The Lost Soul

by Frost492

Rating: everyone
Tags: Mystery, Science Fiction, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad
Length: 633

yay first chapter is up

Something ive had on my mind for any one that wants to read go ahead first story so feel free to criticize it wil be a mix of 3rd and 1st person if i can keep going i dont know if i will keep this story going but if people want me to i will try

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-03-16 18:43:07 UTC

Chapter 1: Confusion

        The world was in chaos two aspects of one being were trying and succeeding on either forcing their views of good on the world or trying to destroy it, and in the center was a young boy about 15 years old and just wanted the world to stop being cruel and to realize what they were doing was wrong, he should never have sacrificed himself how was he supposed to know that he would become a prison for the two most powerful beings in existence except for the creator. As the boy pondered why it had to be him that doomed the world of man he heard a scream of pure rage and he saw something that changed everything in his life sometimes for the better sometimes for the worst, he looked for the source only to see himself covered in blood and the remains of his family scattered around him and then he saw Death but what was shocking he seemed afraid of the young boy and then the impossible happened he started to rise an aura of pure hate surrounding the young boy and then Death fled in terror only to run into a wall of astral energy as the boy closed in on the god.

But then...

The dreamer heard something. "He's going into shock quick get him set up", "Doctor we have no idea what's happening he killed three people while he was awake what will become of us if we save him?" , " I will not let another patient die nurse get him set up now!", "Yes sir" and then the boy felt immense pain and heard another voice but it sounded far away " Don’t lose hope you will know in time for now rest and heal I will speak to you again soon Keeper of Time". Then the boy  woke up, and knew no more.

                                                                                    {Jacob's Perspective}

"Uhhn my head, what the hell happened?" "Where am I?" As I looked around I realized that I couldn't see but I heard what seemed to be leaves crunching so I must be in some sort of forest but I seemed to be in some sort of crater as I tried to stand up I heard voices "What is that thing?", "I don’t know sugarcube but whatever it is it just attacked the hydra and beat it in one hit granted he landed on it but still he doesn’t seem to be hurt." "Do you think it's dangerous Twilight?", "I don’t know girls but I think we should take it back to my house maybe the princesses will now what it is." "Uhnn, can you stop talking about me and help I can't see so I have no idea where I am." "Why should we help you?" You just killed a hydra!" "Indeed especially when your dressed like that you'd be a laughing stock." "One I can't see so I have no idea what I look like, two you'll help because I asked nicely and if you don’t know what I am so that means each of you can gain something from helping me." "It puts up a good point girls think of all we could learn!" "He" "what?" "I am not an "it" I am male so I am a "He"." "Sheesh no need to be a smart ass about it". As I tried to stand and fell again I felt something stop me it felt strangely like feathers. "you shouldn't stand you poor baby you could be hurt!" I am not  an animal so don’t treat me like one!" " I understand that you want to help but please don't treat me like I'm inferior to you."

Then I felt I blinding pain in the back of my skull and passed out once again.