Not An Angel

by Gray Compass

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Comedy, Caramel, Fluttershy
Length: 3094

Is there a better way to seek revenge, rather than fucking your ex-coltfriend's buddy? Well, maybe there is. But Fluttershy will try anyway.

Big Mac ruined everything for Fluttershy.

But the element of kindness wasn't willing to ruin her summer afternoon when she found out that the stallion of her life had just married another mare.

Luckily, Macintosh's best friend was on the way...

Published 2016-03-16 18:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-03-16 18:20:01 UTC

The Caramel Incident

The Caramel Incident

The warmth of the summer in Ponyville was something that divided opinions. Some ponies loved to enjoy the clear skies to do picnics outside, visit the lakes, or even the beach.

Some others hated such a sticky season, a sweaty nightmare that forced them to take several showers per day, only to keep a socially acceptable look – and smell.

For Fluttershy, it was the perfect season to visit the Everfree, a rare occasion that allowed the shy pegasus to interact with most of its denizens, in special the dangerous ones that would only leave their caves a few hours per day to bask in the sunlight – a tradition that somehow helped them to keep their coats healthy and lustrous.

Sure, because you have to be lustrous and healthy to rip a gazelle apart.

It was also the perfect season to visit Macintosh.

He had some days off in the summer, to rest his back and just chill, and Fluttershy was always willing to relax him a little bit more.

She hummed a delicious tune to herself as she made her way down the Everfree path, checking the look of her mane periodically on the crystalline ponds that appeared in the way. The shyest element of harmony always caused a cuteness overload, and she barely had to do anything to cause such a tremendous effect.

The old crooked trees of the forest bent their canopies over the pathway, creating a tunnel of leaves, branches and moss. It had an undecipherable scent that defied the skills of the best perfumery experts of Canterlot. It was the scent of nature, and only nature could replicate it.

Considering her odd earthly bounds, Fluttershy was one of the few pegasus ponies able to comprehend the beauty behind these magnificent details. And almost as a gift, she carried with her this scent of forestry kindness.

The patches of sun were gradually becoming longer and closer, the canopies taller and growing in distance from one another. She was reaching the edge of the Everfree, the end of her shortcut trail that would lead directly to Sweet Apple Acres.

The wildness of the jungle was soon to be replaced by endless rows of apple trees that followed the hilly geography of the earth, with its ups and downs. There weren’t many apples hanging from the trees, maybe because they were already kicked down and shipped to distant markets, or turned into cider, or maybe because that wasn’t the right time of the year for apples.

Fluttershy couldn’t be sure.

Still, the main point of her visit wasn’t to fill her dispenser with apples, but to meet a certain stallion; a huge, gentle, handsome stallion; a stallion that she had grown fond.

On top of the tallest hill of their property, was the main building of the farm, which also served as residence to the Apple Family.

Sparing her hooves, Fluttershy flapped her wings slowly, just enough to lift her delicate body from the ground, and float up the hilly road leading to the main house and stable.

She touched the ground lifting not a single particle of dust, and smiling to herself, approached the front door. Fluttershy blushed, lifting a hoof and freezing for a second, looking down to the ground, pondering if she would be bothering.

It was her way, an inevitable way. Biting her lower lip, she knocked the door, her small ears resting flat against her head.

Seconds passed, and she wondered if her knock couldn’t be heard inside the house, which considering her personal experiences, was a probability.

Sighing, she knocked again, this time louder. A shadow of shame already trying to consume her body, but she remained calm, standing in place patiently.

Moments went by, and her tired hooves started fidgeting with the little rocks on the ground. Fluttershy rubbed her neck awkwardly; a million terrible reasons for not answering the door crossed her mind.

She wouldn’t dare to call him aloud.

No, that would be something otherworldly for her to do.

After several minutes of fruitless waiting, the saddened pegasus turned around to leave, her head hung low.

THUMP

“Darn it!”

Fluttershy jumped, backing away as a frightened squirrel.

The largest door of the barn had opened with a shriek, banging against the building. Unless Sweet Apple Acres was haunted – And Shy preferred not to think about that – There should be somepony inside.

