The Mane Six

by Cartoonlover13

Chapter 1 (updated) (re-edited)

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"C'mon, get up!" shouted a female voice. All of the Wonderbolts slowly got up from the voice “Coming to” would work better here, “woke up from the voice” messes with the sentence structure. “Got up” would also work

The Wonderbolts, consisting of thirteen ponies including Spitfire, Fleetfoot, and Soarin, were all shocked to feel absolutely nothing. They weren't in the bar they were getting hammered drunk at, instead, they were at a worn down barn. The coldness from the outside made its way through the holes in the ceiling and walls. Their bodies were placed in a sitting position on the barn floor with their backs to the wall, the smell of hay and manure attacking their nostrils.

"Like it? We got some unicorn to do a spell that paralyzes ponies," another female voice said.

The Wonderbolts looked up and saw twelve pegasuses dressed in darker colored versions of uniforms like their own, the cutie mark on the suit was a winged skull.

Spitfire's eyes widened as she recognized six of the seven ponies, the seventh one had her goggles on and the uniform also covering her face. "Sour Sweet! Sunny Flare! Sugarcoat! Lemon Zest! Indigo Zap! Lightning Dust! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!?"

"QUIET!" shouted Sour Sweet, startling the Wonderbolts.

Soarin opened his mouth to scream, causing Sugarcoat to glare at him. "Don't even try, idiot. Nopony would hear you if you did."

The unidentified pegasus took out a pistol and so did all the other ponies.

"Are you scared!" shouted Indigo Zap to Fleetfoot’s face, fleetfoot responded by spitting in Indigo's face. "You should be"

BANG!

The Wonderbolts hearts stopped for a few seconds from shock as Fleetfoot's insides were splattered all over the barn floor and on their faces. All of the Wonderbolts screamed as their friend fell over onto the ground dead. Figured this sounded more dramatic :D

"Consider that your future, assholes," Lightning Dust said, grinning at High Winds who were passed out cold on the floor.

Wave Chill didn’t he faint? had shock plastered on his face seeing his teammate die. "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!"

Lemon Zest rolled her eyes. "Please, don't fucking act like you don't know!"

Sunny Flare scoffed "You all said the same bullshit excuse, that we were all reckless and have no fucking teamwork. Yeah we do have teamwork! We're working as a team to bring you down!"

"THIS IS BECAUSE WE DECLINED YOU?!" Soarin shouted in anger.

The unidentified pegasus walked up to the Wonderbolts and had a short laugh. "After you declined them, their lives fell apart. Now they're gonna end you!" The mare then took off the goggles.

All of the surviving Wonderbolts looked at the mare, recognizing her voice. That rasp, those magenta eyes, and the fact Rainbow Dash was the only Wonderbolt not here suddenly made sense.

"R-Rainbow?!" Spitfire's brain was a mess and thoughts were scrambling all over.

"It's about time you figured it out." Sugarcoat rolled her eyes.

"Why...why Rainbow Dash? WHY!?" screamed Fire Streak.

"Because Fire," said Rainbow, walking to him and aiming the gun to his head. "Haven't you all realized you're all incompetent assholes?"

"RAINBOW NO!, STOP NOW!" Misty Fly was screaming at her limbs to move.

"You are not Rainbow Dash! The real one would never stoop so low!" spit out Rapid Fire.

"I am Rainbow Dash, and I am sick and tired of all of you!" Rainbow then lowered the gun away from Fire Streak's head, causing him to exhale in relief.

All of the twelve Wonderbolts stared into Rainbow's eyes. She was a terrible liar and she was telling the truth.

"No, I-I don't believe it," mumbled Surprise the formerly happy and careless pony of the group.

"Oh my Celestia!, are you deaf? That's sooooooo sad," said Sunny Flare in a condescending reply.

"No, what did you do? WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!" screamed Soarin, trying to get up. He then grunted in pain as Sugarcoat stomped her foot on his head.

"Wow, that spell that unicorn did really did work on him," whispered Indigo to Lightning Dust.

"C'mon, Nightmarebolts, let's go," said Rainbow Dash. The Nightmarebolts complied.

"HEY WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOING!" screamed Soarin.

The Nightmarebolts ignored the screams and wails of the Wonderbolts. As Lightning Dust exited the barn she had a face mixed with glee and bloodlust, "Ten seconds, everypony!"

The Wonderbolts, well the ones conscious had vomit in the back if their throats, almost having a panic attack.

"Ten....SECONDS!?" shouted High Winds in panic.

Spitfire's eyes shifted all around the barn in fear "Wha–?"

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ngXjJoNCzu4


Rainbow Dash awoke from the dream, no, not a dream but a memory that had started it all. The pegasus wasn't in a barn; She was in her bed in her prison cell in Crystal-MAX in the extremely cold Crystal Mountains. It had been two years since all that happened, why was she still getting that dream about her killing those assholes?

