It was a bright and beautiful day as a pink party pony bounced down the streets of Ponyville to get to her first destination. As Pinkie bounced she noticed a lone white puffy cloud drifting on the light breeze, she also noticed a rainbow coloured tail hanging off the edge, Pinkie instantly knew who the tail belonged to and called up to her, "Hey Rainbow Dash!". There was a faint sound coming from Rainbow Dash, It soon was clear that Rainbow Dash was taking one of her regular midday naps. Pinkie thought of this as an opportunity to give Rainbow her invite, so she got a massive microphone out of nowhere and called up to Rainbow once again, "RAINBOW DASH IT'S ME, PINKIE PIE". The noise was enough to wake up everypony from the Crystal Empire to Canterlot, and most obversely Rainbow Dash who was now high into the air.

"Pinkie Pie what they hay was that for, It nearly gave me a heart attack!" Yelled Rainbow Dash who's ear's were still ringing, and was annoyed that she was awoken so abruptly.

"Sorry Dashie I just wanted to give you your invite of course" Giggled Pinkie at her friends obliviousness, or so that was in her mind.

"Yeah because that was so obvious" Rainbow rolled her eyes at her friend, "Anyway what's the invite for?"

"Well silly it's for a party I'm throwing at Sugercube Corner tomorrow night for all our friends, even Spike!" Pinkie clarified, "I was just heading to Twilight's house to give to her and spike their's but since I saw you 'hanging around' I decided I could give it to you here and now.

"Well I guess I can see the logic in that, but another party? you threw one last week I didn't think you would throw one so soon".
Rainbow Dash quickly realised that this was Pinkie Pie she was talking to, the mare who takes 'soon' to literally and throws a party the next day. So she couldn't really argue with 'Pinkie logic' as she put it. She was broken out of her thoughts when she heard Pinkie speak,

"Well I couldn't help wanting to see my friends again and plus I'm actually inviting Spike this time"

"Speaking of which why don't you normally invite Spike?"
Questioned Rainbow after realising that Spike wasn't at any of the party's Pinkie has throw, the exception of the first party Pinkie threw for Twilight on her first day in Ponyville.

"Well Spike is a baby dragon and last time he was in one of my party's he collapsed due to exhaustion, but he's gotten a bit older since then so I decided to let him have another shot".

"Yeah that makes sense, anyway Pinks it's been nice talking and thanks for the invite but I've got to get ready for the storm planned for next week, so see ya later". And with that Rainbow Dash flew to get to the weather station. Pinkie waved bye and continued to bounce done the road.

Pinkie arrived at Twilight's house awhile later and knocked on the door, a couple minuets later the door opened to reveal a small dragon, "Hey Spike is Twilight home?

"Sure come in Pinkie, Twilights just upstairs finishing off an experiment and then she will be right down". As if on cue Twilight walked down the stairs to be greeted by Pinkie Pie.

"Hello Pinkie Pie how can I help you?"

"Oh hey Twilight I just came by to give you and Spike these invitations". Pinkie pulled out two invitations from her mane, Spike's eyes lite up instantly and grabbed them from Pinkie's hoof

"I get to go to another one of your party's? Thank you so much Pinkie" Spike ran up and pulled Pinkie into a bone-crushing hug.

"Your....welcome....Spike, Suffocating.... losing....oxygen....can't........Breath" Pinkie just managed to get out, Spike realised he was suffocating Pinkie and loosened his grip while grinning sheepishly.

"Sorry I was just so excited I was getting to come to one of your party's"

"It's okay Spike, that's how I feel when all my friends arrive at my party's" Pinkie smiled at Spike who returned the smile. There was a cough behind them, they turned to see Twilight standing there waiting patiently.

"Thank you Pinkie for the invitations for your party, I would love to chat some more but me and Spike have some cleaning to do"

"What do you mean the place is spotless" Spike moaned at the thought of having to do more work.

