Author's Note
This is my first story so sorry if it sucks, so if you don't like it then please leave some constructive criticism if you don't. Also sorry for grammar.
The everfree
It was a nice day in Ponyville, everyone was happy except for one. A grey stallion with a black mane was bored of the day to day life
in the small town of Ponyville and decided he need some excitement in his life, and what better way to do this then to set out on a
journey. The grey pony known as Note decided to go off alone into the Everfree forest for the day, thinking it would be better then
walking around town all day. Note was walking down the path to the forest, happily thinking of what he would find deep inside, would
he be the first pony to get to the other side, or would he only make it half way before having to turn back. He decided he must be
the one to get all the way through and with this thought he ran straight into the entrance without a second thought of what might
happen inside.
For a while everything seemed normal and nothing interesting caught his gaze as he wondered around. A few hours
passed by as Note was walking and he had found himself lost somewhere in the deep thicket of the forest, no pony was around and
even the eeriness that the forest usually held fell into a more cold and dreading feeling. Note didn't buckle though, he kept moving
through it all. Just as he thought he was in the clear he heard a cold hushed voice come from what seemed like right behind his ear,
"Now would be a good time to run." The voice said. Note quickly turned back to see where the voice came from but to his surprise the
forest was empty nothing in sight other then the dark and gloomy foliage.
Note turned back the way he was headed and started running but he was stopped cold in his tracks feeling a hard blow to the back of his head, cracking his skull. Note feel to the ground and the last thing he saw before blacking out was a light blue pony standing in front of him with a wide smile from ear to ear. When Note woke up he found himself chained in place, the chains were scorching hot burning into his flesh as he struggled to escape. Note looked up to see the pony from before walking towards him with that same damn smile plastered on his face, but this time he noticed something different, the pony had glowing crimson eyes that seemed to pierce right into the mirror to the souls of mortals.
Note yelled out at the pony. "WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU?!" the pony only laughed seeing Note struggle in fear and anger. As he continued to struggle the chains quickly pulled tightly yanking his legs out of their sockets and twisting them. "AHHH." Note howled in pain. The chains that held him in place seemed to vanish making Note fall hard onto the ground, the flesh were the chains had been was
burnt right down to the bone, he tried to stand but was unable to work his legs back into their sockets, he glared over to the pony
watching him. "I'm going to fucking kill you bastard!" The pony looked to the ground chuckling "Heh heh, you know if you keep
speaking like this I'm going to have to do something to stop you." he said looking to Note.
"Yeah what do you think you gonna do? You're nothing then a little bitch!" Note spoke in a growl. "Alright I warned you." The pony smiled walking over to him and leaning over. A dark knife materialized floating in the air in front of Notes face. "Now don't struggle and it will make this a lot easier for you." The pony said, his smile growing wider, so wide in fact it looked as if his head would split in half. The pony tried to put the knife in Note mouth but he wouldn't open his mouth even as the knife cut through his lips and into his gums. "Well I might sound like a broken record but I warned you." as he said this he stabbed the knife into his cheek at such force in cut through the teeth on the other side. Again Note howled in pain and as he was yelling the pony quickly reached the knife in and cut out Note's tongue. Note tired to yell but was stopped as he started choking on his own blood.
"Aw don't worry, I wont let you drown in your own fluids. "The pony's eyes started glowing brighter as Note felt the flesh as where his tongue was cut start being burned closed, bringing the oozing blood to a stop. Note whimpered in pain looking at the pony, tears started forming in his eyes. "You have no idea how adorable you mortals are when you are in so much pain." The pony looked at the knife and licked the blood off of it. Note glared at the pony, accompanied with the tears was also a determined look. Note struggled and managed to snap his legs back into place and weakly stood and attempted to jump on the pony but to no avail. As soon as Note's hooves left the ground the pony seemed to vanish right before his eyes. Note didn't have enough strength to stick the landing and fell to his face. The chains coming back as quickly as they left once again restraining Note.
"Well since you going to die here I should at least let you know who your killer is." The pony said appearing back in front of Note. "Well, not exactly I'll just let you know me as, Jack Knife." He said as a jackknife appeared in front of him. "Heh see what I did there." Jack said before taking the knife and splitting both of Note's ears straight down the middle. He let out whimpers of pain closing his eyes shut, and ferociously flapping his wings. "Hmm... now lets do something about those shall we?" Jack said as hooked chains appeared catching Note's wings and pulling them tightly in place. "Now lets get this started." The grin returned to his face as he threw the knife and made a scalpel appear. "Doctor Jack will see you now." He says as he starts cutting the skin and muscle where the wing connects to the body doing this on both sides making a full circle around the wings. "Now this may hurt a bit." He put the scalpel down before tearing the fleshy parts off of the wings as well as the feathers leaving nothing but exposed bones with blood dripping from them.
Jack places his hoof to his chin. "Lets see.... what to do next." Note started blacking out from the pain but just as his vision turned black he felt a sharp pain in his chest as Jack used his magic to insure he would be awake to feel what was coming. Note tried to yell out in pain but was unable do the the lack of his tongue. "Ah I know just the thing to do." Jack picked the scalpel back up and made an incision from the bottom of Note's chest to the bottom of his stomach, then continued to cut a circle around his stomach to completely remove the skin and flesh protecting his entrails. Jack used his magic to insure that they stayed in their correct place until he need them to be moved. "Now, I don't know how you feel about fashion but I think you would look nice in a new 'scarf'." Jack laughed grabbing Note's large intestine and pulling enough out to wrap it around Note's neck and a tree branch above him. Note again tried to scream, blood ran from
his open wounds and on the the dark forest ground.
"Well we wont be needing this any more, or this, or this, and I can keep you alive without this." Jack said as he ripped out Note's gallbladder, both kidneys, spleen, and pancreas, then using his magic to insure Note doesn't die from missing some of his vitals. Note is to weak to do anything more now then to watch as he is slowly and painfully dissected as if he was a biology project. "Now onto the chest." Jack said cutting the skin and muscles away from the ribcage. "Alright nurse, I'll need a hammer." Suddenly a clone of jack walks out of the shadows holding a hammer in his mouth. "Thank you nurse." He said taking the hammer then heavily hitting Note's ribcage in the center completely smashing it. Jack again grabbed the scalpel and cut out Note's lungs, knowing he would now die soon Jack grabbed Note's heart and pulled it out without separating it from its tubes to show it to Note. "Well it was nice meeting you, farewell." Jack says crushing the heart in front of Note with his magic. Notes blood got every where and his vision began to blur into blackness. It was a nice day in Ponyville, and 'everyone' way happy.