Rainbow Dash sighed and lied back down with her head resting on her pillow and tried to get back to sleep. Ugh, of all times to get fucking haunted by that dream, why now? I swear if I get that fucking dream again I will kill somepony. The mare closed her eyes and took a deep breath.


"We need a new plan!" exclaimed Princess Celestia in frustration.

"Princess Celestia! My top soldiers and I will get all the remaining citizens in Canterlot and defeat Discord!," exclaimed Shining Armor, his team coming to attention behind him..

His wife, Princess Cadance shook her head "No, Shining Armor, it's too dangerous for you all to do even for Celestia and Luna."

Shining Armor smacked his hand on the table.-------- "But Canterlot is under attack by Discord and we left a bunch of citizens out there! Now they're just puppets being controlled by Discord like it's a sick game!"

"We had no choice Captain Armor, other than that force field you put around Canterlot, we couldn't get more citizens to evacuate because we couldn't risk Discord spreading chaos all over Equestria. We cannot let anyone go, even sister and I; Discord stole the Elements Of Harmony," said Princess Luna.

Princess Celestia had a cross look on her face. "I still don't know how he got them or how he escaped his stone prison! That chamber that holds the elements can only be opened by a spell I can do! Without the elements we are powerless against him."

Lady Sunset Shimmer spoke up, "Our first priority should not be defeating Discord; It should be saving the ponies of Canterlot!"

"Exactly!" shouted Celestia. After she said that she bit her lip and looked down to the ground. "Cadance, is the prison holding those six criminals still in The Crystal Mountains?"

Cadance looked lost for words "Yes, wh-why do you ask? I thought you never wanted to speak about them ever again?"

All the ponies in the room in Crystal Empire castle were silent, all looking to one another very nervously.

Celestia took a deep breath "I want to assemble a task force of the six most dangerous ponies Equestria has ever seen."

"WHAT!" everypony in the whole room shouted in shock.

Luna looked like she had seen a ghost. "Sister, have you gone completely mad!?"

Celestia shook her head. "I don't think so Luna, but just hear me out on this, please?"

All the ponies in the room whispered to one another and then nodded agreeing to listen to Celestia.

"I think those six mares can do some good, they all have extraordinary powers that nopony else has. It is much too dangerous for anypony including me to go into Canterlot, but those six can. They have the power to evacuate the ponies in Canterlot and take down Discord."

"Well," said Sunset Shimmer, "nopony thought of me doing anything good, but I came back to Equestria reformed because I discovered friendship by making friends with five girls in the alternate world I went to. Also, I helped us win the war with Saddle Arabia against Yakyakistan and Griffonstone. I don't see why we shouldn't give them a chance".

Shining Armor gulped, "What if they don't cooperate with us?"

Celestia bit the inside of her cheek, "Well, they already have microchips in their heads to shock them if they get out of hand, but I have a feeling that won't intimidate them enough, so we'll just have to replace them with explosive ones"

Cadance's head jerked to the side in shock,. "Wait, we won't really blow off their heads, right?!"

"Of course not! It'll just be a bluff." Celestia quickly replied.

"We can't just let them go alone!"

"I'll go with them!," Sunset Shimmer cut into the conversation.

"No Sunset–" Celestia was cut off by Sunset before she could finish.

"I can take care of myself, remember, I helped us win the war. Plus, somepony needs to keep them in line." Sunset continued.

Luna put a hand on Celestia's shoulder, "she can go Celestia, somepony needs to keep those six in check. After all she did save us a lot during the war"

Celestia exhaled, "Please be safe"

Sunset Shimmer bowed to her teacher "I will, Princess, and I will do our mission"

"I just hope I did the right thing," mumbled Celestia.


Author's Note

Okay just to clear some things up. One yes there was a war it started before the events of season one. Two yes the rainboom Rainbow did as a filly never happened,but Twilight did have an uncontrollable surge of power still when trying hatch Spike in this universe and she came Celestia's student. Three the war against Yakyakistan and GriffonStone happened about 2 years before the events of season one. This is set two years after the war ended. The war
happened because of corrupted leaders. I will get more into it in the next chapters. Four Rainbow Dash did do the Sonic Rainboom to help Equestria. Five that scene in the begining of the chapter started it all for Rainbow Dash once again I'll get more into it,plus they're might be more to the picture. I love writing alternate universes for Equestria. Six yes all the mane six are bad guys once again I'll get into it by the next chapter. Seven this story is kinda inspired by DC comics and their Suicide Squad comics. I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE SUICIDE SQUAD MOVIE! Sorry I'm a fangirl. Eight Sunset Shimmer did come back for the war and eventually stayed in Equestria. She got reformed by the humane five. Nine yes Discord is the main villian he is like the Joker in DC comics I'll get more into him in the next chapters. I really like these alternate universe stories. Please tell me if there is any errors in the story. Well that is all folks stay tuned for the next chapter!:raritywink:

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