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             Carlos the channeling life change             
                     -by Zombie23470-                      
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           What happen before and life surprised           
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What happen before and life surprised
As life go on for pony and gillon but for channeling they were mean and cruel  and stole love from pony and even invaded Crystal empire after that day. But one a baby changling was born but different then other one of his eyes were blue and other green and he only have wings. His hive abounded him in the ever freeforest but his mom or stepmom found him in the everfree on the ground and nearly starve to death but his mom feed him love and needed him but she know she need to move and to take care this baby changeling. She and her boyfriend and daughter move to the mountins away from Ponyviil and her friend they both make their own food at their farm and sell their crops and life for Carlos was boring and he was always stuck in the house. But in the future his birthday came around and now Turing 10  and soon get a surprise. (Morning in the mountains)
                                   g.  As the sun set in though the window, Carlos eyes open and said "ahh why have the sun must set I was having good dream about makeing friends," when he stand up from bed he look at his channeling hooves and saw he was his mom form  and turn back into his original form. As he was looking outside seeing anything new like new plants but it was same old for him then he headed his sister knowing on the door and open then said "Carlos the sleepy channeling, get down stairs mom wants you" after that she  left him in the room. As Carlos walk down stairs the he remembers that he have his birthday today and like any birthday he have only his mom,dad,and sister and make mom best pancake, it was always boring on everyday because he was always stuck home while his older sister or stepsister go to school is was always like that he did have some laugh once when his mom seazzes a lot and wonder
why he can't meet other pony all he knows that his mom told was that he my kind was not nice and hurt other pony by taking love but somehow he can feed himself by eating food alot  more then his whole family can eat. As he walk downstairs he saw something down there then flash of light come into his eyes and" surprise birthday boy" ah his mom and dad also his sister said that. Hello "birthday boy" said when his mom levitate  a plate of pancakes and we have a surprise guest In the living room then he turned into the living and saw a freaked out filly and his aunt whi,she  is smileing at him and said " good to see again after a long time since you were  a filly channeling." As Carlos was confused and the scared filly said "mom it a changeling  why are you being nice to it" as his aunt turned to her daughter and said "it my brother son Carlos pls don't be mean to him it his birthday" with a smile while Carlos was confused and ask "who is she " then his dad said" it my sister's she talks care of you while we were packing to the mountains in this house " as he give his aunt a hug  and said " I have a aunt " as the party go on  he was having fun because he made a new friend named bell sugar,
who is his aunt daughter as first she was scared but after they talk when the party they have till they hear a knocked on the door as the mom and dad told Carlos to stay put when they open the door the saw twilight sparkler and spike the dangon. Then they said "do you have a problem" and all stock "princess twilight" then Carlos  come and saw a another pony "you have a channeling" as twilight stare at him with her horn light up as other try to stop her then she trip over fall to the ground as Carlos try to get her up and spike wonder why they have a channeling and said "why"
when twilight stand again and said " who are you and why do you have channeling"  in this house and explain this story how he was abounded in ever free and stuff and today is his birthday while Carlos talk to spike when twilight walk to Carlos and spike then said "scrooy about this and thinking you were bad " and Carlos said "it ok I know my kind were mean and that why I live in the mountains" then spike said "can we stay I want to have some birthday cake" as his mom pop out a birthday cake let them have a sliced and twilight said "happy birthday" and twilight smile and said"hey Carlos for a present im going to let you whole family live in Postville you know a change in life and you cloud make friend since I'm princess of friendship and would be good since spike like" you to.As whole families smile and Carlos was happy that he was moving to a town and could make friend and said "think you" and give a hug to twilight.
Carlos was helping move into a old house mom use to live in and life was now going to better for him Carlos was fally going to make friend and twilight friend were scared at first but was nice after know him and he met pinkie pie and you know what happened and let see what adventure he have in stored in his new life.
(This is my first story character I worted it was hard and hope so you like it and pls give your idea or any tip about writing a story pls put it in the comments)