“H-hello?” She muttered, cautiously walking back. “Big Mac, is that you?”

Her question was answered not with words, but with a massive pile of haystacks crashing and tumbling down over a smaller colt that struggled to push the heavy blocks back inside the barn.

“Caramel?” She cocked an eyebrow. “W-what are you…”

“Oh my, I’m so sorry Fluttershy!” He jumped back to his hooves, brushing some hay off his coat and mane, he was a mess, almost unrecognizable if it wasn’t for his cutie mark. Caramel chuckled awkwardly, his cheeks a tone nearer to pink. “So… how long you’ve been there?” He asked, doing his best to fix his mane.

“I… Well, a few minutes I suppose. I was looking for-”

“Oh, Big Mac!” He cut her sentence, letting out a chuckle, as if he knew something else she was unaware “The Apples went to Appleloosa. Some sort of celebration, I suppose” His voice toned down to something darker. “Ah… Mac didn’t tell ya, did he?”

“Tell me what?” Fluttershy asked, something odd rising in her chest. “He never told me they’d be out this summer.” She lowered her head.

“Erm… Look, I…” The colt muttered, rubbing his neck. “I’m not sure if I’m the right pony to tell you this, ya know?”

That thing inside her chest crawled even more, poking her head and her veins.

“Caramel.” She paused. “What they are doing there in Appleloosa?”

The colt let out a long disappointed sigh, leaning his back against one of the tumbled haystacks.

“Well, you would know sooner or later anyway.” He muttered, almost inaudibly. “Big Macintosh is marrying Pinkie Pie’s sister… I’m always forgetting her name-”

“Marble.” Fluttershy responded bluntly. “Marble pie.”

An awkward silence lingered in the air, but very oddly, a numbness seemed to take over Fluttershy’s body. She thought nothing of Mac, she thought nothing about Marble Pie, or how they decided not to invite her to their marriage.

Or even…

How her friends managed to hide the whole thing from her. ‘Which shouldn’t have been difficult.’ She thought.

“Look Shy… They just asked me to take care of the farm, that’s all. I didn’t know that-“

“Don’t worry. I mean- I’m not worried. Not at all.” She smiled.

Caramel was Big Mac’s best friend, he surely knew a lot more about what was going on, and he probably knew his friend’s plans regarding the marriage, maybe months before it happened. Fluttershy just couldn’t understand how Mac could be so insensitive, if the purpose was to break her heart, at least he could do it in front of her.

“Look, I’ve been working on these things the whole day.” The colt pointed to the scattered pile of hay. “I just need to take a shower, and then we can talk about that… If that’s something you wish to do, of course.” Caramel shyly said, rolling a pebble in the dirt with his hoof.

“Oh, s-sure.” Fluttershy nuzzled his neck tenderly. “I’d love to.”

Caramel froze in place for a second, trying not to think much about the nuzzle, instead, he just forced a chuckle.

“Ah, w-well, okay. You can wait inside, the door is open.” He pointed to the house. “I’ll be right back.”

With that, the stallion trotted away, before his blushed face could be noticed.

“Yes… Right back.” Fluttershy muttered to herself, walking into the living room of the Apple’s residence, sitting down on the couch, observing the family portraits on the wall.

If it wasn’t for the rest of their lovely family, she’d have turned their house and maybe the entire orchard into ashes, with just a little bit of patience and Flim and Flam’s oil. But that would be too much.

For the time being.

After a long, and refreshing shower, Caramel reappeared in the living room, his wet nut-brown mane still dripping on the carpet.

“I never thought he’d do such a thing.” The words escaped his mouth.

“W-well.” Fluttershy shrugged, letting out a long sigh. “Maybe she’s better for him. I’m such a- such a faded pony anyway.” She sadly stated.

“Don’t you ever say that!” Caramel took a seat by her side. “I think it was very stupid of him to underestimate somepony like you.”

“Oh, but he’s not the first pony to do that. You get used with time.” She gave Caramel a sad smile. “What do you think of me? You think I’m weak?” She asked, pushing her body closer to Caramel. He opened his mouth to speak, but couldn’t answer such a sudden question.

