no hope...or so i thought.

                    (big doors open) "now what?" I said.

                                                when the doors fully opened Aaron was standing there.

                   "sup." Aaron said.

                           "how did you do that?" Rachan said.

                           " i went through the vent, seriously are you guys(the audience) and me the only one who saw that?" Aaron said

                           we decided not to question him as he is known for random things. but seeing him open the door, gave me hope. i had a plan to                                                                stop this once and for all.

                          " everyone form up. many of you have been here longer than us, but i plan to not keep you or anyone else here any longer. today we are gonna bring down this facility. now many of you right now are gonna be ready to die for this cause of bringing it down. but it's my job to make sure you all get through this alive." I said.

                           " nobody is expendable." Steven said.

                           "exactly." i said.

                           "we're going home home together." i added.

                           everyone cheered on.

                           " Aaron give us the update." i said.

                           " yes sir. we are on the main level of the factory and the other fillies and colts are being held on the lower levels. the leader Rainbow dash is on the top floor of the facility. in order to get to her we need a force to get through the guards that are on this main floor and up through the facility." Aaron said.

                           " alright. we split into two teams half of you will go to the lower levels and gather help while we cause chaos up here. As soon as the reinforcements get here will commence the attack." i ordered.

                           " YES SIR!" everyone said.

prelude- nightmare

                                                                                              - prelude - nightmare

Dom...Dom...you must help them... the tale will come true...you must warn them...you must warn them!!!

"ahh"I scream.

"what is it Dom"? his friend Rachan asks.

Dom replies"it's nothing Rachan." his other friends come running in from downstairs.

"hey man." Jacob said, "we heard you scream."

Aaron says.

Steven asks. "what was it?"

i answered with "it was just a bad dream."

they stared at me skeptically and pondered what dream i had. then they all said "ok." we all went to bed and agreed to talk in the morning at the breakfast table.

chapter 1- morning chat

                                                                                               chapter 1- morning chat

morning rose...i had gotten up. seeing that the others were downstairs eating i got dressed and headed down.

"hey guys." i said as i walked down the stairs.

"hi." they all said.

i got a bowl of cereal and sat down with my friends. the first to ask me a question was Aaron, "so...what did you dream of last night?"

Aaron asked,

i responded with "even if i told you, you would laugh at me." i said.

Jacob responded with " do you really think were gonna laugh at something you had a nightmare of? i had bad one's and told them to you before." Jacob said. i responded with "

i guess your right. alright i will tell you but this doesn't leave the house." i said.

they responded with OK.  i told them this from what i remember. "i had a nightmare about some place with death and madness. i never had seen it before in my life, but this place was horrifying..." i spoke.

"what was there and what happened?" Steven asked.

i responded " it was a factory, in the sky, with rainbows coming out of it. we were in there and... i heard screams," (flashback) "please no! please NO! (bones breaking) ahhhhhhhh!"

(reality) "blood dripping from stabbing", (flashback) "no more... no more... "(stabbed with giant needle that drains blood) (reality) "i had no way of knowing who it was. then i hear smashing of the victim in a huge area where no one screams." i said, finishing it.

they all looked at me as if i were possessed by a ghost. they now knew what my nightmare was. but they didn't dare say it.

"well, damn man." Aaron said.

Jacob said "holy hell."

and Steven and rachan said "dang, man."

i responded with " i know. it's so...fudged up. i can't even continue with it." i said.

" you guys better get to work at your jobs. i'm...gonna research what this nightmare means." i added.

" OK. see you." was what they all said. they left 10 mins after saying good luck and take care of the house.

i told them i'd be okay. but now i had to figure out what that nightmare was... and if it had something to do with them and me... i could have predicted something i never wanted to predict.

chapter 3- the bowls of the factory

                                                                                                         chapter 3- the bowls of the factory

we entered the portal. when we got out the other side, it was dark. but then, it got lit up.

                        " whoa." i said.

" this place is huge." rachan said.

" where are we exactly?" jacob said.

" hell." Aaron said jokingly.

" hahahahahaha!" we all laughed.

" there's a door on the far side of the room." Steven said

   we all look toward the far side of the room to see a double door there. we then walked over there.

                        " we all walk through together." i said.

                        " Right!" they all said.

we opened the door. we saw things we didn't expect to see horror. we saw...ponies being grinded up and tortured. at first we thought we were dreaming, but after hitting each other a couple of times, we were there. i knew where we were.

                         " the rainbow factory." i said.

                         " what?" they all said.

                         " we need to-" i was about to say.

                          " hey! who are you 5?! and how did you get here? guards!" a rainbow scientist shouted.

                          " Run!" i shouted.

it was too late. guards stunned us and we blacked out.