Chrome is a unicorn with a knack for invention… well he likes inventing… well his cutie mark is about inventing so he must like it right? He's not very good with other ponies so he thought moving to Ponyville would be a good idea, smaller town less ponies to deal with, it made sense at the time… So why is it that things seem so much harder here than where he came from? Then add to this the feelings he's been having about a certain mare and well Chrome is a very confused pony.

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Yes the picture is Chrome inserting descriptions into a first chapter is awkward, I also did some heavy grammatical edits as of Dec 21st, I'm not sure how I missed all of that but it made me cringe. Not much content wise is different but it should be easier to read.