“Well, I d-don’t think you are weak, you are an element of-”

That feeling in Fluttershy chest crawled through her spine, up to her mind. A devilish feeling, something she tried her best to hide from the world, but never managed to destroy it. Or never really wanted to.

“I can do a lot of nice things, Caramel.” She said. “I feel sorry for Big Mac… The poor thing married a stone formation” She snickered sarcastically. “I wonder how beautiful and charming their honeymoon will be.”

Caramel just looked in silence, as Fluttershy poured down everything she had contained inside her.

“But I’m a good caretaker.” She said in an oddly creepy tone.

“I-I know you are.”

“I treat my little animals like no other pony in Equestria.” She nearly whispered. “And I can prove that to you- If y-you want to.” She lowered her head, faking a shy look, staring at Caramel from behind a layer of pink layer of hair.

“Ah, I believe in you.” He giggled nervously, trying to move away, only to receive a starry stare from Fluttershy.

She touched his hoof, still a little bit wet from the shower, but she couldn’t care less.

“You are his best friend, Caramel. The least I can do for you is what I would do for him.” She said, wrapping a wing around his hoof. Every time Caramel tried to back off, his body leaned even further on his back, exposing more than he pretended to.

With little effort, Fluttershy hugged him, the stallion losing balance and lying down on the couch, the yellow pegasus landing on top of him.
“Fluttershy, I really think we should-”

Ignoring his pleadings, Fluttershy pressed their bodies even closer, knowing that no matter how much he denied, all the stallions wanted what she had to offer.

In special if that stallion was Macintosh’s best friend. Oh, she would love to do that.

With a soft kiss she shushed him. Caramel closed his eyes, it felt so wrong… Fluttershy had been with his friend so many times before. But at the same time, his friend had abandoned her under such circumstances.

“Sit back, relax.” Fluttershy said, as if talking to one of her little animals. “I’ll take care of you, dear.”

She nuzzled his chest, forcing a giggle out of the stallion. Caramel kicked one of his hind legs in the air, chuckling as Fluttershy moved down to do the same on his belly.

“S-shy please!” He cried.

His giggles half-turned into moans as Fluttershy nuzzled his sheath, eliciting a grunt from the stallion. Caramel’s hooves looked for a place to hold down; he bit his lower lip, struggling with his muscular spasms to stay in place.

“You see…” Fluttershy said, looking at him from behind his half-erect dick. “You don’t have to be afraid, I don’t bite.” She said with a silly smile.

Fluttershy played with her tongue around the head of his dick, very slowly, giving him the opportunity to feel the textures. As his cock grew harder, she started to bob up and down taking only the tip at first. Her lips sucked, surrounding the tip in fast paced motions, a very wet and naughty game that elicited visceral shivers, which ran down the stallion’s neck as an electrical current. Strings of drool covered her muzzle in an arousing way, and made the whole thing way more visually pleasurable.

Those innocent blue eyes mingled with the mischievous grin forming on the corner of her lips every time she pulled out, only to observe his expression, and dive back again even further.

Caramel grunted, stomping his front hoof by his side, as he sat with his legs spread apart by the pegasus in front of him, consuming half of his shaft with that velvety mouth of hers.

“F-fuck, you’re good.” He muttered, moving her pink mane away from her face.

Fluttershy tilted her head to the left, and then to the right, allowing his fleshy cock to fill every inch of her mouth, the bulbous tip brushing against her throat.

The middle ring of his dick throbbed in temptation; Caramel moved his hips almost unconsciously, begging for her to accept more of his needy cock.

“Unghh… Shy, you s-shouldn’t.”

Caramel shut his eyes tightly, his head staring up at the wooden ceiling; it was harder to breathe with Fluttershy between his legs, than when pushing massive blocks of hay. His erection practically melted inside Fluttershy’s mouth, and still not satisfied, the pegasus moved herself further, stretching her neck and allowing his cock to penetrate the hot insides of her deep throat.

