1st pov aries

When I came to I was in a tunnel of some sorts. There was at least a foot of water on the floor, I could barely see and there were pipes running along the walls. Where am I? The last thing I remember was me about to hand that one dude the money for those plushies than I end up here… Where is here? Well just standing here twiddling my thumbs ain’t gonna get me out.. So let’s see if I can’t get the hell out. It sorta looks like i’m in a flooded maintenance area.. But…. This all looks familiar.. I make a turn and find myself in a massive circular room with 9 colossal gates. My eyes are like dinner plates as I stare in awe at this all too familiar sight. So I’m guessing I shouldn’t have had mushrooms on my pizza earlier.

“So the new warden decides to finally give us a visit.” The deep gravel like voice of kurama says. “And he has the audacity to show up in that form.” He growls.

“Calm yourself Kurama. At the very least we can move now, at the very least we can move now, instead of being simple pieces of fabric.” Gyuki said.

“Please don’t remind me.. That was one of the worse things that’s ever happened to me..” Matatabi shiverse.

“Can someone please, for fucks sake tell me what’s going on?!?” I shout in a panic.

“From what we have gathered, we have been placed within you by a powerful being with an unknown energy. You're lucky we cannot break it, otherwise we would have broken out of here by now.” Kurama says.

“And what ever that being was changed you to have this form.” Son Goku said.

“Form?” I ask confused before looking down… I recall being chubbier than that.. And as I feel my body I find other things I don’t recall having… like a six pack. A big thing is my hair, which is longer and… yellow?!?! I look down into the water and instead of seeing my reflection, i see Naruto. As in it looks like the actual anime character is standing in a mirror in place of my reflection. I stare at “my” reflection for a good minute or so before my brain finishes processing what just happened. And then things go black. When I come to again I’m still in the same room as before. The tailed beasts are conversing.

“I still say we kill him and be done with it.” Grumbled Shukaku.

“And you're entitled to your opinions, but we are not going back to being mindless beast like before. It’s clear he is just as much a victim in this as we are. We find a way to separate from him, it just won’t be as easy as last time.” Said Son.

“He fainted at his own reflection!!! And if he is that idiot from that market than he couldn’t even be considered a gennin! Hell an academy student would be enough to kill him with ease!!!” Kurama yelled.

“I know that. We all know that. All the more reason to teach him. He won’t be able to help us at all if he can’t master his chakra.” Said Saiken.

“W-What’s going on?” I ask.

“Well kid you have two choices. One, you can wait here until you're body rots away from not moving and starvation until it’s weak enough for us to rip our way out, or you can learn to become an S-Class shinobi so you’ll have the right skill level to figure out how to free us and keep a small enough portion of our chakra so you don’t die in the process.” Shukaku said rather bluntly. Is he from New York or something?

“Yea no dieing please, I like living and not many things could change that…” I chuckle nervously.

“Well good. Now the first step is going to be bonding our chakra so yours isn’t fighting a war to keep us suppressed along with whatever this other energy is.” Kurama.

“Cool, so uhh… how do I do that?” I ask.

“IMA KILL EM!!!”

TEN YEARS LATER

Ten years. It has been ten years of the most brutal training imaginable. But it was worth it, I mastered all the jutsu all of the tailed beasts knew which happened to include everything they're previous hosts knew and it was quite extensive. I elected to learn how to make shadow clones first to speed up my training. thankfully my body didn't need much training. I just needed to practice the jutsu and build my body just a bit. By far the hardest jutsu to master was surprisingly not senjutsu but the wood style.

I know Naruto was not able to use wood style in the war but I was able to recreate it. It was not easy of course but by the time I was finished I was on Hashirama's level. Now I know what you're thinking, only Hashirama and those with his cells can use wood style because it is his kekkei genkai but this is not completely true however, let me explain. A kekkei genkai can be a special trait to a clan or individual. The wood style is just earth nature chakra mixed with water nature chakra to create wood style.

The wood style requires massive amounts of life force in the user, Hashirama had this in spades. With the sage of six paths senjutsu I am able to use all five elements and make perfect use of yin-yang release and was eventually able to use the needed natures for the wood style out of that mode. One's life force is determined by their yang chakra, Naruto's yang chakra is massive by itself, but let's not forget I have all nine Tailed Beasts to back that part up. So with enough practice I was able to rival Hashirama's level of wood style, maybe even surpass it.

In these past ten years I haven't aged, this was odd at first as I first noticed it after the three first years, we looked into this and discovered some form of energy that had permanently locked me in this age effectively making me ageless. It sucks that my body will never reach adulthood but at least I can still get stronger and my body is only a couple of years younger than when I got here. Kurama said naruto was about seventeen and a half so that's only two and a half years younger. Now they have nothing left to teach me, having several hundred clones speed my training made me learn a lot during my training though not without a massive headache at the end of each day.

Matatabi was nice enough to use medical jutsu to ease the pain, but even still it was a lot to handle. The beasts of the everfree have proven to be no threat to me they even seem somewhat friendly with sage mode activated. I flipped when a Timberwolf actually spoke to me. Apparently I'm "One with the forest." As it or rather he put it. I tried speaking with him with it deactivated but all I could hear was barking until I reactivated it. The Timberwolf was on edge afterwards but after some explaining on what sage mode was it understood and I got my first summon soon after.