"Well i kinda made a big mess during the experiment and we need to clean it, sorry Spike" Twilight said apologetically for having to make her number one assistant do more work.

"Well I guess i should get out of your mane then, bye Twilight bye Spike" And with that Pinkie left the duo to do their business.

Pinkie walked through the Ponyville market knowing she would most likely find AppleJack here selling apples. As she was looking around for the orange farm-pony she didn't notice the pony right in front of her and collided with them, when Pinkie shook of the dizziness off she looked up to see who she collided with. Turns out that pony was Rarity who was apologising profusely, "I am so sorry Pinkie, darling I wasn't looking where i was going and I didn't see you coming this way and,and,......I do hope you are okay" Rarity said after she realised she was rambling, she gave her hoof out for Pinkie to take, who thankfully took it and pulled herself up off of the floor.

"It's alright Rarity I wasn't looking where I was going either, so it wasn't entirely your fault".

"Well I'm glad your okay darling, who were you looking for?"

"How did you know I was looking for somepony?"

"Well why else would you be in the market looking around"

"I could of been looking for a specific food" Pinkie replied, pointing out a reason for looking around other then to look for somepony.

"Good point, but still who were you looking for, I'm sure I could help"

"I was looking for AppleJack, oh and here Rarity I was coming to see you next anyway" Pinkie pulled out another invite from her mane and handed it over to Rarity who took it thankfully.

" 'You are invited to a Super-ultra-spectacular party being held at Sugarcube Corner tomorrow afternoon around 5pm, all of our closes friends will be their including fun party games, snacks, cider and lots of other stuff I hope you will be their ~Pinkie Pie' " Rarity red aloud, "Well that certainly seems like fun I will make sure to wear my best party attending outfit, just for you Pinkie".

"Thanks Rarity well I have to give AppleJack her invitation, could you point out where her stall is please?"

"sure thing darling she's just over there" Rarity pointed out AppleJack within the crowd.

"Thanks again bye Rarity"

"Bye Pinkie" And with that Pinkie Pie bounced over to AppleJack.

Pinkie arrived to AppleJack's stand and walked over to her, "Hey AppleJack how are you"

"Well howdy Pinkie I'm doing great what 'bout you" AppleJack tipped her hat to Pinkie.

"I'm good, I was just going around giving the girls and Spike invitations to the party tomorrow afternoon, I've just got Fluttershy left after you speaking of which here you are" Pinkie gave AppleJack her invite.

"Thanks a bunch Pinkie, I know ya just arrived but I've got to make my sell today so I'll see ya tomorrow".

"That's fine I need to go to Fluttershy anyway bye"

"Bye"

Pinkie quickly arrived at Fluttershy's Cottage and knocked on the door, awhile later a white rabbit answered the door, "Hey Angle is Fluttershy home?" Pinkie asked the rabbit who's name was rather ironic considering what a devil he was, Angle just stared at Pinkie with the same look he always has on him and hopped away from the door. Fluttershy arrived a few seconds later and smiled warmly at Pinkie.

"Hello Pinkie Pie, it's nice to see you"

"You too Fluttershy, I was just stopping by to give you this" Pinkie pulled out her final invite and gave it to Fluttershy, who took it and red it quietly.

"Thank you Pinkie, umm would you like to come in........um that's if you want to, you don't have to if you don't what to" Fluttershy said getting quieter closer to the end.

"I would love to have tea with you and your animals Fluttershy but I have to get home and setup for tomorrow afternoon"

"But you have a whole day tomorrow to setup, Pinkie" Fluttershy pointed out.

"Yeah but it's better to start sooner than later, so goodbye Fluttershy".

"Bye Pinkie, I'll see you tomorrow" With that all said and done Pinkie bounced off, while Fluttershy went back into her cozy home.

Author's Note

Well that concludes the first chapter of Shed.MOV rewritten (as I call it). I hope you enjoyed it I spent my whole night writing this and I am really tired, but yeah once again I appreciate criticism to help me get better so i'll see you in the next chapter.