She gagged, feeling the pressure building up, the veins of his penis pumping faster and faster. Caramel groaned in pleasure, as Fluttershy swallowed in anticipation, clenching walls trying to ingest his deeply inserted member.

He looked down one more time, amazed at the sight.

It was impossible to hold back, and considering what she had done for him, Fluttershy wouldn’t want him to hold a single droplet back.

Her moans sent him in a trance-like state, he felt that surge of energy going down his body, bending his spine, and exploding on his cock.

A loud moan left him as cum gushed out from his shaft, for a moment it felt as if a fire hose had spawned between his legs. Stallion milk cascaded down her throat, and instead of protesting, she swallowed everything she could.

Fluttershy coughed, semen dripped from her chin. She pulled her head back, a final spurt of cum covered Caramel’s chest. He was feverish – so hot and sweaty that another shower would surely be necessary.

Fluttershy crawled on top of him, spreading her wings for balance. Their slippery bodies felt like soap against each other. Fluttershy felt the cum-covered belly of him coating her fur, but that feeling drove the pegasus even crazier. She wanted more of him; she wanted to feel all of that inside her; inside her denied body.

“L-look at us...” She muttered, burying her face in his neck. “We are so wet. Don’t y-you...” She stopped her breathing, sending shivers down his spine.

“Hmmm?” Caramel grumbled, touching her flanks, wrapping his hooves around.

“Don’t you wonder how... how It’d feel... inside?” The shy pegasus struggled to say, her voice becoming fainter as she proposed the idea.
His jaw dropped at the concept, he couldn’t even fathom how delicious that would be, how tight somepony like her would feel. How evil would it look like, to rut something so pure looking as Fluttershy, his best friend’s ex-marefriend.

His cock throbbed at the thought, pressing against her belly.

“Yeah... I do wonder.” He panted. Holding her front hooves against him he carefully nuzzled her cheek, reaching for her fluffy ear. “I’ll make you feel...” He said, pulling her body up, so he could hold down his eager mast at the perfect position.

Caramel was so hard, even after expelling a gallon of cum, he was already ready for more.

He expected her to go slowly, at her own pace, feeling every inch of his warm flesh, but that was quite the opposite.

Fluttershy released all her weight down onto his cock at the same time, coaxing his length to the very base.

A deep moan escaped their throats in unison; Caramel could feel his heavy balls brushing against her marehood, so deep had she buried herself into him.

“I –don’t have time for little games.” She muttered.

The stallion’s already sensitive flesh wouldn’t last long inside her.

Fluttershy leaned against his chest, using her front hooves for balance as she moved herself up and down, her flanks landing and slapping on his lap with a wet sound.

“Y-yes!” She moaned, her pussy being stuffed and prodded deeply by his cock. She dripped on his lap, her tail waved behind them, drenched in cum. “More!” She squealed, her frantic breath blowing on his face.

Wrapping her back tightly, Caramel pushed the mare down, the middle ring of his cock was nowhere to be seen, buried inside her hungry pussy. Fluttershy opened her mouth, her tongue hanging to the side as she experienced something she never thought it was possible.

Caramel gritted his teeth, coming near the point of no return. Fluttershy was so aroused, that his flared cock barely had enough space to move inside her tight muscular walls that milked him so eagerly.

The pegasus let out a deep moan that reverberated through their bodies, as she climaxed on top of him, her clit tightly pressed between his throbbing cock and his belly. Fluttershy squirted, her slick fluids oozing down his balls.

Caramel came again, but this time a different sensation engulfed his body; a hot tingling that crawled from the tip of his hoof to the top of his ears. The stallion pressed their bodies down, as he filled her insides with even more cum. Fluttershy collapsed limply on top of him, and a stream of mixed fluids leaked from her stretched pussy as they parted.

He hadn’t a word to say, but a million thoughts crossed his mind.

As for Fluttershy, who for some reason started to chuckle, playing with the strings of cum that still connected her hooves to all the rest of her body, she was certain of only one thing –

Big Macintosh would never find out what the fuck happened to his couch. And why the resort where he had planned to spend his fantastic honeymoon, was burning into flames when he arrived.

Author's Note

I'm not stopping.

Nope