Now I'm leaving the place that I have called home, the ever present Tree of Harmony's cave. As I approach the edge of the forest were Equestria is supposed to be I notice that instead of a village I see checkered grass as far as the eye can see, pink clouds with dull colored pegasi trying to detach themselves from them, earth ponies and unicorns moping about as random events happen to them with each step.
Only one being in this universe is capable of doing this. Discord. In my time in the forest I have learned how to detect magic like I detect nature energy, though I'm unable to harness it or use it I can still detect it.

The magic in the everfree forest was extremely jumbled, it was constantly shifting and changing everywhere but the cave I called home, no doubt the Tree of Harmony's doing. But here it was stable, well more so than the forest, a constant field only spiking were there was a sentient life such as the ponies, though it felt somewhat sinister, no doubt discord's power causing this. I won't allow this, I don't know why he's doing this but it's wrong! I rocket to the strongest and most malevolent magic signature I can find, and what I find is incredible. It's like five tailed beast's power combined and turned into magic even at this distance.

It takes me a few hours to finally find the bastard but I found him. And he is even stronger than I thought, he's as strong as nine tailed beasts. Thankfully I'm stronger than that. As it turns Naruto's chakra by itself rivals a Tailed Beasts, so I'm as strong as the ten tails, well... almost? it's complicated. I should say I'm about as strong as the shinju in it's second form before it becomes the tree. I ain't nowhere near Kaguya's level... yet. I activate my senjutsu of six paths and channel the tailed beasts chakra to summon my Truth Seeking Balls. This gets his attention as I walk towards him.

"What's this? A new plaything perhaps?" He mocks with an amused expression.

"No, why are you doing this to these innocent ponies?!" I demand while I float up to be on eye level with him.

"Innocent!? BWAAHAHAHAAA!!!" He chuckles as though this was just some light hearted joke to him.

"This isn't funny! stop tormenting them!" I demand.

"And why should I do that?" He asks.

"Because if you don't I'll make you." I threaten.

"And why would you face death just to save these filthy little thi- ..... oh that's rich! Does the old bitch think here spoiled brat's deserve another chance?!" He rambles. Old bitch? The hell is he talking about?

"What are you talking about!!? make se-GAK!" I start but he interrupts me by blitzing me faster than I can track him, his fist digs into my gut and sends me flying. I open my eyes to see him glaring at me and readies another punch.

"She had her chance. Now her brat's need to be punished." He says and launches a punch. I block but he still sends me flying into the ground, but not before i slip a Flying Thunder God mark on him.

I impact the ground like a meteor. without this new body and all of the chakra strengthening it I would have died with that first punch. He reappears in front of me ready to throw another punch, what he doesn't expect was me disappearing as he throws it, nor does he expect a rasengan to the back. He goes flying a few dozen feet before he stops himself and turns to me. He launches a sphere of magic at me before charging me I use the mark to teleport behind him catching him off guard again. I launch a mini Tailed Beast Bomb at him sending him off yet again. How is he not sensing me? Can he not sense my chakra? I have enough of it to rival his magic and then some. if so then this gives me one hell of an advantage. He crashes into the ground and bounces a few times before skidding to a halt.

"You're stronger than I thought... None but the gods could face me with any success. But even still, you're doomed to fail." He says while getting up. "Never before have I actually had the pleasure of a real fight, or any that could cause me pain. Congratulations on being the first and last to get this far." He says before vanishing again, this time I'm ready for him, I dodge his fist albeit barely and knee him in the side of the head. He responds by a elbow to the back. We begin exchanging blows, every time our fists collide it sends out a shock wave. I side step to the left and try an high kick, he ducks and tosses a punch at me, I dodge and latch onto his arm before twisting rapidly tearing it off and using it to smack him.

He staggers back a bit, he aims his stump at me and the arm pulls me back to him, he wraps his hand around my throat as his arm reattaches itself. Using the mark I placed on him I teleport out of his grasp and behind him and swipe at him with a lightning blade, only for him to duck while spinning and throw a punch coated in yellow magic. I block and return his punches. we are zooming over the land as we fight, he lands a punch at me that sends me to the ground. He aims his talon at me and starts firing off blasts of magic. I dodge each one but at the cost of getting far away from him and losing visual sight of him through the smoke.

He teleports behind me and throws a punch at me, using my flying thunder god jutsu once again I teleport behind him. I ready a rasengan and try to hit him with it, but he doesn't fall for the same trick again. He anticipates me this time and blocks me with a pair of arms that sprout from the back of his shoulders.

"Please there's a better way than this! leave the ponies alone and we don't have to fight!" I pleaded, only to be ignored. He responds by barraging me with punches, each one like a meteor slamming into me.

"Enough second chances! They will suffer for their crimes!!!" He shouts. I activate the Dust Style with my truth seeking orbs, it works in dematerializing his arms, but only the immediate area that it touches. God smacked, he doesn't react fast enough when I use the orbs to destroy his torso. With a look of complete shock he falls to the ground, all that's left is his arms, head and lower body.

"I'm sorry." I say with a sigh. I begin to walk away after a moment of silence. The chaos magic around me is fading. But suddenly it spikes behind me.

"If you think this over, you're sorely mistaken." He says from behind me in a deeper and distorted voice. His form has changed, instead of the whacky chimera from before he is now a 50 meter tall oriental dragon with goat horns and lion hind legs. He forms a spear out of red and golden energy and throws it at me, I barely dodge it as it rockets past me with the force of a hurricane. When the spear hits it explodes with massive force! The shock wave pushes me back from even this distance.

He charges at me and throws a punch at me, I barely have time to block as his fist sends me flying effortlessly. I'm driven through several mountains until I am buried in the core of one. Using what little time I have I summon a few hundred shadow clones and send them to distract him. With the power he has in this form I have no choice. I have to use my strongest form. I begin to charge my chakra until I'm at my limit, and then take a page out of Sakura's book and start focusing as much as I can into a mark in my forehead. Once I am at my absolute limit of chakra I activate my Justu.

"Six Paths: Tailed Beast Veritable 1000 Armed Kannon!" I shout activating my jutsu. I take on my six armed Tailed beast state. Inside of my avatar grows a dense wooden skeletal structure, thick wooden armor covers most of my avatar save for the mid of it's back where the thousand arm piece is. I take my truth seeking orbs and merge them into one large one, before splitting them into thirty smaller ones. I move them onto my avatars claws and activate the Dust style on them.

I burst out of the mountain and rocket towards Discord who has destroyed the last of my clones. He moves to match me and we collide in with fists flying. He has to move fast and keep re growing arms as my Dust style claws keep chopping them off, at the same time he is putting up a massive fight matching me blow for blow. I draw back a bit and create a massive Tailed Beast rasenshuriken. I summon a shadow clone and have it sneak behind him while doing this and have it place a teleportation mark on his back. Once the mark is in place I teleport my attack to him and detonate it. While I can sense a large drop in magic in him from that attack, this is far from over at this rate. Already this battle is taking a large portion of my chakra. I need to end this quickly.

"Please! We don't need to do this!!!" I plead.

"Typical agent of harmony. Always thinking their can be peace and love with even the worst of beings." He says before summoning another spear. I can't let him fire off another one of those! if only I had the moon seal! this would be over in an instant! I teleport behind him and cut off the arm forming the spear and cut it off, the resulting explosion obliterates the area around us and destroys most of the armor of my avatar, thankfully I was able to retreat into the skull before it went off. When the smoke clears he is in bad shape and his magic took a major blow from his own attack, the magical backlash likely did more damage than an attack of similar power could have done.
I have one last move that could work, the very move I stored chakra in this mark for. Channeling all the tailed beasts power in unison I focus it into my wood style. I form the head of a large rabbit with a third eye in the middle. Using every ounce of chakra I can spare I fire off my ultimate attack.

"DIVINE TAILED BEAST BOMB!" I say as I fire of the dark red orb. i toss a chunk of wood with the flying thunder god mark on it. I teleport back to my cave. the shockwave rocks the earth and the winds are like that of a massive hurricane!!! I wait an hour before teleporting back, the chunk of wood has barely made it back to the ground as I appear over the sight of our battle....or what's left of it. Please let it be over, I only have enough chakra to teleport back to the cave, I can't spare a single bit more than that! To my horror he is still standing, beat all to hell but it seems he took a direct hit. However his magic reserves are still high enough to put up a hell of a fight. With unrestrained rage he rockets towards me.

I teleport back to the cave just as he is about to hit me. He won't be able to find me here, at least not for a while anyway. Damn it! if I could just use the elements! that would have been over in an instant! sigh... at least I was able to find my current limit though and after that encounter it's obvious that I'm going to need to get stronger. Much stronger in order to combat foes like him, and when Tirek gets here, I’m not anywhere near as strong as I'll need to be in order to take him on. I have to find a way to get stronger. But how! man if only I had gone as Beerus or Whis at that convention, if I had been turned into either of them I'd be strong enough to take him down in an instant. Wait a minute... Hmmm yes that might actually work, difficult but not impossible.
In DBZ Cell was a petri dish of genetic code from the strongest warriors in the universe, or at least the ones known at the time, and had all of their strengths.

If I can somehow add genetic code from strong creatures and gain their abilities then I could get even stronger. Wait a minute... That's it! If I can add some alicorn DNA to myself then perhaps I could get my own magic. It might not be much compared to what discord has but it would certainly be enough to boost my power some and with magic it would make combating magic users easier. But if I'm correct the only possible alicorns in this time period would be Sunbutt and Moonbutt, they will do though. Now all I have to do is get a blood sample from them and a lab and I'll be able to do this. Now then where might I be able to find them? Their energies would be quite sizeable and would have positive energy to it. I'll need to rest for a while to gather my strength so I can do so.

Author's Note

welp, here is the rewrite. how yal like it. and remember, you can submit idea's for the story on the idea pool blog and they may be implemented into the story, or any of my other stories.